野外生存訓練看圖作文

周考作文解析作文要求你和李明參加了一次野外生存訓練。以下面5幅圖畫表現了野外訓練的過程，請根據圖示寫一篇英文日記。注意：1．詞數100左右；2．日記的開頭與結尾已為你寫好。參考詞匯：指南針：compassnn.

手電筒：flashlightnn.急救包：first—aidkit

宿營地：campsitenn.Saturday，May4，20

一：審題

三：想詞組句四：連句成段

——寫作步驟——二：列提綱五：連段成篇

六：復查糾錯日記審人稱審時態(tài)審文體一：審題第一人稱一般過去時結尾（已給）過程開頭（已給）

1.出發(fā)2.翻山3.過河4.迷路5.休息三：列提綱一大早，我們就出發(fā)了earlyinthemorningintheearlymorningsetout，setoff李明背著指南針和帳篷carry，compass，tent我的背包里有手電筒、地圖、小刀急救箱、火柴、蠟燭、食物和衣服flashlight,amap,aknife,afirst-aidkit,somematches,candles,food,clothes想詞組句之出發(fā)wesetoutintheearlymorning.Limingcarriedacompassandatent.Thereisaflashlight,amap,aknife,afirst-aidkit,somematches,candles,foodandclothesinmybackpack.連句成段之出發(fā)我們翻過一座山climbehillmountain我們遇見了一條河meetrunacrosscomeacrossencounter正當不知怎么辦時，我們看見了一條木頭，我們把行李放在木頭上過了河havenoidea，don'tknowapieceofwood，luggage想詞組句之翻山過河wehadnoideawhattodo,wefoundapieceofwoodlyingbytheriver.Weswamacrosstheriverbyputtingourluggageonthewood.連句成段

weclimbedahillwerunacrossariver,whichblockedoutourway.thenwhen我們在途中迷路了。loseone'sway幸運的是，在指南針的幫助下我們找到正確的路。luckily,fortunatelywiththehelpof,withtheaidofdirection,way我們搭起帳篷在里面度過了一夜putuptent，spendtimeindoing想詞組句之迷路休息

wefoundtherightdirectionwiththehelpofthecompass.連句成段welostourwaytothecampsiten.luckilyweputupatentandspentthewholenightsleepinginit.asby

連貫成篇earlyinthemorning出發(fā)翻山過河onthewaytocampsitenthenasluckilyby迷路休息

復查糾錯1.檢查句首單詞第一個字母是否大寫。2.檢查單詞拼寫是否正確，是否漏寫或多寫字母。3.檢查動詞單復數形式、過去式、過去分詞和現在分詞是否正確。4.檢查時態(tài)前后是否一致。5.檢查動詞搭配是否正確。6.檢查是否可以替換高級詞匯、短語和句式。7.檢查之后再謄寫到試卷上，注意卷面干凈整潔，字體工整。

優(yōu)秀范文

Saturday,May4,20

cloudyLiMingandItookpartinawildernesssurvivalprogramyesterday,andithasbeenoneofthemostunforgettableexperiencessincehighschool.Earlyinthemorning,wesetout.LiMingwascarryingacompassandatentinhisbackpackandinminetherewasaflashlight,amap,aknife,afirst-aidkit,somematches,candles,food,andclothes.Onthewaytothecampsite,weclimbedahill,andthenweswamacrossariver,pushingthebackpacksonalargepieceofwoodwehadfoundbytheriver.Aswegotintoaforest,welostourway.

Luckily,wefoundtherightdirectionwiththecompass.Bythetimewearrivedatthecampsite,ithadalreadybeendark.LiMingthenputupthetent,andImadeafireandstartedcooking.Thetwoofusspentthenightintheforest.Welearnedtouseknowledgegainedinclassroomtrainingtosolveproblems.

Itwasquiteanexperienceforusboth,whichI'llneverforgetfortherestofmylife.

優(yōu)秀句子賞析1.Wenearlygotlostintheforest,butluckilybyusingtheGPS,wemadeourwaytothecampsite.2.ThetimeIsawoursurvivaltraining.3.Welostourselvesinthegoodsightandfellasleepdelightedly.4.Bathedinthesunsine,wecheeredwithjoy.5.Whatworrieduswasthatwelostourwayonthehalfway.6.Wefellasleepquickly,ourstomachfullofdeliciousfoodmadebyus.7.Tiredaswewere,wehadtoputupourtentandcookbyourselves.

典型錯誤1.It'stooheavytous.2.Themoonwasraised.3.IandLimingclimbedahill,acrosstheriverandgettothecampsite.3.Aswearrivedthecampsite,Limingsetupthetent.4.Weswimmedacrosstheriver.5.Thesignswewedisappeared.6.Toussurprise,wefoundtherightway.7.Limingcaughtfire.8.HowluckywereI.9.Weputourbagsonthewoodtokeepthemweredry.10.Thankforthecompass,it