2024全國I卷續(xù)寫作文+維也納司機(jī)+講義 高三英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)

續(xù)寫ImetGunteronacold,wetandunforgettableeveninginSeptember.IhadplannedtoflytoViennaandtakeabustoPragueforaconference.Duetoabigstorm,myflighthadbeendelayedbyanhourandahalf.ItoucheddowninViennajust30minutesbeforethedepartureofthelastbustoPrague.ThemomentIgotofftheplane,Iranlikecrazythroughtheairportbuildingandjumpedintothefirsttaxiontherankwithoutasecondthought.

ThatwaswhenImetGunter.ItoldhimwhereIwasgoing,buthesaidhehadn’theardofthebusstation.Ithoughtmypronunciationwastheproblem,soIexplainedagainmoreslowly,buthestilllookedconfused.WhenIwasabouttogiveup,Gunterfishedouthislittlephoneandrangupafriend.Afteraheateddiscussionthatlastedforwhatseemedlikeacentury,Gunterputhisphonedownandstartedthecar.

Finally,withjusttwominutestosparewerolledintothebusstation.Thankfully,therewasalongqueue(隊(duì)列)stillwaitingtoboardthebus.Gunterparkedthetaxibehindthebus,turnedaround,andlookedatmewithabigsmileonhisface.“Wemadeit,”hesaid.

JustthenIrealisedthatIhadzerocashinmywallet.IflashedhimanapologeticsmileasIpulledoutmyPortuguesebankcard.Hetrieditseveraltimes,butthecardmachinejustdidnotplayalong.AfeelingofhelplessnesswashedovermeasIsawthebusqueuethinningout.

Atthismoment,Gunterpointedtowardsthewaitinghallofthebusstation.There,attheentrance,wasacashmachine.Ijumpedoutofthecar,madeamadrunforthemachine,andpoppedmycardin,onlytoreadthemessage:“Outoforder.Sorry.”續(xù)寫部分Para1IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews._____________________________________Para2Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised._________________Who:I/GunterWhen:onacold,wetandunforgettableeveninginSeptemberWhere:fromtheairporttothebusstationWhat:Ihadtroublepayingforthetaxifare.Why:Ihadzerocash/bankcardcouldn'tbeused/acashmachinedidn'thelp...How:Analysisofthecharacters:Gunter：responsible,warm-hearted,friendly,professionalI：anxious,embarrssed,honest問題：開車把他帶到Prague?流下了淚水？對(duì)方不要他付錢？Resolution:ImadeapromisethatIwouldpayhimthefeelaterandGuntertrustedme.Ending:Ikeptmypromiseandexpressedmygratitude,andfinallywebecamegoodfriends.Theme:Whatdidtheexperiencedemonstrate?①offerhelptopeopleinneed;conveykindnessandlove.②sticktoone’spromise.Para1：IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.Link1:HowdidGunterreact?Whatdidhesaytome?Guntercomfortedmeandaskedmetocatchthebus.Body:HowdidIfeel?WhatdidGunterdo?Withnocash,howcouldItakethebustoPrague?Ifeltverygratefulandtouched.Gunterlentmesomemoney.Link2:whatdidIdo?WhatdidIpromise?IaskedhimtoleavehisphonenumberandpromisedtocallhimwhenIwasbackinViennaandpayhimthefee.Para2:Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised.Link3:HowdidGunterreact?HowdidIfeel?Hewasdelightedtoreceivemyunexpectedcall.Ifeltverywarmtohearhisvoice.Body:WhatdidIsayinthephone?Wheredidwemeet?WhatdidIdothere?Imadeanappointmentwithhimtomeeteachotheratthatbusstation.Whenwemet,Ipaidthemoneybackhim,Ialsobroughtsomelittlegiftsforhimandhisfamily.Theme:Whatdidtheexperiencedemonstrate?EndingA：（人與人之間美好的信任）WhathappenedonthatSeptembercold,wetandunforgettableeveningservedasabeautifulreminderofhowtrustcanbringpeopleclosertogether.EndingB：（我的一諾千金）Iprovedtothegenerous,warm-heartedtaxidriverthatIamamanofintegrityandGunterdeservedtoberepaidandrespected.

EndingC:（奇妙際遇，成就奇緣）①TheunforgettableencounterbetweenGunterandmeformedaclosebond/friendship.

②Thatstressfulandchaoticsituationwouldstickinmymemoryforever/wouldbeengravedonmyheart深銘肺腑,whichtaughtmethatmutualtrustistheseedthatblossomsintodeepandlastingconnections.

點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的故事（常與原文最后一段呼應(yīng)）和第一段段首語；

點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；

點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；

點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。

Tip1：actionchain(動(dòng)作鏈)常用句式：action1,action2andaction31）Ijumpedoutofthecar,madeamadrunforthebusandfinallymanagedtocatchitbeforeitsdeparture.Tip2：non-finiteverbs(非謂語動(dòng)詞)常用句式：①Doing/Done...,.....②...,doing/done...③with+n+doing/done/todo

1）Hearingmywords,Gunterrepliedwiththefamiliarsmileonhisface.

2）Helentsomemoneytome,comfortingmehetrustedme.

3)“Sorry,Ican’ttakecashout.”Isaidembarrassedly,withmyfaceburning.

Tip3：invertedsentences(倒裝句)

①so+adj/adv+助動(dòng)詞/情態(tài)動(dòng)詞/be動(dòng)詞+主語+實(shí)義動(dòng)詞+that+從句;

②notonly+助動(dòng)詞/情態(tài)動(dòng)詞/be動(dòng)詞+主語+實(shí)義動(dòng)詞+句子剩余部分+butalso...;

③never/seldom+助動(dòng)詞/情態(tài)動(dòng)詞/be動(dòng)詞+主語+實(shí)義動(dòng)詞;

④notuntil+助動(dòng)詞/情態(tài)動(dòng)詞/be動(dòng)詞+主語+實(shí)義動(dòng)詞that...;

⑤nosoonerhadsb./sth.donesth.thansb./sth.didsth.

⑥only+狀語置前+助動(dòng)詞/情態(tài)動(dòng)詞/be動(dòng)詞+主語+實(shí)義動(dòng)詞+句子剩余部分

①SosurprisedandmovedwasIthatIcouldn’tsayawordout.

②Notonlydidhelendmesomemoneytocontinuemyjourneybutalsohecomfortedmethatit’snothingdeservementioning.

③NeverinmywildestdreamhadIimaginedthatmyinabilitytopayhimdidn’tbotherhimatall.

④NotuntilthendidIrealizethatitwasthekindnessconveyedbythestrangersthatmadetheworldbetter.

⑤Nosoonerhadheblurtedout“hello”thanhisfamiliar,warmandreassuringvoicecameintomyears.

⑥OnlythendidIrealizethatitwasthekindnessconveyedbythestrangersthatmadetheworldbetter.Tip4：emphaticsentences(強(qiáng)調(diào)句)Itis/was...that/who....①Itwasthekindnessandtrustfromthestrangerthathelpedmegetthroughmydilemma.

②Itwasastrangerwhohelpedmegetridofthedilemma.

Tip5：subjunctivemood(虛擬語氣)

Without/Butfor...,sb.wouldhavedone...

Withouthiskindnessandgenerosity,Iwoludn’thavebeenabletoattendmyconferenceontime.

補(bǔ)充細(xì)節(jié)（3大原則）

1.Action—Response原則：某個(gè)角色所言、所行、所感、所想會(huì)引起其它角色的反應(yīng)。每段對(duì)話1-2句，不一定每個(gè)人都要說話，無聲的動(dòng)作也是一種response。

2.Conflict—Solution原則：問題最終會(huì)找到解決方法

3.Negative—Positive原則：寫作中一定要體現(xiàn)情感的變化，無論前面是怎樣的變化，最終都是積極的。

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Para1:IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.Helookedatmeindisbelief,askingmewhattodo.Flashinghimanotherapologeticsmile,Ibeggedhimforadelayedpayment.“IfImissthislastbustoPrague,I'llbelatefortheconferencewhichissoimportantthatIcan'taffordtomissit!”Iexplained.“MayIhaveyourphonenumber?IwillcallyouandreturnthemoneyIoweyou.IpromiseIwillkeepmywordoryoukeepmywatch!”Iadded,handinghimmywatchaswellasmybusinesscard.Gunteracceptedmybusinesscardbutrejectedmywatch.Hewrotedownhisphonenumberandgaveittome.“Justkeepyourpromise,Sir."AfeelingofgratitudewashedovermeasIheardhiswords.Givinghimafirmhandshake,Ijumpedoutofthecar,madeamadrunforthebus,andjumpedontoitjustbeforeitsdepart