新高考英語(yǔ)｜讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)真題解讀：媽媽的雨衣學(xué)案-2025屆高三英語(yǔ)作文專項(xiàng)復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)

〖讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)親情類〗新高考讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)分步閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Whenschoolwasover,thedaywasfadinganditstartedtodrizzle(下毛毛雨).Istoodattheschoolgate,withaloadedbackpackonmyshoulders.ItwasFridayagain:aweekendofjoywithunlimitedsleepinghoursanddinnercoursesspeciallymadetomytaste,aweekendathome.Iwavedgoodbyetomyfriendsastheyjumpedintotheirfathers’warmandcomfortablecars.Curiously,thisgaverisetoadisturbingfeelinginme.Itwasnotexactlywhattheycalledjealousy,butsomethinglikedismay(沮喪).IknewallIcouldexpectwasanoldbikeMomwouldridealongon,withthebadly-oiledchaincreaking(嘎作響)againstthewheeltoannounceherarrival.EveryFridaywhenMomcametopickmeupfortheweekend,itwasamomentfullofgreatexpectationandgreatunease.Ialwaysfeltmyfaceburningaswerodeourwayinandoutofthenumerouscarsandsawmyfriends'facesstickingoutofthecarwindows.ItwaslikesteppingintoaballroomwithbeautifullydressedladiesandfindingyourselfinasmellyT-shirt.Totellyouthetruth,Momisquiteaheadacheonceinawhile.Shejustlooksahomelymiddle-agedhousewife.BeingapractitionerofDIY,sheknitsmostofmysweaters,chieflyinoldstyles.Whenevercaughtbysomecuriousclassmatesaskingwhatbrandmysweatersare,I'dforceasmileandreplyinahalfjokingmanner:homemade.Icouldn'trememberwhenIstartedtofindhersuchanembarrassment.Asalittleboy,Ireliedonhersomuch.Shehadbeenworkingathome,cookinginthekitchen,knittingbythelamporridingacrosstowntobuymeabookIbadlyneeded.IthadalwaysbeenmuchfunridingwithMom.Butjustnowthereseemedtobesomethingstandingbetweenus,somethingthatmadehersostrangetomeandmetoher.Today，sheshowedupinaraincoat.________________________________________________________________________________Momtriedtocovermewiththebackoftheraincoatagainasastormsetin.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________原文解讀角色__________：(性格)________________________________：(性格)______________________角色關(guān)系__________________________情節(jié)線Beginning 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Ending→→→情感線_______________→______________→_______________→_____________主題__________________________伏筆__________________________________________________________________續(xù)寫(xiě)構(gòu)思Paragraph1:Todaysheshowedupinaraincoat細(xì)節(jié)擴(kuò)充：Paragraph2:Momtriedtocovermewiththebackoftheraincoatagainasastormsetin.細(xì)節(jié)擴(kuò)充：TIP這篇故事的寫(xiě)作風(fēng)格是內(nèi)心活動(dòng)豐富，“暗線不暗”。因此續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，一定要緊扣“我”的情感變化和內(nèi)心活動(dòng)。寫(xiě)記敘文，對(duì)話要寫(xiě)出對(duì)話的味道。符合人物身份和交際場(chǎng)合。有些動(dòng)作描寫(xiě)太過(guò)于“泛濫而廉價(jià)”，要慎用結(jié)尾升華不一定要強(qiáng)行上價(jià)值或者醍醐灌醒式的頓悟。嘗試通過(guò)故事情境中的畫(huà)面定格來(lái)收筆。詞句積累：天色慢慢暗下來(lái)，天開(kāi)始下毛毛雨。_________________________________________________________.沉重的背包_________________3.和某人揮手告別____________4.跳進(jìn)溫暖舒適的車?yán)颻________________5.這個(gè)讓我感到很沮喪_________________6.一輛老舊的自行車，破舊的鏈條嘎吱作響___________________________________________________7.這是一個(gè)充滿期待和不安的時(shí)刻_________________8.令人頭疼的事_________________9.一個(gè)平凡的家庭主婦_________________10.一個(gè)DIY愛(ài)好者_(dá)________________11.勉強(qiáng)微笑_________________句子翻譯：Para11.一看到我，她立馬激動(dòng)地喊我。_________________________________________________________.2.我低下頭盯著路面看，頭上開(kāi)始冒汗了。_________________________________________________________.3.當(dāng)她試著把雨衣蓋在我身上時(shí)候，我生氣地扔到一邊。_________________________________________________________.向她投去責(zé)備的一瞥，我重重地把書(shū)包扔進(jìn)自行車前面的籃子里。_________________________________________________________.Para2我不情愿地接了過(guò)來(lái)。_________________________________________________________.風(fēng)雨越來(lái)越大，里面卻讓人感到溫暖和安全。_________________________________________________________.母親弓著腰拼盡全力地蹬著自行車。_________________________________________________________.我充滿了負(fù)罪感，眼淚流了出來(lái)。_________________________________________________________.我摟著媽媽的腰，輕輕地把臉貼在她的背上。_________________________________________________________.連句成篇（合理添加，美化句子）Todaysheshowedupinaraincoat._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Momtriedtocovermewiththebackofaraincoatagainasastormsetin._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________句子翻譯：Para1Onceshesawme,momcalledmynameexcitedly.Idroppedmyheadandfixedmystareonthemiddleoftheroad,sweatformingonmyforehead.Whenshetriedtocovermewiththebackofherraincoat,Isimplythrewitaside.Insilence,shotherablamingglanceandthrewmybackpackheavilyintothefrontbasketofthebike.Para2Reluctantly,Ipulleditover.Withthewindroaringangryandtheraincoatdancing,Ifeltwarmandsecureinside.Istartedtofeelguiltyofmycoldness,tearswearingupinmyeyes.IslippedmyhandsaroundtheMom`swaistandgentlypressedmyfaceagainstherback.[參考范文)Todaysheshowedupinaraincoat.Onceshesawme,momcalledmynameexcitedly.Almosteverybodypresentlookedinherdirection.Idroppedmyheadandfixedmystareonthemiddleoftheroad,sweatformingonmyforehead.Whenshetriedtocovermewiththebackofherraincoat,Isimplythrewitaside.Insilence,