讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)+共患難：落基山的救援與團(tuán)聚+講義 高三下學(xué)期開(kāi)學(xué)考試英語(yǔ)試題

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Howfarwouldyougotohelpafriend?JeremySavage,aged17,andIanMarshall,aged16,bothfromCanada,hadtheirfriendshiptestedtothelimitonarecenttriptotheRockyMountainswiththeirparents.OnSaturdaymorning,thetwoboysdecidedtoclimbCathedralMountainbythemselveswhiletheirparentsrelaxedatthecampsite.Afterthreehours,theyreachedthetopandenjoyedthebeautifulviewfromthemountaintop.However,troublebeganwhentheystartedtheclimbdown.Ononeverydangerouspartofthemountain,Ianfellthreemetersoffthesideofthepath.JeremyclimbeddowntowhereIanwasandfoundhimbadlyinjuredandnotabletomovethen.Jeremyhadtodecidewhattodo.Heneededhelpbuthedidnotwanttoleavehisfriend.HecleanedthedirtandbloodfromIan’sfaceandhands,andthentriedtohelpIanstandup,butIan’srightlegwashurtingtoomuch.Withincrediblecalmnessandhisformerexperienceinthemountain,JeremythengaveIanhisfoodandwaterandlethimlieonhisjacket.Theyhadtowaitandhopethathelpwouldcome.Whiletheywaitedforhelp,JeremyusedhisjacketandanextrashirttokeepIanwarmandtheyrestedtogether.Sensinghisfriend’spainandanxiety,Jeremygentlycomfortedhimandgavehimconstantencouragementinadeterminedtone.Meanwhile,asdarknessstartedtofall,theirparentsbackatthecampsitebecameveryworriedthattheboyshadnotreturned.Desperatetearswellingupintheeyes,themothersfranticallyprayedtoGodfortheirsons’safety.Theygotintouchwithparkworkersandbegansearchingfortheboys.Soonmorethan20peoplewerelookingforthemonCathedralMountain.注意：1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Astheeveninggrewdarkerandthetemperaturedropped,IantoldJeremytoleavehimandgobacktotheirparents.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Finally,afterfourlongandtiringhours’climbingdown,theycameacrosstheirparents.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意17歲的杰里米?薩維奇和16歲的伊恩?馬歇爾來(lái)自加拿大，在與父母前往落基山的旅行中，兩人獨(dú)自攀登大教堂山。登頂后下山時(shí)，伊恩在危險(xiǎn)路段失足墜落受傷，無(wú)法行動(dòng)。杰里米一邊照顧伊恩，用自己的衣物為其保暖，給予食物和水，一邊等待救援。與此同時(shí)，天色漸暗，他們未歸，父母十分擔(dān)憂，聯(lián)系公園工作人員展開(kāi)搜尋。故事山分析開(kāi)端：杰里米和伊恩獨(dú)自攀登大教堂山，成功登頂。發(fā)展：下山途中伊恩受傷，杰里米照顧他并等待救援，父母在營(yíng)地因孩子未歸而聯(lián)系公園工作人員搜尋。高潮：天色越來(lái)越暗，溫度下降，伊恩和杰里米面臨困境，救援正在緊張進(jìn)行。結(jié)局（待續(xù)寫(xiě)完成）：預(yù)計(jì)是兩人獲救，與父母團(tuán)聚，凸顯友情與救援的力量。伏筆以及在續(xù)寫(xiě)中的回應(yīng)伏筆：杰里米有在山中的經(jīng)驗(yàn)?；貞?yīng)：在等待救援過(guò)程中，他憑借經(jīng)驗(yàn)更好地照顧伊恩，比如用衣物保暖、處理傷口等，在后續(xù)下山時(shí)，也能憑借經(jīng)驗(yàn)選擇更安全的路線。伏筆：父母在營(yíng)地焦急等待并聯(lián)系公園工作人員搜尋?；貞?yīng)：續(xù)寫(xiě)中父母和救援人員會(huì)持續(xù)尋找，最終與杰里米和伊恩相遇，完成團(tuán)聚情節(jié)。伏筆：伊恩受傷嚴(yán)重不能移動(dòng)?；貞?yīng)：在下山過(guò)程中，杰里米需要想辦法幫助伊恩克服行動(dòng)困難，可能會(huì)用到一些臨時(shí)制作的工具。伏筆：天色漸暗且溫度下降?；貞?yīng)：這會(huì)增加下山的難度和危險(xiǎn)，杰里米和伊恩在下山時(shí)要克服黑暗和寒冷帶來(lái)的阻礙。伏筆：杰里米給伊恩食物和水?；貞?yīng)：保證伊恩有一定體力，能支撐到與父母和救援人員會(huì)合。續(xù)寫(xiě)要點(diǎn)（兩段）第一段：伊恩讓杰里米離開(kāi)他回去找父母，杰里米堅(jiān)決拒絕，他安慰伊恩，說(shuō)會(huì)一起安全回去。然后開(kāi)始想辦法，比如利用周?chē)臉?shù)枝制作簡(jiǎn)易擔(dān)架，嘗試慢慢移動(dòng)伊恩下山。過(guò)程中伊恩因疼痛發(fā)出聲音，杰里米不斷鼓勵(lì)他。第二段：經(jīng)過(guò)長(zhǎng)時(shí)間艱難下山，他們終于遇到了父母和救援人員。伊恩得到及時(shí)救治，杰里米和父母相擁而泣。大家對(duì)杰里米的勇敢和堅(jiān)持表示贊揚(yáng)，杰里米表示是友情的力量支撐他不放棄。情感線起初是杰里米和伊恩之間純粹的友情，一起登山享受快樂(lè)。伊恩受傷后，杰里米對(duì)朋友的關(guān)心和責(zé)任感凸顯，在等待救援和下山過(guò)程中，杰里米一直給予伊恩安慰和鼓勵(lì)，展現(xiàn)深厚友情。父母對(duì)孩子的擔(dān)憂牽掛也是重要情感，在孩子未歸時(shí)，母親的焦急和祈禱，都體現(xiàn)親情。最后大家團(tuán)聚，多種情感交織，體現(xiàn)人性中愛(ài)與關(guān)懷的美好。故事線杰里米和伊恩登山線：從營(yíng)地出發(fā)登山，登頂后伊恩受傷被困，最終下山與父母會(huì)合。杰里米照顧伊恩線：發(fā)現(xiàn)伊恩受傷后，清理傷口、給予食物水、保暖、鼓勵(lì)安慰。父母擔(dān)憂線：孩子未歸，父母焦急聯(lián)系救援并參與搜尋。救援行動(dòng)線：公園工作人員參與搜尋，不斷擴(kuò)大范圍。下山困難線：伊恩受傷行動(dòng)不便，天色暗、溫度低增加下山難度。團(tuán)聚線：杰里米和伊恩與父母及救援人員相遇團(tuán)聚。主旨升華句（英文）Truefriendshipislikealighthouseinthedark,guidingusthroughthemostdifficulttimes.（真正的友誼就像黑暗中的燈塔，引領(lǐng)我們度過(guò)最艱難的時(shí)刻。）Loveandresponsibilitycanovercomealldifficulties,andtheyarethemostpreciousqualitiesinhumannature.（愛(ài)與責(zé)任能戰(zhàn)勝一切困難，它們是人性中最珍貴的品質(zhì)。）Inthefaceofdanger,thepowerofperseveranceandfriendshipcancreatemiracles.（在危險(xiǎn)面前，堅(jiān)持和友誼的力量能創(chuàng)造奇跡。）Thebondbetweenfriendsisunbreakable,anditgivesusthecouragetofaceanychallenge.（朋友之間的紐帶堅(jiān)不可摧，它給予我們面對(duì)任何挑戰(zhàn)的勇氣。）Family'sloveandcare,combinedwiththeloyaltyoffriendship,formthemostpowerfulforceinlife.（家人的愛(ài)與關(guān)懷，加上友情的忠誠(chéng)，構(gòu)成了生活中最強(qiáng)大的力量。）寫(xiě)作示范一Astheeveninggrewdarkerandthetemperaturedropped,IantoldJeremytoleavehimandgobacktotheirparents."Jeremy,youshouldgo.Idon'twantyoutobeindangerbecauseofme,"Iansaidweakly.ButJeremyfirmlyrefused."Noway!Wecametogether,andwe'llleavetogether.Iwon'tabandonyou."Withthat,Jeremystartedlookingaround.Hefoundsomelongandstrongbranchesnearby.Usinghisshoelacesandtheextrashirt,hemanagedtomakeasimplestretcher.Slowlyandcarefully,heliftedIanontoit."Itmightbeabitpainful,butwehavetomove.Youcanholdon,right?"Jeremyasked,lookingatIanwithdetermination.Iannodded,bitinghisliptoendurethepain.Finally,afterfourlongandtiringhours’climbingdown,theycameacrosstheirparents.Jeremy'sparentsrushedtowardsthem,theireyesfilledwithtearsofjoyandrelief.Ianwasquicklytakentoasafeplaceformedicaltreatment.Jeremyhuggedhisparentstightly,hisbodytremblingwithexhaustionandemotion."Thankyou,son,forbeingsobraveandnotgivinguponyourfriend,"hisfathersaid,pattinghimontheback.Jeremysmiledweakly,"It'sourfriendshipthatkeptmegoing.Iknewwecouldmakeit."寫(xiě)作示范二Astheeveninggrewdarkerandthetemperaturedropped,IantoldJeremytoleavehimandgobacktotheirparents."Jeremy,go!Saveyourself,"Ianurged,hisvoicefilledwithpainandworry.However,Jeremywasresolute."We'refriends,andfriendsdon'tleaveeachotherbehind."Hetookadeepbreathandthoughthard.ThenhedecidedtotrytocarryIanonhisback.Withgreateffort,hemanagedtoliftIanup."Justholdontome,Ian.We'realmostthere,"Jeremyencouraged,althoughheknewthejourneyaheadwastough.Everystepwasastruggle,butJeremy'sdeterminationneverwavered.Finally,afterfourlongandtiringhours’climbingdown,theycameacrosstheirparents.Themomenttheysawtheirparents,bothJeremyandIanfeltahugesenseofreliefwashoverthem.Jeremy'smotherrantowardsthem,cryingandhuggingJeremytightly.Theparkworkersquicklytookoverandprovidedfirst-aidforIan.JeremylookedathisparentsandthenatIan,feelingamixofexhaustionandhappiness."I'msogladwe'realltogethernow,"hesaidsoftly,realizingthetruevalueoffriendshipandfamily.【答案】Astheeveninggrewdarkerandthetemperaturedropped,IantoldJeremytoleavehimandgobacktotheirparents.ButJeremystilldidnotleave.HethoughtitwastoodangerousforIantobealoneonsuchacold,windynight.However,withthesurroundingsfro