高三第一次模擬考試英語試題讀后續(xù)寫-森林絕境中的堅(jiān)守與希望+講義

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。Lastyear,duringthesummerbreak,myfriendsandIdecidedtogoforawalkintheforest.Theforesthadpaths,andwedecidedthatwewouldhikealongthepathsandmeetatacentralpointtohaveadrinklater.Thewholeteamhadseveralgroupsandwehadplannedonmeetingwiththerestoftheteamafterthreehours.Ihadalighter,apartiallychargedphone,andabottleofwater.Wecontinuedonourwaytowardsthedeeperpartoftheforestuntilwewerefarfromanyrecognizabletrail.Aftertwohours,wewereinthedeepestpartoftheforest,andwecouldnottraceourotherfriends.Allofasudden,abearcamerushingalongourpath,andweallrunindifferentdirections.Afterrunningforaboutfiveminutes,Istoodaloneinabush.IhadnoclueaboutmysurroundingsasIhadneverbeen.therebefore.Ishoutedatmyfriends’namesloudly,butallwasinvain:therewasnoreply,andthewholeplacewassilent.IwasconfusedandfeltlikecryingasIrealizedIwasalonewithnothingtoprotectmyself.Withalotoffear,ItriedtotracethepartwhereIhadcomefrom,butallwasuseless:lwaslost.AsIwalkedalongthepathtryingtolocatemyfriends,IrealizedthatIwastired,andnothingwaslookingfamiliar.Iwasoutoffood,water,andbarelyhadanybatteryinmyphone.Idecidedtowalkthroughthebushesasthetreeshadgrownsoclosetogether.Isqueezedmyselfbetweenthelittletrees.Aftersomethirtyminutes,itstartedrainingheavily.ThoughIhadheavyclothing,IwasrainedonuntilIwassoakedup.IstartedfreezingandprayingtotheGodforprotectionanddirectionoutoftheforest.注意;1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好;Withdarknessapproaching,Itriedtofigureoutvariouswaysofmakingasignaltomycolleagues.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Whilesittingdownandwarmingmyselfaroundthefire,Iheardsomedistantnoise.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意：去年暑假，“我”和朋友們?nèi)ド滞讲?，?jì)劃三小時(shí)后在中心點(diǎn)會(huì)合。深入森林兩小時(shí)后，大家走散，“我”還遭遇了一頭熊，驚慌逃竄后迷失方向。此時(shí)“我”又累又餓，手機(jī)沒電，食物和水也耗盡，接著又遭遇大雨，全身濕透，寒冷無比，只能祈禱上帝指引出路。伏筆以及回應(yīng)伏筆1：“我”有一個(gè)打火機(jī)，為后文點(diǎn)火發(fā)信號(hào)埋下伏筆。伏筆2：森林有路徑，暗示“我”試圖循徑找朋友，卻無果迷路。伏筆3：“我”大聲呼喊朋友名字，沒有回應(yīng)，突出“我”的孤立無援。伏筆4：“我”手機(jī)電量不足，解釋后續(xù)無法依靠手機(jī)求救。伏筆5：攜帶的水喝完，食物也沒了，加劇“我”的困境。續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)：情感線：從極度恐懼、絕望，到燃起希望，最后欣喜若狂。故事線：第一段寫“我”利用打火機(jī)點(diǎn)燃樹枝發(fā)信號(hào)，等待救援。第二段寫聽到遠(yuǎn)處聲響，發(fā)現(xiàn)是救援人員和朋友，最終脫險(xiǎn)。主旨升華句：Inthefaceofdifficulties,hopeislikeabeamoflightthatcanleadusoutofthedarkness.（在困境面前，希望就像一束光，能引領(lǐng)我們走出黑暗。）Whenweareonthevergeofgivingup,perseverancegivesusthestrengthtomoveforward.（當(dāng)我們?yōu)l臨放棄時(shí)，毅力給予我們前行的力量。）Sometimes,themostdifficultmomentsarealsothetimeswhenwegrowthemost.（有時(shí)候，最艱難的時(shí)刻也是我們成長最多的時(shí)刻。）Itisinthestrugglethatwetrulyunderstandthevalueoflifeandfriendship.（正是在掙扎中，我們才真正理解生命和友誼的價(jià)值。）Neverlosehope,becauseyouneverknowwhenamiraclemighthappen.（永遠(yuǎn)不要失去希望，因?yàn)槟阌肋h(yuǎn)不知道奇跡何時(shí)會(huì)降臨。）寫作示范1：Withdarknessapproaching,Itriedtofigureoutvariouswaysofmakingasignaltomycolleagues.RememberingthelighterIhad,Iquicklygatheredsomedrybranchesandleaves.Withtremblinghands,Imanagedtostrikethelighterandignitedthepile.Thebrightflamesleapedup,lightingupthesurroundingarea.Ihopedthatthefirewouldcatchmyfriends’attentionandthattheywouldcometofindme.Standingbythefire,Ifeltaglimmerofhopeinthemidstofmydespair.Whilesittingdownandwarmingmyselfaroundthefire,Iheardsomedistantnoise.Myheartleapedwithexcitement.Coulditbemyfriends?IstoodupandshoutedasloudlyasIcould.Thenoisegrewlouderandlouder,andsoonIsawthefaintfiguresofpeopleapproaching.Tomygreatrelief,itwastherescueteamandmyfriends!Theyhadbeensearchingformeallthistime.TearsofjoystreameddownmyfaceasIrushedtowardsthem.IknewthatIhadsurvivedthisterrifyingordeal,anditwasamomentIwouldneverforget.寫作示范二：Withdarknessapproaching,Itriedtofigureoutvariouswaysofmakingasignaltomycolleagues.Irummagedthroughmypocketsandclutchedthelightertightly,asifitweremyonlylifeline.Scanningthearea,Ispottedasmallclearingwherethetreeswerelessdense.Hastily,IcollectedeverydrytwigandleafIcouldfind.Myhandswereshakinguncontrollably,butIforcedmyselftofocus.Afterseveralattempts,thelightersparked,andasmallfirebegantocrackle.Thewarmglowagainsttheencroachingdarknessgavemeashredofcomfort.IsatascloseasIdared,prayingthatthesmokeandlightwouldguidemyfriendstome.Whilesittingdownandwarmingmyselfaroundthefire,Iheardsomedistantnoise.Instantly,Ifroze,myearsstrainingtoidentifythesound.Wasitthewindplayingtricksonme,orcoulditreallybesomeonecoming?Myheartpoundedinmychestlikeadrum.Istoodupslowly,notdaringtomakeasound.Then,faintlybutunmistakably,Iheardvoicescallingmyname.Itwaslikemusictomyears.Iyelledbackwithallmymight,myvoicehoarsebutfilledwithjoy.Momentslater,thesilhouettesofmyfriendsandtherescueteamemergedfromthebushes.ReliefwashedovermeinwavesasIrantowardsthem,tearsblurringmyvision.Thisharrowingexperiencehadtaughtmethetruemeaningofnevergivinguphope.寫作示范三：

Withdarknessapproaching,Itriedtofigureoutvariouswaysofmakingasignaltomycolleagues.Panicthreatenedtooverwhelmme,butItookadeepbreathandrememberedthelighter.Istumbledaround,searchingforanythingthatwouldburneasily.Finally,Icameacrossapileofdeadleavesandbrokenbranchesnearalargetree.Carefully,Iarrangedthemintoamakeshiftpyre.Withsweatypalms,Iflickedthelighter,andafteranerve-wrackingsecond,aflameburstforth.Thefiregrewsteadily,castinganorangeglowthatseemedtopiercethroughthethickforest.Ihuddledclose,watchingtheflamesdance,andhopedagainsthopethatmysignalwouldbeseen.Whilesittingdownandwarmingmyselfaroundthefire,Iheardsomedistantnoise.Mybodytensed,andIheldmybreath.Couldthisbetheendofmynightmare?Ilistenedintently,andthenoisegrewlouderandmoredistinct.Voices,shoutingmyname!Withouthesitation,Isprangtomyfeetandscreamedback.Icouldseethebobbingflashlightsnow,likestarsintheforest.Asthefiguresdrewnearer,Irecognizedmyfriendsandthekindfacesoftherescueteam.AsobofreliefescapedmylipsasIwasenvelopedinhugs.Thisexperiencehadnotonlytestedmysurvivalskillsbutalsoreaffirmedthepoweroffriendshipandhopeinthedarkestoftimes.參考答案Withdarknessapproaching,Itriedtofigureoutvariouswaysofmakingasignaltomycolleagues.Aftermanyvaintrials,itoccurredtomethatIhadalighterwithme.Iwaswildwithjoyanddecidedtobuildasignalfirebycollectingleavesandlightingthemupformyfriendstoseethefire.Althoughithad