2025屆高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)+為家而賽：瑪麗亞的洗衣機(jī)之夢+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)為家而賽：瑪麗亞的洗衣機(jī)之夢1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Itwasmyjobtowatchmyyoungerbrother,Jack,andsister,Kelly,aswewalkedhomefromschool.“I’mtired,”Kellywhined“andhungry.”“Metoo,”addedJackSowestoppedtorest.“WhatdoyouthinkMamaiscooking?”Iasked.“Noodles!”Kellysaid.“Barbecue!”saidJack“Comeon.”Istoodup.“Weneedtokeepwalking.”Atabusycorner,Inoticedastreetbanner,reading“FirstWalkingRacetoJasanPark!ClimbtheMountaintoWinaWashingMachine.”Itmightbefuntorace.ButcouldIwalkfastenoughtowin?Athome,Mamawasworkinginthekitchen.Wehadonlyasingleburnerstove,soitoftentookagestoprepareameal.Sometimeswhenfathercamebackfromwork,Mamawasstillcookingwiththesingleburnerstove.4續(xù)寫原文Afterward,MamaandIwasheddishes.WhenMamapulledouttwometallaundrytubs,hersmiledisappeared.IknewdoinglaundryhurtMama’sbackandknees.Mamaheatedakettleofwateronthesingleburnerstoveandfilledatub.Shefilledtheotherwithcoldwater.Thenkneeling,Mamabeganscrubbingshirts.Thenwecarriedthewetlaundrytotheflatroof,whereMamahungittodry.Onrooftopsalloverthecity,clothesandtowelsdancedinthewind.IlovedbeingontheroofwithMama,butIwishedwehadn’thadsomuchhousework.ThenIwouldhavehadmoretimetoplaywithfriends.5續(xù)寫原文HowIwishwewouldhaveawashingmachine!BothMamaandIwouldbehappy.IrememberedthebannerandtoldMamaaboutit.Mamasighed,”Maria,manypeoplewillenterthatrace.Youcannotexpecttowin.”O(jiān)ntheraceday,Iwokeupearly.Ilacedupmyshoesandputonaheadband.Mamakissedthetopofmyhead.“Becarefulandbesafe.Justkeepwalking!”Mamasaid.Atthefootofthemountain,largecrowdsofpeoplegathered.6段首句Paragraph1：Thentheracebegan.Paragraph2：Withthebigcardboardboxaside,Irangthedoorbellofourhouse.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9文中講述了瑪麗亞每天放學(xué)要照顧弟弟妹妹，回家路上看到競走比賽贏洗衣機(jī)的橫幅，想到家中洗衣之累，母親用單灶爐做飯艱難，洗衣更是辛苦，她便想?yún)①悺Ｄ赣H雖認(rèn)為獲獎(jiǎng)希望渺茫，但瑪麗亞仍在比賽日早起前往。文章生動(dòng)展現(xiàn)了瑪麗亞家庭生活的不易，以及她渴望通過比賽贏得洗衣機(jī)來減輕母親負(fù)擔(dān)、改善家庭生活的急切心情，描繪出一個(gè)充滿生活氣息且溫暖樸實(shí)的家庭故事，凸顯瑪麗亞的懂事與擔(dān)當(dāng)。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Thentheracebegan.接著比賽開始了。隨著發(fā)令槍響，人群如潮水般向前涌去。瑪麗亞深吸一口氣，按照自己的節(jié)奏穩(wěn)步前行。起初，道路還算平坦，她輕松地超過了一些步伐凌亂的參賽者。可沒過多久，道路變得崎嶇陡峭起來，陽光也越發(fā)熾熱，炙烤著她的后背。瑪麗亞感覺雙腿像灌了鉛一樣沉重，呼吸也變得急促，但她一想到媽媽辛苦勞作的身影，心中便涌起一股力量。她看到身邊不斷有人因體力不支放慢腳步，甚至放棄比賽，可她咬著牙堅(jiān)持著，汗水濕透了衣衫，眼神卻愈發(fā)堅(jiān)定，一步一步向著山頂邁進(jìn)。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Withthebigcardboardboxaside,Irangthedoorbellofourhouse.帶著那個(gè)大紙箱來到自家門口，瑪麗亞按響了門鈴。媽媽打開門，看到瑪麗亞站在門口，身旁放著一個(gè)巨大的紙箱，滿臉疑惑。瑪麗亞興奮地指著紙箱說：“媽媽，我贏了！這是我們的洗衣機(jī)！”媽媽瞪大了眼睛，不敢相信自己的耳朵和眼前的景象?，旣悂喸敿?xì)地講述了比賽的過程，媽媽眼中閃爍著淚花，既心疼女兒的辛苦，又為女兒的堅(jiān)強(qiáng)和努力感到無比驕傲。鄰居們聽到動(dòng)靜紛紛圍過來，得知情況后都對瑪麗亞豎起了大拇指，稱贊她是個(gè)懂事又能干的孩子?，旣悂喛粗鴭寢岄_心的笑容，覺得自己所有的付出都是值得的，一家人的生活也因?yàn)檫@臺洗衣機(jī)迎來了新的希望。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Thentheracebegan.Asthestartinggunfired,thecrowdsurgedforwardlikeawildtorrent.Mariatookadeepbreathandstartedatasteadypaceshehadplanned.Atfirst,thepathwasrelativelyflatandshemanagedtoovertakesomecompetitorswhoseemeddisorganized.However,itwasn'tlongbeforetheroadbecameruggedandsteep,andthesunblazeddownmercilesslyonherback.Maria'slegsfeltasiftheywerefilledwithleadandherbreathinggrewshortandrapid.Butwhenevertheimageofhermothertoilinghardflashedthroughhermind,asurgeofstrengthwelledupwithinher.Shesawpeoplearoundherslowingdownandevengivingupduetoexhaustion,butshegrittedherteethandpersevered.Herclothesweresoakedwithsweat,yethereyesgrewevenmoredeterminedasshepushedforwardstepbysteptowardsthemountaintop.14范文呈現(xiàn)Withthebigcardboardboxbesideher,Mariarangthedoorbelloftheirhouse.Hermotheropenedthedoor,lookingatMariawithconfusionwhenshesawthehugecardboardboxbesideher.Mariaexcitedlypointedattheboxandsaid,"Mom,Iwon!Thisisourwashingmachine!"Hermother'seyeswidenedindisbelief,unabletofathomwhatshewasseeingandhearing.Mariathenrecountedthedetailsoftheracevividly.Tearsglistenedinhermother'seyes,feelingbothheartacheforherdaughter'shardshipandimmenseprideforherstrengthanddetermination.Neighbors,hearingthecommotion,gatheredaround.Uponlearningwhathadhappened,theyallgaveMariaathumbsup,praisingherasasensibleandcapablechild.Lookingathermother'shappysmile,Mariafeltthatallhereffortswereworthwhile,andthefamily'slifewasnowfilledwithnewhopebecauseofthiswashingmachine.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Thentheracebegan.Withthestartinggun'sresoundingcrack,thecrowd,likeafrenziedherd,surgedforward.Maria,takingadeepbreathandwithafirmlookinhereyes,embarkedonherjourneyatameticulouslyplannedpace.Initially,thepath,whichseemedfairlyeven,allowedhertoovertakeseveralcompetitorswhosestepswereindisarray.Butsoon,thewaytransformedintoaruggedandsteepascent,thesunblazingoverheadwithunforgivingintensity.Herlegs,feelingasifweigheddownbylead,andherbreathcominginshort,rapidgasps,Marianeverthelesspressedon.Itwasthethoughtofhermother'slaborioustoilthatservedasthewellspringofstrengthwithinher.Despitethefactthatnumerousparticipantsaroundherwereslowingdownorabandoningtherace,Maria,herteethgrittedandherresolveunshaken,continuedundeterred.Stepbyarduousstep,shemadeherwaytowardsthesummit,thegoaleverinhersight.16升級版范文呈現(xiàn)BesideherstoodthebigcardboardboxasMariarangthedoorbelloftheirhumbleabode.Themomenthermotheropenedthedoor,alookofbewildermentcrossedherfaceuponseeingthelargebox.Inanexcitedtone,Mariaexclaimed,"Mom,Iwon!Thisisourwashingmachine!"Hermother'seyeswidenedinsheerdisbelief,asifunabletoaccepttherealitybeforeher.ItwasMariawhothenvividlyrecountedtheentirerace,sparingnodetail.Tearswelledupinhermother'sey