Unit 10 If you go to the party,youll have a great time!-【同步寫作課】2023-2024學年八年級英語上冊單元寫作深度指導（人教版） （學生版）

Unit10Ifyougototheparty,you’llhaveagreattime!單元寫作指導與演練近三年考情分析話題考查熱度應用文建議信本單元以“建議信”為話題，主要談論學生生活中所遇到的問題和困難，并針對這些問題和困難尋求幫助或給出建議。在寫作過程中，學生應注意以下幾點：能正確使用if引導的條件狀語從句；2.能正確使用情態(tài)動詞should提出建議；3.能使用生動的語言，把自己的觀點表達出來；4.能在敘述的過程中，恰當運用過渡詞語，使文章銜接自然。（三段布局法）1.結構：短文通常分為三個部分：第一部分：引入話題。第二部分：給出建議。第三部分：總結收尾。2.人稱：第二人稱。3.時態(tài)：一般現在時、一般將來時?！驹~匯積累】1.advice勸告；建議2.experience經驗；經歷3.organize組織；籌備 4.solve解決；解答 5.feelupset感覺沮喪的 6.careless粗心的；不小心的 7.understanding善解人意的；體諒人的8.unless除非；如果不9.makemistakes犯錯誤 10.keep...tooneself保守秘密11.getintoafightwithsb.和某人吵架12.arrive/belateforclass上課遲到13.loseone’swallet丟失錢包14.haveproblemswithschoolwork成績不好15.discussyourproblems討論你的問題16.tellyourparents告訴你的父母17.getadvicefromanexpert從專家處得到建議18.runawayfrom從……逃離19.solveproblems解決問題20.haveproblemswith/doingsth.在某方面/做某事有困難21.it’sbest1.haveagreattime玩得開心22.gototheparty去參加聚會23.wearjeans穿牛仔服24.stayathome呆在家25.talkabout談論26.haveaparty舉辦聚會27.thanksfor感謝.......28.cometomyhouse來我家29.haveanexam考試30.bringfood帶食物31.too..to太....而.....32.givesomesmallgifts送一些小禮物33.playthegames玩游戲34.afterschool放學后35.haveto必須36.studyformyEnglishexam備考英語37.beupset失落38.haveapianolesson上鋼琴課39.givemesomeadvice給我一些建議40.buysomeflowers買些鮮花41.getenoughexercise足夠的鍛煉42.makemorefriends多交朋友43.beafraidto擔心44.intheend最后45.understanding善解人意的46.thesameas與.....一樣47.havealotofexperience有很多經驗(not)todosth.最好（不）做某事四、句型積累1.IhavesomeproblemsandIneedyourhelp.我碰到一些問題，我需要你的幫助。2.Ihavetroubleingettingalongwithmyparents.我與我父母相處有困難。3.Ifyouhavetroubleindoinghomework,yourfriendswillbereadytohelp.4.Ifyougototheparty,you’llhaveagreattime.如果你去參加聚會，你會過得愉快。5.Thestudentsaretalkingaboutwhentohaveaclassparty.周學們正在討論何時舉行班級聚會。6.Second,bekindandfriendlytothemandtryyourbesttohelpthemwhenthey’reintrouble.7.Someparentsoftenasktheirchildrentostudyhard,buttheyaretoobusytoknowtheirchildren’srealtrouble.一些家長常要求孩子努力學習，但他們因為太忙以至于不能了解孩子的真正煩惱。8.Runningawayfromproblemswillmakeyoufeelworse.逃避問題會使你感到更糟。9.Ithinktalkingtosomeonehelpsalot.我認為和人交談能幫助很多。10.It'sbestnottorunawayfromourproblems.最好不要逃避我們的問題。11.Sharingaproblemislikecuttingitinhalf.分享困難可以使困難減半。12.Somepeoplebelievetheworstthingistodonothing.一些人相信最糟糕的事情是什么都不做?！糸_頭句①Asmiddleschoolstudents，wehavealotofhappiness，butwealsohavemanyproblems.②I'msorrytohearaboutyourproblem.③IhaveaproblemandIneedyouradvice.◆中間句①Weshouldn'tkeepthemtoourselves.②Ithinkyoushouldfollowyourparents'wishes.③Firstly，I'lltellthemmyfeelings.Secondly，I'lltrymybesttodomorehouseworksothattheycanhavemoretimetorelax.What'smore，Iwillmakethemsitdowntohaveagoodtalk.④Whynotwaituntilyougetolder，andthentalkaboutitwithyourparentsagain?⑤Ifyouhaveproblems，youshouldtalktootherpeople.◆結尾句①I'msuremyparentswillgetonwitheachothersoonifIdoallthesethings.②Ireallyhopemyadvicewillhelpyou.【諺語積累】1．Twoheadsarebetterthanone.三個臭皮匠，頂個諸葛亮。2．Tohelpothersistohelpyourself.幫助別人就是幫助你自己。生活是如此的美好，人生有無盡的歡樂，但也有諸多煩惱。作為中學生，你最大的煩惱是什么？你打算如何解決你的煩惱？請你以“MyBiggestProblem”為題，寫一篇英語短文。要求：1．文中不能出現真實的人名、地名和校名；2．80詞左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。提示：◆◆審題指導1．文體：說明文；2．時態(tài)：以一般現在時和一般將來時為主；3．注意事項：注意段落布局并恰當使用復合句或連接詞來增加得分點?！簟羲悸伏c撥◆◆組句成篇MyBiggestProblemAsmiddleschoolstudents，wehavealotofhappiness，butwealsohavemanyproblems.Weshouldn'tkeepthemtoourselves.Forme，mybiggestproblemisfrommyparents.Thesedays，myparentsargueandfightalotbecauseofdoingchores.Ireallywanttorunaway.Afterthinkingtwice，Idecidetohelpmyparents.Firstly，I'lltellthemmyfeelings.Secondly，I'lltrymybesttodomorehouseworksothattheycanhavemoretimetorelax.What'smore，Iwillmakethemsitdowntohaveagoodtalk.Theworstthingistodonothing.I'msuremyparentswillgetonwitheachothersoonifIdoallthesethings.一、詞匯積累(一)煩惱與問題類短語1．和某人吵架________________2．失去所有樂趣________________3．上課遲到________________4．丟失錢包________________5．沒有足夠的時間學習________________6．犯粗心錯誤________________7．感到害羞________________8．成績不好________________9．起床遲________________10．在某方面有麻煩________________(二)解決問題類短語1．討論你的問題________________2．告訴你的父母________________3．分擔你的問題________________4．什么都不做________________5．向老師尋求幫助________________6．向某人道歉________________7．為英語考試而學習________________8．計劃做某事________________9．環(huán)游世界________________10.接受教育________________11．上大學________________12．從專家處得到建議________________13．從……逃離________________14．與某人交談________________15．要求某人更細心________________16．解決問題________________(三)其他短語1．太……以至于不能________________2．擁有豐富的經驗________________3．最后________________4.感覺一樣________________二、句子積累(一)佳句欣賞與模仿1．Ifweaskpeopletobringfood，they'lljustbringpotatochipsandchocolatebecausethey'llbetoolazytocook.【asksb.todosth.要求某人做某事；too…to…太……以至于不能】一些家長常要求孩子努力學習，但他們因為太忙以至于不能了解孩子的真正煩惱。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．Ithinktalkingtosomeonehelpsalot.InEnglish，wesaythatsharingaproblemislikecuttingitinhalf.【動名詞在句中可以作主語、表語、賓語、定語等】逃避問題會使你感到更糟。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(二)用“if”推理下列行為的后果，并提出合理的建議。1．Mikedecidestoworkwithoutfinishinghiscollege.Ifhedoes，________________________________________________________________________Ithinkheshould________________________________________________________________________2．Ilostmywalletlastweek，butIamstillafraidtotellmyparents.Ifyou________________________________________________________________________Ithink________________________________________________________________________3．SuMei'sbrothercan'tdowellinEnglish.HeplanstogiveuplearningEnglish.If________________________________________________________________________Ithink________________________________________________________________________(三)給下面青少年存在的問題提出合理的建議。1．Bettyalwaysrunsawayfromherproblemsandtellsnobody.Ithink________________________________________________________________________If________________________________________________________________________2．Linglingisheavy.Someclassmatesoftenlaughather.Ithink________________________________________________________________________If________________________________________________________________________（一）1．Mike是一名中學生，他沉迷于玩電腦游戲，并因此影響了他的學習。作為Mike的好朋友，你打算怎么幫助他呢？請用下面所給的提示寫一篇80詞左右的短文(開頭不計入總詞數)。提示：giveup;wastetime;beinterestedin;haveagreattimeDearMike，Thanksforyourletter.Iamsorrytohearthatyouareintroublenow._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（二）近年來，青少年的心理健康問題引起了越來越多的關注。你們學校的英語角這周的主題就是“青少年心理健康問題大家談”。請你根據下面的要點提示寫一篇文章，就這一話題進行發(fā)言。提示：1.學校方面：建立專門的部門；2.家長方面：給予更多關注；3.青少年自己：正確處理困難。參考詞匯：心理健康mentalhealth;全社會thewholesociety;部門department要求：1.詞數80左右(文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數)；2.根據所給信息可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Nowadays,peoplearepayingalotmoreattentiontoteenagers'mentalhealth._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（三）新冠病毒疫情仍肆虐全球。在江陰政府的有效控制下，我們有幸在校學習。利用此契機，根據所給提示，以“BeaGoodStudent”為題寫一篇短文，人人做最好的自己。要求：1.詞數：80詞左右（文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數）；2.文中不能出現真實姓名、校名等信息；3.文章必須包含所提供的主要信息，并作適當發(fā)揮；BeaGoodStudentIfyouwanttobeagoodstudent,Ithinkitisgreatforyoutodothefollowingthings.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（四）一場疫情把人們都“封印”在家。父母和孩子天天近距離相處，引發(fā)了不少親子關系問題。作為晚輩，我們應該如何與父母相處才能讓這種難得的家庭時光變得更輕松，讓親子關系更加融洽呢？請你根據提示，以“Howtogetonwithparents?(如何與父母相處)為題寫出一篇字數不少于70的文章，談談你的看法。提示：1.主動和父母交流在學校的學習和生活等情況；2.主動幫助父母承擔家務，為父母分憂，比如整理房間，洗碗等；3.遇事多與父母討論，多向長輩求助；4.……提示詞：交流communicatewith

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家務houseworkHowtogetonwithparents?Asteenagers,it’simportanttogetonwithparents.Whatshouldwedo?_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（五）假如你是心理醫(yī)生DrSmith，你收到學生Mary的來信，她在信中說，自己很喜歡看電視，但父母擔心看電視影響她的學習，不讓她看，她有時會和父母爭吵，很煩惱，卻不知道怎么辦。請你給Mary寫一封70個詞左右的英文回信，給出解決的辦法。提示詞：arguewithsb．和某人吵架（六）6．假如你是勞拉(Laura)，你的好朋友蒂娜(Tina)對于將要到來的考試感到很擔憂，擔心不能取得好成績。請你給她寫一封信，針對她的問題，提出你的建議，并給她一些安慰和鼓勵。提示詞：worriedabout,normal,helpful(有幫助的),firstofall,next,if,will,nervous(緊張的),believeinoneself,best要求：1.語句通順、符合邏輯，可適當發(fā)揮；2.70詞左右。開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。DearTina,I’msorrytohearthat_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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Laura（2023·青?！そy(tǒng)考中考真題）積極健康、樂觀向上的生活是我們共同追求的目標。通過正確合理的自我管理和自我提升，我們都能遇見更好的自己。請參考右圖信息，以“Howtobecomeabetterperson”為主題，寫一篇英語短文。寫作要求：(1)語句通順，邏輯清晰，書寫規(guī)范；(2)詞數60—80左右；(3)文中不能出現真實姓名和校名等信息。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（2023·山東泰安·統(tǒng)考中考真題）強國有我！作為祖國未來的建設者和接班人，青少年學生要努力成長為堪當大任的棟梁之材。請根據下面提示，以“Howtobegoodstudentsinthenewera”為題寫一篇英語短文，談談如何做一名新時代（era）的好學生。要求：語句通順，意思連貫，可適當發(fā)揮；詞數80—100；文中不得出現真實的姓名、校名、地名等與考生本人相關的信息。Howtobegoodstudentsinthenewera____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（2023·湖南益陽·統(tǒng)考中考真題）學校正在向同學們征集開設課后服務課程的意見。假如你是學生李華，請你給校長寫一封郵件，建議學校開設以下課程，并談談開設這些課程的理由。After-schoolclassesReasonsdancinghappy,interestingswimminghealthy,strong......要求：1.內容可適當發(fā)揮，使行文連貫；2.文中不得出現真實的姓名、學校名稱等信息；3.詞數60-80。開頭結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。Dearheadmaster,I’mLiHua._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ihopewe’llhavemoreinterestingafter-schoolclasses.Thankyou!Yours,LiHua（2023·江蘇無錫·統(tǒng)考中考真題）青少年在成長過程中會遇到各種問題，為此《21世紀英文報》開設了TeensTalk專欄，傾聽讀者的心聲，并由“少年之友”SigmundFriend予以回復。假設你是李華，最近也遇上了些煩心事，請給該專欄發(fā)一封英文郵件，講述你的煩惱并尋求建議。注意事項：（1）郵件內容須自擬，要求語句通順、意思連貫、符合題意；（2）詞數在100左右，郵件開頭與結尾已給出，不計入總詞數；（3）郵件中不得使用真實的個人姓名或學校名稱。DearMr.Friend,I’mwritingtoyouabouttheproblemI’mfacingatthemoment._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’mlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Yourssincerely,LiHua5．（2023·山東濱州·統(tǒng)考中考真題）假如你是李華，近日你的英國筆友Amy發(fā)來郵件，向你訴說她最近的困擾；自己體型微胖，想通過節(jié)食減肥，以更美的面貌進入新的學校學習。請你根據郵件內容用英語給她回封郵件，談一談你對這問題的見解。參考詞匯:diet(v.節(jié)食),appearance(n.外貌),innerbeauty(內在美)DearLiHua,IhavebeenabitlargerthanothergirlssinceIwaslittle.Foralongtime,thisreallytroubledme.IfeelmoreworriedbecauseIwillstartmyseniorhighschoollifesoon!IamafraidthatthestudentsinthenewschoolwilllaughatmebecauseIam“big”.Idecidetolookmorebeautiful,soIwanttoloseweightbydieting.Whatdoyouthinkofmyplan?Canyougivemesomeadvice?Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,Amy要求：1.要點齊全，并適當發(fā)揮；2.文中不得出現真實姓名與校名；3.卷面整潔，書寫美觀，可適當加2—3分；4.80詞左右。開頭與結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。DearAmy,

Ihavereceivedandreadyourletter,inwhichyousaidyouwantedtoloseweightbydieting.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________