高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)+從自卑少年到舞臺閃耀：成長的蛻變+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)從自卑少年到舞臺閃耀：成長的蛻變1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文WhenIwasaboy,IalwaysworeturtleneckshirtsbecauseIwassosensitiveandshy.Iworkedhardtoearnexceptionalmarksandalwaystriedtobehavewell.Iwasyoungerthaneveryoneelsebecausemygoodmarkshadallowedmetoskipsecondgrade,butthisaddednothingtomyalreadylowself-confidence.WhenIwas14,myparentsdivorced(離婚).Imovedinwithmydadinanewneighborhood,buthewasalwayssobusyandhadlittletimeforme.Itseemedtheonlytimeheeverspoketomewastobedemandingorcritical.Ibegantohatecominghomefromschooleveryday.Isankfurtherintomylowself-esteem(自尊心)andwasoverwhelmedwithfeelingunappreciatedandalone.4續(xù)寫原文Oneday,myauntcalled.Thisseemedlikeamiracle(奇跡)tome.AuntGinetteusuallyonlycalledonceayear,onmybirthday.Shesaidshehadjustseensomeyoungteenagersparticipateinapublicspeakingcontest,andshethoughtIshouldtryit,too.ShetoldmeshefirmlybelievedIcouldperformonstageliketheotherkidssinceshehadseenmedoskits(幽默小品)forthefamilyatChristmas.Iwasalittlesurprised.Me?Onstage?Inapublicspeakingcontest?Iwashesitant.ButAuntGinettewassoconfidentandseemedreallyserious.Feelingherstrongbelief,Iwentagainstalloddsandagreedtoenterthecontest.5續(xù)寫原文Allthatwinter,twiceaweekafterdinner,Itookthreedifferentbusesforthethree-hourround-triptopracticeinVilled’Anjou,wherethecompetitionwouldtakeplace.Althoughmydadreallydidlovemeandwantedthebestforme,hedisapprovedofthisnewdream,fearingitwouldtakeawayfrommyhomeworktimeandimpactmyacademicperformance.ButIremainedatopperformerinschoolandnevermissedaday.6段首句Paragraph1：Fourmonthslater,thebignightarrived.Paragraph2：WhenIsawmyfather’sface,hiseyeswereshining－h(huán)ewassoproud.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9文章講述了五歲的奧利弗和身為學(xué)生護(hù)士且患有高血壓等疾病的母親科迪生活在達(dá)文特里?？频仙钪约航】禒顩r不佳，需格外注意。奧利弗雖年幼卻對健康安全知識充滿熱情。一日，科迪身體不適去醫(yī)院檢查后回家，下午在廚房與奧利弗聊天時病情突然惡化暈倒。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Fourmonthslater,thebignightarrived.四個月后，那個重要的夜晚終于來臨。我早早來到后臺，緊張地等待著上臺?？粗渌x手自信的模樣，我心里七上八下，但想到自己幾個月的努力，又暗暗給自己打氣。輪到我時，我穩(wěn)步走上舞臺，燈光灑下，我深吸一口氣，開始演講。我努力讓自己的聲音沉穩(wěn)有力，目光掃過臺下觀眾。演講過程中，我越來越放松，順利地完成了演講，聽到臺下熱烈的掌聲，我心中滿是喜悅。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：WhenIsawmyfather’sface,hiseyeswereshining－h(huán)ewassoproud.當(dāng)我看到父親的臉時，他的眼睛閃爍著光芒——他是如此驕傲。那一刻，我知道自己的努力沒有白費(fèi)。父親走上前，緊緊地抱住我，說他從未想過我能如此出色。我也感受到了他對我的愛。這次經(jīng)歷讓我明白，只要勇敢嘗試，就能突破自我，收獲成長。從那以后，我變得更加自信，不再是那個自卑孤獨(dú)的男孩。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Fourmonthslater,thebignightarrived.Iarrivedatthebackstageearly,waitingnervouslyformyturn.Lookingattheconfidentlooksofothercontestants,Ifeltextremelyuneasy.Butthinkingofmyeffortsinthepastfewmonths,Icheeredmyselfup.Whenitwasmyturn,Iwalkedsteadilyontothestage.Withthespotlightonme,Itookadeepbreathandbeganmyspeech.Itriedtomakemyvoicecalmandpowerful,glancingattheaudience.Duringthespeech,Ibecamemoreandmorerelaxedandsuccessfullyfinishedit.Hearingthewarmapplausefromtheaudience,Iwasfilledwithjoy.14范文呈現(xiàn)WhenIsawmyfather’sface,hiseyeswereshining－h(huán)ewassoproud.Atthatmoment,Iknewthatallmyeffortshadpaidoff.Myfathercameupandhuggedmetightly,sayingthathehadneverexpectedmetobesoexcellent.Ialsofelthisloveforme.ThisexperiencemademeunderstandthataslongasIdaredtotry,Icouldbreakthroughmyselfandgaingrowth.Sincethen,IhavebecomemoreconfidentandnolongertheshyandlonelyboyIusedtobe.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Fourmonthslater,thelong-awaitednightfinallyarrived.Standingbackstage,myheartpoundingwithnervousness,Iawaitedmyturnapprehensively.Gazingattheself-assureddemeanorsoftheothercontestants,anoverwhelmingsenseofuneasewashedoverme.However,recollectingthearduouseffortsIhaddedicatedoverthepastmonths,Isummonedthecouragetobuoymyselfup.Whenmynamewasannounced,withmeasuredsteps,Imademywayontotheresplendentstage.Bathedinthespotlight,Iinhaleddeeplyandcommencedmyspeech.Strivingtorendermyvoicesteadyandforceful,Isweptmygazeacrosstheexpectantaudience.Asthespeechprogressed,agrowingsenseofrelaxationenvelopedme,andImanagedtoconcludeitsmoothly.Thethunderousapplausethatgreetedmefilledmyheartwithanindescribablesenseofelation.16升級版范文呈現(xiàn)WhenIcaughtsightofmyfather’sface,hiseyeswereaglowwithanunmistakablepride.Inthatinstant,Iknewthateveryounceofmytoilhadreapedrichrewards.Myfatherhastenedtowardsmeandenfoldedmeinatightembrace,exclaimingthathehadneverenvisionedmeachievingsuchremarkablefeats.ItwasthenthatItrulysensedthedepthofhisloveforme.ThisexperiencehasingrainedinmetheprofoundunderstandingthataslongasIdaredtotaketheplunge,Icouldshattertheshacklesofself-doubtandembarkonajourn