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第6講續(xù)寫(xiě)熱門話題生活趣事閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。(2021·浙江1月卷改編)Pumpkin(南瓜)carvingatHalloweenisafamilytradition.WevisitalocalfarmeveryOctober.Inthepumpkinfield,Icompetewithmythreebrothersandsistertoseekoutthebiggestpumpkin.Mydadhasarulethatwehavetocarryourpumpkinsbackhome,andastheeldestchildIhaveanadvantage—Icarriedan85-pounderbacklastyear.Thisyear,itwashardtotellwhethermyprizeortheonechosenbymy14-year-oldbrother,Jason,wasthewinner.Unfortunatelyweforgottoweighthembeforetakingouttheirinsides,butIwasdeterminedtoprovemypoint.Allofuswerehardatworkatthekitchentable,withmymomfilmingtheannualevent.I'munsurenowwhyIthoughtforcingmyheadinsidethepumpkinwouldsettlethematter,butitseemedtomakeperfectsenseatthetime.Withthepumpkinrestingonthetable,holeuppermost,Ibentoverandpressedmyheadagainsttheopening.AtfirstIgotjammedjustabovemyeyesandthen,asIwentonwithmytask,unwillingtoquit,mynosebrieflypreventedentry.FinallyImanagedtoputmywholeheadintoit,likeacork(軟木塞)forcedintoabottle.Iwasabletostraightenupwiththehugepumpkinrestingonmyshoulders.Myexcitementwasshort-lived.Thepumpkinwasheavy.“I'mgoingtosetitdown,now,”Isaid,andwithJasonhelpingtosupportitsweight,Ibentbackoverthetabletogiveitsomewheretorest.ItwasonlywhenItriedtoremovemyheadthatIrealizedgettingoutwasgoingtobelessstraightforwardthangettingin.WhenIpulledhard,mynosegotintheway.IgotintoapanicasIpressedfirmlyagainstthetableandmovedmyheadaroundtryingtofindtherightangle,butitwasnouse.“Ican'tgetitout!”Ishouted,myvoicesoundingunnaturallyloudintheenclosedspace.注意:1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式作答。Iwasstuckforfiveorsixminutesthoughitfeltmuchlonger.ThevideowaspostedthedaybeforeHalloween.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo):Ⅰ.梳理原文細(xì)節(jié),理清篇章結(jié)構(gòu)。Ⅱ.依據(jù)首句提示,構(gòu)思后續(xù)情節(jié)。第一段:由續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段及續(xù)寫(xiě)第二段的提示語(yǔ)可知,該段應(yīng)該描述我的頭被拔出來(lái)的整個(gè)過(guò)程。第二段:由續(xù)寫(xiě)第二段的提示語(yǔ)可知,該段應(yīng)該描述這段視頻被上傳到網(wǎng)上走紅,我也成了網(wǎng)絡(luò)紅人。范文佳作:Iwasstuckforfiveorsixminutesthoughitfeltmuchlonger.Myheadspundizzilyasiftheworldswirled.Ifeltastaboffear.Jasonsuggestedusingaknifetocutthepumpkinopen.Iwavedmyhandswildlyinprotestattheplan.“Thenyouneedtofindawayofpullingyourselfout,”Mydadsaidinacalm,coolvoice.Hisvoicesettledmynerves.Iwasconsciousthatmynosewasactingasanimpedimenttomyescape.Withstretchingoutmyfaceandbitingintothepumpkin,Imanagedtopullmyheadout.ArippleofexcitementranthroughusbutthefirstthingIsawwasthecamera.ThevideowaspostedthedaybeforeHalloween.Mybigrednoseandmysorechinbecamenetizens'favoritetopic.Bytheendofthatday,ithadover1,000views.PeopleaskedMomtoputitonYouTube,andweevengotcallsfromTVbreakfastshows.Meanwhile,thevideostartedrackinguphundredsofthousandsofviews.WhenIwentout,IwasrecognizedbypeopleIhadnevermet.Thepumpkinalsobecameaminorcelebrity.Passers-byandtrick-or-treaterswouldknockandaskforselfieswithit.WhatanunforgettableHalloween!話題佳句:1.Amusedbyhissillymistake,welaughedourheadoff.我們被他愚蠢的錯(cuò)誤逗樂(lè)了,狂笑不已。2.Withcrowdsoftheaudiencearound,soembarrassedwasshethatshestoodthereawkwardly,feelingthebloodrushtoherface.周圍有大批觀眾,她感到很難堪,尷尬地站在那里,感覺(jué)血液涌上了自己的臉。3.Thecookiescooledonthetable,fillingthekitchenwiththeirsweetsmell,makinghermouthwater.小甜餅在桌上變涼了,廚房里充滿了甜甜的味道,饞得她直流口水。4.Seeingnootherpeoplenoticeus,Iroseandslippedoutofthehousesilently.見(jiàn)沒(méi)有其他人注意到我們,我便站起來(lái),悄悄地溜出了房子。5.Heslidtothewindowofthehut,raisedhimselfontiptoe,andstoleaglance.他溜到小屋的窗口,踮起腳尖,偷偷看了一眼。6.Ispenttherestofthedayinastateofexcitement,theextremelygoodmoodIhadeverexperienced.那天剩下的時(shí)間我都在興奮中度過(guò),這是我經(jīng)歷過(guò)的最愉快的心情。7.Islowlypulledmypictureoutofmydrawerandhelditup.Theentireclasssuddenlyexplodedwithlaughter!我把我的畫(huà)慢慢地從抽屜里拿出來(lái),舉了起來(lái),全班同學(xué)突然哄堂大笑!8.Whenrecognizingwhothevisitorwas,Johnopenedhismouthwithhiseyeswidening.當(dāng)認(rèn)出來(lái)訪者是誰(shuí)時(shí),約翰張大了嘴巴,眼睛睜得大大的。9.Shedroppedhereyesandstaredatherfeet,hopingnoonewouldnoticehowembarrassedshewas.她垂下眼睛,盯著自己的腳,希望沒(méi)有人會(huì)注意到她有多尷尬。10.Shepulledoffhershoesanddashedintoherbedroom,barefootandfast.她脫下鞋子,光著腳飛快地跑到自己臥室中。11.Theylaughedloudly,exceptforme,whocoulddono
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