讀后續(xù)寫+奔跑路上的忠實伙伴：Brucie+與+Jenny+的馬拉松之約+講義 高二下學期期末教學質(zhì)量檢測英語試卷

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Jennyalwaysadmiredpowerfulandattractivemarathonrunnersanddreamedthatonedayshecouldalsorunamarathon.Tomakeit,oneday,shebegantoseriouslyprepare.Atfirst,sheonlysetthesmallgoalofrunningonekilometereachmorning.However,shestillfoundittiringandsoongaveuprunning.Asdayswenton,herweightgraduallyincreased.Upsetaboutherhealth,shefinallydecidedtoloseweightbydoingexercise.Shebeganrunningagain.Asusual,inthefollowingdays,herbigproblemwithexercisingwasalwayshowtostaymotivated.Shetriedtofindguidancefromrunningexpertsandbooks.Andeverythingshereadindicatedthatshe’dbetterpairupwitharunningpartner.Shefollowedtheadvice,buthumanexercisecompanionsalwaysletherdown.Herlastexercisecompanionquitwithexcuseslike,“It’smyturntodothedishes”atsixo’clockinthemorning!Shehatedtoadmitit,butshehadmadesimilarexcusestoothersanddisappointedtheminsimilarways.ThenBrucieappearedinJenny’slife,abirthdaygiftfromherhusband,John.Johncouldn’tworkoutwithJennybecausehehadabadback.SothatjobwaslefttoBrucie,ayellowdog.Bruciewasquiteenergetic,whichmadehimdestined（注定的）tobearunningpartner.Inthebeginning,BrucieandJennyranonlyfiftypacesatatime,eachsetmixedwithonehundredpacesofwalking.“Idon’tlookfoolishstartingthisway,”thoughtJenny,“becauseBrucie’sbonesaretooyoungtomakehimrunmuchharder.”Shewasright,andBrucie’searlylimitationsgavehertimetostartslowlywithoutfeelingawkward.Afteraboutninemonths,though,BruciewasoldenoughtorunseveralmilesadayandJennywasfitenoughtokeepup.Fromspringtoautumn,theyloggedthemilestogethereveryday.However,aswinterapproachedandtheweathergotcolder,maintainingadailyrunningroutinerequiredlotsofdedication（熱忱）anddetermination.AndJennystartedtothinkthedogwouldbelikeherprevioushumanpartnersandthatshecouldn’tcountonthelittledogforhelpwithmotivation.注意：1．續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150左右；2．請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Paragraph1:WhathappenedlaterprovedthatJennywaswrong._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Onespringmorning,Jennystartedherfirstmarathon,accompaniedbyBrucie.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意：Jenny一直羨慕馬拉松選手，夢想自己也能跑馬拉松，起初嘗試鍛煉卻因動力不足而放棄，體重還增加了。后來聽從建議找跑步伙伴也不如意。直到丈夫送了她一只叫Brucie的狗，他們從最初只能跑五十步且夾雜大量步行開始訓練。九個月后Brucie能跑幾英里，Jenny也足夠健康能跟上。冬天來臨，Jenny擔心Brucie也像之前的人類伙伴一樣不能給予她動力，但后來Brucie用行動證明了自己，最終還陪伴Jenny完成了她的第一次馬拉松，實現(xiàn)了她的夢想。故事山分析：開端：Jenny羨慕馬拉松選手，決定開始鍛煉，但因覺得跑步累而放棄，體重上升后再次決定減肥鍛煉，引出后續(xù)找跑步伙伴的情節(jié)，展現(xiàn)Jenny最初的決心和遇到的困難，為故事發(fā)展奠定基礎(chǔ)。發(fā)展：Jenny找人類跑步伙伴失敗，多次被放鴿子，這使她對尋找合適的伙伴感到失望，同時也為Brucie的出現(xiàn)做鋪墊，凸顯Brucie作為跑步伙伴的獨特性和重要性，推動故事向前發(fā)展。高潮：冬天到來，Jenny對Brucie是否能持續(xù)給予動力產(chǎn)生懷疑，這是故事的緊張點，而Brucie用實際行動證明了自己，如在寒冷早晨催促Jenny起床跑步，成為故事的高潮部分，展現(xiàn)Brucie的忠誠和對Jenny的積極影響。結(jié)局：春天到來，Jenny在Brucie的陪伴下參加并完成了第一次馬拉松，實現(xiàn)了自己的夢想，呼應開頭的夢想，也體現(xiàn)了Brucie對Jenny的巨大幫助，使故事有一個圓滿的結(jié)局，給人以鼓舞和溫暖的感覺。伏筆及續(xù)寫中的回應：伏筆：“Shetriedtofindguidancefromrunningexpertsandbooks.Andeverythingshereadindicatedthatshe’dbetterpairupwitharunningpartner.”（她試圖從跑步專家和書籍中尋找指導。她讀到的所有內(nèi)容都表明，她最好找一個跑步伙伴。）回應：為Brucie的出現(xiàn)做鋪墊，說明Jenny需要一個伙伴來幫助她堅持跑步，后續(xù)Brucie成為她的跑步伙伴并發(fā)揮重要作用，證明了這個建議的正確性，同時也體現(xiàn)了Brucie出現(xiàn)的合理性，使故事發(fā)展更加自然流暢。伏筆：“Herlastexercisecompanionquitwithexcuseslike,‘It’smyturntodothedishes’atsixo’clockinthemorning!”（她最后一個鍛煉伙伴在早上六點以“輪到我洗碗了”這樣的借口退出了?。┗貞和怀鲋叭祟惢锇榈牟豢孔V，與Brucie的忠誠形成鮮明對比。續(xù)寫中，Brucie在寒冷冬天依然堅持督促Jenny跑步，展現(xiàn)出Brucie的堅定和可靠，更加凸顯了它作為跑步伙伴的珍貴，也讓Jenny深刻體會到兩者的不同，從而更加珍惜Brucie的陪伴。伏筆：“Bruciewasquiteenergetic,whichmadehimdestinedtobearunningpartner.”（Brucie精力充沛，這使他注定成為一個跑步伙伴。）回應：暗示Brucie具備成為優(yōu)秀跑步伙伴的特質(zhì)，為后續(xù)它能陪伴Jenny完成訓練和馬拉松比賽埋下伏筆。續(xù)寫中，Brucie在跑步過程中始終保持活力，不僅帶動Jenny堅持下去，還在馬拉松比賽中與她并肩作戰(zhàn)，充分發(fā)揮了其精力充沛的優(yōu)勢，實現(xiàn)了前文的伏筆，也展現(xiàn)了Brucie在Jenny實現(xiàn)夢想過程中的關(guān)鍵作用。伏筆：“Jennywasfitenoughtokeepup.”（Jenny足夠健康以跟上步伐。）回應：說明Jenny經(jīng)過與Brucie的訓練已經(jīng)取得了一定的成果，為她參加馬拉松比賽提供了身體條件的支撐。續(xù)寫中，Jenny能夠參加馬拉松比賽并順利完成，離不開之前與Brucie一起訓練所積累的體能和耐力，體現(xiàn)了前期訓練的重要性，也使故事的發(fā)展符合邏輯，讓讀者看到Jenny的成長和進步。伏筆：“AndJennystartedtothinkthedogwouldbelikeherprevioushumanpartnersandthatshecouldn’tcountonthelittledogforhelpwithmotivation.”（Jenny開始認為這只狗會像她以前的人類伙伴一樣，她不能指望這只小狗來提供動力。）回應：制造了故事的緊張感和懸念，引發(fā)讀者對Brucie是否能改變Jenny看法的期待。續(xù)寫中，Brucie通過在寒冷早晨的積極表現(xiàn)，打破了Jenny的疑慮，使故事更加生動有趣，同時也突出了Brucie的堅持和對Jenny的真心陪伴，進一步深化了兩者之間的情感聯(lián)系。續(xù)寫要點：第一段：情節(jié)：詳細描述冬天那個寒冷的早晨，Brucie是如何叫Jenny起床的，比如跳上床舔她的臉、叼著她的鞋子在床邊晃悠等。接著寫他們出門后，Brucie在雪地里奔跑的歡快樣子，以及Jenny看到后內(nèi)心的觸動，意識到自己錯怪了Brucie，從而重新燃起堅持跑步的熱情，即使天氣寒冷也不再退縮。情感：Jenny從最初的懷疑和失望，到被Brucie的舉動感動，進而感到愧疚和重新振作，情感上有一個明顯的轉(zhuǎn)變和升溫，更加堅定了與Brucie一起跑步的決心，也對即將到來的馬拉松充滿期待。第二段：情節(jié)：描繪馬拉松比賽當天的場景，如陽光明媚、人群歡呼等。重點描寫Jenny和Brucie在比賽中的狀態(tài)，Jenny可能會遇到體力不支的時刻，但Brucie始終在她身邊陪伴、鼓勵，比如用叫聲為她加油，或者用身體蹭蹭她給予力量。最后他們一起沖過終點線，Jenny激動地抱住Brucie，周圍的人也為他們鼓掌歡呼。情感：Jenny充滿了緊張、興奮和堅定，在比賽過程中感受到Brucie的支持和陪伴，情感逐漸升華，最終沖過終點線時，是無比的激動、自豪和幸福，實現(xiàn)了自己長久以來的夢想，也與Brucie建立了深厚的情感紐帶，讓讀者感受到堅持和陪伴的力量。情感線：故事開始，Jenny對跑馬拉松充滿向往，決定鍛煉但因困難而放棄，此時她的心情是沮喪和無奈的。在尋找跑步伙伴的過程中，被人類伙伴多次放鴿子，讓她感到失望和憤怒，對找到合適伙伴幾乎絕望。Brucie出現(xiàn)后，起初她只是抱著嘗試的心態(tài)，但隨著訓練的進行，對Brucie有了一定的依賴和信任，同時也對自己的能力有了一些信心。冬天到來時，她對Brucie產(chǎn)生懷疑，心情再次陷入低谷和擔憂。然而，Brucie在寒冷早晨的堅持讓她深受感動，內(nèi)心從懷疑轉(zhuǎn)為愧疚和重新振作，對Brucie充滿感激和信任。最后在馬拉松比賽中，Jenny經(jīng)歷了緊張、興奮、疲憊等多種情緒，在Brucie的陪伴下最終沖過終點線，此時她的情感達到頂點，是無比的激動、自豪和幸福，完成了從沮喪到幸福、從自我懷疑到充滿自信的情感歷程，讓讀者深刻感受到夢想實現(xiàn)過程中的情感起伏和堅持、陪伴的重要性。故事線：Jenny羨慕馬拉松選手，開始鍛煉后放棄，因體重增加再次決定減肥跑步。找人類跑步伙伴失敗，多次被放鴿子。丈夫送她狗Brucie，開始一起訓練，從少量跑步和大量步行開始。九個月后Brucie和Jenny都有進步，能跑幾英里。冬天Jenny懷疑Brucie，后被Brucie的行動改變想法。春天Brucie陪Jenny完成第一次馬拉松，實現(xiàn)夢想。主旨升華句（英文）：Truecompanionshipisnotmeasuredbywords,butbytheunwaveringpresenceandsupportintimesofdifficulty.（真正的陪伴不是用言語衡量的，而是在困難時刻堅定不移的存在和支持。）Inthejourneyofchasingourdreams,themostunexpectedalliescanbecomethegreatestsourcesofstrengthandinspiration.（在追逐夢想的旅程中，最意想不到的盟友可能成為最大的力量和靈感源泉。）Perseveranceisnotasolitarypursuit;itoftenthrivesinthecompanyofthosewhobelieveinus,eveniftheyhavefourlegs.（堅持不懈不是一種孤獨的追求；它常常在那些相信我們的人的陪伴下茁壯成長，即使他們有四條腿。）Sometimes,thegreatestmotivationcomesfromthepurestformofloveandloyalty,asshownbyourfurryfriends.（有時候，最大的動力來自于我們毛茸茸的朋友所展現(xiàn)出的最純粹的愛和忠誠。）Thepathtoachievingourgoalsmaybefilledwithdoubtsandsetbacks,butwiththerightcompanionbyourside,everystepbecomesatestamenttothepowerofdeterminationandfriendship.（實現(xiàn)目標的道路可能充滿疑慮和挫折，但有了合適的同伴在身邊，每一步都成為決心和友誼力量的見證。）寫作示范：第一篇WhathappenedlaterprovedthatJennywaswrong.Onaparticularlyfrigidwintermorning,whenthewindhowledoutsideandthethermometershowedatemperaturewellbelowfreezing,Jennywascurledupunderthewarmblankets,onthevergeofskippingherrun.Butthen,Brucieleapedontothebed,hisbodyradiatingwarmthanddetermination.HenudgedJennywithhisnoseandbarkedsoftly,asiftosay,"Comeon,it'stimetogo!"Jenny,stillhalf-asleep,wasinitiallyannoyedbutthensawtheeagernessinBrucie'seyes.Shegotup,bundledupinlayers,andtogethertheyventuredoutintothecold.Brucieboundedahead,hispawscrunchingonthesnow,andJennyfollowed,herdoubtsmeltingawaywitheachstep.Fromthatdayon,Brucie'sunwaveringcommitmentneverwavered,nomatterhowharshtheweather.Onespringmorning,Jennystartedherfirstmarathon,accompaniedbyBrucie.Theairwascrispandfilledwiththescentofbloomingflowers.Thesunpeekedthroughtheclouds,castingagoldensheenontheexcitedcrowdthatlinedthestreets.Jenny'sheartpoundedwithamixtureofnervousnessandanticipation.Astheracebegan,Brucieranbesideher,hisgaitsteadyandhisspirithigh.Alongtheway,thereweremomentswhenJenny'slegsfeltlikelead,andherbreathcameinshortgasps.ButeverytimesheglancedatBrucie,hisunwaveringfocusandloyaltygaveherthestrengthtopushforward.Thecheersofthespectatorsgrewlouderastheynearedthefinishline.WithBruciebyherside,Jennysummonedeveryounceofenergyandsprintedacrossthefinishline.Shecollapsedtotheground,exhaustedbutelated,huggingBrucietightly.Inthatmoment,sheknewthatthisjourneywouldnothavebeenpossiblewithoutherfurryfriend,whohadtaughtherthetruemeaningofperseveranceandcompanionship.第二篇WhathappenedlaterprovedthatJennywaswrong.Asthewinterchillsetindeeper,Jennywasdreadinghermorningruns.Onemorning,shewasabouttocallitquitswhensheheardBruciescratchingatthedoor.Whensheopenedit,hehadhisleashinhismouth,histailwaggingfuriously.Reluctantly,Jennygotdressedandsteppedoutside.Thecoldwindhitherface,butBrucieseemedunfazed.Heledtheway,hissmallbodyplowingthroughthesnow.Jennywatchedinamazementasheranahead,thencircledbacktocheckonher.Hisdeterminationwasinfectious,andsoonJennywasrunningwithrenewedvigor.Bruciehadbecomeheranchor,hersourceofmotivation,provingthathisloyaltywasunshakable.Onespringmorning,Jennystartedherfirstmarathon,accompaniedbyBrucie.Theskywasabrilliantblue,andthecitywasalivewithexcitement.JennyfeltarushofadrenalineasshelinedupatthestartinglinewithBruciebyherside.Thegunwentoff,andtheywereoff.Bruciekeptasteadypace,hiseyesfixedonthepathahead.Jennyfocusedonhisrhythm,matchingherstepstohis.Asthemilespassed,thefatiguesetin,butBrucie'spresencewasaconstantreminderofhowfartheyhadcome.Whentheyfinallycrossedthefinishline,thecrowderuptedincheers.JennykneltdownandhuggedBrucie,tearsofjoystreamingdownherface.Thiswasnotjusthervictory;itwasatestamenttothebondbetwee