高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)+童年里與鄰居老人的溫暖情誼

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)童年里與鄰居老人的溫暖情誼1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文MyfamilymovedinasmallhouseinBrighton,Coloradoonmyseventhbirthday.MyfirstmemoryisourneighborBill,anoldman,handingmestrawberriesfromhisgardenthroughaholeinthechain-linkfence.“Weneedtomaketheholebigger,”hesaidjokingly.LaterIknewthathelivedalone.Billspentmuchtimeworkinginthegarden,andIwasalwaystalkingtohimfromouryard.Iwasachatterbox.IthinkwhatdrewmetoBillisthathenevergottiredoflisteningtome.IalsothinkBillsawalotofhimselfinme—wewerebothlonelyandanxious—andthatmaybewhyhealwaystookthetimetolistentome.Itwasawonderfulconnection.4續(xù)寫原文Thereweren’tanykidsofmyageintheneighborhood,andmyparentswereverybusy,soImostlyplayedintheyardwithmydog.Ihadalotofimaginaryfriends—awholefamily,actually,withawife,children,abestfriend...nojoke.Weirdkid.Oneday,myparentsaskedBillwhetherhe’dwatchmewhiletheywereawayonbusiness.Thisworkedforeveryone,soitbecameasomewhatmonthlyoccurrence.Billhadaspareroominhishouse,whichbecame“my”room.5續(xù)寫原文Billpromisedtoteachmetodrivethelawntractor(割草機)somedayandIwasalwayslookingforwardtoit.Inwinter,Billwouldattachasnowplow(鏟雪機)tothefrontofthedawntractor.IseriouslytoldhimthatIwouldinventabettersnowplowwhenIgrewup.“Sureyouwill.You’llgetapatentcertificate.Ittakesacertificatetoproveanimportantthing,”Billsaidwithasmile.Onesnowymorning,anideasuddenlyhitme.MyparentswerewatchingTVwhenIspititout,“WhatifIadoptedBillasmygrandpa?”MyparentssaidIcouldgooverandaskhim.6段首句Paragraph1：Iknockedonhisdoor,satdowninhislivingroom,andasked,“CanIadoptyouasmygrandpa?”Paragraph2：Thenextmorning,whilelearningtodrivethelawntractorwithasnowplow,Iaccidentallyploweddownourchain-linkfence.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9文中講述了七歲生日時，“我”一家搬到科羅拉多州的布萊頓，與獨居老人比爾為鄰。比爾常從圍欄洞遞草莓給“我”，還耐心聽“我”這個愛說話的孩子傾訴，兩人因相似的孤獨焦慮而心靈相通。附近沒同齡孩子，父母忙，“我”常與狗在院子玩，還想象出一大家子朋友。父母出差時會讓比爾照顧“我”，比爾家有間房成了“我”的專屬。他答應(yīng)教“我”開割草機，冬天還會用帶鏟雪機的割草機除雪。一個雪天，“我”突發(fā)奇想，打算認比爾做爺爺，父母讓“我”去詢問比爾。這段故事展現(xiàn)了孩子純真的內(nèi)心世界以及鄰里間真摯溫暖的情誼。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Iknockedonhisdoor,satdowninhislivingroom,andasked,“CanIadoptyouasmygrandpa?”我懷著忐忑不安的心情敲響了比爾的門，待他開門后，我跟著走進客廳，緊張地坐在沙發(fā)上，雙手不停地揪著衣角。猶豫了好一會兒，我終于鼓起勇氣抬起頭，看著比爾的眼睛問道：“我可以認您做我的爺爺嗎？”問完后，我的心砰砰直跳，眼睛緊緊地盯著比爾，既期待又害怕聽到他的回答，屋子里安靜得能聽到自己的心跳聲。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Thenextmorning,whilelearningtodrivethelawntractorwithasnowplow,Iaccidentallyploweddownourchain-linkfence.第二天清晨，陽光灑在雪地上，泛著耀眼的光。我興奮地跟著比爾來到院子里，準(zhǔn)備學(xué)習(xí)駕駛那臺裝著鏟雪機的割草機。比爾先給我仔細講解了操作方法和注意事項，我迫不及待地坐上去，啟動了機器。一開始，我小心翼翼地操控著，可不知怎么回事，手突然一抖，方向就偏了。只聽“嘩啦”一聲，割草機直直地沖向了我們兩家之間的鐵絲網(wǎng)圍欄，瞬間就把圍欄撞倒了一大片。我嚇得臉色蒼白，呆呆地坐在駕駛座上，不知所措地看著眼前的一片狼藉。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Iknockedonhisdoor,myheartpoundinglikeadruminmychest.Asthedoorcreakedopen,Itookadeepbreathandwalkedin,mystepshesitant.Isatdownontheold,worn-outcouchinhislivingroom,myhandsfidgetingnervously.Gatheringallmycourage,IfinallylookedupatBillandblurtedout,"CanIadoptyouasmygrandpa?"Myvoicetrembledslightly,andIcouldfeeltheheatrisingtomycheeks.Iwatchedhimintently,everysecondfeelinglikeaneternity,waitingforhisresponse.TheroomwassoquietthattheonlysoundIcouldhearwasthetickingoftheoldclockonthewall.14范文呈現(xiàn)Thenextmorning,thesunshonebrightly,castingagoldenglowoverthesnow-coveredyard.IwasfilledwithexcitementasBillledmetothelawntractorwiththesnowplowattached.Hepatientlyexplainedthecontrolsandsafetyprecautions,hiswordsofwisdomsinkingin.Eagerly,Iclimbedontotheseatandstartedtheengine.Atfirst,everythingseemedtobegoingsmoothlyasIslowlymaneuveredthetractorforward.Butthen,inamomentofdistraction,myhandslippedonthesteeringwheel.BeforeIknewit,thetractorveeredsharplytothesideandwithaloudcrash,plowedrightthroughourchain-linkfence.Thesoundofthemetalclashingandthefencecollapsingechoedinmyears.Isatthere,frozeninshock,myeyeswidewithhorrorasIstaredatthemessIhadmade.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Withmyheartpoundingwildlyinmychest,InervouslyknockedonBill'sdoor.Uponitsopening,Isteppedinsideandgingerlysatdownonthewell-worncouchinhislivingroom,myhandsrestlesslyfidgeting.Summoningeveryounceofmycourage,IfixedmygazeonBillandasked,"CanIadoptyouasmygrandpa?"Myvoicequivered,scarcelyaudibleinthestillnessoftheroom.,withtheonlyaudiblesoundbeingthesofttickingoftheantiqueItwasasiftimestoodstillclockonthewall,eachsecondstretchingintowhatfeltlikeaneternityasIawaitedhisreply.16升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Thefollowingmorning,bathedinthegoldenraysofthesun,IfoundmyselfbesideBill,excitedlyapproachingthelawntractorequippedwithasnowplow.Bill,withgreatpatience,detailedthecontrolsandsafetymeasures,hisinstructionsfirmlyimprintingonmymind.AsIclimbedaboardandstartedtheengine,anticipationcoursedthroughme.However,inamomentofinadvertence,myhandslipped,causingthetractortolurchsideways.Witharesoundingcrash,itplowedstraightthroughthe