Unit+7+Section+B+writing+ 人教版九年級英語全冊

SectionB(Writing)Unit7Teenagersshouldbeallowedtochoosetheirownclothes.Let’swatchavideoandthinkaboutitsmaincontent.What’sthecontent?

Familyrules.playthemobilephoneplaycomputergamesdohouseworkchoosemyownclothesIhaveto…/Iam(not)allowedto…/Ican’t…Lead-inWhataretherulesinyourfamily?watchTVstayuplatePleasewritedownyourfamilyrulesonthepaper.1.Ihaveto/must__________________________.2.Iamallowto________________________.3.Ican’t________________________________.4.I’mnotallowto_________________________.Doyouagreewithit？Doyouagreewithit？FreetalkIthinkIshouldbeallowedto

.Whichonedoyoudisagree?Writedownthesentenceonthepaper.TherearemanyrulesinDave’slife.TherearemanyrulesinCindy’slife.Let‘sreadhisdiaryentryLet‘sreadherdiaryentry

Asthesayinggoes,”

Nothingcanbedonewithoutrules”.Therearemanyrules

inmylife.Forexample,Iamnotallowedtouse

mobilephones.Ican'thangoutwithmyfriends.Ihavetogohomeatonceafterschool.Idon'tagreethatIamnotallowedtousethemobilephone.Firstofall,IthinkIcanusethemobilephonetocommunicatewithmyfriendsandfamilies.What’smore,

usingamobilephonecanbehelpfultomystudy.Icanuselotsofeducationalappsonit.Lastbutnotleast,

Icanuseamobilephonetolistentomusic,playgamesorwatchmovies.It’snotgoodtostudyallthetime.Ineedtorelaxonweenends.Forthesereasons,IhopeIshouldbeallowedtouseamobilephoneonweekends.Ipromisethatitwon'tgetinthewayofmystudy.Pre-writingCindy’sdiaryentryaboutrulesinhislifeBeginningBodyEndingPre-writingCindy’sdiaryentryaboutrulesinhislife

Asthesayinggoes,”

Nothingcanbedonewithoutrules”.Therearemanyrulesinmylife.Forexample,Iamnotallowedtouse

amobilephone.Ican'thangoutwithmyfriends.Ihavetogohomeatonceafterschool.Idon'tagreethatIamnotallowedtouseamobilephone.Trytotranslatetheunderlinedsentence：

.Thereare

rulesinCindy’slifeCindydoesn’tagreethat

.沒有規(guī)矩，不成方圓threeSheisnotallowedtouseamobilephone

.Whatfamilyrulesdoyouhave?Pleasewritedownthreefamilyrulesandwhichonedoyoudisagree?_____________:“Nothingcanbedonewithoutrules.”Therearesomanyrulesinmyfamily.Forexample,①______________.②

.③

.Idon’tagreethat

(完整句子)Pre-writingCindy’sdiaryentryaboutrulesinhislife

Firstofall,IthinkIcanusethemobilephonetocommunicatewithmyfriendsandfamilies.What’smore,usingamobilephonecanbehelpfultomystudy.Icanuselotsofeducationalappsonit.Lastbutnotleast,Icanuseamobilephonetolistentomusic,playgamesorwatchmovies.It’snotgoodtostudyallthetime.Ineedtorelaxsometimes.

HowmanyreasonsdoesCindylist?

.

Findthetransitionalwords（過渡詞)3Whatarethey?Firstofall,

.What’smore,

.Lastbutnotleast,

.Nowpleasewritedownyourreasonsaboutyourrulewhichyoudisagree.Pre-writingCindy’sdiaryentryaboutrulesinhislifeForthesereasons,IhopeIshouldbeallowedtousethemobilephonesforawhileonweekends.Ipromisethatitwon'tgetinthewayofmystudy.Inthisparagraph,Cindytalksabouther

and

.hopepromiseForthesereasons,IhopeIshouldbeallowedto__________.Ipromisethat____________________________.Nowpleasewritedownyourhopeandpromise.話題引出→

（Beginning）↓↓↓↗1.不贊成的原因→2.

（MainBody）↘3.↓↓

總結觀點→（Ending）FamilyrulesyoudisagreeWhyyoudisagreeYourhopeandpromise:Familyrules:Idon’tagreethat......Firstofall,.......What’smore,...Lastbutnotleast,...Forthesereasons,IhopeIshouldbeallowedto__________.Ipromisethat__________.

OutlinePost-writingNow,youcanexchangeyourwritings

withyourpartnerstocheckeachother’swriting.Post-writingAssessment評價指標得分（滿分30分）

評分標準1.文章是否突出了主題66=Excellent(優(yōu)秀)4=Good(良好)2=Acceptable(合格)0=Rewrite(重寫)2.是否體現(xiàn)自己的家規(guī)（至少3條）63.是否寫到了反對的原因（1-3點）64.文章是否運用了正確的表達65.文章的語法是否正確6ShowtimeShowtime