遼寧高考英語寫作分類訓(xùn)練：建議信

建議信

1.假定你是李華，你的朋友Simon寫信告訴你他沉迷于打籃球，每天花很多時(shí)間打球，結(jié)

果家庭作業(yè)不能準(zhǔn)時(shí)上交。父母和老師很不滿，要他放棄這個(gè)愛好，他很生氣。根據(jù)以下提

示，請(qǐng)你就Simon的問題給他提一些有用的建議。

1.認(rèn)真計(jì)劃好自己的時(shí)間；

2.不要放棄自己的愛好，但也不要忘記學(xué)習(xí)；

3.保持學(xué)習(xí)和愛好之間的平衡。

注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

2.假如你是李華，你的英國朋友David是你校的一名交換生，六一兒童節(jié)期間他準(zhǔn)備參加

當(dāng)?shù)貛椭鷼埣矁和闹驹刚呋顒?dòng)，他想給一些殘疾兒童送一些禮物，發(fā)來郵件詢問什么禮物

合適。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)回復(fù)，并表示感激。

1.感謝他盡己所能去幫助殘疾兒童；

2.說明自己決定和他一起去；

3.建議送些水果或兒童書籍等，并說明理由。

注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

3.假定你是李華，你的朋友尼克近來沉迷于游戲《王者榮耀》(KingofGlory)不能自拔,

你在得知此事后非常擔(dān)憂。請(qǐng)你給他寫一封信予以勸說，要點(diǎn)如下：

1.你對(duì)他的擔(dān)心；

2.游戲的危害；

3.擺脫游戲的辦法。

注意：

1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

DearNick,

Yourssincerely

LiHua

4.假設(shè)你是李華。你的英國筆友John寫信告訴你近日他沉迷于電腦游戲，健康受到了很大

的影響，他十分焦慮。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示，給他寫一份回信，建議他養(yǎng)成良好的生活習(xí)

慣。

1.改變生活習(xí)慣，合理安排時(shí)間。

2.經(jīng)常鍛煉，增強(qiáng)體質(zhì)。

注意：

1、詞數(shù)80左右；

2、請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

DearJohn,

Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yours,

LiHua

5.假如你是李華，你在網(wǎng)上獲悉“漢語橋”世界大學(xué)生中文比賽初試(the“ChineseBridge”

ChineseProficiencyCompetitionforForeignCollegeStudents)將在下個(gè)月當(dāng)?shù)仉娨暸_(tái)舉辦。

你的外國朋友Frank正在大學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)中文，你建議他去試一試，并表示可以提供幫助。

報(bào)名時(shí)間：5月20日截止；報(bào)名地點(diǎn)：所在大學(xué)的學(xué)生會(huì)。

注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

DearFrank,

Yours,

LiHua

6.假如你是李華，你校將在校內(nèi)給老師安排自愿接種新冠疫苗活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)寫信通知你的外教

David,內(nèi)容包括：

L時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)；

2.注意事項(xiàng)；

3.建議參加。

參考詞匯：疫苗：vaccine；接種疫苗：getvaccinated

注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

7.假設(shè)你是李華，有外國友人到你校參觀，想了解你們英語學(xué)習(xí)的情況。請(qǐng)你代表學(xué)校用

英語發(fā)言，要點(diǎn)如下：

1.表示歡迎并簡要介紹學(xué)校情況；

2.說明英語學(xué)習(xí)情況（課堂、活動(dòng)等）；

3.征求對(duì)方學(xué)好英語的建議。

注意：

1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；

2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

Dearfriends,

Welcometoourschool!

Thafsall.Thankyou.

8.假如你是李華，你的英國筆友John來信說，他在自學(xué)英語時(shí)，發(fā)現(xiàn)漢字的讀音很難掌握。

請(qǐng)你給他回信，內(nèi)容包括：

1.表示理解

2.提出建議

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

DearJohn,

Yours,

LiHua

9.假定你是李華，你校將開展音樂選修課課程。即將來校學(xué)習(xí)的英國交換生Peter不知如

何選擇，請(qǐng)你給他寫信提供建議，內(nèi)容包括：

1.選修課種類介紹。

2.你的建議及理由。

參考詞匯：選修課：optionalcourse民樂folkmusic

注意：

1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；

2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

DearPeter,

Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yours,

LiHua

10.假定你是李華，你和你的同學(xué)決定要在緊張的學(xué)習(xí)之余，為高三生活拍攝英文紀(jì)錄片。

請(qǐng)你給外教MissEvans寫封郵件，請(qǐng)她幫忙指導(dǎo)，內(nèi)容包括：

1.告知拍攝的具體計(jì)劃與內(nèi)容；

2.請(qǐng)她編寫英文字幕；

3.詢問對(duì)拍攝的建議。

注意:

1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；

2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

參考詞匯：字幕subtitle；紀(jì)錄片documentary

DearMissEvans,

Yours,

LiHua

1.DearSimon,

Thankyouforyourletter.Yousayyoudon'thaveenoughtimetodoyourhomeworkIthink

you'dbetterplanyourdaycarefully.Itwillbeagoodchoicetomakealistofallthehomework

youhavetodo.Thiswillgiveyouanideaofhowmuchfreetimeyoucanhavetoplaybasketball.

Don'tgiveupyourhobbybutdonotforgetaboutyourstudy,either.Youshouldkeepabalance

betweenstudyandbobby.

Ihopemyadvicewillbeofsomevaluetoyou

Yburssincerely,

LiHua

【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)是一篇應(yīng)用文。要求考生寫信給自己的沉迷于籃球而忽略學(xué)習(xí)的朋友

Simon一些建議。

【詳解】詞匯積累

感謝：thankyou/thanks/Ireallyappreciateit

足夠的：enough=adequate

建議：suggestion=advice

有價(jià)值的：beofvalue=bevaluable

句式拓展

簡單句變?yōu)閺?fù)合句

原句：Yousayyoudon'thaveenoughtimetodoyourhomework

拓展句：Yousayyoudon'thaveenoughtimetodoyourhomework,whichbothersyourecently.

【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1].Itwillbeagoodchoicetomakealistofallthehomeworkyouhavetodo.

（運(yùn)用了it充當(dāng)形式主語的固定結(jié)構(gòu)，和省略that的定語從句）

[高分句型2]Thiswillgiveyouanideaofhowmuchfreetimeyoucanhavetoplaybasketball.

（運(yùn)用了定語從句）

2.DearDavid,

I'mgratefulthatyouwanttohelpthedisabledchildren.Readingyouremail,I'msomoved

thatI'vedecidedtoseethedisabledchildrenonChildren'sDaywithyou.

Astowhatpresentsarethebestchoice,ifsreallyamatterofpersonalpreference.I'dliketo

recommendsendingthechildrensomefruitsorsomebooks.Ontheonehand,fruitsaregoodfor

children'shealth,anditisalsoconvenienttocarry.Ontheotherhand,disabledastheyare,allof

them,Ithink,areeagertostudy.Therefore,booksmayalsobeagoodchoice.

Anyway,whateverpresentsyouchoose,you'llbeappreciatedbythosedisabledchildren.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，假如你是李華，你的英國朋友David是你校的一名交換

生，六一兒童節(jié)期間他準(zhǔn)備參加當(dāng)?shù)貛椭鷼埣矁和闹驹刚呋顒?dòng)，他想給一些殘疾兒童送一

些禮物，發(fā)來郵件詢問什么禮物合適。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)題干中提供的要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行回復(fù)，并表示感激。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

禮物：present—?gift

感激的：gratefill-thankful

對(duì)...有好處：begoodfbubenefit

無論什么：whatever=^-nomatterwhat

2.句式拓展

同義句轉(zhuǎn)換

原句：Ontheotherhand,disabledastheyare,allofthem,Ithink,areeagertostudy.Therefore,

booksmayalsobeagoodchoice.

拓展句：Ontheotherhand,disabledastheyare,allofthem,Ithink,areeagertostudy,sobooks

mayalsobeagoodchoice.

【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Readingyouremail,TmsomovedthatFvedecidedtoseethedisabled

childrenonChildren'sDaywithyou.（運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞及so...that句型）

[高分句型2]Astowhatpresentsarethebestchoice,ifsreallyamatterofpersonalpreference.（i§

用了what引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）

3.DearPeter,

I'msorrytohearthatyouareaddictedtoKingofGlory.Spendingtoomuchtimeongamesis

notonlyharmfultoyourhealthbutalsomakesyouisolatedfromtherealworld.

Ithinkyoucantryotherthingstodistractyourattention.Forexample,youcanplay

basketballorothersportswithyourfriends,whichcanimproveyourfitnessandstrengthenyour

friendship.It'salsoagoodchoicetocommunicatewithyourparentsandfriends,sharingyour

happinessandsorrow.Besides,youcanreadsomebookstobroadenyourhorizoninyourspare

time.

Longingforgoodnewsfromyou!

Yourssincerely

【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文,要求考生給外國朋友尼克寫封信，陳述沉迷游戲的壞處，

然后提出一些建議，幫他遠(yuǎn)離游戲。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

健康：health—fitness

力口強(qiáng)：deepen一strengthen

擴(kuò)大：widen一broaden

對(duì)...有害：bebadfor=beharmfulto

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Youcanreadsomebookstobroadenyourhorizoninyoursparetime.

拓展句：Youcanreadsomebookstobroadenyourhorizoninyoursparetime,whosecontent

interestsyousomuchthatgamesareoutofyourmind.

【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]youcanplaybasketballorothersportswithyourfriends,whichcan

improveyourfitnessandstrengthenyourfriendship.（運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）

[高分句型2]Spendingtoomuchtimeongamesisnotonlyharmfultoyourhealthbutalsomake

youisolatedfromtherealworld.（運(yùn)用了動(dòng)名詞短語作主語，notonly...butalso…引導(dǎo)的并列

句）

4.DearJohn,

I'msorrytohearthatyou'readdictedtocomputergameswhichhavehadabadinfluenceon

yourhealth.Knowingyouworryaboutitverymuch,I'mwillingtogiveyousomeadvice.

Firstly,youshouldchangeyourlivinghabitsandarrangeyourtimereasonably,suchas

gettingupandgoingtobedataspecifictimesothatyoucanformagoodhabit.Besides,you

shoulddoexerciseregularlytostrengthenyourbody.Idohopethatyoucangetridofcomputer

gamesandformahealthylifestyle.

Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yours,

LiHua

【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生給英國筆友John寫一份回信，就他沉迷于電

腦游戲使健康受到了很大的影響，建議他養(yǎng)成良好的生活習(xí)慣。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

影響：effect—influence

增強(qiáng)：buildup—>strengthen

擺脫：getoutof—getridof

期待：expect一lookforwardto

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Besides,youshoulddoexerciseregularlytostrengthenyourbody.

拓展句：Besides,itisimportantthatyoushoulddoregularexercisetostrengthenyourbody.

【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]I'msorrytohearthatyou'readdictedtocomputergameswhichhavehada

badinfluenceonyourhealth.（運(yùn)用了由that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句作hear的賓語和由which引導(dǎo)的

定語從句）

[高分句型2]Firstly,youshouldchangeyourlivinghabitsandarrangeyourtimereasonably,such

asgettingupandgoingtobedataspecifictimesothatyoucanformagoodhabit.（運(yùn)用了由so

that連接的結(jié)果狀語從句）

[高分句型3]Idohopethatyoucangetridofcomputergamesandformahealthylifestyle.（運(yùn)

用了由that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句作hope的賓語）

5.Onepossibleversion:

DearFrank,

IreadontheInternetthatthefirstroundof"ChineseBridge^^ChineseProficiency

CompetitionforForeignCollegeStudents-annotedinternationalChinesecompetitionwillbe

heldinthelocaltelevisionstationnextmonth.

IknowyouareanoutstandingChineselearner,andyouarestudyingChineseinthe

university.Ithinkthisisagoodchanceforyoutoshowyourlanguagecompetence,andhowwell

youhavelearnedChinese.Ifyouwouldliketotry,youarerequiredtogototheStudentsUnionto

signup.Don'thesitatetofindmyhelpwheneveryouneed.AndthelastthingIwanttoremind

youofisthedeadline-March31st.

Maysuccesswaituponyourefforts.

Yours,

LiHua

【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生給外國朋友Frank寫封信，建議他參加下個(gè)月

當(dāng)?shù)仉娨暸_(tái)舉辦的“漢語橋”世界大學(xué)生中文比賽初試（the“ChineseBridge^^Chinese

ProficiencyCompetitionforForeignCollegeStudents）。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

舉辦：hold—host

嘗試：try—attempt

杰出的：outstanding^-splendid

提醒某人某事：remindsb.ofsth.=remindsb.todosth.

2.句式拓展

合并簡單句

原句：IknowyouareanoutstandingChineselearner,andyouarestudyingChineseinthe

university.Ithinkthisisagoodchanceforyoutoshowyourlanguagecompetence,andhowwell

youhavelearnedChinese.

拓展句：IknowyouareanoutstandingChineselearner,andyouarestudyingChineseinthe

university.SoIthinkthisisagoodchanceforyoutoshowyourlanguagecompetence,andhow

wellyouhavelearnedChinese.

【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]IknowyouareanoutstandingChineselearner,andyouarestudying

Chineseintheuniversity.（運(yùn)用了省略that的賓語從句）

[高分句型2]Don'thesitatetofindmyhelpwheneveryouneed.（運(yùn)用了祈使句及whenever引導(dǎo)

的讓步狀語從句）

6.Possibleversionsone:

DearDavid,

Bymeansofthisletter,Fdliketotellyouarecentvaccinationarrangementofourschool.

Accordingtoannouncementreleasedbyschoolcommission,therewillbeaCOVID-19

vaccinationlastingfrom1stto5thofMayatschool'sclinic,fromwhosewebsiteyoucanbrowse

relevantinformation.Onceyou'vemadeupyourmindtogetvaccinated,thesefollowingtips

shouldbeborneinyourmind:checkupifyou'reallergictothevaccine;stayatthesitefor30

minutesaftergettingtheshotandalcoholshouldbeexcludedfromyourdietsincethen.

Istronglysuggestyouseekvaccination,whichnotonlyprotectsyou,butthosearoundyou.

Yours,

LiHua

Possibleversionstwo:

DearDavid,

I'mwritingtoinformyouoftheCOVID-19vaccinationarrangementofourschool.

Thevaccinationistotallyoptional,anditwilllastfromnextMondaytoFridayatschool

clinic.Butbeforegettingvaccinated,youhavetofigureoutwhetheryou'reallergictothevaccine.

Ifnot,thencheckwiththeprovidertomakesureyoubringanyneededdocuments.Aftergetting

theinjection,it'srecommendedtoremainatthesitefor30minutestomakesureyoudonothavea

concerningreaction.

Istronglyadviseyoutoseekvaccination.Thisnotonlyprotectsyou,butthosearoundyou.

Sincerely,

LiHua

【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫信通知外教David學(xué)校給老師安排自愿接種

新冠疫苗的活動(dòng)。

【詳解】范文1

1.詞匯積累

通過：through一bymeansof

公開/通知：announcer-release

決定：decidetodo—makeupyourmindtodo

t己住：remember一bearsthinyourmind

排除/刪I除：cutout—exclude

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Bymeansofthisletter,I'dliketotellyouarecentvaccinationarrangementofourschool.

拓展句：NowI'mwritingthisletter,inwhichI'dliketotellyouarecentvaccinationarrangement

ofourschool.

【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Accordingtoannouncementreleasedbyschoolcommission,therewillbea

COVID-19vaccinationlastingfrom1stto5thofMayatschool?sclinic,fromwhosewebsiteyou

canbrowserelevantinformation.（該句中whosewebsiteyoucanbrowserelevant

information”運(yùn)用了“介詞+關(guān)系代詞”引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句。）

[高分句型2]Onceyou'vemadeupyourmindtogetvaccinated,thesefollowingtipsshouldbe

borneinyourmind:checkupifyou'reallergictothevaccine;stayatthesitefor30minutesafter

gettingtheshotandalcoholshouldbeexcludedfromyourdietsincethen.（該句中“Onceyou've

madeupyourmindtogetvaccinated"為"once（一旦）”引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句。）

范文2

1.詞匯積累

通知：notice—infbrmsb.ofsth

弄清楚：findout—?figureout

建議：suggest^-recommend

停留：stay—remain

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Thevaccinationistotallyoptional,anditwilllastfromnextMondaytoFridayatschool

clinic.

拓展句：Thevaccinationistotallyoptional,whichwilllastfromnextMondaytoFridayatschool

clinic.

[高分句型1]

Butbeforegettingvaccinated,youhavetofigureoutwhetheryou'reallergictothevaccine.（該

句中“whetheryou'reallergictothevaccine”為whether引導(dǎo)的賓語從句。）

[高分句型2]

Aftergettingtheinjection,it'srecommendedtoremainatthesitefor30minutestomakesureyou

donothaveaconcerningreaction.（該句中使用了"it”作為形式主語，構(gòu)成"it'srecommendedto

do”結(jié)構(gòu)，真正主語為動(dòng)詞不定式“toremainatthesitefor30minutes"。）

7.Dearfriends,

Welcometoourschool!Ifeelhonoredtogiveyouabriefintroductionofourschool,which

coversanareaofabout200,000squaremeters.Thereareabout300teachingstaffandover3000

studentsinourschool.

WehaveoneEnglishclasseachdayfromMondaytoFriday.EveryThursdayafternoon,we

cangototheEnglishComer,talkingfreelyinEnglish.Eachsemester,weholdoneEnglishdebate

andoneEnglishspeechcontest.WehavebeentryingourbesttolearnEnglish,butwewould

appreciateitifyoucouldgiveussomevaluableadvice.

That'sall.Thankyou.

【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生代表學(xué)校向外國友人介紹英語學(xué)習(xí)情況，并征

求學(xué)好英語的建議。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

簡要介紹：introducebriefly一giveyouabriefintroduction

占地：hasanareao—coversanareaof

學(xué)期：term一semester

感激：begratefUl一appreciate

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：EveryThursdayafternoon,wecangototheEnglishComer,talkingfreelyinEnglish.

拓展句：Inorderthatwecanapplywhatwe'velearnedinclasstoourdailylife,wecangotothe

EnglishComereveryThursday,talkingfreelyinEnglish.

【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Ifeelhonoredtogiveyouabriefintroductionofourschool,whichcovers

anareaofabout200,000squaremeters.（運(yùn)用了which弓|導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）

[高分句型2]WehavebeentryingourbesttolearnEnglish,butwewouldappreciateitifyou

couldgiveussomevaluableadvice.（運(yùn)用了if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句）

8.Onepossibleversion:

DearJohn,

KnowingthatyouhavetroublelearningtheChinesepronunciation,Ithinkitdoesn'tmatter.

Afterall,ifsdifficultforforeignerstograspit.However,somepracticalapproachesareofgreat

help.

Obviously,itishighlyrecommendedtorefertoXinhuaDictionarywhenyoucomeacrossa

challengingChinesecharacter.Then,withmobilephonescatchingon,someChineselearningapps

areincreasingpopularwithChineselearnersbecausetheyaresohandyandquickthatyoucan

acquirethepronunciation.

IknowforsurethatyouwillmakemuchprogressinlearningChinesepronunciation.Itis

welcometowritetomewhenyouareintrouble.

Yours,

LiHua

【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生給英國筆友John回信，對(duì)學(xué)習(xí)漢字讀音很難

掌握表示理解并提出建議。

【詳解】第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)用文

時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，少量一般將來時(shí)。

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法。總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)

容。

要求：

1.表示理解；

2.提出建議。

第二步:列提綱（重點(diǎn)詞組）

havetroublelearningtheChinesepronunciation;itdoesn'tmatter;practicalapproaches;referto

XinhuaDictionary;someChineselearningapps;makemuchprogress

第三步：連詞成句

1.KnowingthatyouhavetroublelearningtheChinesepronunciation,Ithinkitdoesn'tmatter.

2.Afterall,ifsdifficultforforeignerstograspit.

3.However,somepracticalapproachesareofgreathelp.

4.Obviously,itishighlyrecommendedtorefertoXinhuaDictionarywhenyoucomeacrossa

challengingChinesecharacter.

5.Then,withmobilephonescatchingon,someChineselearningappsareincreasingpopularwith

Chineselearnersbecausetheyaresohandyandquickthatyoucanacquirethepronunciation.

6.1knowforsurethatyouwillmakemuchprogressinlearningChinesepronunciation.

7.Itiswelcometowritetomewhenyouareintrouble.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：Firstofall,Firstly/First,Secondly/Second...Andthen,Finally,Intheend,At

last（供參考）

2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：Whatismore,Besides,Moreover,Furthermore,InadditionAswellas,not

only...but（also）,including,（供參考）

3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對(duì)比關(guān)系：However

4.表因果關(guān)系：Because,As,So,Thus,Therefore,Asaresult（供參考）

連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰。

【點(diǎn)睛"高分句型1]KnowingthatyouhavetroublelearningtheChinesepronunciation,Ithinkit

doesn'tmatter.（運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語）

[高分句型2]Then,withmobilephonescatchingon,someChineselearningappsareincreasing

popularwithChineselearnersbecausetheyaresohandyandquickthatyoucanacquirethe

pronunciation4運(yùn)用了with的獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)）

9.DearPeter,

Learningthatyouarewonderingwhichmusicoptionalcoursestochoose,Iamwritingto

makesomesuggestions.

Therearevariousmusicoptionalcoursesinourschool,includingfolkmusic,choir,playing

instrumentsandsoon.ConsideringthatyouareinterestedinChineseculture,itissuggestedthat

youchoosefolkmusic.Inclass,youcanlearntosingfolksongs.Inaddition,youwillenjoy

musicpiecesplayedwithtraditionalinstruments,whichisagoodwaytolearnaboutChinese

culture.Ithinktheywillbeafeastforyourears.

Sincerelyhopemyadviceishelpfultoyou.Lookingforwardtoyourreply!

Yours,

LiHua

【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求給交換生Peter關(guān)于如何選擇音樂選修課課程提

出建議。

【詳解】第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)用文

時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法

第一部分是文章的開頭段，說明寫郵件的原因；第二部分是支持段，關(guān)于如何選擇音樂選修

課課程提出建議；第三部分是結(jié)尾段，希望建議對(duì)對(duì)方有用。

要求：

1.說明寫信的原因：關(guān)于如何選擇音樂選修課課程給Peter提出建議

2.提出具體的建議：

①選修課種類介紹：民族音樂、合唱、樂器演奏

②建議選擇民族音樂：學(xué)唱民族歌曲，欣賞民族樂曲

3.希望建議對(duì)對(duì)方有幫助

第二步:列提綱(重點(diǎn)詞組)

wonder；makesomesuggestions；playinstruments；beinterestedin；folkmusic；enjoymusic

pieces；playwith；traditionalinstrument；learnabout；afeastforone9sears；behelpfulto

第三步：連詞成句

(1)Learningthatyouarewonderingwhichmusicoptionalcoursestochoose,Iamwritingto

makesomesuggestions.

(2)Therearevariousmusicoptionalcoursesinourschool,includingfolkmusic,choir,playing

instrumentsandsoon.

(3)ConsideringthatyouareinterestedinChineseculture,itissuggestedthatyouchoosefolk

music.

(4)Intheclass,youcanlearntosingfolksongs.

(5)Youwillenjoymusicpiecesplayedwithtraditionalinstruments.

(6)ItisagoodwaytolearnaboutChineseculture.

(7)Ithinktheywillbeafeastforyourears.

(8)Sincerelyhopemyadviceishelpfultoyou.

提示及關(guān)鍵詞(組)進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇

表遞進(jìn)關(guān)系：inaddition

【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]

Learningthatyouarewonderingwhichmusicoptionalcoursestochoose,Iamwritingtomake

somesuggestions.

(現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語)

[高分句型2]

Itissuggestedthatyouchoosefolkmusic,(it作形式主語)

[高分句型3]

Youwillenjoymusicpiecesplayedwithtradi