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高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫語(yǔ)篇練習(xí)一場(chǎng)誤會(huì):從誤解到理解的旅程1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文I’vealwayspridedmyselfonbeingapoliteandwell-manneredgentleman,dislikinganybehaviorthatlacksproperpoliteness.However,inanunexpectedturnofevents,IfoundmyselfbecomingtheverypersonIhaveastrongdislikefor.IthappenedduringawaitforatrainattheSouthamptonstation.Oneafternoon,IwaswaitingforthetraintoLondon,andthestationwascrowdedwithtravelers.Withsometimetospare,Idecidedtogointoaconveniencestoretograbapackofpotatochips,whichIputintomybackpack.Withabitoftimebeforethetrain’sdeparture,Itookoutabook,foundaseat,andabsorbedmyselfinreading.4續(xù)寫原文Afterawhile,Inoticedawomanbesidemecasuallyhelpingherselftomybagofchips,showingcompletedisrespect.Iwasshockedbyherrudeness.Withoutanyacknowledgmentorpermission,shehaddivedintomysnack.WhileIhadtheurgetoexpressmydissatisfaction,Iheldback.Islightlyshiftedthebaginherdirection,hopingshe’dtakeiteasy.Tomysurprise,thewomanremainedunbotheredbythesituationandwentonpullingoutachipfromthepack,givingmeasmile.HeractionsweresodaringthatIwasleftindisbelief.Atthatmoment,Istruggledwithconflictingemotions.Ononehand,Ifeltliketalkingtoherdirectlyaboutheractions,butontheother,Iresistedtheurge,maintainingmycalmness.5續(xù)寫原文Thenthebroadcastannounced,“Passengers,pleaseboardthetrain.”Iabsentmindedly(茫然地)threwmybookintomybackpack,grabbedtheemptypotatochipwrapperthathadbeenshared,droppeditintotherubbishbin,andheadedstraightfortheticketgate.SoonIfoundmyseatonthetrain.Unexpectedly,thewoman’sseatwasdirectlyoppositemine.Feelingupset,Ireachedintomybackpackintendingtocontinuemyreadingsoastocalmmyselfdown.6段首句Paragraph1:Tomyastonishment,Idiscoveredmyunopenedbagofchipsrestingsafelyinside.Paragraph2:“Noworries,”thewomansaidwithasmile.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9一向以禮貌著稱的“我”在南安普頓車站等車時(shí),看到旁邊一位女士未經(jīng)允許吃“我”的薯片,雖不滿但隱忍未發(fā)。上車后,“我”卻發(fā)現(xiàn)自己的薯片完好無(wú)損,這才意識(shí)到誤會(huì)了女士。此時(shí)面對(duì)女士,“我”會(huì)作何反應(yīng)?女士又會(huì)如何回應(yīng)?點(diǎn)1:位于續(xù)寫第一段段首,流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語(yǔ);點(diǎn)2:位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾,流暢銜接第二段段首句;點(diǎn)3:位于續(xù)寫第二段段首,續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語(yǔ);點(diǎn)4:文章結(jié)尾升華,給予讀者正能量,揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1:Tomyastonishment,Idiscoveredmyunopenedbagofchipsrestingsafelyinside.令我震驚的是,我發(fā)現(xiàn)那袋未開封的薯片正安然無(wú)恙地躺在背包里。剎那間,我如遭雷擊,意識(shí)到自己犯下了大錯(cuò)。我一直錯(cuò)怪了這位女士,還在心里對(duì)她的行為不滿。我的臉?biāo)查g漲得通紅,滿是羞愧。我緩緩抬起頭,目光觸及女士的那一刻,恨不得找個(gè)地縫鉆進(jìn)去。我深吸一口氣,鼓足勇氣說(shuō)道:“實(shí)在太抱歉,我之前一直以為您吃的是我的薯片,是我誤會(huì)您了?!闭f(shuō)完,我局促不安地搓著手,不敢直視她的眼睛。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2:“Noworries,”thewomansaidwithasmile.“沒關(guān)系的?!迸课⑿χ貞?yīng)。她的眼神中沒有一絲責(zé)怪,只有理解與包容?!拔铱吹侥憧磿敲慈朊?,想著分享薯片也無(wú)妨,本應(yīng)該先問(wèn)問(wèn)你的?!彼倪@番話,讓我更加無(wú)地自容。我連忙把那袋未開封的薯片遞到她面前,真誠(chéng)地說(shuō):“這次咱們一起吃吧,是我太小心眼了?!迸啃廊唤邮?,我們愉快地分享著薯片,還聊起了各自的旅程。這場(chǎng)誤會(huì)不僅沒有引發(fā)不愉快,反而讓我們結(jié)識(shí)了彼此,讓原本平淡的旅途增添了一份溫暖與美好。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Tomyastonishment,Idiscoveredmyunopenedbagofchipsrestingsafelyinside.Inaninstant,astrongsenseofshockhitme,andIrealizedthatIhadmadeahugemistake.Ihadbeenwronglyblamingthisladyallalongandfeelingdissatisfiedwithheractionsinmyheart.Myfaceturnedredwithshameimmediately.Islowlyraisedmyhead,andwhenmyeyesmetthelady's,Ifeltextremelyembarrassed.Itookadeepbreathandsummonedupmycouragetosay,"I'mreallysorry.Ithoughtyouwereeatingmychipsbefore.Imisunderstoodyou."Afterthat,Irubbedmyhandsnervously,notdaringtolookherintheeye.14范文呈現(xiàn)"Noworries,"thewomansaidwithasmile.Therewasnoblameinhereyes,onlyunderstandingandtolerance."Isawyouweresoabsorbedinreading,andIthoughtsharingthechipswouldbeokay.Ishouldhaveaskedyoufirst,though."Herwordsmademefeelevenmoreashamed.Iquicklyhandedtheunopenedbagofchipstoherandsaidsincerely,"Let'ssharethemthistime.Iwastoonarrow-minded."Theladyaccepteditgladly.Wesharedthechipshappilyandchattedaboutourrespectivejourneys.Thismisunderstandingnotonlydidn'tcauseanyunpleasantnessbutalsobroughtuscloser,addingwarmthandbeautytotheotherwiseordinaryjourney.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Tomyutterastonishment,Iunearthedmyunopenedbagofchipsnestledsnuglywithinmybackpack.Awaveofshockcoursedthroughme,hittingmelikeaboltfromtheblue,astherealizationofmycolossalblunderdawned.Ihadunjustlyaccusedthiskind-heartedwoman,silentlyseethingwithdiscontentoverhersupposedactions.MycheeksflushedscarletwithshameasIslowlyliftedmygazetomeethers.Summoningeveryounceofcourage,Istammered,"I'mtrulysorry.Iwronglyassumedyouweremunchingonmychips.Itwasadreadfulmisunderstanding."Myhandsfidgetednervously,betrayingmydiscomfort,andIavertedmyeyes,unabletobeartheweightofhergaze.16升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)"Noworries,"thewomanrepliedwithawarmsmile,hereyesradiatingnothingbutunderstandingandcompassion."Observingyourdeepimmersioninthebook,Ithoughtsharingasnackmightbeapleasantgesture.Alas,Ishouldhavesoughtyourpermissionfirst."Herwords,farfromstinging,onlydeepenedmysenseofremorse.Withouthesitation,Iprofferedtheunopenedbagofchips,statingearnestly,"Let'ssharethemnow.Iwasbeingoverlyhastyandjudgmental."Thewomangraciouslyaccepted,andwesoonfoundourselvesengagedinadelightfulconversation,sharingtalesof
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