讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)問(wèn)題解決類(lèi)社區(qū)活動(dòng)沖突溝通解決達(dá)到1+1大于2多篇范文詳解課件-高三英語(yǔ)二輪復(fù)習(xí)

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溝通解決達(dá)到1+1>2寧波市2024學(xué)年第一學(xué)期高考與選考模擬考試原文分析讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)原文審讀多篇范文呈現(xiàn)解題思路分析讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)可積累文本1、

原文審讀：第二節(jié)（滿分25分）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。ThesunwassettingoverSpringdale,castingshadowsacrossthebusycommunitycenter.Agroupofteenagers,themembersoftheSpringdaleYouthCommittee,gatheredatatable.Theylookeddeterminedandworried.AmongthemwasEmily,asmartbutoftenunnoticedgirlwholoveshelpingothers.Forweeks,theyhadbeenorganizingafundraisingeventforthelocalhomelessshelter,astheshelterstruggledtoassisttheincreasingnumberofindividualsseekinghelp.Thebigdaywasoneweekaway,andeverythingwasset--untiltheydiscoveredanothergrouphadasimilarcharityeventonthesameday.Thiscoulddividethepeoplewhomightcomeandthedonationstheyhopedtoget.“Wecannotchangethedatenow,”saidTom,aseniormember,hisvoicefilledwithfrustration.“We’vealreadysentoutinvitations,andtheplaceisbooked.”Emilylistenedquietlytothediscussion.Sheknewchangingthedatewasn’tpossible,butsherealizedcompetingwithanotherworthycausecouldhurtbothsides.Afterthemeetingendedwithoutasolution,Emilydecidedtotakeaction.Shespentthenextdaylookingintowaystoworkwithothergroup,hopingtofindawaythatwouldhelpboththehomelessshelterandtheothercause.Thenextday,shecametothecommitteewithasuggestion.“Whatifwejoinourevents?”sheasked.“Wecouldshareresources,worktogetheronpromoting,andmostimportantly,makesurebothcausesaresupportedbythecommunity.”Thememberslookedateachother,somedoubtful,othersinterested.“That’sagreatidea,Emily,buthowwillwegetthemtoagree?”Laura,anothermember,asked.Emilyhadalreadythoughtthisthrough.“I’lltalktotheirorganizerandshowthemthebenefitsofajointevent.”Sheknewthepathaheadwouldbechallenging,butshewasdeterminedtomakeithappenforSpringdaleanditspeople.注意：1.所續(xù)寫(xiě)短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Paragraph1:ThecommitteeagreedtoletEmilyleadthiseffort._______Paragraph2:Afterdaysofnegotiation,Emilyfinallygotapositivereply._______2、

原文審讀

紅色定從/定語(yǔ)；藍(lán)色賓從；黃色狀從，從句斜體；下劃線+標(biāo)黃單詞+斜體

為需掌握積累單詞、短語(yǔ)；黑體標(biāo)黃，非謂語(yǔ)；可積累部分為

embody；

注釋(定語(yǔ)從句)ItwastheseconddayinthenewofficeandMayawasstillonherown.Exceptthemanwhohadtakenherinduction(入職),therewasnooneelsewhohadsaida“hi”totheyoungwoman.Notonlywasitanewoffice(讓步狀語(yǔ)從句),itwasalsoanewcity.Whileshehadsuccessfullyclimbedthecorporateladder(階梯)forabettersalary,shehan’treallymadeanyfriendsinthenewcityorofficeyet.Looking(非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞做伴隨動(dòng)作)

atthewholeworkplacefromherseatattheendofthehall(方式狀語(yǔ)),Mayafeltanurgetocry.Butshewasagrownwomanandthatwassimplynotanoption.Shedecidedtoeatherlunch,aslonelyasitmightfeel.Herlunchboxrevealedfriedricewithvegetablesandanoldmemoryhitherfromthedepthofhermind.

解題思路分析：1.構(gòu)思思路

-問(wèn)題梳理：明確文章中主要沖突點(diǎn)，即兩個(gè)組織在同一時(shí)間舉辦活動(dòng)可能分散資源的問(wèn)題。Emily提出的合作方案能夠解決沖突，形成一種雙贏的解決方式。-情感發(fā)展：通過(guò)Emily的行動(dòng)，展現(xiàn)她的責(zé)任心和對(duì)社區(qū)的熱情，使她從一名普通的成員成長(zhǎng)為團(tuán)隊(duì)的關(guān)鍵角色。2.提煉框架

-段落一：描述Emily與對(duì)方組織的溝通過(guò)程，她向他們展示合作的優(yōu)勢(shì)，例如資源共享、相互支持?？梢酝ㄟ^(guò)對(duì)方組織的初步猶豫，然后逐漸理解Emily的建議。-段落二：兩方達(dá)成協(xié)議，共同宣傳活動(dòng)。Emily和團(tuán)隊(duì)看到社區(qū)對(duì)活動(dòng)的支持，感到欣慰與自豪。最終，她的努力得到認(rèn)可，收獲了團(tuán)隊(duì)成員的尊重。解題思路分析：3.實(shí)施寫(xiě)作

-細(xì)節(jié)刻畫(huà)：通過(guò)描述Emily與對(duì)方的溝通過(guò)程，展示她的耐心與堅(jiān)持。可以加入她內(nèi)心的掙扎，如何用合理的理由說(shuō)服對(duì)方。-人物成長(zhǎng)：將Emily從一名“常被忽視的成員”塑造成“團(tuán)隊(duì)的主心骨”，展示她通過(guò)堅(jiān)持和溝通獲得的成長(zhǎng)。續(xù)寫(xiě)注意事項(xiàng)：4.注意內(nèi)容

-情感真實(shí)：盡量保持情感的真實(shí)和細(xì)膩，使Emily的成長(zhǎng)和努力顯得合情合理。-邏輯清晰：展示Emily提出的合作方案，并清晰地描述各方對(duì)該方案的反饋，使情節(jié)發(fā)展合理、自然。故事山模式：

銜接點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語(yǔ)；銜接點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；銜接點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第二段段首，續(xù)寫(xiě)銜接第二段段首語(yǔ)；銜接點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。原文與續(xù)寫(xiě)的銜接點(diǎn)：-castshadowsacross：意為“在…投下陰影”。常用于描述光線對(duì)環(huán)境的影響。-filledwithfrustration：表示“充滿了沮喪”。描述人物情感時(shí)常用的搭配。-takeaction：意為“采取行動(dòng)”，表示下定決心去做某事。-lookintoways：指“尋找方法”，表示通過(guò)調(diào)查或研究找到解決辦法。原文詞匯和可積累部分：1.determine-詞性：動(dòng)詞

-詞義：決定；下定決心

-近義詞：decide,resolve-反義詞：hesitate,waver-例句：

-Shedeterminedtopursueherdreamsdespitethechallenges.-Heisdeterminedtosucceedinhiscareer.原文詞匯和可積累部分：2.frustration-詞性：名詞

-詞義：沮喪；挫折

-近義詞：disappointment,discouragement-反義詞：satisfaction,contentment-例句：

-Herfrustrationgrewastheprojectencounteredmoreissues.-Hefeltasenseoffrustrationwhenhiseffortswentunrecognized.原文詞匯和可積累部分：3.resource-詞性：名詞

-詞義：資源；材料

-近義詞：supply,material-反義詞：scarcity,lack-例句：

-Theschoolhaslimitedresourcesforextracurricularactivities.-Theyusedeveryavailableresourcetomaketheeventsuccessful.原文詞匯和可積累部分：5.support-詞性：動(dòng)詞/名詞

-詞義：支持；幫助

-近義詞：aid,assist-反義詞：oppose,discourage-例句：

-Thecommunitygatheredtosupportthecharityevent.-Shehasalwayssupportedherfriendsindifficulttimes.推薦的動(dòng)作、心理、環(huán)境描寫(xiě)例句：動(dòng)作描寫(xiě)1.Shehesitatedforamoment,thenknockedsoftlyonthedoor.2.Maya’sfingerstrembledslightlyassheopenedherlunchbox.3.Tinaextendedherhandwithawarmsmile,offeringapieceofhersandwich.心理描寫(xiě)1.AwaveofregretwashedoverMayaassherecalledherwordstoTina.2.Shefeltaflickerofhopewhenshenoticedthewomanstandingbesideher.3.Lonelinessgnawedatherheart,butsheresolvedtofacethedaywithcourage.環(huán)境描寫(xiě)1.Theofficebuzzedwithfaintchatter,butMayafeltlikeanoutsiderinadistantworld.2.Theclassroomwasfilledwiththearomaofsnacksandthechatterofchildren.3.Sunlightstreamedthroughthelargewindows,castinglongshadowsonthetiledfloor.語(yǔ)法現(xiàn)象分析：1.過(guò)去完成時(shí)：原文："Whileshehadsuccessfullyclimbedthecorporateladder..."作用：表示過(guò)去某一時(shí)刻之前已完成的動(dòng)作。例句：ShehadrealizedhermistakebeforeTinaofferedherkindness.2.虛擬語(yǔ)氣：潛在使用："IfonlyshehadbeenkindertoTinabackthen."作用：表示與過(guò)去事實(shí)相反的假設(shè)。例句：IfMayahadknownhowlonelyTinafelt,shewouldhaveacteddifferently.3.狀語(yǔ)從句：原文："Whilethestudentssaidabig'hi'toherinchorus..."作用：描述時(shí)間或條件，補(bǔ)充背景信息。例句：WhenMayaglancedup,shesawthewomansmilingather.

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范文中涉及的語(yǔ)法知識(shí)點(diǎn)1.間接引語(yǔ)（ReportedSpeech）

例句：“ThecommitteeagreedtoletEmilyleadthiseffort.”

介紹：使用間接引語(yǔ)來(lái)表達(dá)他人的話語(yǔ)或決定，是敘述和復(fù)述他人觀點(diǎn)時(shí)的常用語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)，有助于更流暢地表達(dá)情節(jié)。2.非限定性從句（非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞）

例句：“toletEmilylead,”“approached...layingoutherplan,”“afterdaysofnegotiation.”

介紹：不定式和動(dòng)詞的-ing形式用于表達(dá)意圖、動(dòng)作或事件的連續(xù)性，幫助簡(jiǎn)潔表達(dá)人物的行動(dòng)或時(shí)間順序。3.一般過(guò)去時(shí)和過(guò)去進(jìn)行時(shí)的結(jié)合

例句：“Thecommitteeagreed”，“Emilywasamazedattheturnout.”

介紹：一般過(guò)去時(shí)用于主要?jiǎng)幼?，過(guò)去進(jìn)行時(shí)用于描述特定情境中的持續(xù)狀態(tài)或動(dòng)作，二者結(jié)合使敘述更流暢且富有層次。4.對(duì)比從句（although,while等引導(dǎo)）

例句：“Althoughinitiallyunsure,”“Whiletheorganizerseemedhesitant.”

介紹：這些從句結(jié)構(gòu)用于引出對(duì)比，增強(qiáng)描述中態(tài)度或狀態(tài)的變化，使敘述更加豐富和細(xì)膩。

文中較好的短語(yǔ)及替換詞匯1.layingoutherplan-釋義：詳細(xì)說(shuō)明她的計(jì)劃

-同義短語(yǔ)：explainingherstrategy,presentingherplan-替換詞：outliningherproposal,elaboratingonhervision2.amixtureofnervesandexcitement-釋義：緊張與興奮交織

-同義短語(yǔ)：ablendofanxietyandexcitement,amixofnervousnessandenthusiasm-替換詞：afeelingofboththrillandanxiety,acombinationofeagernessandunease3.wonthemover-釋義：贏得他們的支持

-同義短語(yǔ)：gainedtheirsupport,broughtthemaround-替換詞：securedtheirbacking,earnedtheirtrust4.poolingresources-釋義：合并資源

-同義短語(yǔ)：combiningresources,sharingresources-替換詞：mergingassets,consolidatingresources5.asparkofinterest-釋義：引起興趣

-同義短語(yǔ)：ahintofinterest,aglimmerofenthusiasm-替換詞：aflickerofcuriosity,atouchofintrigue6.onthedayoftheevent-釋義：活動(dòng)當(dāng)天

-同義短語(yǔ)：atthetimeoftheevent,duringtheeventday-替換詞：whentheeventtookplace,onthescheduledday7.filledthehall-釋義：大廳里擠滿了人

-同義短語(yǔ)：packedthevenue,crowdedthehall-替換詞：overflowedintothespace,gatheredinlargenumbers8.broughtinrecorddonations-釋義：創(chuàng)下捐款記錄

-同義短語(yǔ)：raisedunprecedentedfunds,achievedafundraisingrecord-替換詞：securedexceptionaldonations,setanewdonationrecord9.senseofprideandfulfillment-釋義：自豪感與成就感

-同義短語(yǔ)：feelingofaccomplishment,senseofsatisfaction-替換詞：prideandgratification,fulfillmentandjoy1.cast-詞性:動(dòng)詞-詞義:投擲，投射（光、影）-近義詞:project,throw-聯(lián)想詞:shadow,light,beam-例句:-Thesunsetcastawarmglowovertheentirevalley.-Theoldtreecastalongshadowontheground.2.gatheredat-詞性:動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)-詞義:聚集在-近義詞:assembledat,metat-聯(lián)想詞:meet,congregation,group-例句:-Theygatheredatthecommunitycentertodiscussthenewproject.-Thestudentsgatheredattheentrancebeforetheeventstarted.3.organizeafundraisingevent-詞性:動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)-詞義:組織募捐活動(dòng)-近義詞:arrangeacharityevent,hostafundraiser-聯(lián)想詞:charity,support,donation-例句:-Theyouthcommitteedecidedtoorganizeafundraisingeventfortheshelter.-Shehelpedorganizeafundraisingeventtosupportthelocalhospital.9.senseofprideandfulfillment-釋義：自豪感與成就感

-同義短語(yǔ)：feelingofaccomplishment,senseofsatisfaction-替換詞：prideandgratification,fulfillmentandjoy1.cast-詞性:動(dòng)詞-詞義:投擲，投射（光、影）-近義詞:project,throw-聯(lián)想詞:shadow,light,beam-例句:-Thesunsetcastawarmglowovertheentirevalley.-Theoldtreecastalongshadowontheground.4.struggletodo-詞性:動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)-詞義:努力去做某事，掙扎-近義詞:tryhardto,striveto-聯(lián)想詞:effort,difficulty,persevere-例句:-Hestruggledtofinishtheprojectontime.-Thestudentsstruggledtounderstandthecomplextheory.5.book-詞性:動(dòng)詞-詞義:預(yù)訂-近義詞:reserve,schedule-聯(lián)想詞:reservation,arrange,plan-例句:-Weneedtobookavenuefortheeventassoonaspossible.-Shebookedatablefordinnerattherestaurant.6.withoutasolution-詞性:短語(yǔ)-詞義:沒(méi)有解決方案-近義詞:unresolved,noanswer-聯(lián)想詞:problem,difficulty,unresolved-例句:-Theyleftthemeetingwithoutasolutiontotheproblem.-Theteamdiscussedvariousoptionsbutleftwithoutasolution.7.thinkthrough-詞性:動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)-詞義:仔細(xì)考慮-近義詞:consider,deliberate-聯(lián)想詞:plan,analyze,evaluate-例句:-It’simportanttothinkthroughallthedetailsbeforemakingadecision.-Shethoughtthroughherproposalcarefully.8.spreadtheword-詞性:動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)-詞義:傳播消息-近義詞:inform,sharenews-聯(lián)想詞:announce,notify,communicate-例句:-Theyusedsocialmediatospreadthewordabouttheevent.-Weneedtospreadthewordtoensureeveryoneknowsthenewplan.9.strengthen-詞性:動(dòng)詞-詞義:增強(qiáng)，加強(qiáng)-近義詞:reinforce,bolster-聯(lián)想詞:support,improve,enhance-例句:-Thecommunityaimedtostrengthentiesthroughcollectiveactivities.-Shestrengthenedherskillswithadditionalpractice.10.layoutherplan-詞性:動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)-詞義:陳述計(jì)劃-近義詞:presentherplan,outlineherstrategy-聯(lián)想詞:strategy,explanation,detail-例句:-Shelaidoutherplanfortheeventwithprecision.-Helaidouthisplaninfrontoftheteamforfeedback.11.poolresources-詞性:動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)-詞義:合并資源-近義詞:combineresources,shareresources-聯(lián)想詞:collaboration,unity,teamwork-例句:-Thetwogroupsdecidedtopoolresourcestomaximizetheimpact.-Bypoolingresources,theycouldachievemore.12.merge-詞性:動(dòng)詞-詞義:合并，融合-近義詞:combine,unify-聯(lián)想詞:blend,join,integrate-例句:-Thetwocompaniesmergedtoformamorecompetitiveorganization.-Theydecidedtomergetheireffortsforabetteroutcome.13.exceed-詞性:動(dòng)詞-詞義:超過(guò)-近義詞:surpass,outdo-聯(lián)想詞:more