讀后續(xù)寫-暖心的巧克力棒一次特別的籌款經(jīng)歷講義-湖北省宜昌市協(xié)作體2024-2025學年高二上學期期中考試英語試題

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。Duringmyhighschoolyears,Iwaspartoftheschoolband,agroupthatwasnotjustaboutmusicbutalsoaboutgoodfellowship(友情)andsharedexperiences.Wehadaspecialeventeachyear:themusicfestivalatawellknownthemepark.Itwasanopportunityforustoshowcaseourtalentsandenjoythepleasureofthepark.Tomakethiseventmeaningful,weorganizedafundraisingcampaign,sellingchocolatebarsthroughoutourmunity.Itwasasimpleplanbutonethatrequiredustoconnectwithourneighborsandaskfortheirsupport.Therewerealwaysheartwarmingencounters.Onesunnyafternoon,Iapproachedaneighbor’shome.Theladywhoansweredthedoorgreetedmewithasmileand,afterhearingaboutourcause,shedecidedtosupportusbypurchasingseveralbars.Aswewerenearingtheend,thelady’slittlegirl,whowasaboutthreeorfouryearsoldandhadbeenwatchingouraction,ranout.Thelittlegirlcamebackwithabillinherhand,alittledirtonit.Shewaseagertogiveittomeandsaid,“IwanttobelikeMomandsupportyou.”Theladywassurprisedandsaiditwassavedbythegirlherself.Herlovelyfaceandeagereyesmadeithardformetosayno.Itriedtoexplaintoherthathermotherwasalreadybuyingsomechocolate,butshewasdetermined.NeitherhermothernorIcoulddissuade(勸阻)herfromhernewfoundtaskofhandingmethedollarbill.IknewthatIcouldn’tputhermotherinapositiontobuymorechocolatethanshehadoriginallyintended.Icouldn’tacceptthelittlegirl’smoney.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150個左右；2.

請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。第一段：Suddenly,inspirationstruck!第二段：Thelittlegirl’seyeswidenedwithjoyasshegraspedthebillandthechocolatebar.文章大意高中時學校樂隊為參加主題公園音樂節(jié)而在社區(qū)售賣巧克力棒籌款。一次，在向一位鄰居推銷時，鄰居女士買了一些巧克力棒，她三四歲的小女兒拿著一張有點臟的鈔票跑出來也要支持，她很堅決，而“我”不想讓她母親因她而多買巧克力，也不能接受小女孩的錢。幾處伏筆及在續(xù)寫中的回應伏筆：小女孩的堅持和“我”的兩難處境?；貞豪m(xù)寫中“我”想到辦法解決這個問題。續(xù)寫要點第一段（Suddenly,inspirationstruck!）情感線：從糾結轉為想出辦法的輕松。故事線：“我”拿出一根巧克力棒送給小女孩，告訴她這是對她熱心支持的感謝，不用她的錢。續(xù)寫示例：Suddenly,inspirationstruck!Ireachedintomybagandpulledoutoneofthechocolatebars.Ihandedittothelittlegirlwithabigsmileandsaid,“Sweetie,thisoneisforyou.It'saspecialgiftforyourkindnessandeagernesstohelp.Youdon'tneedtogivemethemoney.”第二段（Thelittlegirl’seyeswidenedwithjoyasshegraspedthebillandthechocolatebar.）情感線：小女孩的快樂和母親的欣慰。故事線：小女孩高興地拿著巧克力棒和錢，母親感謝“我”的處理方式，“我”感受到溫暖。續(xù)寫示例：Thelittlegirl’seyeswidenedwithjoyasshegraspedthebillandthechocolatebar.Shehuggedmetightlyandthankedme.Hermotheralsosmiledgratefullyatme.AsIleft,Ifeltawarmglowinside.Thissimpleactofkindnesshadmadethefundraisingevenmorespecial.主旨升華句Kindnesscanturnadifficultsituationintoabeautifulmemory.（善良能將困難的局面變成美好的回憶。）Inthefaceofinnocenceandkindness,therearealwaysbettersolutions.（面對純真和善良，總有更好的解決辦法。）Asmallactoflovecanbringgreatwarmthinfundraisingactivities.（一個小小的愛心舉動能在籌款活動中帶來巨大的溫暖。）Truegenerosityliesinrespectingandhandlingthekindnessofeveryheart.（真正的慷慨在于尊重和處理每一顆心靈的善意。）Whenwecherishthekindnessofchildren,wefindtherealmeaningoffundraising.（當我們珍惜孩子的善意時，我們找到了籌款的真正意義。）寫作示范第一篇第一段：Suddenly,inspirationstruck!Icroucheddowntothelittlegirl'slevelandtoldherthathersupportwasthemostpreciousthing.Itookoutasmallnotebookfrommybagandwroteabig“ThankYou”onit.ThenIgaveittoherasaspecialtoken.Isaidthiswasarewardforherkindnessandshecouldkeephermoney.

第二段：Thelittlegirl’seyeswidenedwithjoyasshegraspedthebillandthechocolatebar.Sheshowedthenotebooktohermomwithpride.Themotherthankedmeformythoughtfulness.Ilefttheirhomewithaheartfullofwarmth,realizingthatinthisfundraisingprocess,theselittleactsofkindnesswerewhatmadeittrulyremarkable.第二篇第一段：Suddenly,inspirationstruck!Itoldthelittlegirlthatshecouldusehermoneytobuyachocolatebarfrommeanothertime.Fornow,Iwouldgiveherachocolatebaroncredit.Iwrotehernameonapieceofpaperandputitinmybag.Isaidwhenshehadmoremoneyinthefuture,shecouldetome.

第二段：Thelittlegirl’seyeswidenedwithjoyasshegraspedthebillandthechocolatebar.Shenoddedherheadvigorously.Themotherwastouchedbythescene.Iwalkedawayfeelingthatourfundraisingwasnotjustaboutgettingmoneybutalsoaboutthesebeautifulinteractionsthatmadeourmunitycloser.Onepossibleversion:Suddenly,inspirationstruck!

Withaquicklookatthemother,Idecidedtotakeamoreplayfulapproach.Ichangedmyattitudeandacceptedthedollarbillfromthelittlegirl,expressingmyheartfeltthanksforhergenerosity.Igaveherachocolatebar,thenquicklyreachedintomypocket,pulledoutanotherbill,andhandedittoher.Ismiledandsaid,“Here’syourchange!”Thelittlegirl’seyeswidenedwithjoyasshegraspedthebillandthechocolatebar.Shewaspletelysatisfiedwiththedealandbelievedthat