2024屆高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫高分表達(dá)講義

2024屆高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫高分表達(dá)講義

高考復(fù)習(xí)——讀后續(xù)寫高分表達(dá)（四大類情緒）

一、常見的四大類情緒

詞塊一（開心）：happiness/joy/delight/exhilaration興奮，

歡欣/thri11/excitement

delighted/cheerful

/overjoyed/exhilarated/thrilied/excited

Facialexpressions：?eyestwinkle/sparkle/glitter/brim

with（充滿，洋溢）tears

②one'slaughbroaden/stretchfromeartoear

（§）abright/brilliant/radiant（燦爛的）smilespreadacross

one'sface.

④one'sfacebeam笑容滿面，眉開眼笑/flush發(fā)紅with

excitement

⑤giggle/grin/burstintolaughter/breakintojoyful

smiles

Bodylanguages：①spring/leaptoone'sfeet

②Handsclap/rubone'shandsinexcitement

③jump/dancewithjoy

詞塊二（發(fā)怒）：

anger/rage/outrage/annoyance/irritation/furlous

burn/explodewithanger怒火中燒

blowupatsb沖某人發(fā)火flyintoafury/flyoffthe

handle大發(fā)雷霆

Facialexpressions：①glareat②eyesshinewith

anger.閃爍著憤怒的光芒

Bodylanguages：①gnash[n]（氣得咬牙切齒）theteeth

咬牙切齒

②growl咆哮

③sbwastongued-tiedwithanger氣的張口結(jié)舌

④clasp/clenchthefists緊握雙拳

⑤tap/stampone'sfeet跺腳stormoutof/into/off氣沖沖

地

詞塊三（害怕）：fright/fear/panic/terror/horror

frightened/panicked/scared/horrified/terrified/fearful/alar

med

Facialexpressions：①turnpale/wearabigfrown眉頭

緊縮

②witheyesopenwide

Bodylanguages：①sbfrozewithterror,tooscaredtoir.ove

aninch

②hands/paln】sweat

@shake/quiver/tremb1ewithfear,unabletoutterft]v.

說；出聲asingleword

④sitonpinsandneedles如坐針氈

⑤screamatthetopofone,slungs聲嘶力竭地尖叫

?makeone,shairstandonend毛骨悚然

⑦one'sthroattightenedandkneesfeltweak.嗓子發(fā)緊，

膝蓋發(fā)軟

詞塊四（悲傷）sadness/sorrow/grief

sad/sorrowful/grieved/heart-broken

Facialexpressions：?Tearsroll/stream/rundownone's

cheeks.

②Greatsorrowcloudedone,seyes.滿眼憂傷.

③tearsblurredone'seyes（淚水模糊了雙眼）

Bodylanguages：?hide/buryone'sfaceinhands

②withone'sheaddrooping聾拉著腦袋

③handsandshouldersshakewithoutaword

公式一：表情感名詞+waswrittenalloverone'sface,with

復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)/獨立主格

1.Guilt(一臉愧疚),(with)hisfaceburiedinhis

hands.

2.Annoyancewaswrittenalloverhisface,withhisfists

(clench)andhisface____(turn)red.

3.Happinesswaswrittenalloverhisface,withhislaugh

(broaden)fromeartoear.

公式二：情感名詞1gavewayto/wassweptawayby情感名

詞2

4.Herpreviouscalmness(變?yōu)?…/為....

所取代)terror/horror.

Mypreviousfrightwassweptawaybydelight,andIjumped

withjoy,withmyeyes(sparkle).

公式三:情感名詞+welledupinside/in/withinsb,with復(fù)

合結(jié)構(gòu)/獨立主格

Thescenejustmademyhairstandonend,_(恐懼勇

上心頭)

Fright(well)upinme,Itiptoedtowardthewindowwith

afrownonmyface.

Angerwelledupwithinhim,withhercheeksred,eyeswide

openandherclenchedfists(raise)

公式四：Fear/Sadness/Embarrassment/Surpriserootedsbto

thespot,with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)/獨立主格結(jié)構(gòu)

5.Sadnessrootedhertothespot,tears(roll)down

hercheeksandherlegs(shake)withoutaword.

6.Fearrootedhertothespot,herthroat(tighten)

andheart(jump)wildly.

公式五：whendoingsth,sbdid.....with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)

7.Whenhearingthegoodnews,heleapttohisfeetand

jumpedwithjoy,withabrilliantsmile(spread)

acrosshisface.

8.When(see)thehugedog,hewastoofrightenedto

dashforward,withhisface（turn）paleandhiseyesfull

ofhorror.

二、情緒描寫萬能片段

1、復(fù)雜心情（震驚/害怕/迷茫）

Foramoment,withinmyheartwasacomplexfeeling,which

mademerootedtothespot.Ishouldnothavebehavedinthat

way.

有一瞬間，我心中有一種復(fù)雜的感覺，令我定在原地。我不應(yīng)該

那樣做。

真題運用：

2016年浙江卷：Withinherheartwasacomplexfeeling.Jane

remainedrootedtothespot,exhaustedandunabletomove.

2021年八省聯(lián)考：Withinmyheartwasenormoussurpriseand

gratitude,Istoodrootedtothespot,staringthegirlwhowas

abouttotakeoutherlunch.

2021年全國1卷：Withinhisheartwasacomplexfeeling.

Dadremainedrootedtothespotindisbelief,watchingthe

terriblekitchenandimaginingwhattheyhaddone.

萬能片段2：不知所措（茫然/緊張/害怕）

Heartbeatingbeatingwildly,shehadnoideawhattodo.

Asafewsecondspassed,anideacameintohermind.心在狂

跳，她不知該怎么辦。隨著數(shù)秒后，她的腦海里出現(xiàn)了一個想法。

Heartbeatingwildlylikeabeast,shewasatalosswhat

todonext.Acoupleofsecondsslippingaway,anideastruck

herlikelightning.（升級版）

真題運用：

Cheeksburningwithembarrassment,shewonderedwhattodo.

Allofasudden,hermindgoingblank,shehadnoideawhat

todo.

Terrifiedbywhathadhappened,hewasrootedtothespot,

notknowingwhattodonext.

萬能片段3：感激（感激+感悟）

Chokedwithoverwhelminggratitude,Macbowedlowtothem

repeatedly,withoutwhosehelphecouldnothavegonethrough

it.Mac被巨大的感激之情所哽咽，一再向他們深深鞠躬，沒有他

們的幫助，他就無法度過難關(guān)。

ItwasthisuniqueexperiencethatremindedMacofthevalue

ofstrangers'help,inspiringhimtospreadthiskindnessto

others.正是這個獨特的經(jīng)歷讓Mac想到了陌生人幫助的價值，激

勵他將這種善意傳播給他人。

真題運用：［2022全國1卷theforestrun］：構(gòu)思結(jié)尾David

完成跑步，明白勇氣的重要

Chokedwithoverwhelmingexcitement,Davidhuggedmeand

hiscoachtightly,withoutwhoseguidancehecouldnothave

finishedtherun,asheinsisted.

David因巨大的興奮而哽咽，他緊緊地抱著我和他的教練，沒有

（我們的）指導(dǎo)，他就無法完成跑步，他堅持這樣說。

ItwasthisuniqueexperiencethathadremindedDavieof

thevalueofcourageandfaith,inspiringhimtoaddress

challengesbravelyeversince.

正是這次獨特的經(jīng)歷讓大衛(wèi)想到了勇氣和信心的價值，激勵他從

此勇敢地應(yīng)對挑戰(zhàn)C

萬能片段4：激動（開心/緊張/害怕）情緒+肢體+語言

Overwhelmedbywildjoy,Irosetomyfeetandpunchedmy

fistintheair,shoutingoutloud,MImadeit!".被狂野的

喜悅所淹沒，我站越來，在空中揮拳，大喊道："我做到了"

練習(xí)：1.驚慌失措，我跳了起來，盡可能大聲地尖：”救命！

Overcomebyasenseofpanic,Irosetomyfeet,screair.ing

asloudasIcouldHelp!".

2.被一陣緊張所支配，我跳了起來，問自己說：”我該怎么辦？;

Dominatedbyaflushofnervousness,Ijumpedtomyfeet,

askingmyself,“WhatshouldIdo

真題運用[2021全國1卷Mother*sDaySurprise]

“Itwasasuccess!Wemadeit!'1Jeffshoutedasshe

punchedherfistintheair.

”成功了！我們做到了！Jeff大喊大叫，她在空中揮舞著拳頭。

Asenseofwarmthfilledtheirheartsinthatitwastruly

amemorableexperienceforthem.Believeitornot,theypulled

offadelightfulsurprise.

一種溫暖的感覺充滿了她們的心，因為這對她們來說真的是一次

難忘的經(jīng)歷。不管怎樣，她們勝利完成了一個愉悅的驚喜。

萬能片段5：緊張+成功

Heartracingandpalmssweating,hedraggedhistrembling

legsforward.Takingadeepbreath,hemurmuredtohimself

firmly,MEverythingwillbegreat.I'11makeit!”

心跳加速，手心出汗，他拖著顫抖的雙腿向前走。

深吸一口氣，他堅定地喃喃自語道，”一切都會很好的。我能做

到！二

（成功后）Hearingtheinspiringnews,heleapedintothe

airwithjoy.

聽到這個鼓舞人心的消息，他高興地跳到了空中。

真題運用：[2022全國1卷Theforestrun]

Heartracingandpalmssweating,Daviddraggedhis

tremblinglegsbacktothecourse.Hecouldfeelnothingbut

hishandsshaking,heartpoundingandtaroattightening.Taking

adeepbreath,hemurmuredtohimselffirmly,nEverythingwill

begreat.I'11makeit!.

心跳加速，手心出汗，David拖著顫抖的雙腿走回跑道。他什

么也感覺不到，只有手在顫抖，心臟砰砰直跳，喉嚨緊繃。（獨立主

格）深吸了一口氣，他堅定地喃喃自語，”一切都會很好的。我能做

到！二

Havingfinishedtherun,Davidleapedintotheairwith

joy.

終于完成了比賽，Dav