中考英語(yǔ)人教版總復(fù)習(xí)主題寫(xiě)作突破課件主題四做事2

主題四做事主題透析教材鏈接七下Unit2Whattimedoyougotoschool?七下Unit4Don’teatinclass.八上Unit1Wheredidyougoonvacation?八下Unit3Couldyoupleasecleanyourroom?九全Unit10You’resupposedtoshakehands.頭腦風(fēng)暴素材積累一、主題詞塊1.

承諾做某事

2.

和某人分享某事

3.

熬夜

4.

最后但同樣重要的一點(diǎn)

promisetodosth.sharesth.withsb.stayuplatelastbutnotleast二、高分句型1.Afterthat,Iusuallyexercise

.

然后我通常在大約十點(diǎn)二十分鍛煉。2.InChina,it’s

yourchopsticks

.anemptybowl.

在中國(guó),用筷子打空碗是不禮貌的。atabouttentwentyimpolitetousetohit3.

thesummervacationcomingsoon,Ifeel

.

myparents

mysisterandmetoBeijing.

暑假馬上就要到了,我感到非常興奮,我的父母答應(yīng)帶我和妹妹去北京。(so…that引導(dǎo)結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句)4.Besides,

istheGreatWall,whichis

.

此外,我們必須去的另一個(gè)地方是長(zhǎng)城,它是世界上最長(zhǎng)的城墻。(which引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句)Withsoexcitedthathavepromisedtotakeanotherplacewemustgothelongestwallintheworld典例剖析(2024眉山)假定你是李華,打算在即將到來(lái)的暑假中前往北京旅行,請(qǐng)根據(jù)下圖提示給你的英國(guó)筆友戴維(David)寫(xiě)一封郵件,分享你的旅行計(jì)劃。注意:(1)詞數(shù)100左右,開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);(2)可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;(3)文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、學(xué)校等信息。DearDavid,

Yours,LiHua第一步“五定”審題體裁應(yīng)用文人稱(chēng)第一人稱(chēng)為主時(shí)態(tài)一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)、一般將來(lái)時(shí)要點(diǎn)旅行地點(diǎn);活動(dòng)內(nèi)容;表達(dá)愿望思路點(diǎn)明主題:暑假計(jì)劃去北京旅行介紹出發(fā)時(shí)間、旅行方式、和誰(shuí)一起去、計(jì)劃待幾天、在北京做什么活動(dòng)及原因;最后表達(dá)自己的愿望等第二步“三段”謀篇第三步潤(rùn)色成文【基礎(chǔ)版】DearDavid,How’sitgoing?Thesummervacationiscomingsoon.Ifeelveryexcited,andmyparentshavepromisedtotakemysisterandmetoBeijing.NowI’llsharemytravelplanwithyou.We’llgotherebyplaneinJulyandstayfor5days.We’regoingtovisitthePalaceMuseumtoknowaboutstoriesofthepast.Besides,anotherplaceistheGreatWall,whichisthelongestwallintheworld.We’regoingtotakeawalkthereandadmirehowgreatweChineseare!Ibelievewe’llenjoyourselvesinBeijing.Whataboutyoursummerplan?Yours,LiHua【升格版】DearDavid,How’sitgoing?Withthesummervacationcomingsoon,IfeelsoexcitedthatmyparentshavepromisedtotakemysisterandmetoBeijing.①NowI’dliketosharemytravelplanwithyou.We’llgotherebyplaneinJulyandstayfor5days.Duringthatperiod②,we’regoingtovisitthePalaceMuseumtoknowaboutstoriesofthepast.升格說(shuō)明①介詞短語(yǔ)Withthesummervacationcomingsoon簡(jiǎn)化句子結(jié)構(gòu);so…that句型的使用,豐富了句式的多樣性。②Duringthatperiod的出現(xiàn),使時(shí)間更加具體化。Besides,anotherplacewemustgo③istheGreatWall,whichisthelongestwallintheworld.We’regoingtotakeawalkthereandadmirehowgreatweChineseare!Ibelievewe’llenjoyourselvesinBeijing.Whataboutyoursummerplan?Yours,LiHua③定語(yǔ)從句的使用,彰顯了作者扎實(shí)的寫(xiě)作功底,也使短文更具有可讀性。名師點(diǎn)評(píng)

本文為一封郵件,具體介紹了北京之旅的計(jì)劃。文章結(jié)構(gòu)層次分明,語(yǔ)言表達(dá)地道,邏輯清晰。首先作者引出將要進(jìn)行的北京之旅;接著陳述旅游的具體事宜;最后表達(dá)愿望,合情合理。書(shū)寫(xiě)時(shí),作者使用了一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí),還正確地使用了定語(yǔ)從句、賓語(yǔ)從句以及結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句等,不愧為一篇佳作,值得學(xué)習(xí)。學(xué)以致用1.要點(diǎn)提示類(lèi)·文明行為

(2024廣元二模)如今外出旅游備受歡迎,但在

旅游中我們也時(shí)常會(huì)看到一些不文明行為。學(xué)校校報(bào)正以

“TravelinginGoodManners”為題,向廣大學(xué)生征稿,倡導(dǎo)大家文

明旅游。請(qǐng)你結(jié)合以下寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)和自己的認(rèn)識(shí),寫(xiě)一篇80詞左右的英

文稿件。標(biāo)題和開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn):(1)列舉常見(jiàn)的不文明行為(不少于兩個(gè));(2)根據(jù)不文明行為提出個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)及建議(不少于兩點(diǎn)建議);(3)倡導(dǎo)文明旅游。參考詞匯:touristattractions(景區(qū))TravelinginGoodMannersNowadays,travelingisgettingmoreandmorepopular.

Onepossibleversion:TravelinginGoodManners

Nowadays,travelingisgettingmoreandmorepopular.However,somepeopledon’tbehavethemselvesintouristattractionswhentraveling.Forexample,someofthetravelersthrowrubbisheverywhere.It’snotonlyimpolitebutalsoharmfultotheenvironmentaroundus.Weshouldputrubbishintodustbins.Someofthetravelerslikepickingflowersinapark.Itshouldalsobestoppedbecauseflowersarebeautifulandweshouldprotectthem.Wecanputupsignsbesidetheflowerstoremindtravelersnottopickthem.Let’stakeactionrightnowandtravelingoodmanners.2.圖表提示類(lèi)·成長(zhǎng)之旅少年強(qiáng)則國(guó)強(qiáng)。近幾年,國(guó)家頒布了諸多有關(guān)

青少年健康成長(zhǎng)的文件。假如你是李華,請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面表格提示,介紹

你們學(xué)校是如何落實(shí)這些文件的,說(shuō)出自己學(xué)校出現(xiàn)的問(wèn)題,并提出合

理化的建議。除了提示中的內(nèi)容,請(qǐng)你至少再補(bǔ)充一條。HowtoGrowUpHealthilyThingsProblemsAdviceSmartphonestakethemto

schoolnotallowedat

schoolSleepingnotsleepenough

sleepfirstSportsnotdothemmoreP.E.lessonsHomework……要求:(1)語(yǔ)言通順,要點(diǎn)齊全,意思連貫,條理清楚,書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范;(2)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng);(3)100詞左右,文章標(biāo)題、開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Onepossibleversion:HowtoGrowUpHealthily

Asteenagers,wearethefutureofourhomeland.Weshouldgrowuphealthily.Buthow?Firstly,it’swrongtotakesmartphonestoschool.Somestudentsspendtoomuchtimeplayingontheirsmartphones.Soanybodyisnotallowedtodothat.Secondly,somestudentscan’tsleepwelleveryday.Sometimestheyhavetostayuplatetodohomework.Ithinkenoughsleepshouldcomefirstandhomeworkcomessecond.Next,somestudentsaren’tgoodatsports.Theydon’tlikedoingsports.Infact,sportsareveryimportantandgoodfortheirhealth.Tosolvetheproblem,therearemoreP.E.lessonsinmyschoolandwerunfortw