英語(yǔ)試題應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作-致馬丁的求助信：悉尼租房咨詢(xún)+講義

應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作假如你是李華,

你將于近期前往悉尼大學(xué)(theUniversityofSydney)進(jìn)行為期一年的學(xué)習(xí),

計(jì)劃在當(dāng)?shù)刈夥?。?qǐng)用英文給筆友

Martin寫(xiě)一封郵件,

向他咨詢(xún)相關(guān)情況。郵件內(nèi)容包括:1.寫(xiě)明事由;2.詢(xún)問(wèn)情況;3.期待見(jiàn)面。注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右;2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),

以使行文連貫。DearMartin,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua寫(xiě)作提綱：第一段：點(diǎn)明寫(xiě)信目的：告知Martin自己即將前往悉尼大學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)一年且要租房，引出下文咨詢(xún)內(nèi)容。常用表達(dá)：“I'mwritingtoinformyouthat...”“I'mgoingto...”“Recently,Ihavegottheopportunityto...”第二段：詳細(xì)詢(xún)問(wèn)租房相關(guān)信息：地段推薦：詢(xún)問(wèn)學(xué)校周邊安全、便利的居住區(qū)域，如“Couldyourecommendsomesafeandconvenientneighborhoodsneartheuniversity?”租金范圍：了解不同房型的大致租金，如“What'stheaveragerentforaone-bedroomapartmentorasharedflat?”租房渠道：咨詢(xún)可靠的租房中介或網(wǎng)站，像“Arethereanyreliablerentalagenciesorwebsitesthatyouknow?”邏輯連接詞：Firstly,Secondly,Moreover等，使詢(xún)問(wèn)條理清晰。第三段：表達(dá)感謝：“Thankyouforyourtimeandconsideration.”“Ireallyappreciateyourhelp.”期待見(jiàn)面：“I'mlookingforwardtoseeingyou.”“Can'twaittomeetupwithyouinSydney.”語(yǔ)言積累：I'mextremelyexcitedtosharewithyouthatI'llbestudyingattheUniversityofSydneyfortheupcomingyear.

（我非常興奮地告訴你，接下來(lái)這一年我將在悉尼大學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)。）AsI'mgoingtorentanaccommodationthere,I'mreachingouttoyouforsomesuggestions.

（由于我要在那兒租房子，所以來(lái)找你尋求一些建議。）Itwouldbegreatifyoucouldrecommendafewareasthatarewithinwalkingdistancetothecampus.

（要是你能推薦幾個(gè)離校園步行可達(dá)的區(qū)域就太好了。）Iwonderwhatthetypicalrentisforastudioapartmentinthatarea.

（我想知道那個(gè)地區(qū)單身公寓的典型租金是多少。）Doyouhaveanyexperiencewithlocalrentalplatforms?Anyreliableonesyoucansuggest?

（你有沒(méi)有用過(guò)當(dāng)?shù)氐淖夥科脚_(tái)？有沒(méi)有可靠的能推薦一下？）Yourinsightsintothelocalrentalmarketwouldbeinvaluabletome.

（你對(duì)當(dāng)?shù)刈夥渴袌?chǎng)的見(jiàn)解對(duì)我來(lái)說(shuō)無(wú)比珍貴。）AnotherthingI'mconcernedaboutisthefacilitiesprovidedintherentalapartments.

（我關(guān)心的另一件事是出租公寓里提供的設(shè)施。）I'mreallygratefulforanyinformationyoucanofferme.

（你能提供的任何信息我都會(huì)非常感激。）LookingforwardtocatchingupwithyouandsharingmystudylifeinSydney.

（期待和你相聚，分享我在悉尼的學(xué)習(xí)生活。）Thankyouinadvancefortakingthetimetohelpmeout.

（提前感謝你抽出時(shí)間幫我。）寫(xiě)作示范：第一篇：DearMartin,Greetings!I'moverjoyedtotellyouthatI'vegotthechancetostudyattheUniversityofSydneyforoneyear.Andnow,I'mfacedwiththetaskoffindingasuitableplacetolive.Iwaswonderingifyoucouldgivemeahand.Firstly,regardingthelocation,Iprefersomewhereclosetotheuniversity,preferablywitheasyaccesstopublictransportation.Couldyounameafewsuchareas?Secondly,abouttherent,I'monabitofatightbudget.So,what'stheapproximatecostforasmallapartmentoraroominasharedhouse?Additionally,I'mcluelessaboutthelocalrentalprocess.Arethereanyparticularrentalcompaniesoronlineplatformsthatyouthinkaretrustworthy?Thankyousomuchforyourhelp.I'mcountingdownthedaysuntilIarriveinSydneyandwecanmeetup.Bestwishes,

Yours,

LiHua第二篇：DearMartin,How'sitgoing?Ihopeyou'redoingwell.I'mwritingbecauseI'mabouttoembarkonaone-yearacademicjourneyattheUniversityofSydneyandneedtosortoutmylivingarrangements.Iknowyou'refamiliarwithSydney,soI'mturningtoyouforadvice.Firstly,I'mlookingforaquietandsafeneighborhoodneartheuniversity.Doyouknowofany?Secondly,intermsofrent,IwanttogetanideaofhowmuchIshouldexpecttopaymonthlyforafurnishedone-bedroomapartment.Also,whenitcomestosigningalease,arethereanycommonpitfallsorthingsIshouldpayspecialattentionto?Yourhelpmeanstheworldtome.I'mreallylookingforwardtoseeingyouandexploringSydneytogether.Yourssincerely,

LiHua第三篇：DearMartin,Longtimenosee!I'vegotsomeexcitingnews.I'mgoingtostudyattheUniversityofSydneyforthenexttwelvemonthsandI'mcurrentlyintheprocessofhuntingforanapartment.Ithoughtyou'dbetheperfectpersontoconsult.Tostartwith,couldyourecommendsomeareasthatarestudent-friendly,withamenitieslikesupermarketsandcafesnearby?Secondly,I'mcuriousabouttherentfluctuationthroughouttheyear.Isthereaparticularseasonwhenit'scheapertorent?Moreover,doyouhaveanytipsonnegotiatingwithlandlords?Itrulyappreciateyourassistance.Can'twaittoreunitewithyouinSydney.Bestregards,

Yours,

LiHua應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作參考答案：DearMartin,ExhilaratedtotellyouthatI'mgoingtotheUniversityofSydneyforfurtherstudy,I'mreachingoutforabriefinquirywithregardtoapartmentrental.SinceIwillbelivinginSydneyforthewholeyear,allthingsconsidered,homestayisnotaproperchoice.Idon'tmindsharinganapartmentifitisconvenientlylocatedandhasacozybedroom.Sowhatistheapproximatecostofthewholeapartmentandasharedonerespectively?Additionally,Iwonderifyoucouldrecommendanyareaswheretherentisaffordableand