讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)+兄妹攜手為海灘清潔而努力+課件-2025屆高三上學(xué)期英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)專項

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)兄妹攜手，為海灘清潔而努力1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文MariaandPeterlivedinacoastalcity.Thegreatestpleasureinsummerforthemwastoswimattheirlocalbeachafterschool.Butonedaytheystartedtolosetheirenthusiasmforswimminginthewaters.Moreoftenthannot,theywouldfindplasticbagsthrownonthebeach.Worsesill,astheyswaminthewater,someplasticbagswouldfloataroundthemandevensticktotheirlegswhentheywalkedtotheshore.Theywereupsetanddecidedsomethingneededtobedonetostopthebeautifulseabecomingconsumedbywaste.Oneweekend,MariaandPeterbroughtabigbagtothebeachanddeterminedtocleanitup.Sweatstreameddownfromtheirforeheadwhiletheybentdownandpickeduptheplasticbags.Totheirdisappointment,afteraday’shardwork,therewerestillmanyplasticbagslyingonthebeachorfloatinginthewater.Goinghomewithachinglegsandarms,MariaandPeterwerealmostdefeatedbyastrongsenseoffailure.4續(xù)寫原文Thatnightoverdinnerwiththeirparents,thepairatesilently.Noticingtheirlowspirits,Motheraskedgently,“Youtwolookedsodown.Whathappened?”ExchangingglanceswithPeter,Mariarepliedinalowvoice,“It’sthoseannoyingplasticbags.Wetriedtocleanupbutitwasjustimpossible.”Understandingthepair’sdisappointment,theirfatherpattedthemonthebackandcomforted,”Well,it’sreallyhardforjusttwoofyoutofixsuchabigproblem.”“Justtwoofus.”complainedMariaandPeter,lookingateachother.Suddenly,anidealashedthroughtheirminds,theireyesshiningwithexcitement.“Yes,that’sthepoint!Weshouldmakemorepeopleawareoftheproblemandencouragethemtotakeaction!”thepairsaidinchorus.5段首句Paragraph1：Quicklyfinishingtheirdinner,thepairwentupstairsandstartedplanning.Paragraph2：Excitedandnervous,theypostedthevideoandarticleonWeChat.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8住在海濱城市的瑪麗亞和彼得原本喜愛在當(dāng)?shù)睾┯斡?，但日益增多的塑料垃圾讓他們失去興致。他們決心清理海灘，卻因任務(wù)艱巨而失敗。晚餐時與父母交流后，他們有了新主意。梗概如下：瑪麗亞和彼得因海灘塑料污染而苦惱，一次清理嘗試失敗后，與父母交談獲得啟發(fā)。他們決定通過制作并發(fā)布視頻和文章，呼吁大家共同保護海灘。最終，他們的帖子引發(fā)廣泛關(guān)注，眾多志愿者響應(yīng)，一場海灘清潔行動就此展開。漢語構(gòu)思故事情節(jié)點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點9續(xù)寫思路分析Para1:

Quicklyfinishingtheirdinner,thepairwentupstairsandstartedplanning.快速吃完晚餐后，兩人上樓開始策劃?，旣悂喿谧狼?，全神貫注地撰寫關(guān)于海灘塑料污染嚴重情況的文章。她詳細描述塑料垃圾如何破壞海灘美景，還分享了游泳時垃圾袋纏身的糟糕經(jīng)歷，力求引起讀者共鳴。彼得則在一旁挑選清理海灘時拍攝的照片，這些照片真實記錄了污染現(xiàn)狀。接著，他們把照片和文字精心組合，制作成呼吁保護海灘的短視頻。為了讓視頻更具感染力，他們還添加了一些感人的音樂和醒目的標語，忙得不亦樂乎。10續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Excitedandnervous,theypostedthevideoandarticleonWeChat.懷著既興奮又緊張的心情，他們在微信上發(fā)布了視頻和文章。沒想到，短短幾個小時，帖子就迅速傳播開來。許多人被他們的努力所打動，紛紛留言表示愿意加入海灘清潔行動。志愿者報名信息如潮水般涌來，很快就組建起了一支龐大的隊伍。到了周末，眾多志愿者帶著清潔工具齊聚海灘。瑪麗亞和彼得站在隊伍前方，既自豪又激動。在他們的帶領(lǐng)下，大家分工合作，認真清理海灘上的每一處垃圾。經(jīng)過一天的努力，海灘面貌煥然一新，這次大規(guī)模的環(huán)保行動取得了顯著成效。11Part3范文呈現(xiàn)12范文呈現(xiàn)Quicklyfinishingtheirdinner,thepairwentupstairsandstartedplanning.Maria,filledwithdetermination,satatthedesktowriteanarticle.Init,shedetailedhowplasticpollutionhadtransformedtheironce-beautifulbeach.Shedescribedhowtheplasticbagsnotonlymarredthescenerybutalsodisruptedtheirswimmingexperience.Peter,ontheotherhand,carefullyselectedthephotoshehadtakenduringtheirpreviouscleaningattempt.Thesephotoswereclearevidenceoftheseverityofthepollution.Afterthat,theysetouttocreateashortvideo.Theycombinedthephotoswithpowerfulwords,aimingtoarousethepublic'sawarenessofenvironmentalprotection.Tomakeitmoreappealing,theyaddedsometouchingmusicandeye-catchingcaptions.13范文呈現(xiàn)Excitedandnervous,theypostedthevideoandarticleonWeChat.Totheirastonishment,thepostspreadlikewildfirewithinhours.Afloodofpeopleweredeeplymovedbytheirefforts.Messagesofsupportandofferstovolunteerpouredin.Innotime,alargegroupofvolunteerswasorganized.Onthefollowingweekend,volunteersarrivedatthebeachwithcleaningtools.MariaandPeter,standingatthefrontoftheline,werefilledwithpride.Undertheirleadership,everyoneworkedtogether,carefullycleaningeverycornerofthebeach.Afteradayofhardwork,thebeachtookonacompletelynewlook.Thislarge-scaleenvironmentalprotectioncampaignachievedremarkableresults.14升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Quicklyfinishingtheirdinner,thepairwentupstairsandwastednotimeinstartingtheircrucialplan.Maria,whoseeyessparkledwithdetermination,satatthedesk,composinganarticlethatvividlydepictedhowplasticpollutionhadgraduallyruinedtheironce-idyllicbeach.Sheelaboratedonhowtheplasticbagsnotonlyspoiltthepicturesquescenerybutalsofrequentlyinterruptedtheirenjoyableswimmingexperience.Meanwhile,Peterwasbusycarefullyselectingthephotostakenduringtheirinitialcleaningendeavor,whichservedascompellingevidenceofthedirepollutionsituation.Subsequently,theysetaboutcreatingashortvideo,combiningthesephotoswithimpactfulwords,allinanattempttorousethepublic'senvironmentalconsciousness.Addingsomeheart-rendingmusicandeye-catchingcaptions,theystrivedtomakeitasappealingaspossible.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Excitedandnervous,theypostedthevideoandarticleonWeChat.Littledidtheyexpectthatthepostwouldgoviralwithinafewhours.Amultitudeofpeopleweredeeplytouchedbytheirunwaveringefforts.Messagesofsupportandpledgestovolunteerfloodedin,andbeforelong,asubstantialgroupofvolunteerswassucces