人教版八年級(jí)下冊(cè)英語(yǔ) Unit 9 Have you ever been to a museum？滿分話題作文范文與解析 學(xué)案

第第頁(yè)人教版八年級(jí)下冊(cè)英語(yǔ)Unit9Haveyoueverbeentoamuseum？滿分話題作文范文與解析學(xué)案1．請(qǐng)以“MytriptoKunming”為題，根據(jù)以下要求與提示，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文，記述你的一次旅行。要求：1.短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何真實(shí)人名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分；2.不少于80詞。提示：1.Wheredidyougo?2.Whatdidyoudothere?3.Howdidyoufeelaboutthetrip?MytriptoKunming【答案】例文MytriptoKunmingIwenttoKunmingwithmyparentslastsummer.Wewenttherebytrain.WespentthreedaysinKunming.Itwasreallyabeautifulplace.WevisitedtheStoneForests,theWestMountain,theFlowerMarketandsoon.Also,wewenttotheNationalVillage,wheretherewerealotofnationalperformances.Someweresinging,someweredancing.Thesingingwasverypleasantandthedancewasalsoveryexciting.Wetooklotsofphotosthere.WealsotastedtheCrossingBridgeRiceNoodles.WereallyhadagoodtimeandIwouldneverforgetit.WhatahappytripinKunming!【解析】【詳解】1.

題干解讀：本題屬于話題作文，要求以“MytriptoKunming”標(biāo)題，根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容記述一次你的旅行。寫作時(shí)要緊扣提示內(nèi)容并進(jìn)行適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。適當(dāng)使用副詞和連詞等增加亮點(diǎn)。寫好時(shí)，再閱讀一遍，減少語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，不要犯單詞拼寫上的錯(cuò)誤。2.

例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的例文。例文緊扣題目要求，開篇點(diǎn)題，通過(guò)回答提示中的三個(gè)問(wèn)題記述了自己去昆明的旅行。例文簡(jiǎn)明扼要，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)到位。3.

高分亮點(diǎn)：?jiǎn)卧~和短語(yǔ)：bytrain；spend；also；andsoon；alotof；takelotsofphotos；haveagoodtime。句型：where引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句；感嘆句。2．假如你叫李華，你的朋友Ben想去旅游，但又不知道去哪里，于是給你寫信征求意見(jiàn)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示給Ben寫一封回信，為他推薦你曾經(jīng)去過(guò)的英國(guó)倫敦。詞數(shù)80左右，內(nèi)容如下：1．曾經(jīng)和父母一起去倫敦旅行；2．建議乘飛機(jī)去；3．倫敦是一個(gè)非常棒的地方。它以其建筑物而著稱，那里雨水較多，所以別忘了帶上雨具；在城市中心有五個(gè)公園，我最喜歡的公園是Hamleys，它又是世界上最大的玩具商城，在那里你可以買到你喜歡的任何東西?！敬鸢浮緿earBen，Thanksforyourletter.IhavebeentoLondonwithmyparents.Ithinkyou'dbettertakeaplane,becauseitisfarawayfromthecitythatwelivein.Andyoucanenjoytheflight.Londonisfamousformanythings.Touristscomefromallovertheworldtovisititsfamousbuildings.IfyougotoLondon,don'tforgettotakeyourumbrellawithyou,becauseit'salwaysrainythere.Therearefiveparksinthecitycenter.MyfavoriteplaceisHamleys,thebiggesttoyshopintheworld.Youcanbuywhateveryoulikehere.Ihopeyoucanhaveagoodtrip.Yourstruly，LiHua【解析】【詳解】這是一篇書信類提綱作文，相關(guān)話題是旅游計(jì)劃。所給要點(diǎn)比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。因?yàn)槭峭扑]去倫敦，要重點(diǎn)介紹要點(diǎn)3的相關(guān)內(nèi)容。寫作時(shí)不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并需要適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)來(lái)描述，另外還要用到現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)態(tài)，需要注意時(shí)態(tài)與時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。還要注意書信的格式。寫作中要適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。用到的詞組有havebeento,hadbetterdo,befamousfor,if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句以及Therebe句型等。3．你到過(guò)什么地方？你對(duì)它有什么深刻的印象？請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文來(lái)介紹你游歷過(guò)的城市或景點(diǎn)。80詞左右。要點(diǎn)提示：1.Haveyoubeentherebefore?2.Whydoyoulikethisplace?3.Whatdoyouthinkofthepeoplethere?____________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】HaveyoueverbeentoWuhan?Ihavebeenthereseveraltimes.Ithinkit'sreallyabeautifulcity.IfellinlovewithitwhenIfirsttraveledthere.Ithasmanyniceplaces.Thetrafficisfine.Andthepeoplearefriendly.Therearesomebeautifulparks.Inthezoo,youcanseemanykindsofanimals.Youcaneasilybuywhatyouwant,becausetherearesupermarketseverywhere.Busesandtaxiscantakeyouwhereyouwanttogo.Thedriversarepolite.Youwillfeelcomfortable.PleasetraveltoWuhan.Iwouldliketobeyourtourguide.【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文，介紹我游歷過(guò)的城市或景點(diǎn)?！驹斀狻拷Y(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱為第一，二人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：Ihavebeen……，Thetrafficis……，Thereare……，Iwouldliketo……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系?！军c(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開頭介紹了我去過(guò)武漢幾次，接下來(lái)介紹我喜歡武漢的原因，最后指出我對(duì)武漢的看法。此處fallinlovewith,manykindsof,wouldliketo等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。4．假如你是李華，你的美國(guó)筆友Lucy想了解有關(guān)你故鄉(xiāng)的一些情況。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的提示，用英文給她寫一封郵件，做相關(guān)介紹。要點(diǎn)提示：1.故鄉(xiāng)的名稱及地理位置；2.最佳旅游季節(jié)及值得參觀的景點(diǎn)；3.你在故鄉(xiāng)居住了多長(zhǎng)時(shí)間；4.希望故鄉(xiāng)變得更美好。要求：1.所寫內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括所給要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息；3.詞數(shù)：100詞左右。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文DearLucy,ThisisLiHua.I'dliketotellyousomethingaboutmyhometown.MyhometownisChongqing,whichisinthesouthwestofChina.It’sabeautifulplace.Themostsuitableseasonfortravelinginmyhometownisspring.Therearemanykindsofflowersandtheweatherisverycool.ThemostfamousscenicspotinmyhometownistheChangjiangRopeway.Manytouristscometovisittheplaceeveryyear.Theytakealotofpicturesassouvenirs.Ihavelivedinmyhometownfortenyears.

Ilovemyhometownverymuch.Ihopemyhometownwillbecomemoreandmorebeautiful.Welcometoourhometown.Yours,LiHua【解析】【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于記敘文寫作，但寫作時(shí)要按郵件格式寫。以李華的身份給你的筆友Lucy介紹一下你的故鄉(xiāng)。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)該用第一人稱來(lái)敘述故鄉(xiāng)的情況；時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主；首先介紹故鄉(xiāng)的名稱及地理位置；然后介紹最佳旅游季節(jié)及值得參觀的景點(diǎn)；最后介紹自己在故鄉(xiāng)居住的時(shí)間及對(duì)故鄉(xiāng)的希望，同時(shí)邀請(qǐng)Lucy來(lái)自己的故鄉(xiāng)旅游。5．你校圍繞“愛(ài)家鄉(xiāng)，說(shuō)特色”進(jìn)行了討論。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表信息，寫一篇不少于80詞的短文。開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。ThebestNameReasonStoreXinmate你可以很便宜地買到衣服MovietheaterNewCenturyTheater有最舒服的座位和最好的服務(wù)SchoolXinhuaHighSchool有最有才能的老師和最大的校園(campus)Radiostation97.0FM它播放最優(yōu)美的音樂(lè)Yesterdayourschoolhadabigdiscussionaboutwhichplacewethinkisthemostspecialinourhometown.Herearetheresults.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:Yesterdayourschoolhadabigdiscussionaboutwhichplacewethinkisthemostspecialinourhometown.Herearetheresults.ThebestclothesstoreisXinmate.Youcanbuyclothesverycheaplythere.ThebestmovietheaterisNewCenturyTheater.Ithasthemostcomfortableseatsandthebestservice.ThebestschoolisXinhuaHighSchool.Ithasthebiggestcampusandthemosttalentedteachers.Thebestradiostationis97.0FM,anditplaysthemostbeautifulsongs.Ifyoucometoourhometown,I’msurethatyouwillhaveawonderfultime.【解析】【詳解】1.題干解讀：這是一篇材料作文，根據(jù)表格所給提示信息，介紹家鄉(xiāng)最好的商店、電影院、學(xué)校和廣播站，以及說(shuō)明原因。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，主要采用第三人稱介紹家鄉(xiāng)的特色地方。承接文章的開頭，引起下文；第二段分別介紹最好的商店、電影院、學(xué)校和廣播站的名字，并說(shuō)明原因；最后一段向大家發(fā)出邀請(qǐng)來(lái)家鄉(xiāng)參觀?？勺杂砂l(fā)揮，保證條理清晰。6．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下信息，寫一篇文章介紹一下大理。1.位于云南省西部。2.大理因其風(fēng)、花、雪、月而出名。除此之外，大理的蒼山、洱海以及崇圣寺三塔(ThreePagodasTemples)也很有名氣。3.崇圣寺三塔有1000多年的歷史，已成為大理的象征；蒼山常年被雪覆蓋(cap)；洱海是云南省最大的淡水湖之一，其形狀真的像一個(gè)耳朵。4.大理三分之一以上居民是白族，他們有自己的特色美食(如乳扇milkfan)及服裝。HaveyoueverbeentoDali?It’sabeautifulplacetohavefunforallkindsofpeople.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】HaveyoueverbeentoDali?It’sabeautifulplacetohavefunforallkindsofpeople.It’sinthewestofYunnanProvince.It’sfamousforitswind,flowers,snowandmoon.Besidesthese,CangshanMountain,ErhaiLake,andThreePagodasTemplesarefamous,too.ThreePagodasTempleshavebeensymbolsofDali.Thethreepagodashaveahistoryofmorethan1,000years.CangshanMountainiscappedwithsnowallyearround.It’sunbelievablethatErhaiLakeisreallylikeanear.It’soneofthebiggestfreshwaterlakesinYunnanProvince.InDalimorethanthreequartersofthepopulationareBainationality.Theyhavetheirownspecialfood,likemilkfan.Theirdressisveryunusual,too.Theysinganddanceinnationalclotheswhenfestivalscome.InDali,mountainsarebeautiful,waterisbeautifulandthepeoplearemorebeautiful.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇材料作文，根據(jù)所提供的信息，寫一篇介紹大理的文章。作文要從地理位置、自然風(fēng)貌、名勝古跡、悠久的歷史、民族、美食文化等方面進(jìn)行描述。但切記不能對(duì)漢語(yǔ)進(jìn)行簡(jiǎn)單地翻譯，只能根據(jù)漢語(yǔ)提示，選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~組和句式去寫作，用到的詞組有：inthewestof,befamousfor,CangshanMountain,ErhaiLake,ThreePagodasTemples,morethan,becappedwithsnow,allyearround,threequartersof,oneofthe+形容詞的最高級(jí)+名詞的復(fù)數(shù)形式。時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。另外，寫作時(shí)，還需注意語(yǔ)句間的銜接，使文意連貫，表達(dá)流暢。7．根據(jù)提示信息記敘Linda去曼谷（Bangkok）游玩的經(jīng)歷：曼谷位于泰國(guó)南部，風(fēng)景秀麗；人口大約1200萬(wàn)，是泰國(guó)首都（capital）和最大城市；市內(nèi)寺廟眾多，最著名的是鄭王寺（ZhengwangTemple）；飲食資源豐富，各種中西方美食應(yīng)有盡有；各地都方便購(gòu)物，商家一般會(huì)簡(jiǎn)單中文和英語(yǔ)。要求：1.不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名；2.所給提示信息至少使用三條；3.詞數(shù)：100詞左右。（開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）Hi,I’mLinda.ItookaholidayinBangkoklastmonthandIhadaverygoodtimethere.LetmetellyousomethingaboutBangkokIknow._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Hi,I’mLinda.ItookaholidayinBangkoklastmonthandIhadaverygoodtimethere.LetmetellyousomethingaboutBangkokIknow.BangkokislocatedinthesouthofThailandwithbeautifulscenery.Withapopulationofabout12million,itisthecapitalandlargestcityofThailand.Therearemanytemplesinthecity,themostfamousofwhichisZhengwangtemple.Thefoodresourceshereareveryrich,wecantasteallkindsofChineseandWesternfood.What’smore,shoppingisconvenientalloverthecountry,andbusinessesgenerallyspeaksimpleChineseandEnglish.【解析】【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文，要求根據(jù)題干中信息介紹曼谷這座城市，包括地理位置、人口及城市規(guī)模、風(fēng)景名勝、飲食以及購(gòu)物等。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文以第三人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，從各方面介紹曼谷的基本信息，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題；寫作時(shí)需涵蓋題目要點(diǎn)，表達(dá)上要文辭達(dá)意，使讀者一目了然。8．假設(shè)你是劉華，你的美國(guó)筆友Mary計(jì)劃下個(gè)月來(lái)你所在的城市旅游，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示給她寫一封電子郵件。寫作提示：1.對(duì)本地的名勝古跡作簡(jiǎn)單介紹；2.觀看有名的京??；3.住宿安排及當(dāng)?shù)靥鞖馇闆r。寫作要求：1.語(yǔ)句通順，條理清晰，詳略得當(dāng)，書寫工整；2.100詞左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearMary,I'mveryhappytoknowthatyouarecomingtoourcityforatrip.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.Yours,LiuHua【答案】Onepossibleversion:DearMary,I'mveryhappytoknowthatyouarecomingtoourcityforatrip.TherearesomefamousplacesinourcitythatIwouldliketoshowyouaround.Buttheoneyoushouldn'tmissisDongyongPark.ItwasnamedafteramancalledDongYong.Inrecentyears,ithasattractedmanyvisitors.It'sworthvisiting.Besides,IknowyouareafanofChineseopera,soIwilltakeyoutowatchsomefamousBeijingOpera.Whenyoucomehere,youcanliveinmyhouse.Myparentsareveryfriendlyandthey'llcooksomeChinesedishesforyou.It'sgettingcolder,soIsuggestthatyouwearwarmclothes.I'msureyouwillenjoyyourvisithere.Hopetoseeyousoon!Yours,LiuHua【解析】【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇書信作文。題目要求向即將來(lái)劉華城市的美國(guó)筆友Mary寫封郵件，內(nèi)容是介紹一下城市的名勝古跡，京劇以及住宿、天氣等情況。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文可以分為三段。第一段主要表達(dá)對(duì)于Mary的到來(lái)的心情；第二段具體寫劉華所在城市的特色以及注意事項(xiàng)；第三段主要表達(dá)期待對(duì)方到來(lái)的心情。人稱主要采用第一人稱和第三人稱，時(shí)態(tài)主要采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)。準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，內(nèi)容要充實(shí)，句子要通順。9．假如你叫李華，住在天津。你的英國(guó)朋友David來(lái)信談到了他所居住的城市，并希望了解你的家鄉(xiāng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)用英語(yǔ)寫一封回信介紹天津的情況并歡迎他到天津來(lái)玩。1.天津位于北京的東南部，是我國(guó)最大的城市之一，有六百年的悠久歷史。同時(shí)，也新建了很多現(xiàn)代建筑。2.天津是個(gè)美麗的城市，最受歡迎的景點(diǎn)是海河和意式風(fēng)情街。很多游客喜歡乘船游覽海河或到意式風(fēng)情街就餐。3.空氣污染、交通擁擠是天津主要的問(wèn)題。4.天津人民正努力使天津變得更美好。參考詞匯：海河：theHaiheRiver；意式風(fēng)情街：ItalianStyleStreet；空氣污染：airpollution_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：DearDavid,I’mmorethanhappytoreceiveyourlettertalkingaboutyourbeautifulhometown.Now,I’dliketotellyousomethingaboutmyhometown,Tianjin.Tianjinlies