海南中考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)題型突破課件題型五書面表達(dá)2

題型五書面表達(dá)方法技巧點撥

書面表達(dá)試題屬于綜合運用型試題，重在考查考生運用各項語法知識來正確進(jìn)行書面表達(dá)的能力以及理解情景提示內(nèi)容的能力。書面表達(dá)題材涵蓋了學(xué)校生活、課余生活、日常生活、人際關(guān)系、教育和社會文化等各方面。命題涉及話題型、圖表型、提綱型以及開放式等。

做書面表達(dá)時，應(yīng)該注意以下寫作技巧：1.認(rèn)真審題

審清文字說明、提示或圖片、圖表、短文等提供的資料和信息以及參考詞匯、詞數(shù)要求等，確定寫作體裁、人稱及主體時態(tài)等。2.列出提綱

在草稿紙上擬訂提綱，將各個要點逐一列出，形成基本的表義單位。用英語寫出各個要點的關(guān)鍵詞或句型，用地道的英語句子將已經(jīng)整理好的要點擴展成明白、恰當(dāng)、得體的完整句子。同時，盡量使用自己熟悉的句型，注意長短句結(jié)合，避免重復(fù)和呆板，切忌出現(xiàn)中文式英語。3.連句成文適當(dāng)調(diào)整句子的先后順序，增加一些表達(dá)并列、遞進(jìn)、因果、轉(zhuǎn)折等關(guān)系的連詞，使行文連貫、通順、流暢。同時，可以恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂弥V語、格言、高級詞匯、高級句型等為文章添彩。4.檢查修改

檢查文章中的單詞拼寫、標(biāo)點符號和大小寫是否正確；人稱代詞使用是否正確，注意人稱的主格和賓格是否正確；物主代詞使用是否正確，注意形容詞性物主代詞和名詞性物主代詞是否正確；動詞的時態(tài)是否正確；語法使用是否正確；詞數(shù)是否符合要求；內(nèi)容要點是否全面，刪繁就簡，使表達(dá)更加精煉，措辭更加恰當(dāng)。5.謄入試卷

經(jīng)過檢查，確認(rèn)無誤，認(rèn)真謄寫。要特別注意書寫規(guī)范、字跡清晰、卷面整潔。專項能力檢測Passage1(2024·重慶B卷)

以英語為母語的中文初學(xué)者往往對含義豐富的中文表達(dá)產(chǎn)生困惑，請你講述一件這樣的趣事：舉例談?wù)務(wù)Z言發(fā)展中的“詞匯互借”；贊賞語言在促進(jìn)交流(增進(jìn)了解)中的積極作用或表達(dá)你的感悟。

要求：1.80—120詞，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；

2.文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱。參考信息：加油(jiayou)：addoil(comeon)紙老虎(zhilaohu)：papertiger(someoneorsomethingthatisnotaspowerfulashe/itlooks)...coffee→咖啡；sofa→沙發(fā)豆腐→tofu；功夫→kungfunotabarrierbutacarrier；payattentionto；theculturalmeanings；understandbetter...oneday；abasketballgame；Jiayou！Jiayou！lookaround；insurprise；noneedtoaddoil...longhistory；betweencommunications；takewordsfrom；beusedby...

Chineselanguageisextensiveandprofound.

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ManyChinesebeginnersareconfusedbytherichChineseexpressions.Hereisafunnything.

Therewasabasketballgameatmyschool.Duringthegame，everyoneshouted，“Jiayou！Jiayou！”Butaforeignfriendsaidinsurprise，“There’snoneedtoaddoil.Whyareyousaying‘Jiayou！’？”WhenIheardthis，Icouldn’thelplaughingandexplainedthereasontohim.

Therearemanyexamplesoftakingwordsfromeachotherbetweencommunications，suchascoffee，kungfuandsoon.Languageplaysapositiveroleinpromotingcommunication.Whenwepayattentiontotheculturalmeaningsbehindthewords，weunderstandthembetter.Infact，it’snotabarrierbutacarrier.Passage2(2024·福建改編)

假設(shè)你是李華，學(xué)校上周五開展了為期一天的實踐活動。你的筆友Henry對這次活動很感興趣。請你結(jié)合以下提示，用英語給他寫一封信，談?wù)劵顒舆^程及你的感想。100詞左右。注意事項：1.必須包含所有提示信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；2.意思清楚，表達(dá)通順，行文連貫，書寫規(guī)范；3.請勿在信中使用真實的姓名、校名和地名。DearHenry，I’mgladthatyou’reinterestedinourschoolpracticeactivitylastFriday.

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________tellyousomethingaboutit.Inthemorning，wevisitedtheHistoryMuseum.WelearnedaboutthehistoryoftheLongMarch.ThenwelistenedtothestoriesoftheRedArmy，whichgreatlytouchedus.Afterlunch，wewenttotheFolkCultureCenter，whereweenjoyedpapercuttingart.Andsomeofuslearnedhowtocutthepaperwiththeteachersinthecenter.Wealsowatchedlocaloperaperformancesthatareeducational.Letme___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________TheactivitynotonlydeepensourloveforourcountrybutalsoenrichesourunderstandingoftraditionalChineseart！Ihopewecanhavemoresuchkindsofactivities.Bestwishes！Yours，LiHua__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Passage3(2024·云南改編)你校校刊英語專欄正在開展以“Gettingclosetonature”為題的征文活動。請你用英語寫一篇短文，向?qū)谕陡?，敘述一次你接近自然的?jīng)歷及感悟(如郊游、研學(xué)、勞動實踐等)，或談?wù)劷咏匀坏暮锰帯?/p>

要求： 1.根據(jù)所給題目寫一篇短文，100詞左右； 2.語言流暢，書寫規(guī)范，卷面整潔； 3.文中不得使用真實姓名、校名。

Gettingclosetonature________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Natureisagreatgifttohumanbeings.Itisthesourceofourlifeandthemostbeautifulsceneryintheworld.Itisveryimportantforustogetclosetonature.

Firstofall，gettingclosetonaturecanhelpustorelax.Second，gettingclosetonaturecanhelpustobuildahealthylifestyle.Finally，gettingclosetonaturecanhelpustoappreciatethebeautyofnature.

Inconclusion，gettingclosetonatureisveryimportanttous.Weshouldtakesometimetoenjoythebeautyofnatureandprotecttheenvironment.Wecanliveharmoniouslywithnature.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Passage4(2024·天津)

假如你是李華，請根據(jù)以下提示，用英文給你的筆友Peter寫一封郵件，向他講述你班同學(xué)王紅所做的一件好事，并談?wù)劯惺堋?.上周四，王紅在回家途中看到一位上了年紀(jì)的盲人在街角徘徊。2.王紅與老人交流后，主動幫他過馬路。3.路上的司機都停下車耐心等候。4.王紅將老人帶到馬路對面并向他告別。5.你認(rèn)為……

參考詞匯：blindman盲人wander徘徊

要求：

1.詞數(shù)80—100，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；2.要點齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。DearPeter，Ithasbeentwoweekssinceyouwrotetome.I’mwritingtotellyouastoryaboutmyclassmateWangHong.LastThursday，________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________WangHongsawanelderlyblindmanwanderingaroundthestreetcorneronherwayhome.WangHongofferedtohelphimcrosstheroadaftercommunicatingwiththeoldman.Whentheywerecrossingtheroad，thedriversontheroadstoppedtheircarsandwaitedpatiently.WangHongtooktheoldmanacrosstheroadsafelyandsaidgoodbyetohim.IthinkWangHongisreallyaverywarm?heartedandkindgirl.Ishouldlearnfromherandtrymybesttohelpothers.Whatdoyouthinkofthestory？Waitingforyourreply！Yours，LiHua________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Passage5(2024·四川雅安)

安全對于我們每個人都很重要。為進(jìn)一步增強學(xué)生的安全意識，提高學(xué)生的自我保護能力，你校正在開展以“Howtokeepsafeinourlife”為主題的英語演講比賽，現(xiàn)面向同學(xué)們征稿。請根據(jù)以下提示內(nèi)容，寫一篇英文演講稿。

內(nèi)容要點： 1.校園安全：不在走廊奔跑，不打架…… 2.交通安全：遵守交通規(guī)則，騎自行車時不聽音樂…… 3.食品安全：吃健康食品，不吃垃圾食品…… 4.其他……(至少補充一點)

注意： 1.詞數(shù)100左右，已經(jīng)給出的部分不計入總詞數(shù)； 2.演講稿必須包括所有要點，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使其連貫、通順； 3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實人名、校名和地名等相關(guān)信息。

Dearteachersandschoolmates， Today，I’mgladtogiveaspeechabouthowtokeepsafeinourlife.

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That’sall.Thankyou.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________asweknow，safetyisthemostimportantthinginourlife.First，whenweareatschool，wecan’truninthehallwaysandmustn’tfightwithothers.Weshouldwalkslowlyontherightsideinsteadofrushingwhenwegoupanddownthestairs.Second，onourwayhome，weshouldfollowthetrafficrules.Don’tcrossthestreetwhenthetrafficlightisred.Whenwerideabike，wemustn’tlistentomusicorjustuseonehand.Next，weshouldeathealthyfoodandkeepawayfromjunkfood.Besides，don’tswimintheriver.It’sverydangerous.

Inaword，safetymustcomefirst.Pleaserememberthesesafetytips.Asfar________Passage6(2024·四川遂寧)

今年5月第五屆“中國好家風(fēng)”全國啟動儀式在北京隆重舉行。傳承優(yōu)秀家風(fēng)是中華民族家國情懷的重要體現(xiàn)，為響應(yīng)號召，你校校報英語專欄將舉辦“孝敬長輩，從我做起”的主題征文活動。請根據(jù)以下結(jié)構(gòu)圖的提示，結(jié)合自己的生活，寫一篇不少于80詞的短文，向該專欄投稿。

注意： 1.文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)； 2.文章應(yīng)包含所給要點提示，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮； 3.文章語句通順，行文連貫； 4.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名和地名。

參考詞匯：virtuen.美德accompanyv.陪伴raisev.養(yǎng)育educatev.教育Loveandrespecttheelders Asweallknow，respectingandcaringforoureldersisnotonlyatraditionalChinesevirtuebutalsoourduty.

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Growingup，I’veseenmygrandparents’selflessloveanddedicationtoourfamily.Theyhelpedtolookaftermeandraisemesothatmyparentscouldfocusontheirwork.Therefore，weshouldloveand____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________respectourelders.Toachievethis，wecanhelpourelderswiththeirchores.Spendingtimecommunicatingwithoureldersisimportantsothattheydon’tfeellonely.It’salsonecessarytotakethemtodoexercise，suchaswalkinginthepark，tokeepthemhealthy.

Inconclusion，aseveryonewillgrowoldoneday，it’snecessarytotakeactionnow.Passage7(2024·四川內(nèi)江)

假定你是李華，你的外國朋友Alan上周來你校參觀?；厝ズ?，他給你發(fā)來郵件想了解一些信息。請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容，給他回復(fù)一封郵件。DearLiHua，Ihadagoodtimeinyourschoollastweek.Itissobeautifulandclean.Iwanttoknowasstudents：1.howyoumaketheschoolgreen2.howyoukeeptheschoolclean3.howyoureusewaste4.howyousaveenergyI’mlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Yours，Alan

參考詞匯：plant種植；植物environment環(huán)境throw扔bin垃圾桶sorttherubbish垃圾分類turnoff關(guān)閉tap水龍頭

注意： 1.所寫內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括以上郵件詢問內(nèi)容，并進(jìn)行合理拓展； 2.郵件中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和校名； 3.詞數(shù)100左右。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________DearAlan，Iampleasedtohearfromyou.I’malsogladyoulikeourschool.Firstly，ourschoolplantsmanytreesandflowerseveryyear.Secondly，eachofusstudentsisacleaner.Ifweseerubbish，wewillactivelypickitupandputitinthebin.Thirdly，toavoidwaste，wereusetextbooks.Atthesametime，wewillalso____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________useolditemstomakesomereusableitems，suchasusingcansaspenholders.Finally，tosaveenergy，weturnoffthetapwhenbrushingourteeth.Whenweleavetheclassroom，weturnoffthepower.Thesearesomeofourapproaches.Doyouusuallydothese，too？Ilookforwardtoyourreply.Yours，LiHuaPassage8(2024·湖南改編)

英語課上老師要求以“Sportsmakeusbetter”為話題展開三人一組的討論。假定你是李華，將代表小組在班級里發(fā)言。請根據(jù)以下信息寫一篇英文發(fā)言稿，內(nèi)容包括： 1.介紹你們各自喜歡的運動； 2.談?wù)勥\動對你們的影響。

注意： 1.文中不得出現(xiàn)人名和校名等真實信息； 2.寫作詞數(shù)為100左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Helloeveryone， I’mLiHuafromGroupOne.

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________________________________________Below，onbehalfofourgroup，Iwillreportonourdiscussion.Cindy’sfavoritesportisvolleyball.Sheoftenplaysvolleyballwithherfriends.Byplayingvolleyball，shehasbecomemoreconfidentandhealthy.Franklovesbikeridingbest.Byridingabicycle，hisbodyhasbecomestrongerandstronger.Ilikeplayingbasketball.IfIhavetime，Ioftengototheparktoplaybasketballwithmyfriendsonweekends.Playingbasketballhastaughtmethespiritofteamworkandnevergivingup.Iwillkeepdoingsportsallthetime.Sportsmakeusbetter！

That’sall.Thankyou.Passage9(2024·北京改編)

假設(shè)你是李華，你校英語社團將接待國外學(xué)生代表團來訪，屆時舉辦一次交流活動，為此在校內(nèi)征集師生的建議。請你給英語社團公眾號留言，提供一個交流活動設(shè)計并說明理由。詞數(shù)100左右(開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù))。

提示詞：visit

performance

makeopportunity

culture

內(nèi)容提示：

·Whatdoyousuggestfortheactivity？

·Whydoyousuggestdoingthat？ I’mLiHuafromClass1，Grade9.

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_________________________________Fortheforeignstudentsvisitingourschool，Isuggestaworkshoponpapercutting.Ateachercanfirstintroduceitshistoryandartisticvalue.Andwecanshowthemsomeoftheworksofpapercutting.Thenwecanhelpthemtomakepapercuttings.ThisactivitywillgivethemanopportunitytohaveatryatatraditionalChineseartform.What’smore，whentheytakethesepapercuttingsbacktotheirhomecountryandgivethemtotheirfamiliesasgifts，morepeopletheremayenjoythebeautyofChineseculture.

Ihopemyideacanbeconsidered.Thanks.Passage10(2024·廣西改編)

假定你是李華，你的外籍朋友Sam知道你將參加你校舉辦的課本劇比賽(textbookplaycompetition)，他對此很感興趣。請你用英語寫一封郵件，告知他相關(guān)的情況。內(nèi)容包括： 1.比賽信息(時間、地點……)； 2.你的準(zhǔn)備計劃(閱讀課文、參加討論……)； 3.表達(dá)期待。

注意： 1.詞數(shù)80左右； 2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫； 3.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名及學(xué)校名稱； 4.開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯：preparev.準(zhǔn)備textn.課文discussv.討論performancen.表演DearSam，Howisitgoing？I’mgladtotellyousomethingaboutthecomingtextbookplaycompetitioninourschool.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Weplantoholditintheschoolhallat3o’clocknextnextFridayafternoon.Therewillbemanyexcitingactivitiesonthatday.Wewillreadtextsandhavediscussions.Andthenwewillhaverole?playandstudentswilltrytheirbesttoshowthemselves.Thereisnodoubtthatwewillhaveagoodtime.Inaword，Iwanttoinviteyoutotakepartinit.Wearealllookingforwardtoseeingyouonthatday！Yours，LiHua____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Passage11(2024·黑龍江牡丹江改編)

最近，我國第一只預(yù)備役柯基警犬福仔在網(wǎng)絡(luò)上爆火出圈，雖然他腿短，但卻因為其獨特的優(yōu)勢使他在眾多警犬中脫穎而出。請根據(jù)下列信息，以“福仔”的口吻向大家介紹一下自己。

要求： 1.內(nèi)容全面，語言流暢，層次清晰，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮； 2.詞數(shù)100左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)； 3.至少含有兩個復(fù)合句。Fu

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File(個人檔案)Age：8monthsoldColor：brownandwhiteWeight：about7kilosExperiences：·beapetdog；inthepast·starttraining；2monthsoldAbilities：·nose；smell...·shortlegs；notrunfast；searchsmallspacesThehappiestthing：becarriedonthetrainer’sbackHope：official(正式的)...

Hi，I’mFuZai，China’sfirstreservepolicedog._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Letmeintroducemyselftoyou.

I’meightmonthsold.I’mbrownandwhite.Iweighaboutsevenkilos.Iwasapetdoginthepast.AndIstartedtrainingwhenIwas2monthsold.Icanusemynosetosmelldangerousthings.IhaveshortlegssoIcan’trunfast.WhenIamrunning，somebodythinksthepostureofmeiscute.ButIcansearchsmallspacesbecauseofmyshortlegs.Iamoftencarriedonthetrainer’sbackwhenwegooutsidetowork.Thatismyhappiestthing.

IhopeIcanbeanofficialpolicedogsoon.I’mhappytoservethepeople.Passage12(2024·湖北武漢)

本周英語課學(xué)習(xí)圍繞主題“Tomorrow’slife”展開。請你根據(jù)以下提示問題從生活、工作、家庭等方面，寫一篇英語作文，描繪你25年后的生活?！heredoyouwanttoliveandwork？·Whatwillyourfamilybelike？·Howareyougoingtospendyourfreetime？·Somethingmoreaboutyourfuturelife.

注意： 1.文中不得透露個人真實信息； 2.詞數(shù)100左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。 Mylifewillbeverydifferentin25years._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________IthinkI’llbeareporterinBeijing.IwillliveinanapartmentwithmysisterbecauseIdon’tlikelivingalone.AndIcanplaywithherinmyapartment.Myparentswilltravelaroundtheworldandenjoythemselves.IwillmeetalotofinterestingandfamouspeopleandIwillgotoanotherplaceonbusiness.Iwillhavemanydifferentpets.MaybeIwillkeepapetturtle.IthinkIwillgoshoppingwithmysisteranddosomereadingaslongasIhavetime.AndIwillgotoLondononmyvacation.

I’llworkhardtoachievemydream.I’msuremylifein25yearswillbebetter！Passage13(2024·江蘇常州)

假如你是李平，收到了英國筆友Peter的求助信。請你根據(jù)來信，按照要求寫一封英文回信。DearLiPing，ThesedaysI’mgoingcrazy！Myteacherrequiresmetorunforhalfanhoureverymorning.ButIdon’tlikesportsatall.Ithinkit’smeaningless.Whatdoyouthinkofit？Couldyoushareyoursportsexperienceandtellmewhatyouhavelearnedfromit？Pleasegivemesomeadviceaswell.Yours，Peter

注意： 1.文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱； 2.詞數(shù)100左右，文章的開頭與結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearPeter，I’mgladtoreceiveyourletter.

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Iunderstandhowyoufeel.Iusedtodislikesports，too.ButnowIenjoyrunning.Runningisverygoodforhealth.Itnotonlykeepsushealthybutalsomakesusmoreenergetic.WhenIstartedrunning，Ifounditdifficultatfirst.ButsoonIstartedtofeelstrongerandhappier.Moreover，runningeverymorninghelpedmefocusbetterduringtheday.Myadviceistostartslowlyandsetsmallgoals.Thentrylisteningtomusicorthinkingaboutyourfavoritethingswhilerunning，whichwillmakerunningmoreenjoyable.

Giveyourselfachancetotryrunning.I’msureyou’llloveit.Yours，LiPing__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Passage14(2024·江西)

我國義務(wù)教育階段實施“雙減”政策以來，學(xué)生擁有了更多的課余時間。為了引導(dǎo)學(xué)生更好地利用課余時間，增強時間管理意識，學(xué)校英語社團以“Makingbetteruseoftime”為題向?qū)W生征文。請你根據(jù)下列寫作要點寫一篇短文投稿。

寫作要點： 1.Whendoyouhavefreetime？ 2.Whatdoyouoftendoinyourfreetime？(Give3examples.) 3.Doyouthinkyourfreetimeisbetterused？Whyorwhynot？

要求： 1.短文應(yīng)包括所有的寫作要點，條理清楚，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮； 2.短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名、地名等信息； 3.詞數(shù)80—120，短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Makingbetteruseoftime Asajuniorhighschoolstudent，Ihavegotmorefreetimeinrecentyears.

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