單元主題寫(xiě)作

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寫(xiě)作能力拓展導(dǎo)練

一、單元主題詞匯·高頻詞匯梳理

二、教材佳句仿寫(xiě)·高分句式訓(xùn)練

1.I

got

such

a

strong

feeling

of

satisfaction

when

I

made

the

milk

shake

for

my

mom.

2.The

computer

makes

it

easier

for

us

to

study

English.

三、教材文段整合·篇章能力提升

1.how

to

care

for

animals

2.a

strong

sense

of

satisfaction

3.cheer

him

up

4.it's

hard

for

him

to

5.his

life

changed

a

lot

四、以讀促寫(xiě)·主題寫(xiě)作典例剖析

Step

1

謀篇布局指導(dǎo)

Step

2

高階表達(dá)應(yīng)用

1.When

we

help

our

classmates

with

their

study

and

other

things,

we

can

develop

our

friendship.

2.If

we

give

a

helping

hand

to

old

people,

we

can

understand

the

meaning

of

happiness.

Step

3

佳作展示評(píng)析

五、學(xué)以致用·主題寫(xiě)作實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練

參加志愿者服務(wù)活動(dòng)可以幫助青少年學(xué)習(xí)新技能，增強(qiáng)溝通能力和社會(huì)責(zé)任感。暑假將至，

請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面表格中的內(nèi)容提示，以"My

Volunteer

Work

Plan"為題寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，介紹你選擇的活動(dòng)項(xiàng)目及活動(dòng)計(jì)劃，并談?wù)剠⒓又驹刚叻?wù)活動(dòng)的意義。Volunteer

Work◎

Help

in

the

city

library◎

Clean

up

the

city

parks◎

Hold

a

charity

bazaar（義賣）◎

Do

volunteer

work

in

a

hospital◎

Visit

the

old

people's

home◎

...要求:

1.可選擇表格中的1—2個(gè)活動(dòng)項(xiàng)目，也可自擬活動(dòng)項(xiàng)目；

2.語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，詞數(shù)80—100。My

Volunteer

Work

Plan

The

summer

holiday

is

coming.

I

<uw>am

going

to</uw>

do

some

volunteer

work.

I

will

help

to

<uw>clean

up</uw>

the

city

parks.

Of

course,

I

will

<uw>ask</uw>

more

people

<uw>to</uw>

join

me.

I

will

<uw>call

on</uw>

my

friends

to

come.

We

will

<uw>pick

up</uw>

the

litter,

such

as

the

plastic

bags

and

bottles.

I

hope

our

city

will

be

more

beautiful.

<uw>Besides</uw>,

I

am

going

to

visit

sick

kids

in

hospital.

I

love

children

and

enjoy

<uw>getting

along

with</uw>

them.

I

will

sing

for

the

kids

at

the

City

Hospital

to

<uw>cheer</uw>

them

<uw>up</uw>.

I

hope

they

can

be

better

soon.

<uw>Not

only</uw>

do

I

feel

good

about

helping

other

people,

I

<uw>also</uw>

get

to

spend

time

doing

what

I

love

to

do.

<uw>All

in

all</uw>,

I

will

<uw>enjoy

myself</uw>

during

the

summer

holiday.

單元主題寫(xiě)作過(guò)寫(xiě)作

寫(xiě)作能力拓展導(dǎo)練Unit2I'llhelptocleanupthecityparks.一、單元主題詞匯·高頻詞匯梳理二、教材佳句仿寫(xiě)·高分句式訓(xùn)練1.教材原句：I

get

such

a

strong

feeling

of

satisfaction

when

I

see

the

animals

get

better

and

the

look

of

joy

on

their

owners'

faces.仿寫(xiě)：當(dāng)我為我媽媽做奶昔時(shí)，我得到了極大的滿足感。____________________________________________________________________________________I

got

such

a

strong

feeling

of

satisfaction

when

I

made

the

milk

shake

for

my

mom.2.教材原句：You

helped

to

make

it

possible

for

me

to

have

Lucky.仿寫(xiě)：對(duì)我們來(lái)說(shuō)，電腦使學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)變得更容易。____________________________________________________The

computer

makes

it

easier

for

us

to

study

English.三、教材文段整合·篇章能力提升

根據(jù)教材內(nèi)容，填入適當(dāng)?shù)膬?nèi)容補(bǔ)全短文

Many

people

like

to

offer

to

do

something

without

expecting

any

reward.

We

often

call

them

volunteers.

As

volunteers

help

others,

they

are

improving

themselves

at

the

same

time.

Mario

is

very

interested

in

volunteer

work.

He

volunteers

at

an

animal

hospital

and

learns

1________________________

there.

When

he

sees

the

animals

get

better,

he

has

2____________________________.

Meanwhile,

what

he

has

learned

can

3______________

and

help

him

realize

his

dream

of

being

an

animal

doctor.how

to

care

for

animalsa

strong

sense

of

satisfactioncheer

him

up

A

group

called

Animal

Helpers

also

offers

to

help

disabled

people.

Ben

Smith

can't

use

his

arms

or

legs

well,

so

4____________________

open

the

door

and

answer

the

phone.

After

he

got

a

special

trained

dog

named

Lucky

from

Animal

Helpers,

5_____________________.

He

thought

he

was

very

lucky

to

have

Lucky

and

Lucky

made

a

big

difference

to

his

life.it's

hard

for

him

tohis

life

changed

a

lot四、以讀促寫(xiě)·主題寫(xiě)作典例剖析

假如你是李智，你校英語(yǔ)俱樂(lè)部將舉行一場(chǎng)以"Helping

Each

Other

Makes

the

World

Wonderful（主題：人與社會(huì)）"為主題的英語(yǔ)演講比賽。請(qǐng)你（人稱：第一人稱）用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇演講稿（語(yǔ)篇類型：應(yīng)用文

）參加比賽。內(nèi)容提示：幫助同學(xué)——友誼;幫助老人——幸福;幫助病人——快樂(lè)……（時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)）要求：80詞左右，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Helping

Each

Other

Makes

the

World

Wonderful

Hello,

everyone！

I'm

Li

Zhi.

It's

nice

to

talk

about

helping

each

other

here.______

Thank

you

for

your

attention.Step

1

謀篇布局指導(dǎo)開(kāi)頭：引出話題①It's

nice

to

talk

about...②I'd

like

to

talk

about...③In

our

life

we

often

help

others

and

also

get

help

from

others.正文：幫助他人①When

we

help

...

we

can

...②If

we

give

a

helping

hand

to

...

we

can

...③We

should

try

our

best

to

help

those

in

need.結(jié)尾：發(fā)表感慨①I

think

everyone

in

trouble

should

be...②We

can

get

a

lot

when

we

help...③Giving

is

much

better

than

receiving.續(xù)表Step

2

高階表達(dá)應(yīng)用1.We

help

our

classmates

with

their

study

and

other

things

and

we

can

develop

our

friendship.（用when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句升格）__________________________________________________________________________________________2.If

we

help

old

people,

we

can

understand

the

meaning

of

happiness.（用短語(yǔ)give

a

helping

hand升格）______________________________________________________________________________________When

we

help

our

classmates

with

their

study

and

other

things,

we

can

develop

our

friendship.If

we

give

a

helping

hand

to

old

people,

we

can

understand

the

meaning

of

happiness.Step

3

佳作展示評(píng)析Helping

Each

Other

Makes

the

World

Wonderful

Hello,

everyone!

I'm

Li

Zhi.

It's

nice

to

talk

about

helping

each

other

here.

In

our

life

we

often

help

others

and

also

get

help

from

others.

When

we

help

our

classmates

with

their

study

and

other

things,

we

can

develop

our

friendship.

①處使用時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，豐富了文章的句式結(jié)構(gòu)。②處意為"幫助"，為高級(jí)短語(yǔ)，在此處的使用可以明顯提升文章的檔次。③處定語(yǔ)從句的使用可以避免過(guò)多的簡(jiǎn)單句的羅列，更好地體現(xiàn)作者的語(yǔ)言表達(dá)能力。

If

we

give

a

helping

hand

to

old

people,

we

can

understand

the

meaning

of

happiness.

If

we

help

people

who

are

ill

,

we

can

get

the

feeling

of

pleasure.

I

think

everyone

in

trouble

should

be

helped

and

we

can

get

a

lot

when

we

help

people

around

us.

As

the

saying

goes,

"Giving

is

much

better

than

receiving."

Thank

you

for

your

attention.④處為諺語(yǔ)，在結(jié)尾處起到呼應(yīng)主題的作用。諺語(yǔ)的使用還為文章增加了亮點(diǎn)。

本篇范文要點(diǎn)齊全、句式豐富、語(yǔ)言高級(jí)。尤其是結(jié)尾處諺語(yǔ)的使用，不但起到了回扣和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題的作用，而且增加了文章的可讀性。續(xù)表五、學(xué)以致用·主題寫(xiě)作實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練

參加志愿者服務(wù)活動(dòng)可以幫助青少年學(xué)習(xí)新技能，增強(qiáng)溝通能力和社會(huì)責(zé)任感。暑假將至，

請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面表格中的內(nèi)容提示，以"My

Volunteer

Work

Plan"為題寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，介紹你選擇的活動(dòng)項(xiàng)目及活動(dòng)計(jì)劃，并談?wù)剠⒓又驹刚叻?wù)活動(dòng)的意義。Volunteer

Work◎

Help

in

the

city

library◎

Clean

up

the

city

parks◎

Hold

a

charity

bazaar（義賣）◎

Do

volunteer

work

in

a

hospital◎

Visit

the

old

people's

home◎

...要求:

1.可選擇表格中的1—2個(gè)活動(dòng)項(xiàng)目，也可自擬活動(dòng)項(xiàng)目；

2.語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，詞數(shù)80—100。My

Volunteer

Work

Plan________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

The

summer

holiday

is

coming.

I

am

going

to

do

some

volunteer

work.

I

will

help

to

clean

up

the

city

parks.

Of

course,

I

will

ask

more