Unit1Friend-【同步寫(xiě)作課】2023-2024學(xué)年八年級(jí)英語(yǔ)上冊(cè)單元寫(xiě)作深度指導(dǎo)(牛津譯林版)(原卷版+解析)

Unit1Friends單元寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)與演練近三年考情分析話題考查熱度自薦信人物介紹（榜樣、親人、朋友、老師、同學(xué)等）本單元的話題是“朋友”，主要介紹朋友的外貌、性格、愛(ài)好、未來(lái)計(jì)劃等相關(guān)內(nèi)容。寫(xiě)作主要涉及對(duì)人物進(jìn)行介紹。在具體的寫(xiě)作中，學(xué)生應(yīng)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1.正確運(yùn)用描述外貌特征的相關(guān)詞匯；2.能夠用語(yǔ)言描述主人公性格的變化情況；3.能夠用簡(jiǎn)潔的語(yǔ)言介紹主人公的興趣愛(ài)好和理想；4.能夠正確使用形容詞的比較級(jí)和最高級(jí)；將主人公與其他人進(jìn)行對(duì)比，并能將主人公的過(guò)去和現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行對(duì)比?！驹~匯積累】Jobs:1.醫(yī)生 2.護(hù)士 3.廚師4.歌手 5.游泳者 6.警察Looks：7.好看的8.英俊的9.圓的10.直的 11.可愛(ài)的 12.微笑的13.胖的 14.苗條的 15.長(zhǎng)的16.矮的；短的 17.棕色的 18.漂亮的Personality：19.聰明的 20.有禮貌的 21.友好的22.慷慨的 23.勤奮的 24.有幫助的25.誠(chéng)實(shí)的 26.幽默的 27.有耐心的28.害羞的【短語(yǔ)積累】1.保守秘密2.關(guān)心3.樂(lè)于干……4.長(zhǎng)大5.幽默感6.讓座7.說(shuō)壞話8.講笑話【句型積累】1.Ihaveafriend.His（Her）nameis...2....hasashort/long/curly/straight/black/blondhair.3....hasaface/nose/mouth/eyes/ears....face/nose/mouth/eyes/earsis（are）...4.He（She）oftenwears...glasses.5.He（She）istall/short/fat/thin/slim/strong.He（She）isastall/short/fat/thin/slim/strong...as...He（She）istaller/shorter/fatter/thinner/slimmer/strongerthan...6.He（She）isclever/smart/generous/helpful/kind/friendly...7.He（She）likes...8.He（She）wantstobea...whenhe/shegrowsup.9.MybestfriendisMax.我最好的朋友是馬克斯。10.Shehasbigbrighteyesandlongstraighthair.有一雙又大又亮的眼睛和一頭長(zhǎng)長(zhǎng)的直發(fā)。11.Heisthetallestboyinourclass—almost1.75metres.他是我們班最高的男生——幾乎1.75米。12.Hewearssmallroundglasses.他戴小圓眼鏡。13.Sheisslimandhasshorthair.她很苗條并且留短發(fā)。14.Bettyisgenerous.Sheiswillingtosharethingswithherfriends.貝蒂慷慨大方。她樂(lè)意與她的朋友們共享她的東西。15.Sheisalsohelpfulandreadytohelppeopleanytime.她也樂(lè)于助人并且隨時(shí)準(zhǔn)備幫助別人。16.Maxhasagoodsenseofhumour.Hetellsfunnyjokesandalwaysmakesmelaugh.馬克斯有很好的幽默感。他講滑稽的笑話，總讓我捧腹大笑。17.Bettyhasagoodvoice.Shewantstobeasingerwhenshegrowsup.貝蒂有一副好嗓子，她長(zhǎng)大了想當(dāng)一名歌手?！局V語(yǔ)積累】?有朋自遠(yuǎn)方來(lái)，不亦樂(lè)乎？.人生沒(méi)有朋友，猶如生活沒(méi)有陽(yáng)光。.患難見(jiàn)真情。.海內(nèi)存知己，天涯若比鄰?！救f(wàn)能寫(xiě)作模板】模板①介紹人物的外形特征Ihavemademanygoodfriends.（引出人物）isoneofthem.Sheis（總體給人的感覺(jué)）.Sheistalland（身材）.Herhairis（頭發(fā)）.Shealwayswears（表情）andgivesustheimpressionthat（給人的印象）.介紹人物的外形特征介紹人物的性格特征并記敘一個(gè)典型的事例提出愿望isalwayswillingto（性格）.Sheisgoodat（特長(zhǎng)）.WheneverIhaveproblemsI.Once（引出事例）.Tomysurprise,.介紹人物的性格特征并記敘一個(gè)典型的事例提出愿望Wewill,butIhope（表達(dá)愿望）.模板②人物介紹人物介紹（年齡、外貌、身份、性格等）...isanine-year-oldboy.Heisvery...and...Heisverynaughty.Andhe...典型事例（說(shuō)明性格、品質(zhì)等）人物評(píng)價(jià)（喜愛(ài)、夸贊等情感）Heoften...Onedayhe......likehimverymuch.Ithinkhe...假設(shè)Susan是你的好朋友，表格中是Susan的個(gè)人信息，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)提示，以“Mygoodfriend”為題，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇100詞左右的短文。要點(diǎn)提示：NameSusanAge14CountryAmericaAppearanceTall,blueeyes,goldenhairCharactersLovely,helpfulFavouritesportsSwimming,runningHobbiesReading,listeningtomusicInterestChinesehistoryandculture____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【審題思路】1.點(diǎn)題，引入正文：agoodfriend,hername2.詳細(xì)介紹Susan的個(gè)人信息：14yearsold,fromAmerica,withblueeyes,longgoldenhair,doingsports,enjoyreadingbooks,lovelyandfriendly,getonwellwith3.結(jié)尾呼應(yīng)開(kāi)頭，表明觀點(diǎn)：belucky,havesuchagoodfriend【佳作賞析】MygoodfriendIhaveagoodfriend.HernameisSusan.Sheis14yearsold.She'sfromAmerica.She'satallgirlwithblueeyesandshehaslonggoldenhair.Shelikesdoingsports,especiallyswimmingandrunning.Sheenjoysreadingbooksandlisteningtomusic.What'smore，sheisveryinterestedinChinesehistoryandculture.SosheoftenreadsbooksaboutChina.She'slovelyandfriendly.Shegetsonwellwithherfriends.She'salsohelpful.SheoftenhelpsmelearnEnglish.Withherhelp，IhavemadegreatprogressinEnglish.I'mluckytohavesuchagoodfriend.常用詞匯：tall,strong,square,smiling,helpful,humour,wear,singer,bored,unhappy常用短語(yǔ)：haveasquareface,smilingeyes,wearglasses,becauseof,toomuch,haveagoodsenseofhumour,feelbored,tellfunnyjokes,makesb.Laugh,growup,workhard常用句型：He/Shehas...He/Shedoesn'tlike...He/Shewantstobe...whenhe/shegrowsup.Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.一、給好朋友制作一張IDcard。IDCardphotoName:____________photoLooks:_____________Personality:____________________________二、中譯英。（翻譯要點(diǎn)：先判斷句子：主謂賓還是主系表，有形容詞的句子大多是主系表）長(zhǎng)大后，她想成為一名英語(yǔ)老師。__________________________________________________________________他總會(huì)在公交車上給需要的人讓座。__________________________________________________________________Tony戴著一副圓框眼鏡。__________________________________________________________________她人很好，從不說(shuō)別人壞話。__________________________________________________________________他長(zhǎng)得比我?guī)洑?。__________________________________________________________________Lisa的臉上總是掛著笑容。__________________________________________________________________三、連句成篇。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)提示完成英語(yǔ)短文，介紹一下Mary。提示：1.Mary有一雙大眼睛，圓圓的臉，披肩發(fā)，很可愛(ài)；2.她對(duì)朋友很慷慨，樂(lè)于助人；3.她很有幽默感，常講笑話給朋友們聽(tīng)；4.她會(huì)替朋友保守秘密。她是一個(gè)真正的朋友。Maryisgirl,bigeyesonherface.Shehasshoulder-lengthhair.Sheisherfriends.Shethinkssheshouldsharefriendsandhelppeople.Shehasagood.Shealwaystellstoherfriendshappy.Herfriendsneverfeelwhentheyarewithher.Shecanherfriends.Sheisafriend.（一）以下是你的好朋友Mike在外貌、性格和愛(ài)好方面的變化。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容介紹他的變化并談?wù)勀銓?duì)他的變化的看法。寫(xiě)一篇不少于60詞的短文。InthepastNowAppearancethin,shorttall,strong,wearglassesPersonalityquietoutgoingHobbieswatchTVplaybasketball,readbooksMyfriendMikehaschangedalotinthelastfewyears._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（二）請(qǐng)你以“Mybestfriend”為題，根據(jù)以下提示信息寫(xiě)一篇80詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文。Thepicturesareprovidedtohelpyouthinkaboutthistopic.Payattentiontothefollowingpointswhenyouplanyourcomposition:●WhatclassisJennyin?●What’sJenny’shobby?●WhatsportsdoesJennylike?Thefollowingwordsmayhelpyou:●especially●volleyball●violin要求：1.條理清楚，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.文中不能出現(xiàn)其他人名和地名等信息；3.在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Mybestfriend____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（三）作為一個(gè)國(guó)際化城市，深圳每年都有大量的外國(guó)學(xué)生來(lái)留學(xué)和交流，假如你是李華，美國(guó)PinkmanMiddleschool的師生將到你們學(xué)校進(jìn)行交流，需要在中方學(xué)生中征集接待美國(guó)學(xué)生的寄宿家庭，你與父母商量后決定做出申請(qǐng)。請(qǐng)你向美方負(fù)責(zé)人Mr.Smith寫(xiě)一封申請(qǐng)信。要點(diǎn)提示：（1）介紹家庭成員：一家三口，父親母親皆為英語(yǔ)老師，為人友善。（2）介紹你家條件：有單獨(dú)的臥室，學(xué)校離家近。（3）說(shuō)明你們?yōu)榻涣魃?jì)劃的特色活動(dòng)。（一到兩項(xiàng)）要求：（1）詞數(shù)：80詞左右（開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）（2）要點(diǎn)齊全，語(yǔ)句通順，語(yǔ)法正確，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；（3）可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫，內(nèi)容充實(shí)。參考詞匯（僅供參考）：separate單獨(dú)的DearMr.Smith,MynameisLiHua.Iamgladthatsomeofyourstudentsandteacherswillcometoourschoolforaneducationalexchange.IamwritingtoapplyforachancetobeoneofthehostfamiliesforAmericanstudents.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thankyouforconsideringmyapplication.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua（一）（2023年湖南省株洲市中考真題）學(xué)校英語(yǔ)角即將開(kāi)展一次以“朋友”為主題的演講活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇演講稿參加活動(dòng)，包括以下內(nèi)容：1.你最好的朋友是什么樣的？2.你的朋友曾給予過(guò)你什么？3.你準(zhǔn)備為你的朋友做什么？詞數(shù)90左右；可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；文中不能透露考生身份的任何信息。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（二）（2023年四川省涼山彝族自治州中考真題）在成長(zhǎng)的過(guò)程中，你一定遇到過(guò)讓你感到溫暖的人。比如對(duì)你噓寒問(wèn)暖的親人，帶你遨游知識(shí)海洋的老師，伴你嬉戲暢玩的伙伴……為了表達(dá)對(duì)他（她）的感謝，請(qǐng)你以“Thanks,________”為標(biāo)題，根據(jù)下面思維導(dǎo)圖提供的信息，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，向校園廣播站投稿。Thanks,________Everyonemustmeetaspecialpersonwhomakesyoufeelwarminlife,yourparent,yourteacherormaybeyourfriend___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（三）（2022年遼寧省沈陽(yáng)市中考真題）榜樣是我們學(xué)習(xí)的楷模、努力的方向。學(xué)校英語(yǔ)社團(tuán)開(kāi)展以“介紹我心中的榜樣”為主題的社團(tuán)活動(dòng)。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一封英文發(fā)言稿來(lái)介紹你心中的榜樣——李想。內(nèi)容包括：1.人物描寫(xiě)；2.說(shuō)明理由；3.表達(dá)希望?！咀⒁狻?.詞數(shù)80—100，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.短文須包括所給內(nèi)容信息，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.作文中不要出現(xiàn)考生和相關(guān)人物的真實(shí)校名和姓名。Dearfellowstudents,IamLiHua.TodayIwouldliketointroduceLiXiang,amodelstudentinmymind.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thanksforyourlistening!（四）（2022年四川省阿壩州、甘孜州中考真題）假設(shè)你叫李平，你的姐姐李蓉今年七月要去倫敦Linda家住一段時(shí)間。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)表格信息，用英語(yǔ)給Linda寫(xiě)一封郵件，介紹你姐姐的基本情況。姓名LiRong年齡16外貌中等身高、黑色短發(fā)性格隨和、外向、友好愛(ài)好歷史、博物館、烹飪、打籃球衣著T恤、牛仔褲注意：(1)文中不得出現(xiàn)個(gè)人真實(shí)信息，如姓名、校名等；(2)文中應(yīng)包含表格所給信息，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫；(3)詞數(shù)80-100。DearLinda,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiPing

Unit1Friends單元寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)與演練近三年考情分析話題考查熱度自薦信人物介紹（榜樣、親人、朋友、老師、同學(xué)等）本單元的話題是“朋友”，主要介紹朋友的外貌、性格、愛(ài)好、未來(lái)計(jì)劃等相關(guān)內(nèi)容。寫(xiě)作主要涉及對(duì)人物進(jìn)行介紹。在具體的寫(xiě)作中，學(xué)生應(yīng)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1.正確運(yùn)用描述外貌特征的相關(guān)詞匯；2.能夠用語(yǔ)言描述主人公性格的變化情況；3.能夠用簡(jiǎn)潔的語(yǔ)言介紹主人公的興趣愛(ài)好和理想；4.能夠正確使用形容詞的比較級(jí)和最高級(jí)；將主人公與其他人進(jìn)行對(duì)比，并能將主人公的過(guò)去和現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行對(duì)比?！驹~匯積累】Jobs:1.醫(yī)生doctor 2.護(hù)士nurse 3.廚師cook4.歌手singer 5.游泳者swimmer 6.警察policeLooks：7.好看的good-looking 8.英俊的handsome 9.圓的round10.直的straight 11.可愛(ài)的lovely/cute/sweet 12.微笑的smiling13.胖的fat 14.苗條的slim 15.長(zhǎng)的long16.矮的；短的short 17.棕色的brown 18.漂亮的beautiful/prettyPersonality：19.聰明的clever/smart 20.有禮貌的polite 21.友好的friendly/kind22.慷慨的generous 23.勤奮的hard-working 24.有幫助的helpful25.誠(chéng)實(shí)的honest 26.幽默的humorous 27.有耐心的patient28.害羞的shy【短語(yǔ)積累】1.保守秘密keepasecret2.關(guān)心careabout3.樂(lè)于干……bewillingtodo/bereadytodo4.長(zhǎng)大growup5.幽默感asenseofhumour6.讓座giveone’sseatto7.說(shuō)壞話sayabadword8.講笑話tellfunnyjokes【句型積累】1.Ihaveafriend.His（Her）nameis...2....hasashort/long/curly/straight/black/blondhair.3....hasaface/nose/mouth/eyes/ears....face/nose/mouth/eyes/earsis（are）...4.He（She）oftenwears...glasses.5.He（She）istall/short/fat/thin/slim/strong.He（She）isastall/short/fat/thin/slim/strong...as...He（She）istaller/shorter/fatter/thinner/slimmer/strongerthan...6.He（She）isclever/smart/generous/helpful/kind/friendly...7.He（She）likes...8.He（She）wantstobea...whenhe/shegrowsup.9.MybestfriendisMax.我最好的朋友是馬克斯。10.Shehasbigbrighteyesandlongstraighthair.有一雙又大又亮的眼睛和一頭長(zhǎng)長(zhǎng)的直發(fā)。11.Heisthetallestboyinourclass—almost1.75metres.他是我們班最高的男生——幾乎1.75米。12.Hewearssmallroundglasses.他戴小圓眼鏡。13.Sheisslimandhasshorthair.她很苗條并且留短發(fā)。14.Bettyisgenerous.Sheiswillingtosharethingswithherfriends.貝蒂慷慨大方。她樂(lè)意與她的朋友們共享她的東西。15.Sheisalsohelpfulandreadytohelppeopleanytime.她也樂(lè)于助人并且隨時(shí)準(zhǔn)備幫助別人。16.Maxhasagoodsenseofhumour.Hetellsfunnyjokesandalwaysmakesmelaugh.馬克斯有很好的幽默感。他講滑稽的笑話，總讓我捧腹大笑。17.Bettyhasagoodvoice.Shewantstobeasingerwhenshegrowsup.貝蒂有一副好嗓子，她長(zhǎng)大了想當(dāng)一名歌手?！局V語(yǔ)積累】Isitnotajoytohavefriendscomingfromafar?有朋自遠(yuǎn)方來(lái)，不亦樂(lè)乎？Alifewithoutafriendisalifewithoutsunshine.人生沒(méi)有朋友，猶如生活沒(méi)有陽(yáng)光。Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.患難見(jiàn)真情。Abosomfriendafarbringsadistantlandnear.海內(nèi)存知己，天涯若比鄰?！救f(wàn)能寫(xiě)作模板】模板①介紹人物的外形特征Ihavemademanygoodfriends.（引出人物）isoneofthem.Sheis（總體給人的感覺(jué)）.Sheistalland（身材）.Herhairis（頭發(fā)）.Shealwayswears（表情）andgivesustheimpressionthat（給人的印象）.介紹人物的外形特征介紹人物的性格特征并記敘一個(gè)典型的事例提出愿望isalwayswillingto（性格）.Sheisgoodat（特長(zhǎng)）.WheneverIhaveproblemsI.Once（引出事例）.Tomysurprise,.介紹人物的性格特征并記敘一個(gè)典型的事例提出愿望Wewill,butIhope（表達(dá)愿望）.模板②人物介紹人物介紹（年齡、外貌、身份、性格等）...isanine-year-oldboy.Heisvery...and...Heisverynaughty.Andhe...典型事例（說(shuō)明性格、品質(zhì)等）人物評(píng)價(jià)（喜愛(ài)、夸贊等情感）Heoften...Onedayhe......likehimverymuch.Ithinkhe...假設(shè)Susan是你的好朋友，表格中是Susan的個(gè)人信息，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)提示，以“Mygoodfriend”為題，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇100詞左右的短文。要點(diǎn)提示：NameSusanAge14CountryAmericaAppearanceTall,blueeyes,goldenhairCharactersLovely,helpfulFavouritesportsSwimming,runningHobbiesReading,listeningtomusicInterestChinesehistoryandculture【審題思路】1.點(diǎn)題，引入正文：agoodfriend,hername2.詳細(xì)介紹Susan的個(gè)人信息：14yearsold,fromAmerica,withblueeyes,longgoldenhair,doingsports,enjoyreadingbooks,lovelyandfriendly,getonwellwith3.結(jié)尾呼應(yīng)開(kāi)頭，表明觀點(diǎn)：belucky,havesuchagoodfriend【佳作賞析】MygoodfriendIhaveagoodfriend.HernameisSusan.Sheis14yearsold.She'sfromAmerica.She'satallgirlwithblueeyesandshehaslonggoldenhair.Shelikesdoingsports,especiallyswimmingandrunning.Sheenjoysreadingbooksandlisteningtomusic.What'smore，sheisveryinterestedinChinesehistoryandculture.SosheoftenreadsbooksaboutChina.She'slovelyandfriendly.Shegetsonwellwithherfriends.She'salsohelpful.SheoftenhelpsmelearnEnglish.Withherhelp，IhavemadegreatprogressinEnglish.I'mluckytohavesuchagoodfriend.常用詞匯：tall,strong,square,smiling,helpful,humour,wear,singer,bored,unhappy常用短語(yǔ)：haveasquareface,smilingeyes,wearglasses,becauseof,toomuch,haveagoodsenseofhumour,feelbored,tellfunnyjokes,makesb.Laugh,growup,workhard常用句型：He/Shehas...He/Shedoesn'tlike...He/Shewantstobe...whenhe/shegrowsup.Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.一、給好朋友制作一張IDcard。IDCardphotoName:____________photoLooks:_____________Personality:____________________________二、中譯英。（翻譯要點(diǎn)：先判斷句子：主謂賓還是主系表，有形容詞的句子大多是主系表）長(zhǎng)大后，她想成為一名英語(yǔ)老師。__________________________________________________________________他總會(huì)在公交車上給需要的人讓座。__________________________________________________________________Tony戴著一副圓框眼鏡。__________________________________________________________________她人很好，從不說(shuō)別人壞話。__________________________________________________________________他長(zhǎng)得比我?guī)洑?。__________________________________________________________________Lisa的臉上總是掛著笑容。__________________________________________________________________【答案】（1）ShewantstobeanEnglishteacherwhenshegrowsup.Healwaysgivesherseatonthebustosomeoneinneed.Tonywearsroundglasses.Sheisfriendlyandneversaysbadwordsaboutothers.Heismorehandsomethanme.Lisaalwayshasasmileonherface.三、連句成篇。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)提示完成英語(yǔ)短文，介紹一下Mary。提示：1.Mary有一雙大眼睛，圓圓的臉，披肩發(fā)，很可愛(ài)；2.她對(duì)朋友很慷慨，樂(lè)于助人；3.她很有幽默感，常講笑話給朋友們聽(tīng)；4.她會(huì)替朋友保守秘密。她是一個(gè)真正的朋友。Maryisagood-lookingandlovelygirl,withbigeyesonherroundface.Shehasshoulder-lengthhair.Sheisgeneroustoherfriends.Shethinkssheshouldshareeverythingwithfriendsandhelppeopleinneed.Shehasagoodsenseofhumour.Shealwaystellsfunnyjokestomakeherfriendshappy.Herfriendsneverfeelboredwhentheyarewithher.Shecankeepsecretsforherfriends.Sheisatruefriend.（一）以下是你的好朋友Mike在外貌、性格和愛(ài)好方面的變化。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容介紹他的變化并談?wù)勀銓?duì)他的變化的看法。寫(xiě)一篇不少于60詞的短文。InthepastNowAppearancethin,shorttall,strong,wearglassesPersonalityquietoutgoingHobbieswatchTVplaybasketball,readbooksMyfriendMikehaschangedalotinthelastfewyears._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【審題思路】①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“信息提示”中的介紹要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫(xiě)作重點(diǎn)?！緦?xiě)作步驟】第一步，表明寫(xiě)作意圖，介紹我的朋友改變了很多；第二步，具體闡述寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容，從“長(zhǎng)相、性格、愛(ài)好”等幾個(gè)方面重點(diǎn)介紹朋友的變化；第三步，書(shū)寫(xiě)結(jié)語(yǔ)，祝愿我的朋友健康、聰明?！炯炎髻p析】MyfriendMikehaschangedalotinthelastfewyears.Heusedtobethinandshort,butnowheistallandstrong.Besides,hewearsglassesnow.Asforpersonality,heusedtobequiet,butnowheisoutgoing.Ithinkthechangesinhisappearanceandpersonalityarebecausethechangesofhishobbies.MikeusedtowatchTVandheseldomplayedoutside.However,atpresent,heisinterestedinplayingbasketballandreadingbooks.Exercisingandreadingmakehimmoreenergeticandoutgoing.IamsogladtoseethegoodchangesandIbelievemyfriendMikewillbehealthierandsmarter.【亮點(diǎn)詞匯】①usedtobe過(guò)去是②atpresent現(xiàn)在③beinterestdin對(duì)……感興趣【高分句型】①Exercisingandreadingmakehimmoreenergeticandoutgoing.（動(dòng)名詞作主語(yǔ)）②IamsogladtoseethegoodchangesandIbelievemyfriendMikewillbehealthierandsmarter.（省略that的賓語(yǔ)從句）（二）請(qǐng)你以“Mybestfriend”為題，根據(jù)以下提示信息寫(xiě)一篇80詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文。Thepicturesareprovidedtohelpyouthinkaboutthistopic.Payattentiontothefollowingpointswhenyouplanyourcomposition:●WhatclassisJennyin?●What’sJenny’shobby?●WhatsportsdoesJennylike?Thefollowingwordsmayhelpyou:●especially●volleyball●violin要求：1.條理清楚，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.文中不能出現(xiàn)其他人名和地名等信息；3.在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Mybestfriend____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【審題思路】①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)完整表述內(nèi)容?！緦?xiě)作步驟】第一步，介紹自己最好的朋友是誰(shuí)；第二步，介紹她的個(gè)人信息，愛(ài)好等；第三步，發(fā)表自己的評(píng)價(jià)?！炯炎髻p析】MybestfriendThisismybestfriendJenny.SheisagoodstudentandsheisstudyinginClass3,Grade8.Jennyhasmanyinterests.Shelikesplayingsports.Sheisespeciallygoodatplayingvolleyball.Sheplaysvolleyballwithherclassmatesafterschooleveryday.Shewantstobeanexcellentvolleyballplayer.Sheisalsogoodatsingingandplayingtheviolin,soshejoinsthemusicclub.Whatagoodgirlsheis!Ifeelluckytohavesuchafriend.【亮點(diǎn)詞匯】①begoodatdoingsth擅長(zhǎng)做某事②afterschool放學(xué)后【高分句型】①Shelikesplayingsports.（動(dòng)名詞作賓語(yǔ)）②Shewantstobeanexcellentvolleyballplayer.（動(dòng)詞不定式作賓語(yǔ)）（三）作為一個(gè)國(guó)際化城市，深圳每年都有大量的外國(guó)學(xué)生來(lái)留學(xué)和交流，假如你是李華，美國(guó)PinkmanMiddleschool的師生將到你們學(xué)校進(jìn)行交流，需要在中方學(xué)生中征集接待美國(guó)學(xué)生的寄宿家庭，你與父母商量后決定做出申請(qǐng)。請(qǐng)你向美方負(fù)責(zé)人Mr.Smith寫(xiě)一封申請(qǐng)信。要點(diǎn)提示：（1）介紹家庭成員：一家三口，父親母親皆為英語(yǔ)老師，為人友善。（2）介紹你家條件：有單獨(dú)的臥室，學(xué)校離家近。（3）說(shuō)明你們?yōu)榻涣魃?jì)劃的特色活動(dòng)。（一到兩項(xiàng)）要求：（1）詞數(shù)：80詞左右（開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）（2）要點(diǎn)齊全，語(yǔ)句通順，語(yǔ)法正確，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；（3）可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫，內(nèi)容充實(shí)。參考詞匯（僅供參考）：separate單獨(dú)的DearMr.Smith,MynameisLiHua.Iamgladthatsomeofyourstudentsandteacherswillcometoourschoolforaneducationalexchange.IamwritingtoapplyforachancetobeoneofthehostfamiliesforAmericanstudents.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thankyouforconsideringmyapplication.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【審題思路】①題材：本文是一封申請(qǐng)信；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫(xiě)作重點(diǎn)?！緦?xiě)作步驟】第一步，自我介紹以及說(shuō)明寫(xiě)信目的（已經(jīng)給出）；第二步，具體闡述寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容。說(shuō)明“家庭成員、家庭條件以及特色活動(dòng)”的具體情況；第三步，書(shū)寫(xiě)結(jié)語(yǔ)。表達(dá)期待?！炯炎髻p析】DearMr.Smith,MynameisLiHua.Iamgladthatsomeofyourstudentsandteacherswillcometoourschoolforaneducationalexchange.IamwritingtoapplyforachancetobeoneofthehostfamiliesforAmericanstudents.Therearethreepeopleinmyfamily.MyfatherandmotherareEnglishteachers.Theyareveryfriendly.WeallcanspeakEnglish,soitwillbeeasytocommunicatewithourguest.Besides,wehaveaseparateroomwithawashroomandshowerforourguest’sconvenience.What’smore,theschoolisclosetomyhome.Itusuallytakesabout15minutesbysubwayor30minutesbybus.Mymumisgoodatcooking.ShewillteachyouhowtocookChinesefood.Wearealsogoingtotakeyoutovisitsomeplacesofinte