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閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Iwasfifteenwhenmyworldtookahopelessturnfortheworst.|Mymomwasdiagnosedwithcanceragain.Shehadundergonesurgeryandbeatenthecancer.1henthecancercameback.However,therewasmoretoworry,aboutthanthediseasethatmymomwas.battling.Mydadhadleftusyearsbefore..Besides,becauseofthemountingmedicalbillsshewaspayingforherpreviouscancer,wewereontheedgeoffinancialruin.Iwastooyoungtogetajob.Thatwinterwastheworst.Wedidn’thavemoneytopayforelectricity.Ourneighbor,Sophia,allowedustouseherelectricitysothatwecouldhaveonelamponinourhome.Thegasstovein.thelivingroomwastheonlyheatinourhouse.Mymomsleptinhercoldroom,withasmanyblanketsaswecouldpileonher.ThanksgivingDaycame.Isearchedourcupboardsforfoodandthere,wasn'tmuch.Istarted,slammingdoorsasIlookedthroughthecabinetsforacanoffoodwemighthavemissed.ThemoreIsearched,theangrierIbecame.Thenoisemusthavewokenmymom,becauseshecametothekitchenwrappedinablanket.She.lookedworriedatmeandasked,“Baby,what'swrong.”Iretorted,“I'mhungry.I'mfreezingtodeathinourownhouse."Iwasn'tangryather.Iwasangryatoursituation.Sheopenedherarmstowardmeandsaid,“Comehere.Rightnow.thingsarehard,buthopeisalwaysthere.Whateverdifficultieswemeet,weshouldbestrong.Allyouhavetodoishavefaith.Whynotbelievewecanbebetterbyusingourownhands.”注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。IwasdeeplyashamedofwhatIhaddoneandsaid._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________JustasIwonderedwhattodotospendthenight,Sophiaknockedatourdoor._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意本文講述了作者15歲時家庭陷入絕境的故事。母親癌癥復(fù)發(fā),父親早已離開,醫(yī)療費用使家庭經(jīng)濟瀕臨崩潰,冬天沒錢交電費,取暖也成問題。感恩節(jié)時家里食物匱乏,作者在櫥柜尋找食物無果后情緒爆發(fā),向母親發(fā)火。母親安慰作者,讓其要有信念,相信能用雙手創(chuàng)造更好的生活。伏筆及續(xù)寫回應(yīng)伏筆:鄰居Sophia允許作者一家使用她的電。續(xù)寫回應(yīng):Sophia在感恩節(jié)給作者一家送來晚餐和毛毯。伏筆:母親鼓勵作者要有信念,靠自己雙手改變現(xiàn)狀。續(xù)寫回應(yīng):作者在接受Sophia的幫助后,感受到溫暖和善意,決心和母親一起堅強面對困難,體現(xiàn)出依靠自身和他人善意改變困境的信念。續(xù)寫要點第一段情感線:從羞愧到感受到溫暖和希望,重新振作起來。作者對自己向母親發(fā)火感到懊悔,母親的安慰讓其平靜,意識到要堅強。故事線:作者與母親相互依偎,從母親那里獲得力量,決定積極面對困境。第二段情感線:驚喜和感動,對生活重拾信心。因Sophia的善舉而深受觸動,體會到人間有愛。故事線:Sophia送來食物和毛毯,一家人度過一個溫暖的感恩節(jié),作者感受到希望和善意的力量。主旨升華句“Hardshipsmayknockusdown,butloveandhopewillalwaysliftusup.”(艱難困苦可能會把我們打倒,但愛和希望總會讓我們振作起來。)“Inthedarkesttimes,alittlekindnesscanbethebrightestlightguidingusforward.”(在最黑暗的時刻,一點善意可以成為指引我們前進的最明亮的光。)“Toughsituationstestus,yetthepowerofbeliefandhumankindnessprevails.”(艱難的處境考驗我們,但信念和人類善良的力量占上風。)“Whenlifeseemshopeless,thecombinationoffamilyloveandneighborlycarebecomesourstrength.”(當生活看似無望時,親情和鄰里關(guān)懷的結(jié)合成為我們的力量。)“Nomatterhowhardthestormis,theshelterofhopeandlovewillkeepussafe.”(無論暴風雨多么猛烈,希望和愛的庇護所都會保護我們的安全。)寫作示范一IwasdeeplyashamedofwhatIhaddoneandsaid.MyheartwasfilledwithguiltasIhuggedmymothertightly.TearsstreameddownmyfaceasIwhisperedmyapology.Mom'swordsechoedinmyears,givingmethecouragetofaceourharshreality.Irealizedthatmyoutburstwasnotonlyasignofweaknessbutalsoabetrayalofourfamily'sspirit.Weheldeachotherforalongtime,drawingstrengthfromourbond.Fromthatmomenton,Iwasdeterminedtobeasourceofsupportformymother,justasshehadalwaysbeenforme.JustasIwonderedwhattodotospendthenight,Sophiaknockedatourdoor.Withabigsmile,shewalkedinwithabasketfulloffoodandwarmclothes.Shesaidshecouldn'tbeartoseeusstruggleduringthisspecialholiday.Herkindnesswaslikeawarmfireinthecoldwinter,meltingtheiceinmyheart.Aswesharedthedeliciousfoodshebrought,IfeltthetruemeaningofThanksgiving-thegratitudeforthosewhobringlighttoourdarkdays.Itmademeunderstandthatthereisalwayshopeandlovearoundus,waitingtobediscovered.寫作示范二IwasdeeplyashamedofwhatIhaddoneandsaid.Iburiedmyfaceinmymother'schest,sobbing.Mom'sembracewaswarm,andherwordswerelikeagentlebreezecalmingthestorminmyheart.Ifeltsochildishformytantrum.Atthatmoment,Iunderstoodthatwewereeachother'spillarsinthisdifficulttime.Wesharedasilentvowtobestrongandfacethechallengeshead-on.Iknewthatourloveanddeterminationwouldbeourweaponsagainstthehardships.JustasIwonderedwhattodotospendthenight,Sophiaknockedatourdoor.Shehadalargeboxinherhands,filledwithasumptuousThanksgivingdinnerandthickblankets.Hereyeswerefullofkindnessandconcern.Shetoldusthatshehadbeenthinkingaboutusallday.Wewelcomedherin,andaswesataroundthesmalltableenjoyingthefood,Irealizedthateveninthedarkestoftimes,thereareangelsamongus.Sophia'sactofkindnesswasareminderthathopeexistsintheformofhumanconnection,anditgavemethemotivationtokeepgoingwithaheartfullofgratitude.參考范文:IwasdeeplyashamedofwhatIhaddoneandsaid.Istoodtheresilently,tearsrunningdownmyface.Myinitialangergavewaytomyregretandshame.“Mom,Imakeanapologytoyou.HowIwishIcouldtakebackwhatIhadsaid,”Ichuckled,loweringmyhead.Mymomhuggedmeagainandcomfor

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