2025屆高考英語復習讀后續(xù)寫練習+高中摯友：從疏離到重聚的情誼+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習高中摯友：從疏離到重聚的情誼1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文“Friendstotheend!”Breanahadsignedthepictureofusthathungonmybedroomwall.Herhandwrittenpromisecarriedthejoywehadshared,andlaughterfilledtheroom.ItfeltlikeBreanaandIhadbeenbestfriendsforever.Sincethedaywemetonthefirstdayofseniorhighschool，wehadbeeninseparable.Sheenjoyedoutdoorsports,andIloveddancing.Wedidalmosteverythingtogether.Whenthetryoutnoticeforthecheerleadingteamcameup,BreanaencouragedmetogiveitashotInitially,Iresistedhersuggestion,callinghercrazy,butdeepdown,Itrustedherandsecretlywantedtogiveitatry.Breanasawmyhiddendesireandpromisedtosupportmefully.Sheattendedallthepracticesandevenspenttwoweekscoachingmeinherbackyard.Finally,withaperfectperformance,Isuccessfullymadeitontothecheerleadingteam.Regrettably,Breanafailedtomaketheteamduetophysicaldiscomfort.4續(xù)寫原文However,thingsbegantochange.After-schooltrainingtookupmostofmytime,andourusualalget-togethersweredelayedorcanceled.Slowlybutsurely,webegantogrowapart.AheatedargumentfinallyeruptedwhenIrefusedBreana’sinvitationtogohiking.“I’msotired,Breana.Please,letmehavesomealonetime.”“You’realwaysbusy.Wehaven’tspentmuchtimetogether!It’sallbecauseofyourexcessivetraining!”“Stop,Breana!Youdon’tunderstandmeatall!Idon’tneedafriendlikeyou!”Withthosemeanwords,Iputanendtoour“friendstotheend”promise.Overthefollowingdays,despiteatightschedule,theargumentlingered(縈繞)inmymind,distractingmefromtraining.Itwasamorningwhentherewaschaosontheplayground.Someonecriedout,“Breanaisinjured!”Shockedandworried,Irushedtowherethesoundcamefrom,foroncenotcaringaboutanything.5段首句Paragraph1：AsIarrivedatthescene,IsawBreanasittingthereinpain.Paragraph2：Atmywords,shehuggedmetightly.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8文章講述了“我”和布雷娜從高中第一天起便是摯友，性格愛好不同卻形影不離。布雷娜鼓勵“我”參加啦啦隊選拔，她全力支持，最終“我”入選而她因身體不適落選。之后因訓練繁忙，“我”與她漸生嫌隙，一次爭吵后友誼破裂。但在她受傷時，“我”拋開一切趕到現(xiàn)場，真誠道歉，兩人重歸于好，并再次承諾珍惜彼此友誼，明白了友誼經(jīng)得住考驗。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點9續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：AsIarrivedatthescene,IsawBreanasittingthereinpain.當我趕到現(xiàn)場，看到布雷娜痛苦地坐在地上，我內(nèi)心充滿愧疚與擔憂。我急忙詢問她的傷勢，周圍同學七嘴八舌地說著事情經(jīng)過。我小心翼翼地查看她的腳踝，一邊回憶著我們曾經(jīng)的美好時光，一邊為剛剛爭吵時的沖動而后悔不已。我向她道歉，說自己不該那么自私，忽略了她的感受，承諾以后會平衡好訓練和朋友之間的關(guān)系，希望她能原諒我這一次。10續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Atmywords,shehuggedmetightly.聽到我的話，她緊緊地抱住了我。她哭著說其實她也有錯，不應(yīng)該那么沖動地指責我，這些天沒有我的陪伴，她很孤單。我輕拍著她的后背，安慰她一切都會好起來的。在同學們的注視下，我們就那樣緊緊相擁，仿佛周圍的一切都不存在了，只有我們重歸于好的友誼。此時，陽光灑在我們身上，暖暖的，就像我們的友誼再次綻放出光芒。11Part3范文呈現(xiàn)12范文呈現(xiàn)AsIarrivedatthescene,IsawBreanasittingthereinpain.Myheartwasfilledwithguiltandworry.Hastily,Iinquiredaboutherinjurywhilethesurroundingclassmateswerechatteringaboutwhathadhappened.Gently,Iexaminedherankle,recallingthebeautifulmemorieswehadsharedandregrettingmyimpulsivebehaviorduringthequarrel.Iapologizedtoher,sayingthatIshouldn'thavebeensoselfishandignoredherfeelings,promisingtobalancetrainingandfriendshipbetterinthefutureandhopingshecouldforgivemethistime.13范文呈現(xiàn)Atmywords,shehuggedmetightly.Shecriedandsaidthatshewasalsowrongandshouldn'thaveaccusedmesoimpulsively.Withoutmycompanythesedays,shehadfeltlonely.Pattingherbackgently,Icomfortedherthateverythingwouldbeokay.Underthegazeofourclassmates,weheldeachothertightlyasifnothingelseexistedaroundusbutourrestoredfriendship.Atthismoment,thesunshineshoneonus,warmandbright,justlikeourfriendshipshiningagain.14升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Onreachingthescene,whatcameintomysightwasBreana,seatedtherewithevidentpainetchedonhercountenance.Apangofguiltandapprehensionimmediatelygrippedmyheart.Hastily,Imademywaytowardsherandinquiredanxiouslyabouttheextentofherinjury,whilethecacophonyofvoicesfromthesurroundingclassmatesfilledtheair,eachrecountingtheincidentintheirownwords.Withtheutmostcare,Ibentdowntoexamineherankle,allthewhilememoriesofourbygonedaystogetherfloodedmymind,andIreproachedmyselfbitterlyformyhastyandthoughtlessoutburstduringourquarrel.Iofferedherasincereapology,statingthatnevershouldIhavebeensoself-centeredastooverlookheremotions,andvowedtobetterjugglemytrainingcommitmentsandourfriendshiphenceforth,prayingthatshewouldfinditinherhearttopardonmyfolly.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Attheutteranceofmywords,sheflungherarmsaroundmeandembracedmetightly.Tearsstreameddownhercheeksasshesobbed,confessingthatshetoohadbeenatfaultandoughtnottohavelashedoutatmesoimpetuously.Thedaysbereftofmycompanionship,shelamented,hadbeenfilledwithaprofoundsenseofloneliness.Gentlypattingherback,Imurmuredwordsofsolace,assuringherthatallwouldbewellandthatourfriendshipwouldemergestrongerfromthisordeal.Amidthestaresofourpeers,weclungtoeachother,asiftheentireworldhadfadedintoinsignificance,leavingonlytherekindledbondofourf