（高考英語作文煉句）第4篇譯文老師筆記

PAGEPAGE11.好的家庭教養(yǎng)不僅能幫助兒童開發(fā)智力,而且有助于幫助他們建立一些個(gè)人良好品質(zhì),比如自制、勤奮.

GoodParenting

(1.好的家庭教養(yǎng))notonlyhelpschildren

developintelligence(2.開發(fā)智力),butalsohelpsthemdevelopsomegood

personalqualities

(3.個(gè)人品質(zhì))suchas

self-control

(4.自制)and

diligence(5.勤奮).

1-goodparentingparenting指的是家長對孩子的撫養(yǎng)、培育,除了保證孩子正常生活,還側(cè)重關(guān)愛、指導(dǎo).

詞典釋義：parenting

●○○○○1.N-UNCOUNT

不可數(shù)名詞

育兒;養(yǎng)育子女

Parenting

istheactivity

ofbringingupandlookingafteryourchild.

【搭配模式】：oft

Nn1.

?Parentingisnot

fullyvaluedbysociety.養(yǎng)兒育女沒有得到社會(huì)的充分重視.2.

?...parenting

classes.育兒課程

外刊例句：Maybeifyoudirectlytaxedliteracyand

usedthemoneytosubsidizeilliteracyitwouldbeworse.Youcouldtax

goodparenting

andsubsizechild

abuse.(TheEconomist)

替換詞：upbringing、nurture

學(xué)生錯(cuò)誤表達(dá)：(1)goodfamilybreeding點(diǎn)評：這里不能寫成goodfamilybreeding,breeding是指動(dòng)物的飼養(yǎng)或者人的教養(yǎng),禮貌,與"家庭教育”有所區(qū)別.(2)domesticupbringing點(diǎn)評：domesticupbringing為生造表達(dá),不建議使用.(3)goodfamilymanner點(diǎn)評：manner一般指禮貌、禮儀,不能指家庭教養(yǎng).

2-developintelligencedevelop作為"(使)開發(fā)、發(fā)展”,有"逐漸形成”的含義在其中.develop的其它賓語搭配見下方字典.

詞典釋義：3.

FEELING

感覺,Ttostarttohavea

feelingorqualitythatthenbecomesstronger形成,產(chǎn)生：?Hehaddevelopedacertainaffectionforme.他對我產(chǎn)生了某種喜愛之情.developasense/awareness

/knowledgeofsth.?Thechildrenarebeginningtodevelopasenseof

responsibility.這些孩子開始培養(yǎng)責(zé)任感.?Itwasincollegethathedevelopedatastefor(=

startedtolike)rugbyfootball.他是在大學(xué)里開始喜歡上橄欖球的.4.

SKILL/ABILITY

技術(shù)/能力,I,Tifyoudevelopaskill

orability,orifitdevelops,itbecomesstrongerormoreadvanced加強(qiáng),增強(qiáng)：?Thecourseisdesignedtohelpstudentsdevelop

theirspeakingskills.這門課程旨在幫助學(xué)生提高口頭表達(dá)能力.

外刊例句：Oneofthebugaboosthatauthorsofsciencefiction

sometimesusetoscaretheirhumanreadersistheideathatantsmay

developintelligence

andtakeover

theEarth.(TheEconomist)

替換詞：playapositiveroleintheintellectualdevelopment

學(xué)生錯(cuò)誤表達(dá)：

(1)

developchildren’stalents點(diǎn)評：talent是指人的天資,天賦,與智力不同.(2)

developchildren’smentality點(diǎn)評：mentality是指心態(tài),思想方法,也與智力不同.(3)

explorechildren'sintelligence點(diǎn)評：explore是"探索”,與培養(yǎng)不同.

Intelligence與intellect的區(qū)別：Intellect

and

intelligence

both

refermoreexactlyandmoreformallythanmindtomentalability.

Intellect

isusuallyappliedonlytoman,and

suggestsaloftier,morefinelydevelopedandmoreesteemedfacultythanthe

morewidelyused

intelligence,which

generallydenotesinnatecapacitytoperformmentaltasks,toremember,to

solveproblemsandtoperceiverelationships.[Dr.Smithisamanofgreat

intelligence

butProfessorBrownearnsthe

respectofhiscolleaguesforhishigh

intellect.]

Intelligence

isalsothetermpreferred

tosuggestlackofmentalskillsorthedegreetowhichtheyarepossessed

singlyorincombination：aclassoflow

intelligence;

weakinmechanicalskillsbutreflectingabove-average

intelligence;teststodetermineverbal

intelligence

inpre-schoolchildren.

3-personalqualitiespersonalquality是一個(gè)固定的表達(dá),一般指認(rèn)身上的優(yōu)秀品德,例如寬容、誠實(shí).

詞典釋義：3.N-COUNT

可數(shù)名詞

優(yōu)秀品質(zhì);品德

Someone's

qualities

arethegoodcharacteristicsthattheyhavewhicharepartoftheirnature.

【搭配模式】：usu

pl1.

?Sometimesyou

wonderwhereyourkidsgettheirgoodqualities...有時(shí)你會(huì)想,孩子們身上的優(yōu)秀品質(zhì)是從何而來呢?2.

?Hewantedto

introducematurepeoplewithleadershipqualities...他想引進(jìn)具有領(lǐng)導(dǎo)素質(zhì)的成熟人才.3.

?Ajobanalysis

shouldalsoincludewhatskillsandpersonalqualitiesarerequired.工作崗位分析也應(yīng)當(dāng)包括必備技能與個(gè)人素質(zhì).

外刊例句：Whenhebecametheparty’sleaderin2012,morewasknown

aboutMrXi’sfamilyand

personal

qualities

thanabouthispolitics.(TheEconomist)Thisdidnothappenbyaccident.MrsPalinhasrare

political

qualities.Sheisbold：

sheembracedtheteapartieswellbeforetheirimpactbecameobvious.(The

Economist)

替換詞：personalitytraits

學(xué)生錯(cuò)誤表達(dá)：(1)

personaltraits點(diǎn)評：沒有personaltraits這個(gè)表達(dá),應(yīng)該改為personalitytraits

4-self-control

詞典釋義：self-control

●○○○○1.N-UNCOUNT

不可數(shù)名詞

自制力;自我克制

Self-control

istheabilitytonotshowyourfeelingsornotdothethings

thatyourfeelingsmakeyouwanttodo.1.

?His

self-control,reserveand

aloofnesswerealmostinhuman...他自制、矜持和冷漠得幾乎有些不近人情.2.

?Ibegantowish

I'dshownmore

self-control.我開始想當(dāng)時(shí)若是更自制一些就好了.

外刊例句：Empathyis"sugarysoda,temptinganddeliciousandbadfor

us”.Initsstead,MrBloomprescribesanutritiousdietofreason,

compassionand

self-control.(The

Economist)

替換詞：self-discipline/self-restraint

學(xué)生錯(cuò)誤表達(dá)：(1)

self-contained點(diǎn)評：self-contained是指"(人)獨(dú)立的,自立的”,不能指自控.(2)self-command點(diǎn)評：self-command含義是"鎮(zhèn)定自若,自信”,與自控不同.

5-diligence

詞典釋義：

dili?gence

/

?dilid??ns

/

?

noun

[U]

?(formal)carefulandthoroughworkoreffort

?

勤勉;勤奮;用功：

?Sheshowsgreatdiligenceinher

schoolwork.

她上學(xué)非常用功.

外刊例句：BeforethewordmeritocracywascoinedbyMichaelYoung,a

Britishsociologistandinstitutionalentrepreneur,inthe1950stherewasa

differentnameforthenotionthatpower,successandwealthshouldbe

distributedaccordingtotalentand

diligence,

ratherthanbyaccidentofbirth：American.(TheEconomist)

可供替換的表達(dá)：assiduity/industriousness

學(xué)生錯(cuò)誤表達(dá)：(1)

industrious/hardworking點(diǎn)評：industrious和hardworking都是形容詞,這里應(yīng)該使用名詞.

Q：

"建立一些個(gè)人良好品質(zhì)”這里的"建立”可以翻譯成"build”嗎?A：

quality的常見搭配為developquality,很少有buildquality的說法,不建議使用.

很多同學(xué)寫句子很粗心,本來是句子成分是名詞,卻寫的是其形容詞形式,還有主謂一致問題,經(jīng)常會(huì)犯,希望同學(xué)們寫句子回過頭寫完檢查下句子結(jié)構(gòu)和成分,盡量不要犯低級錯(cuò)誤,如：Thegreatupbringingisnotjustabouthelpingchildrento

developintelligence,butalsoabouthelpingthembuildgoodqualities,such

asself-controlandhard-working.其中hardworking就搞錯(cuò)詞性.

2.在線學(xué)習(xí)可以滿足不同學(xué)生的需要,符合"因才施教”的教育理念.

Onlinelearning

(1.在線學(xué)習(xí))can

suittheneedsof

(2.適應(yīng)……的需要)differentstudents,

conformingtotheideathat

(3.符合……的理念)studentsshouldbetaught

inaccordancewith

(4.與……相符合)their

aptitudes(5.天資).

1-

onlinelearningonlinelearning是"在線學(xué)習(xí)”的固定表達(dá),此時(shí)online是adj,learning作為動(dòng)名詞短語側(cè)重事物,例如onlinebanking,在線銀行"業(yè)務(wù)”,類似表達(dá)還有online

shopping、onlinechatting;learning

online是動(dòng)名詞短語/現(xiàn)在分詞短語,其中online是adv,側(cè)重的是動(dòng)作.online和加連字符的on-line通用.

詞典釋義：online(also

on-line)

adjective

[beforenoun]

UK

[??n.la?n]

US

[?ɑ?n.la?n]

describesproducts,servicesorinformationthat

canbeboughtorusedontheInternet

(產(chǎn)品、服務(wù)或信息)聯(lián)網(wǎng)的,在線的,網(wǎng)上的?an

online

newspaper/magazine/dictionary網(wǎng)上報(bào)紙／網(wǎng)絡(luò)雜志／在線詞典?online

banking/shopping網(wǎng)上銀行服務(wù)／購物

外刊例句：Theconvenience

of

onlinestudy

makesit

especiallysuitableforworkingpeople.AccordingtoPhilRegier,deanof

ArizonaStateUniversity(ASU)Online,themarketforonlinedegreesin

Americaisthe30morso25-to40-year-oldswhodroppedoutofcollegefirst

timeround.(TheEconomist)Oneofthegreat

advantagesof

onlinelearning

is

theabilitytoworkatmassivescale,whichmakesproductionofcourses

studyingthetiniestnichesubjectseconomical.(TheEconomist)

替換詞：distance

learning/onlineeducation/e-learning

2-

suittheneeds

ofsuitneeds、suitsomebody都可以表示"滿足需要”.

詞典釋義：4.VERB

動(dòng)詞

對…方便;滿足…需要;合…心意

Ifsomething

suits

you,itisconvenientforyouoris

thebestthingforyouinthecircumstances.

【語法信息】：Vn

【搭配模式】：no

cont1.

?Theywillonly

releaseinformationifit

suitsthem...他們只會(huì)發(fā)布對他們有利的信息.2.

?Theyshouldbe

abletofindyouthebestpackageto

suit

yourneeds.他們應(yīng)該能提供滿足你需要的最佳套餐.

外刊例句：Ratherthan

beingsofocusedonwealthaccumulation,theassetmanagementindustryneeds

toprovideproductsthat

suitthe

needs

ofindividuals.(TheEconomist)

替換詞：meet/satisfy/fulfill/serve

theneeds/demands/requirementsofsomebody,caterfortheneedsof

學(xué)生錯(cuò)誤表達(dá)：(1)

content

differentdemandsofstudents點(diǎn)評：content做動(dòng)詞時(shí)含義是"使?jié)M意,使?jié)M足”,沒有contentdemands這個(gè)搭配.

3-

conformtothe

ideathat...conformto/with

something表示"按……方式做事”,idea表示"看法、理念”,這里用theideaofsomething/theideaofdoingsomething,或者同位語從句theideathat...都是可以的.

詞典釋義：UK

[k?n'f?：m]

US

[-'f?：rm]

verb

intransitive

conformto/withsth

■toobeyaruleorreachthenecessarystatedstandard,

ortodothingsinatraditionalway

遵守,遵照;符合,達(dá)到;依照?Beforebuyingapram,makesurethatit

conforms

totheofficialsafetystandards.購買嬰兒車之前,要確保它符合官方的安全標(biāo)準(zhǔn).?Membersmust

conform

toa

strictdresscode.成員們必須遵守嚴(yán)格的衣著規(guī)定.

外刊例句：Evenduringthe

campaigninWalestherewerecomplaintsthattheWelshToriesdidnothave

thefreedomtocampaignastheywouldhavewished,havingtoconformto

planslaiddownatCentral

OfficeinLondon.(TheEconomist)

學(xué)生錯(cuò)誤表達(dá)：(1)catertotheeducationconcept點(diǎn)評：cater

to含義是"迎合(某人的需要)”,不與concept搭配

4-

inaccordance

withaccord的基本含義是"和……相一致、相符合”它的動(dòng)詞短語形式是accordwith

something

詞典釋義：accordanceUK

[?'k?：.d?nts]

US

[-'k?：r-]

formal

noun

inaccordancewitharule/law/wish/etc.

■followingorobeyingarule/law/wish/etc.

依照規(guī)則／法律／意愿等?In

accordance

withher

wishes,shewasburiedinFrance.

按照她的遺愿,人們把她安葬在法國.

外刊例句：TheKremlinhad

warnedthatanattackwascoming."Comradesareworking

inaccordancewith

triedandtestedschemes,”VladimirPutin’s

spokesman,DmitryPeskov,saidlastmonth,predictinganattemptto"rockthe

boat”aheadofelectionsinRussia.(TheEconomist)Employees

increasinglyexpecttobeable,forexample,todress

inaccordancewith

theirfaithwhileatwork,andbegiven

appropriatetimesandplacesforprayer.(TheEconomist)

替換詞：be

congruentwith

5-

aptitudeaptitude指的是天生的、或后天習(xí)得的才能,而且尤其是指能夠進(jìn)一步學(xué)習(xí),使人變得更加能勝任某項(xiàng)工作的才能.

詞典釋義：aptitude

●○○○○1.N-VAR

可變名詞

天資;天賦;才能

Someone's

aptitudefor

aparticularkindofworkor

activityistheirabilitytolearnitquicklyandtodoitwell.

【搭配模式】：usu

Nforn/-ing1.

?An

aptitude

forcomputingis

beneficialforstudentstakingthisdegree.計(jì)算才能對于攻讀這個(gè)學(xué)位的學(xué)生有益處.2.

?Somestudents

havemore

aptitude

foracademic

workthanothers.一些學(xué)生比其他學(xué)生更有學(xué)術(shù)才能.

外刊例句：Ontheother

handitisencouragingschoolstodevelopaspecialism(eg,technologyor

music)andisallowingsuchschoolstoselectupto10%oftheirintakebyaptitude

forthespecialistsubject.Finally,onthe

questionofinnatetalent,theyaskedquestionssuchas,"Beingatopscholar

of[discipline]requiresaspecial

aptitude

thatjustcan’tbetaught”,designedtoelucidatehowimportantrespondents

thoughtitwasintheirown,particularfields.

替換詞：talent

Q：關(guān)于連字符,之前有同學(xué)cooperation寫成co-operation,加了橫杠,還有這次的online也是,寫成on-line,這樣的寫法對嗎?

A：co-operation以及on-line的寫法都是正確的.我們可以通過查詞典來確定連字符的使用是否正確,舉個(gè)例子,在劍橋詞典中可以看到,on-line以及co-operation的寫法都是支持的.

cooperation(UK

also

co-operation)

UK

[k????p.?r'e?.??n]

US

[ko??ɑ：.p?'re?-]

noun

uncountable

online(also

on-line)

adjective

[beforenoun]

UK

[??n.la?n]

US

[?ɑ?n.la?n]

Q："可以"我用的是could,這里我有些不大明白could和can的使用了?

A：can在語氣上比較強(qiáng)烈、肯定,強(qiáng)調(diào)能力;could在語氣上比較委婉,不確定,強(qiáng)調(diào)可能性.舉個(gè)例子：

Mymomcanarriveanytimenow.(表示我媽媽有能力隨時(shí)會(huì)到,強(qiáng)調(diào)能力)Mymomcouldarriveanytime

now.(表示我媽媽現(xiàn)在有可能隨時(shí)會(huì)到,強(qiáng)調(diào)可能性)

回到原文例句,

(1)Online

learningcansuittheneedsof…(2)

Onlinelearningcould

suittheneedsof…

前者強(qiáng)調(diào)在線教育可以適應(yīng)學(xué)生的需求,后者強(qiáng)調(diào)有能力適應(yīng)學(xué)生的需求.

關(guān)于can與could的更多區(qū)別可以查閱《英語語法新思維中級教程》

1.要注意名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)問題,例如Onlinelearningcould

meettheneedsofallsortsofstudent要改為Online

learningcouldmeettheneedsofallsortsofstudents

3.公眾很擔(dān)心學(xué)生的時(shí)間精力被學(xué)業(yè)占據(jù),以至于難以參與課外活動(dòng).Thepublic

areconcernedthat

(1.擔(dān)心……)students'timeandenergiesare

takenupwith

(被……占據(jù))schoolwork

tosuchanextentthat

(3.以至于)theycanhardly

participatein

(4.參與)extracurricularactivities(5.課外活動(dòng)).

1-beconcerned

thatconcern的含義是"使……擔(dān)心”,所以不管是在時(shí)態(tài)中還是在非謂語中的使用,主語是人的情況下需被動(dòng).

詞典釋義：concernedUK

[k?n's?：nd]

US

[-'s?：nd]

adjective

憂慮的

■worried

擔(dān)心的;憂慮的;掛念的?I'mabit

concerned

about/for

yourhealth.我有點(diǎn)擔(dān)心你的健康.?[+(that)]Aren'tyou

concerned

(that)

shemighttellsomeone?難道你不擔(dān)心她會(huì)跟別人講嗎??[+

to

infinitive]Hewas

concerned

to

hearthattwoofhistrustedworkerswereleaving.聽到他信任的兩名工人要走,他感到擔(dān)憂.?Concerned

parentshave

complainedaboutthedangerousplayground.憂心忡忡的家長抱怨那個(gè)兒童游樂場太危險(xiǎn).

外刊例句：Thetrustbusters

areconcernedthat

thereis

insufficientcompetition.Fourbigbanks—Barclays,RBS,HSBCandLloyds—dominate

themarket,withacombined77%shareofpersonalcurrentaccounts(and85%

ofbusinessaccounts).(TheEconomist)

替換詞：There

is(agrowing)publicconcernthat...

學(xué)生錯(cuò)誤表達(dá)：

(1)

The

publicconcernthat…點(diǎn)評：concern作為動(dòng)詞時(shí),若取"使某人擔(dān)憂”的含義,應(yīng)該說somethingconcernssomebody,而沒有somebody

concernsthat…的用法.

2-betakenup

withtakeup含義多樣,這里取的是"占據(jù)時(shí)間”的含義.

詞典釋義：4.tofillaparticular

amountoftimeorspace占據(jù)〔一定的時(shí)間或空間〕：

betakenupwithsth.?ThelittletimeIhadoutsideofschoolwastakenup

withwork.課外的一點(diǎn)點(diǎn)時(shí)間我都用來工作了.takeupspace/room?oldbooksthatweretakingupspaceintheoffice占了辦公室很大空間的舊書

外刊例句：Moreover,even

whenventure-capitalfundsdostumpupbigchunksofmoney,theyusuallyplan

tostayinvestedforjustadecadeorso,thelastyearsofwhich

aretakenupwith

designinganexit

strategy.(TheEconomist)

替換詞：be

occupiedwith

3-tosuchan

extentthat這個(gè)表達(dá)在寫作中非常實(shí)用,對"……以至于……”通常會(huì)想起"v.soadv.that...”,這時(shí)adv.的選擇可能會(huì)成為問題,而tosuchanextentthat可以直接表達(dá)這層含義.

詞典釋義：5.PHRASE

短語

(表示強(qiáng)調(diào))到…的地步,到…的程度

Youuseexpressionssuchas

totheextentof

,totheextentthat,or

tosuchanextentthat

inordertoemphasize

thatasituationhasreachedadifficult,dangerous,orsurprisingstage.

【語用信息】：emphasis1.

?Hesaidhedidn't

likethepresident,butnottothe

extent

ofwantingto

killhim...他說他不喜歡總統(tǒng),但是還沒有到想要刺殺他的地步.2.

?Ibecamepregnant

butthismanwasveryviolenttowardsmetothe

extent

thatIlostour

baby...我懷孕了,但是這個(gè)男人對我非常粗暴,致使我流產(chǎn)了.3.

?Ithasincreased

tosuchan

extent

thatGhanacan

nowexportmaize.玉米產(chǎn)量增長得如此迅速,現(xiàn)在加納已經(jīng)可以出口玉米了.

外刊例句：Intheeventthe

financialstrainhasbeenlifted,andmoneyrateshavefallen

tosuchanextentthat

forthelast

twoweeks,Bankrate,whichfellto6percentonOctober31st,hasbeen

ineffective,threemonths'billshavingfallenthisweektoabare5per

cent.(TheEconomist)

替換詞：so...that...

4-participatein

詞典釋義：participate

●●●○○1.VERB

動(dòng)詞

參與;參加

Ifyou

participatein

anactivity,youtakepartin

it.

【語法信息】：Vin

n

【語法信息】：V-ing1.

?Theyexpectedhim

to

participate

inthe

ceremony...他們希望他參加典禮.2.

?Overhalfthe

populationofthiscountry

participate

insport.這個(gè)國家一半以上的人口參加體育鍛煉.3.

?...specialcontracts

atlowerratesforparticipatingcorporations.為各參與企業(yè)提供的低費(fèi)率特殊合同

外刊例句：InMilford,

Pennsylvania,forexample,DelawareValleyMiddleSchoolhasinstituteda

policyofmandatorydrugtestsforstudentswishingto

participatein

clubsorsports.(TheEconomist)Inthatcase,

tellingtent-dwellingenthusiastsofparticipatorydemocracytogohomeand

actually

participatein

our

democracyamountstotellingthemtosurrendertotheoligarchs.(The

Economist)

替換詞：takepartin

5-

extracurricularactivities這是課外活動(dòng)的固定表達(dá).extracurricular也可以寫為extra-curricular.

詞典釋義：extracurricularinBRIT,alsouse

英國英語亦用extracurricular1.ADJ

形容詞

課外的

Extracurricular

activities

areactivitiesforstudentsthatarenotpartoftheircourse.

【搭配模式】：ADJ

n

【語域標(biāo)簽】：FORMAL

正式1.

?Eachchildhad

participatedin

extracurricular

activitiesat

school.每個(gè)孩子都參加了學(xué)校的課外活動(dòng).2.

?...extracurricular

sport.課外體育活動(dòng)

外刊例句：Hesaysthat

thishasledstudentstogotoevergreaterlengthstodevelopacompetitive

advantageinapplyingforuniversityadmission—takingadvancedplacement

coursesandtestpreparatorycourses,andinvestingheavilyin

extracurricularactivities.(The

Economist)

替換詞：afterschool

activities

(1)thepublic前面的冠詞the一定不能省略,不能寫成public(2)thepublic應(yīng)該作為復(fù)數(shù)名詞使用,不能說thepublicis

concernedthat…要說thepublicareconcernedthat…4.有些大學(xué)課本雖然嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)?shù)珔s晦澀難懂,所以作者應(yīng)該在傳授知識(shí)和增強(qiáng)學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)準(zhǔn)確信息的興趣之間取得一個(gè)微妙的平衡點(diǎn).Someuniversitytextbooksare

rigorous

(1.嚴(yán)謹(jǐn))but

impenetrable(2.晦澀難懂),andtheauthorshould

strikeadelicatebalancebetween

(3.在……和……之間取得一個(gè)微妙的平衡)impartingknowledgeand

sharpeningstudents’appetite

(4.增強(qiáng)學(xué)生的興趣)forlearning

factsandfigures(5.準(zhǔn)確信息).

1-rigorousrigorous可以指事物的系統(tǒng)、結(jié)構(gòu)、邏輯嚴(yán)謹(jǐn).

詞典釋義：rigorousUK

['r?g.?r.?s]

US

[-?-]

adjective

縝密的

approving

carefultolookatorconsidereverypartof

somethingtomakecertainitiscorrectorsafe

嚴(yán)密的,縝密的;嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)?shù)?rigorous

testing/checking/methods精確的測試／嚴(yán)格的檢查／嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)?shù)姆椒?/p>

外刊例句：Thepaperpoints

outthatmostfinancialresearchappliesatwo-standard-deviation(or"two

sigma”inthejargon)testtoseeiftheresultsarestatistically

significant.Thisisnot

rigorous

enough.(TheEconomist)

學(xué)生錯(cuò)誤表達(dá)：(1)Someuniversitytextbooksaresound點(diǎn)評：這里不能用sound來表示"嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)”,sound是指"合理的;可靠的”,例如soundadvice/

environmentallysound,與"嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)”存在區(qū)別.

替換詞：with

rigour

2-impenetrable

詞典釋義：impenetrable[?m'pen.?.tr?.bl]

adjective

■impossibletoseethroughorgothrough

不能看透的;不能穿過的?Outside,thefogwasthickand

impenetrable.外面的霧很濃,甚么也看不見.?an

impenetrable

barrier無法跨越的障礙■impossibletounderstand

費(fèi)解的,無法理解的?Someofthelyricsontheirlatestalbum

arecompletely

impenetrable.他們最新專輯中的一些歌詞讓人完全看不懂.

外刊例句：Thereare

multiplecomponentstothesefailures,involvingindividualmistakes,

organisationaldysfunction,andsystemsinaccessibletosomeand

impenetrable

tomany.(TheEconomist)

學(xué)生錯(cuò)誤表達(dá)：(1)intangible點(diǎn)評：impenetrable不能與intangible(難以描繪的,難以形容的)相混淆.

替換詞：opaque

3-strikea

balancebetweenstrikeabalance可以表達(dá)在不易權(quán)衡的兩個(gè)重要方面努力尋找平衡,如果替換為achieve等動(dòng)詞,需要把"努力”這層含義表達(dá)出來,例如strivetoachieveabalancebetween

詞典釋義：[stra?k]

verb

strikeabalance

■Ifyoustrikeabalancebetweentwothings,youaccept

partsofboththingsinordertosatisfysomeofthedemandsofbothsidesin

anargument,ratherthanallthedemandsofjustoneside

(在爭論中)找到折衷辦法,求得平衡?It'saquestionof

striking

therightbalance

between

qualityandproductivity.問題在于要在品質(zhì)和生產(chǎn)力之間求得適當(dāng)?shù)钠胶?

外刊例句：Asbrandstryto

strikeabalancebetween

generatinginstantrevenueandrestrictingsupply(whichcreatesdemand,and

morerevenuelater),thesecondarytradethrives.(TheEconomist)

4-impart

knowledge"傳授知識(shí)”一般都表達(dá)為impartknowledge.

詞典釋義：VERB

動(dòng)詞

傳授;告知

Ifyou

impart

information

to

people,youtellit

tothem.

【語法信息】：Vn

【語法信息】：Vn

ton

【語域標(biāo)簽】：FORMAL

正式1.

?Theabilityto

impart

knowledgeand

commandrespectistheessentialqualificationforteachers...具備傳授知識(shí)并贏得尊敬的能力是對教師的基本要求.2.

?Iamaboutto

impart

knowledgetoyou

thatyouwillneverforget.我會(huì)向你傳授讓你終生牢記的知識(shí).

外刊例句：Thebest

civic-educationclassesdomorethan

impart

knowledge

abouthowgovernmentworks.Theycreateenvironmentsinwhich

pupilsgetusedtothetoolsofdemocracy,suchasdebatingcontroversial

issuesanddisag