2025年華師大版必修1英語上冊階段測試試卷

…………○…………內(nèi)…………○…………裝…………○…………內(nèi)…………○…………裝…………○…………訂…………○…………線…………○…………※※請※※不※※要※※在※※裝※※訂※※線※※內(nèi)※※答※※題※※…………○…………外…………○…………裝…………○…………訂…………○…………線…………○…………第=page22頁，總=sectionpages22頁第=page11頁，總=sectionpages11頁2025年華師大版必修1英語上冊階段測試試卷394考試試卷考試范圍：全部知識點；考試時間：120分鐘學(xué)校：______姓名：______班級：______考號：______總分欄題號一二三四五六總分得分評卷人得分一、選擇題(共6題，共12分)1、Thegovernmenttrieditsbestto_____thepeople’sneeds,butthepeoplewerestillnot______.Infact,whatthegovernmentdidwasnot_______.A.satisfy;satisfied;satisfyingB.satisfy;satisfying;satisfiedC.satisfied;satisfied;satisfyingD.satisfying;satisfied;satisfied2、Thebasketballcoach,aswellashisteam,______nowfortheiroutstandingperformanceduringthematch.A.hasbeeninterviewedB.havebeeninterviewedC.isbeinginterviewedD.arcbeinginterviewed3、I’llshareastorywithyouthisclass,one________musiccantouchone’ssoulandchangeone’slife.A.thatB.whichC.whenD.where4、Mr.Greendrovehiscarslowlyuntilitcametothefreeway________thespeedlimitwas60milesanhour.A.whichB.whereC.thatD.when5、Manyexpertsthoughtthatthereisadefinite____betweencitizens’heartproblemsandtheirwaysoflife.A.consequenceB.connectionC.contactD.conscience6、Weprefertosayyesto_____ofsomeoneweknowandlike.A.warningsB.customsC.responsesD.requests評卷人得分二、提綱類作文(共8題，共16分)7、假定你是紅星中學(xué)的李華，你的英國朋友Peter熱愛體育運(yùn)動；他將作為交換生到你校學(xué)習(xí)一年。請你給他寫封郵件，主要內(nèi)容包括:

1.介紹你校體育課程及活動;

2.推薦一項中國傳統(tǒng)體育項目。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)；以使行文連貫。

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8、假如你是李華，你校英語俱樂部將于下周五下午3:00在二樓報告大廳舉辦舞會（prom）。你是服務(wù)志愿者，但因故不能按時參加，請你用英語給組織者M(jìn)r.White寫一封道歉信；內(nèi)容包括：

1.表示歉意。

2.解釋原因。

3.已將志愿者工作安排他人完成。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容；以使行文連貫。

DearMr.White；

I'mLiHua,volunteeroftheEnglishClub.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yourssincerely,LiHua9、假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)的學(xué)生李津。你在某網(wǎng)站的論壇上讀到一位名為Chris的外國學(xué)生發(fā)的帖子；

。

Chris

Australia

Anysuggestions?

PostedonMar.22nd,20189:00PM

It’stimetomakeadecision.I’mwonderingifIshouldgotoChinaforcollege.

It’stimetomakeadecision.I’mwonderingifIshouldgotoChinaforcollege.

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LiJin

China

ReplytoChris

PostedonMar.23rd,201810:00PM

Hi,Chris.

此處不能答題。

Hi,Chris.

此處不能答題。

得知他有意來中國的大學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)。請根據(jù)以下提示給Chris留言：

(1)鼓勵他來中國留學(xué)；

(2)說明來華留學(xué)的好處（如：加深對中國的了解；對個人發(fā)展的益處等）：

(3)表示愿意進(jìn)一步提供幫助。

注意：(1)詞數(shù)不少于100

(2)可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)；使內(nèi)容充實；行文連貫。

(3)開頭已給出；不計入總詞數(shù)。

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_________________________________________________________________10、假定你是李華，你的外國好友Eric將作為交換生到你市的一所高中學(xué)習(xí)。因擔(dān)心自己不能快速適應(yīng)這里的學(xué)校生活；特寫信向你求助，請就此給他寫封回信。要點如下：

1．樂意提供幫助；2．提出具體建議；3．希望能夠幫到對方。

注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；

2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)；以使行文連貫；

3．信的開頭及結(jié)尾已給出；不計入總詞數(shù)。

DearEric；

Ifeeldelightedtolearnthatyouarecomingtostudyinourcityasanexchangestudent.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yourssincerely，LiHua11、高中階段；學(xué)業(yè)繁重，為了保證學(xué)習(xí)時間，學(xué)校決定在高三取消體育課。但學(xué)生普遍認(rèn)為應(yīng)該勞逸結(jié)合，體育鍛煉在高三也是必不可少的?，F(xiàn)請你給校長寫一篇保留一節(jié)體育課的倡議信.。

注意：1.內(nèi)容包括：（1）取消體育課的弊端；

（2）說明課外活動和體育活動的必要性和益處；至少三點。

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)；以使行文連貫。

3.詞數(shù)100左右。

Dearheadmaster,

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Yourssincerely,

student12、南陽某旅行社招聘兼職英語導(dǎo)游。假如你是某中學(xué)學(xué)生李華；想在周末做兼職，在報紙上看到下面的招聘啟事后，決定用英語寫一封自薦信，內(nèi)容包括：1.自我介紹；2.應(yīng)聘優(yōu)勢；3.提出申請。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.開頭結(jié)尾已寫好；但不計入總詞數(shù)；

3.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)；以使行文連貫。

DearSri/Madam；

Ireadyouradvertisementinthenewspaperand_________________________________________________

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Yours,

LiHua13、根據(jù)題目所提出的具體要求；在答題卡上寫出一篇連貫完整的短文，詞數(shù)不少于60。

中國有多個傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日；假設(shè)你是李華，請根據(jù)以下提示，挑選一個傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日介紹給你的英國筆友Tom，并歡迎他來中國參加慶?；顒?。

提示:可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)；作文開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

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Activities

theLanternFestival

onthe15thdayofthefirstlunarmonth

gotothetemplefaireatstickyriceballs

theDragonBoatFestival

onthe5thdayofthefifthlunarmonth

takepartinthedragonboatraceeatzongzi

theMid-AutumnFestival

onthe15thdayoftheeighthlunarmonth

enjoythefullmooneatmooncakes

DearTom,

IamgladtoknowthatyouareinterestedinChinesetraditionalculturefromyourletter._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,LiHua14、假定你是李華；在中國傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日春節(jié)來臨之際，你有意邀請你校的交換生Joe到你家體驗包餃子。請你給他寫一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

1.時間；地點；2.交通路線；3.發(fā)出邀請。

注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)；以使行文連貫。

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________評卷人得分三、用單詞的適當(dāng)形式完成(共9題，共18分)15、閱讀下面材料，在空白處填入適當(dāng)?shù)膬?nèi)容（1個單詞）或括號內(nèi)單詞的正確形式。Theskinisanessentialpartofyourbodyandisitslargestorgan,____hascomplexfunctions.Whenyouget____(burn),givingtimelyfirstaidisveryimportant.Forfirstdegreeburns,placeburnsundercoolrunningwater.Removeanyclothesusingscissorsifnecessary,unlessthefabric____(stick)totheburntskin.Don’tapplyoil62.____theinjuredareas.16、【題文】Inourdailylife,wesometimescomeacrossanumberofcases________peoplesufferfromheartattacks.(用適當(dāng)?shù)脑~填空)17、【題文】Ienjoyedmystayinthelibrary_______IcouldreadvariousbooksIwasinterestedin.(用適當(dāng)?shù)脑~填空)18、【題文】Thecompanyhadabout20notebookcomputersbutonlyone-third________(use)regularly.Nowwehave60workingalldaylong.(所給詞的適當(dāng)形式填空)19、【題文】He________(suspect)ofstealingtheringandunderarrestatthepartylastnight.(所給詞的適當(dāng)形式填空)20、【題文】Istillremembertheday________Iwasadmittedtothekeymiddleschools.(用適當(dāng)?shù)脑~填空)21、【題文】Wealsoneedtoteachourchildrennottostandbysilentlywhileothers____________(hurt).(所給詞的適當(dāng)形式填空)22、【題文】—MayIhelpyou,Madam?

—Howterrible!Thethingsinmyshop________(steal)frequentlythesedays.(所給詞的適當(dāng)形式填空)23、【題文】Hetoldhisyoungersisterthathe___________(go)withher.(所給詞的適當(dāng)形式填空)評卷人得分四、其他(共4題，共12分)24、語法填空Anintelligentfertilizer-pesticidedistributor,____(assist)bytheBeiDouNavigationSatelliteSystemandbigdatatechnology,hasbeenworkinginthewheatfieldinHancunvillageinJiangducounty,eastChina’sJiangsuProvince.Self-drivingtractorsandunmannedfarmingvehicles____(base)ontheBDSsystemhavebeenusedtoexploreprecisionfarminginnorthwesternXinjiangUygurAutonomousRegion,northeasternHeilongjiangProvince,andatanautomatedfarmineasternJiangsuProvince.ByApril,2019,theBDSsystemhadservedmorethan50,000piecesofagriculturalmachinery,____(save)10percentoffuel.25、WendyWilson,extracaremanagerat60PenfoldStreet,oneofthefirstto____theproject,said:“Residentsreallywelcometheideaoftheprojectandthecreativesessions.Wearelookingforwardtothebenefitsandfuntheprojectcanbringtopeoplehere.”

Whatdotheunderlinedwords“embarkon”meaninparagraph7?。A．Improve.B．Oppose.C．Begin.D．Evaluate.26、PanamaPanamacouldbeagoodoptionforanyonetolivecheaply.ThecostoflivingisunderhalfofwhatitwouldcostintheU.S.at1,040foroneperson.Rentrunsapproximately

530permonthandfoodtakesupanother353,butoutsideofthatcostsareminimal.Thecountryhasamildclimateandoffersworld-classbeaches.

HowmuchisthecostoflivingintheUnitedStates?。A．Closeto1,090.B．Around750.</td></tr><tr><td>C攏廬Under

893.D．Above2,080.27、Manypeoplebelievethatworkingtothemaximumisthesecrettosuccess,butresearchhasfoundthatmoderation(適度)alsogetsresultsonthejob.InastudyledbyEllenLangerofHarvardUniversity,researchersaskedpeopletotranslatesentencesintoanewamade-uplanguage.Subjectswhopracticedthelanguagemoderatelybeforehandmadefewererrorsthanthosewhopracticedextensivelyornotatall.Highlevelsofknowledgecanmakepeopletooattachedtotraditionalwaysofviewingproblemsacrossfieldsthearts,sciences,andpolitics.Highconscientiousnessisrelatedtolowerjobperformance,especiallyinsimplejobswhereitdoesn’tpaytobeaperfectionist.Howlongwestayontheclockandhowwespendthattimeareundercarefulexaminationinmanyworkplaces.Theyoungbankerwhoeatslunchathisdeskisprobablyseenasa____,whilehiscolleagueswhochatoverarelaxedconference-roommealgetdirtylooksfromthecorneroffice.“Peoplefromculturesthatvaluerelationshipsmorethanoursdoesareshockedbythethoughtofeatingaloneinfrontofacomputer”,saysArtMarkman,aprofessorofpsychologyattheUniversityofTexas,Austin.Socialinteractionhasbeenshowntoliftmood(情緒)andgetpeoplethinkinginnewdirectionsandinwaysthatcouldhelpimproveanypost-luncheffort.Markmanalsopromotesoff-tasktime.“Partofbeingagoodthinkerisexperiencingthingsthatareseeminglyunrelatedtowhatyouareworkingonatthemomentbutgiveyoufreshideasaboutyourwork,”hesays.“Also,thereisalotofresearchshowingthatapositivemoodleadstohigherlevelsofproductivityandcreativity.So,whenpeopledothingstoincreasetheirlifesatisfaction,theyalsomakethemselvesmoreeffectiveatwork.”

Theunderlinedword“go-getter”inparagraph3referstosomeoneWho________.。A．isgoodathandlingpressureB．workshardtobecomesuccessfulC．a(chǎn)hasanaturaltalentforhisjob.D．getsonwellwithhisco-workers評卷人得分五、閱讀選擇(共2題，共16分)28、Perhaps,youareasmartpersonwithgoodknowledgeandcreativeideas,butwhenyoumovetoanewenvironmentorhavetoworkwithsomenewpeople,itisnotalwayseasyforthemtorecognizeyouorrespectyouimmediately.____Howcanyougetotherpeopletopayattentiontoyouandrespectyou?Becuriousandbewillingtolearnnewthings.Movingtoanewworkingenvironment,youmayneedtodealwithnewthingsorskills.____Insuchacase,peoplewhoaremorewillingtolearnnewthingscanbecomemoreflexibleandbeabletomeetnewrequirementsintheirjob.____Learningorworkinginanewenvironment,youneedtohaveagoodsenseofjudgementwhenjoiningadiscussionormakingadecision.Youshouldconsiderwhatisvirtuallyright,andlookforlong-termgoals,andnotbedistractedbysmallchoicesfortheshortterm.Beconfidentandmakeeyecontactwhentalkingtopeople.Whenyougooutandmeetpeople,itisimportanttolookconfident.Forexample,ifyouaregoingtoaninterview,butyoudon’tfeelconfident,whatcanyoudo?Beforeyouwalkin,thinktoyourself,“Iowntheroom.”____Remembertolookotherpeopleintheeye—it’sthekeytocreatingaconnectionwithpeople.Soon,youwillfeelasconfidentasyoulook.Setcleargoalsandlearn.Whenworkingtogetherwithothers,itisimportantthatyouhaveaclearvisionandaworkingplantoachieveit.Letpeopleknowwhatyoustandfor.Youneedtofindoutwhichideascanreallyunitepeopleandthenexpressthoseideasclearly.____.Behelpfultoothers.Whenworking,don’tfocusonwhatisyourworkandwhatisn’t.Afterdo-ingyourownwork,alwaysbereadytohelpothers.。A．Howcanyoubealeadersoon?B．Howcanyougetalongwithothers?C．Then,walkinholdingyourheadhighandsmile.D．Quiteoften,theydon’tbelongtoyourownfield.E．Remembernottojudgeapersonbyhisappearance.F．Also,treatyourteammembersrespectfullyasequals.G．Haveagoodsenseofjudgementonimportantaspects.29、Conflictisanunavoidablepartoflife.Sohowcanwesavemeaningfulrelationshipsafterafightwithourlovedones?____Ifyouarecurrentlystrugglingtoseekforgiveness,considerthesecrucialstepstoapologizeeffectively.Saythewords.Afterhoursofquarreling,manypeoplestruggletosummonupthecouragetosay“Iamsorry.”Tosomeitisalmostequaltoadmittingdefeat,andnoonelikestolose.____Instead,theymaybuyflowersorofferabackrub,convincedthatsurelythismustbeenough.Butisit?Wordsareactuallyquiteuseful.____Itiseasytothinkyouarethevictiminafight.Wetendtominimizeourownerrorswhileexaggeratingthemistakesofothers.Thisisthewaywerationalize(合理化)ouractionsinconflicts.Simplyput,wemakeexcuses.Butifearningforgivenessisyourultimategoal,thenattempttobelessdefensivethenexttimeyoufindyourselfinafight.Stopmakingexcusesforyourselfandyourbehaviorandownuptoyouractions.Askforthechancetomakeuporpayforyourmistakes.Thisgestureisevenmoreeffectiveifitcomesatsomepersonalcosttoyou.Sopayforthatbrokenwindowwithyourallowance,buyyoursisteranewpairofheadphonesafteraquarrel,oroffertohelpyourpartnerwithextrahouseworkafterarguments.____Apologiesdowork,butbemindfulthathowyouapologizealsomatters.____Whenyouneedmorethanit,extraworkisneededtodeveloptherelationship,likeseekingprofessionaladvicefromexperts.。A．Takeresponsibilityforyourownwrongdoing.B．Onecriticalwayisbylearninghowtoapologize.C．Manypeopletrytoavoidutteringthoselittlewords.D．Second,realactionsshouldcomeaftersweetwords.E．It’snecessarytoremembertoavoidfinanciallossesinafight.F．Intheend,youwillbefurtheralongintheforgivenessprocess.G．Andsometimesanapologyisnotenoughtorepairarelationship.評卷人得分六、根據(jù)句意填寫單詞(共1題，共10分)30、Thismorninghesaidthathe___________leaveforBeijingtomorrow.(用適當(dāng)?shù)脑~填空)參考答案一、選擇題(共6題，共12分)1、A【分析】【詳解】

考查動詞短語和形容詞詞義辨析。句意：政府努力滿足人們的需要，但是人們?nèi)匀桓械讲粷M意。事實上，政府所做的并不令人滿意。tryone’sbesttodosth盡力做某事，故第一空用動詞原形satisfy；形容詞satisfied意為“感到滿意的”，修飾人，satisfying意為“令人滿意的”，修飾物，第二空主語是people，指人，故用satisfied；第三空主語是主語從句，指物，故用satisfying。故選A項。2、C【分析】【詳解】

考查時態(tài)、主謂一致和被動語態(tài)。句意：這位籃球教練和他的球隊正在接受采訪，因為他們在比賽中表現(xiàn)出色。分析句意可知，根據(jù)句中now，謂語動詞用現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時形式；題干中主語thebasketballcoach后加aswellashisteam，謂語動詞單復(fù)數(shù)形式應(yīng)與thebasketballcoach保持一致；主語Thebasketballcoach和動詞interview之間是被動關(guān)系，謂語動詞應(yīng)用被動語態(tài)形式；綜上分析，該空應(yīng)該用現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時被動語態(tài)的單數(shù)形式isbeinginterviewed。故選C項。3、D【分析】【詳解】

考查定語從句。句意：我將與你分享一個故事，一個有一首曲子可以觸及你的靈魂，改變你的生活的故事。分析句子可知，空處引導(dǎo)定語從句，one指代上文提到的story，從句中作抽象地點狀語，用關(guān)系副詞where引導(dǎo)定語從句，故選D。4、B【分析】【詳解】

考查定語從句。句意：戈林先生慢慢地開著車，直到高速公路，那里的限速是每小時六十英里?！皌hespeedlimitwas60milesanhour”是一個定語從句，先行詞是thefreeway，在定語從句中作狀語，表地點，用關(guān)系副詞where，故選B。5、B【分析】【詳解】

考查名詞詞義辨析。句意：許多專家認(rèn)為，市民的心臟問題和他們的生活方式有著明確的聯(lián)系。A.consequence結(jié)果；B.connection關(guān)系、聯(lián)系；C.contact接觸；D.conscience良心。由“betweencitizens’heartproblemsandtheirwaysoflife”可知，市民的心臟問題和他們的生活方式有相關(guān)聯(lián)系。故選B項。6、D【分析】【詳解】

考查名詞詞義辨析。句意：我們喜歡答應(yīng)我們認(rèn)識和喜歡的人的要求。A.warnings警示；B.customs風(fēng)俗，習(xí)俗；C.responses答復(fù)；D.requests要求，請求。根據(jù)“sayyesto”和“someoneweknowandlike”可推知，是答應(yīng)認(rèn)識和喜歡的人的請求，requests符合句意。故選D。二、提綱類作文(共8題，共16分)7、略

【分析】【分析】

本書面表達(dá)是一篇提綱類寫作。要求以李華的名義用英語給英國朋友Peter寫一封郵件。

【詳解】

書信類作文。寫作提要為假定你是紅星中學(xué)的李華，你的英國朋友Peter熱愛體育運(yùn)動；他將作為交換生到你校學(xué)習(xí)一年。請你給他寫封郵件，主要內(nèi)容包括：1.介紹你校體育課程及活動；2.推薦一項中國傳統(tǒng)體育項目。我們所要做的就是用正確的英語把給出的要點表達(dá)出來。本作文中給出的要點比較簡略，故需要自由發(fā)揮的地方較多。需要注意不要偏離文章中心。寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合整個文章,不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。

【點睛】

范文內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，文章詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。作者在文中使用了較多的高級表達(dá)方式。如Besides,theschoolsportsmeetingisheldannually,whichstudentscantakepartinaccordingtotheirinterests.使用了定語從句；ChinesecalligraphyisthetreasureoftraditionalChineseculture,whichhasahistoryof5,000years.使用了定語從句；WhatIrecommendtoyoutolearnisChinesekungfu,atraditionalsportinChina.使用了名詞性從句；Practicingitregularlywillhelpyoustayfitinafantasticway.使用了動名詞作主語。另外文章思路清晰，層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色添彩?！窘馕觥緿earPeter,

I’mgladtohearthatyouwillcometoourschoolonaone-yearexchangeprogram.Sinceyouenjoysports,IwouldliketointroducethesportscoursesinourschoolaswellasaChinesetraditionalsport.Firstofall,foreachclassinourschool,therearetwotothreeperiodsofPEclasseveryweek.Basiccourses,includingplayingbasketballandrunning,areofferedtostudents.Besides,theschoolsportsmeetingisheldannually,whichstudentscantakepartinaccordingtotheirinterests.WhatIrecommendtoyoutolearnisChinesekungfu,atraditionalsportinChina.Practicingitregularlywillhelpyoustayfitinafantasticway.Lookingforwardtoyourarrival!Yours,LiHua8、略

【分析】【分析】

這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫作。

【詳解】

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本篇為一封信；假如你是李華，你校英語俱樂部將于下周五下午3:00在二樓報告大廳舉辦舞會（prom）。你是服務(wù)志愿者，但因故不能按時參加，請你用英語給組織者M(jìn)r.White寫一封道歉信；內(nèi)容包括：1.表示歉意；2.解釋原因；3.已將志愿者工作安排他人完成。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如：theEnglishclub（英語俱樂部），sincereapology（誠摯的歉意），beabsentfrom（缺席），prom（舞會）；fallill（生?。┑取?/p>

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句；注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第4步：連句成文；注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。

【點睛】

范文內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。作者在范文中使用了較多高級表達(dá)方式，如ThereasonwhyIcan’ttakepartinthepromisthatIsuddenlyfallill.運(yùn)用了表語從句；Isincerelyhopethatyoucanconsidermysituationandacceptmyapologies.運(yùn)用了賓語從句。全文中沒有中國式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色添彩?！窘馕觥緿earMr.Smith,

IamLiHua,volunteeroftheEnglishclub.I’mwritingthislettertoexpressmysincereapologytoyouforbeingabsentfromthepromtobeheldnextSaturday.NowIgiveyouanexplanation.

ThereasonwhyIcan’ttakepartinthepromisthatIsuddenlyfallill.Myparentssentmetohospital,andIhavetostaythereforaweek.Therefore,Ican’tattendtheprom.Asformyvolunteerwork,IhaveappointedmyclassmateTomtoserveasavolunteer.

Isincerelyhopethatyoucanconsidermysituationandacceptmyapologies.

Yours,LiHua9、略

【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，給某網(wǎng)站論壇上一位名為Chris的外國學(xué)生回帖留言。

第一步：根據(jù)提示可知，本文是一封電子郵件：某網(wǎng)站的論壇上讀到一位名為Chris的外國學(xué)生有意來中國的大學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)。要求根據(jù)提示給Chris留言。

內(nèi)容包括：(1)鼓勵他來中國留學(xué)；(2)說明來華留學(xué)的好處（如：加深對中國的了解；對個人發(fā)展的益處等）：(3)表示愿意進(jìn)一步提供幫助。

第二步：根據(jù)寫作要求確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如：做決定makedecision，應(yīng)該besupposedto,展現(xiàn)新面貌takeonanewlook，有益于benefit.

第三步：根據(jù)提示和關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句；注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成文；注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接和過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。

【亮點說明】

范文內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。作者在范文中使用了較多高級表達(dá)方式，如賓語從句thatyouarewonderingwhetheryoushouldcometoChinaforcollege,動名詞做主語StudyinginacollegeinChina.定語從句whichwillsurelybenefityoualot.全文中沒有中國式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的能力。另外，文章思路清晰，層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色添彩?！窘馕觥縃i,Christ,

HavingknownthatyouarewonderingwhetheryoushouldcometoChinaforcollege,I’dliketogiveyousomeadvice.

Inmyopinion,youshouldn’thesitatetomakethisdecision,youaresupposedtocometostudyinChinaassoonaspossible.StudyinginacollegeinChinaisagoodopportunityforyoutoimproveyourself,whichwillsurelybenefityoualot.

ComingtoChina,youwilllearnaboutitstradition,cultureandpeople.What’smore,Chinaisdevelopingveryfastnow,anditistakingonanewlook.Chinatakestheleadinmostareasintheworld.Mostimportantly,Chinaprovidesgreatjobopportunitiesforpeopleincludingforeigners.Thereforeaftergraduation,youmayfindajobhere.

Thisismyadviceforyou.PleaseletmeknowifIcanbeofanyfurtherhelp.10、略

【分析】【分析】

本文為提綱式作文；內(nèi)容為回復(fù)求助信，提出建議。

【詳解】

首先確定文章的主要要點，確定文章的時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱可用第二人稱。文章可分三段：首先表達(dá)對Eric的歡迎和樂意提供幫助；然后提出具體建議；最后希望能夠幫到對方。寫作時要注意態(tài)度誠懇；要點全面，表達(dá)正確，條理清晰。

【點睛】

本文運(yùn)用了較多從句，如：賓語從句Irecommendthatyoulearntheschool’srulesbyreadingitshandbookfirst.

狀語從句：Ifpossible,youmayaswellvisittheschoolinadvance,sothatyouwillknowtheschoolbetter.

it作形式主語的主語從句it’squitenecessarytocommunicatewithyourclassmatesandschoolmates,中。

定語從句whichenablesyoutomakemorenewfriends.倒裝句notonlycanyouimproveyourself.

此外，文章注意各層次之間的銜接：first，besides，what’smore，使文章很有條理。【解析】DearEric,

Ifeeldelightedtolearnthatyouarecomingtostudyinourcityasanexchangestudent.Asforhowtoadjustyourselftothenewschoollifeherequickly,I’dliketogiveyousomeadvice.First,Irecommendthatyoulearntheschool’srulesbyreadingitshandbookfirst.Ifpossible,youmayaswellvisittheschoolinadvance,sothatyouwillknowtheschoolbetter.Besides,it’squitenecessarytocommunicatewithyourclassmatesandschoolmates,whichenablesyoutomakemorenewfriends.What’smore,participatinginafter-classactivitiescanbeofgreathelptoo！Bydoingthis,notonlycanyouimproveyourselfbutyouwillgetyourselfinvolvedinthegroupquickly.Ihopeyouwillfindthesuggestionspracticalanddon’thesitatetoturntomeanytimeyouneedhelp.Lookingforwardtoyourcoming.

Yourssincerely,LiHua11、略

【分析】本文書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文；要求寫一封倡議信。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知；本篇是一封倡議信：高中階段，學(xué)業(yè)繁重，為了保證學(xué)習(xí)時間，學(xué)校決定在高三取消體育課。但學(xué)生普遍認(rèn)為應(yīng)該勞逸結(jié)合，體育鍛煉在高三也是必不可少的?，F(xiàn)請你給校長寫一篇保留一節(jié)體育課的倡議信.。注意：1.內(nèi)容包括：（1）取消體育課的弊端；（2）說明課外活動和體育活動的必要性和益處，至少三點。2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。3.詞數(shù)100左右。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求確定關(guān)鍵詞，如：Itisknownthat（眾所周知）；canceloursportsclass（取消我們的體育課）；thecollegeentranceexam（高考）；Inadditionto（除了之外）；Lastbutnotleast（最后但并不是最不重要的）等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句；注意主謂一致和時態(tài)語態(tài)問題。

第4步：連句成文；注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。

本文內(nèi)容完整；語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。另外全文中沒有中國式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的能力。

【亮點說明】

本文是一封倡議信，格式正確，內(nèi)容符合要求，文章結(jié)構(gòu)布局合理，文找那個使用高級詞匯和句子。ItisknownthatourschoolintendstocanceloursportsclasswhenweareinGrade3.主語從句和when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句完美結(jié)合；Teachersandparentsmayagree,forthereisonlyoneyearleftforustotakethecollegeentranceexam.此句中for是一個并列連詞；tobewellpreparedforthefinalexam,itisnecessarythatseniorstudentsattachimportancetotakeexerciseandkeephealthy.動詞不定式一般式的被動式做目的狀語；另外，However,Firstofall,Besides,Inadditionto，Lastbutnotleast,Inanutshell,等的運(yùn)用為文章增色添彩。【解析】Dearheadmaster,

ItisknownthatourschoolintendstocanceloursportsclasswhenweareinGrade3.Teachersandparentsmayagree,forthereisonlyoneyearleftforustotakethecollegeentranceexam.However,westudentsholdtheviewthatweshouldcombineworkandrest.

Firstofall,supposingthereisnosportsclass,wewillhavenotimetotakeexercise,whichwillbadlyinfluenceourbodyhealth.Besides,activelytakingpartinsportsactivitieswillnotonlymakeourschoollifecolorful,butalsoimproveourlearning.Inadditiontobuildingourbodiesandenrichingourknowledge,theactivitiesalsofreeourselvesfromtheheavyworkofstudy.Lastbutnotleast,tobewellpreparedforthefinalexam,itisnecessarythatseniorstudentsattachimportancetotakeexerciseandkeephealthy.

Inanutshell,itisstronglyrecommendedthatourschoolarrangeonesportsclassaweekforus.Lookingforwardtoyouragreement.Thankyouverymuch.

Yourssincerely,

student12、略

【分析】試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文；內(nèi)容是用英語寫一封自薦信，李華想在周末做兼職，在報紙上看到南陽某旅行社招聘兼職英語導(dǎo)游的招聘啟事。內(nèi)容包括：1.自我介紹；2.應(yīng)聘優(yōu)勢；3.提出申請。本作文中只是給了基本的背景信息和內(nèi)容，具體內(nèi)容需要自己思考和組織，自己組織時，需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)。寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。

【亮點說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如applyfor，communicatewith，befamiliarwith，growup；還運(yùn)用句型：IcanspeakEnglishfluentlyandhavenodifficultycommunicatingwithforeigners.這句運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞作賓語從句；I’malwaysreadytodowhateverIcantohelpothers.這句話運(yùn)用了賓語從句等。并注意了句子的銜接如and，because，besides等等。【解析】DearSri/Madam,

IreadyouradvertisementinthenewspaperandIwouldliketoapplyforthepositionoftouristguide.

Iamaboyof19andI’mstudyinginamiddleschoolinNanyang.IcanspeakEnglishfluentlyandhavenodifficultycommunicatingwithforeigners.I’mfamiliarwithNanyangbecauseIwasbornandgrewupinNanyang.IhavevisitedalmostalltheplacesofinterestinNanyang.Besides,Iameasygoingandlovemakingfriends.I’malwaysreadytodowhateverIcantohelpothers.

Iwouldwelcometheopportunitytomeetwithyoutofurtherdiscussmyqualificationsandyourneeds.Thankyouforyourtimeandconsi