下載本文檔
版權(quán)說明:本文檔由用戶提供并上傳,收益歸屬內(nèi)容提供方,若內(nèi)容存在侵權(quán),請(qǐng)進(jìn)行舉報(bào)或認(rèn)領(lǐng)
文檔簡介
閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文?!癢hycan'tGrandpajustbenormal?Whydoeshehavetobesoodd?"CarteraskedhisGrandmaGrandmalaughed.“I’veconsideredthatformanyyears.”TheysatonaFloridabeach,watchingGrandpaandhisfriendsridingwave-skisintheocean.Theearlymorningsunwarmedtheirfacesasthesandgraduallyheatedbeneaththem.Carterscoopedupahandfulofsandandletitsiftthroughhisfingers.“Whydowehavetocomeheresoearly?*hequestioned,notingthattherestofhisfamilywasstillasleep.Withasmile,Grandmaexplainedthatthemorningwaveswerecalmerwithlesswind.ShementionedhowGrandpalovedthethrillofabigwave'sshadowloomingoverhimbeforeithit.Cartergrumbledthatnoneofhisfriendsknewwhatawave-skiwas,andtheythoughtitwasoddwhenhetriedtoexplainit.HewonderedwhyGrandpadidn'tpickamoretypicalhobby,likerestoringoldcars,whichhethoughtseemedcooler.GrandmapattedCarter'sshoulderandrepliedthatwave-skiingwaslikesurfingonashortkayak(皮)combiningelementsofkayakingandsurfing.Sheaddedhowtheypaddledouttocatchbiggerwaveslikesurferssteeringwithapaddle,andhighlightedthethrilloftheexperience.“'Nobody'sgrandpadoesthis.Iloveyouboth,butneitherofyouactsliketypicalgrandparents,”Carterremarked.Grandmalaughedagain,sharingthatGrandpa'sfriendswerealsograndparentsandaskedwhatelsetheyshouldbedoing.Carter,unsure,simplymuttered,“'Idon'tknow,Grandparentstuff.”“Eachsummer,yourfamilyvisits.Weenjoythebeach,swim,andcherishourtimetogether.That'swhattrulymatters.Everyonehastheirownwayofenjoyinglife,andforGrandpa,it'swave-skiing.”Grandmapaused,hereyessparklingwithwarmth.Cartersighed.“'Iguess.Butit'sstillodd.”“Whydon’tyougiveitatry?Youmightfindit'smorefunthanyouthink,”Grandmaencouraged.Carterhesitatedbutagreed.“Okay,I'llgiveitashot.”注意:(1)續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;(2)請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Paragraph1:Thenextmorning,CarterandGrandpaheadedoutearly.Paragraph2:Bytheendofthemorning,Carterwasgrinningfromeartoear.文章大意Carter對(duì)爺爺與眾不同的愛好——滑浪板感到困惑和不滿,他覺得爺爺?shù)膼酆煤芷婀?,不像其他正常的爺爺那樣。在和奶奶的交談中,奶奶解釋了滑浪板的樂趣以及爺爺熱愛它的原因,還鼓勵(lì)Carter去嘗試。Carter雖然仍覺得奇怪,但還是同意嘗試一下。故事展現(xiàn)了祖孫間的代際差異和對(duì)不同生活方式的理解問題。伏筆及續(xù)寫回應(yīng)伏筆:Carter對(duì)滑浪板的不理解和抱怨,認(rèn)為爺爺?shù)膼酆闷婀?。續(xù)寫回應(yīng):通過讓Carter親自嘗試滑浪板,改變他的看法。伏筆:奶奶提到滑浪板結(jié)合了皮劃艇和沖浪的元素,以及劃出去抓大浪的刺激。續(xù)寫回應(yīng):在Carter體驗(yàn)過程中,可詳細(xì)描述這些元素帶來的感受。續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)第一段:情感線:Carter從最初的緊張、猶豫,在爺爺?shù)闹笇?dǎo)下逐漸放松。故事線:描述Carter在爺爺幫助下開始嘗試滑浪板,在浪上的顛簸、平衡的困難,以及爺爺如何指導(dǎo)他應(yīng)對(duì)。第二段:情感線:Carter體驗(yàn)到滑浪板的樂趣,從最初的勉強(qiáng)嘗試變?yōu)闊釔?,理解爺爺?shù)膼酆谩9适戮€:Carter成功地駕馭浪板,感受到其中的刺激和快樂,與爺爺一起享受這個(gè)過程。主旨升華句“Weshouldrespectandembracetheuniquewayspeopleenjoylife,fortheymightbringusunexpectedjoys.”(我們應(yīng)該尊重和接受人們享受生活的獨(dú)特方式,因?yàn)樗鼈兛赡軙?huì)給我們帶來意想不到的快樂。)“Intryingnewthings,weoftenfindthebridgesthatconnectuswithourlovedones.”(在嘗試新事物的過程中,我們常常會(huì)找到與所愛之人相連的橋梁。)“Sometimes,whatseemsoddatfirstcanturnintothemostprecioussharedexperience.”(有時(shí)候,起初看起來奇怪的事情可以變成最珍貴的共享經(jīng)歷。)“Don'tbequicktojudgeothers'hobbies,astheymayholdthekeytoanewworldoffun.”(不要急于評(píng)判別人的愛好,因?yàn)樗鼈兛赡苁峭ㄍ聵啡な澜绲蔫€匙。)“Embracingdifferencesinhobbiescanopenthedoortoadeeperunderstandingofourfamily.”(接受愛好上的差異可以打開一扇更深入了解家人的門。)寫作示范第一篇Paragraph1:Thenextmorning,CarterandGrandpaheadedoutearly.Carter'sheartpoundedwithamixofnervousnessandexcitementashecarriedthewave-skitowardsthewater.Grandpapatientlyshowedhimhowtopaddleandkeepbalance.Thefirstwavecame,andCarterwobbled,nearlyfallingoff.ButGrandpa'sencouragingwordsurgedhimtokeeptrying.Witheachattempt,hefeltabitmoreconfident.
Paragraph2:Bytheendofthemorning,Carterwasgrinningfromeartoear.Hehadmanagedtorideafewwavessmoothly,feelingthewindinhishairandtherushofthewaterbeneathhim.Theonce-oddsportnowseemedincrediblyfun.HelookedatGrandpawithnew-foundadmiration,realizingthatthisuniquehobbywasasourceofjoyandconnectionforthem.第二篇Paragraph1:Thenextmorning,CarterandGrandpaheadedoutearly.Astheyenteredthewater,thecoolnessoftheseasentashiverthroughCarter.Grandpa'sfirmhandonthewave-skisteadiedhim.CarterlistenedintentlyasGrandpaexplainedtherhythmofpaddling.Whenthewaveshit,Carterstruggledtostayon.ButGrandpa'slaughtermadehimdetermined.Hefocusedhard,adjustinghisgriponthepaddle.
Paragraph2:Bytheendofthemorning,Carterwasgrinningfromeartoear.Hehadmasteredthebasicskillsandwasnowchasingwaveswithgusto.Theexperiencewasnothinglikehehadimagined.Thecombinationofspeedandtheocean'spowerthrilledhim.HenolongerthoughtGrandpa'shobbywasodd.Instead,hefeltaspecialbondwithGrandpathroughthissharedadventure.Onepossibleversion:(192words)Thenextmorning,CarterandGrandpaheadedoutearly,Grandpahandedhimasmallerwave-skiingandhelpedsecurethestrapbeforetheypaddledout.Inthegoldensun,Carterdrowsy-eyed,watchedinaweasGrandpaskillfullydemonstratedhowtobalanceandsteer.ridingupanddownwaveseffortlessly.Amidtherollingwaves,his“odd”grandpawasnolongeranoldguybutamarvelouswaveskier.“Ready,champ?"Grandpa'sshoutsbroughtCarter'sthoughtsback.“Yes!"Carteryelled,aflickerofexcitementbubblinginsidehim.Despitefrequenttumblesintothecoolandsaltywater,hefinallycaught“his”firstwave,savoringthethrillingrushlikeneverbefore.Bytheendofthemorning,Carterwasgrinn
溫馨提示
- 1. 本站所有資源如無特殊說明,都需要本地電腦安裝OFFICE2007和PDF閱讀器。圖紙軟件為CAD,CAXA,PROE,UG,SolidWorks等.壓縮文件請(qǐng)下載最新的WinRAR軟件解壓。
- 2. 本站的文檔不包含任何第三方提供的附件圖紙等,如果需要附件,請(qǐng)聯(lián)系上傳者。文件的所有權(quán)益歸上傳用戶所有。
- 3. 本站RAR壓縮包中若帶圖紙,網(wǎng)頁內(nèi)容里面會(huì)有圖紙預(yù)覽,若沒有圖紙預(yù)覽就沒有圖紙。
- 4. 未經(jīng)權(quán)益所有人同意不得將文件中的內(nèi)容挪作商業(yè)或盈利用途。
- 5. 人人文庫網(wǎng)僅提供信息存儲(chǔ)空間,僅對(duì)用戶上傳內(nèi)容的表現(xiàn)方式做保護(hù)處理,對(duì)用戶上傳分享的文檔內(nèi)容本身不做任何修改或編輯,并不能對(duì)任何下載內(nèi)容負(fù)責(zé)。
- 6. 下載文件中如有侵權(quán)或不適當(dāng)內(nèi)容,請(qǐng)與我們聯(lián)系,我們立即糾正。
- 7. 本站不保證下載資源的準(zhǔn)確性、安全性和完整性, 同時(shí)也不承擔(dān)用戶因使用這些下載資源對(duì)自己和他人造成任何形式的傷害或損失。
最新文檔
- 2024年版技術(shù)開發(fā)合同
- 2024年精準(zhǔn)細(xì)胞培養(yǎng)與應(yīng)用技術(shù)服務(wù)合同版B版
- 2024年輪胎行業(yè)人才培養(yǎng)與購銷合同范本3篇
- 2024年煙葉研發(fā)合作協(xié)議:季筠連屏山至宜賓煙葉新產(chǎn)品研發(fā)合作
- 2025年辦公商業(yè)空間設(shè)計(jì)合作協(xié)議書
- 2024年電影院放映員勞動(dòng)合同范本
- 2024年版電子商務(wù)產(chǎn)業(yè)園企業(yè)綠色能源使用合同
- 三年級(jí)數(shù)學(xué)計(jì)算題專項(xiàng)練習(xí)及答案集錦
- 三年級(jí)數(shù)學(xué)(上)計(jì)算題專項(xiàng)練習(xí)附答案
- 施工現(xiàn)場(chǎng)重大危險(xiǎn)源清單及主要防范措施
- 中國銀屑病診療指南(2018完整版)
- 居民自建樁安裝告知書回執(zhí)
- 《技術(shù)投標(biāo)書(模板)》正規(guī)范本(通用版)
- 雨水回用池專項(xiàng)施工方案
- 一年級(jí)期末無紙筆化測(cè)評(píng)方案
- 杉木防水施工方案
- 新能源電動(dòng)汽車參考文獻(xiàn)有哪些
- 數(shù)字信號(hào)實(shí)驗(yàn)報(bào)告 IIR數(shù)字濾波器設(shè)計(jì)
- 子宮動(dòng)靜脈瘺課件
- 國土資源調(diào)查與管理
- 水庫黑臭水體綜合整治工程項(xiàng)目建議書可行性研究報(bào)告
評(píng)論
0/150
提交評(píng)論