高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)：師恩助力：阿里婭的數(shù)學(xué)逆襲之路+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)師恩助力：阿里婭的數(shù)學(xué)逆襲之路1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文“Notagain!”Aliyashoutedangrily,lookingatthemarksshehadattainedinhermathstest.Itseemedasiffailinginthemathtesthadbecomeapartandparcelofherlife.Despiteherefforts,shehadbeenunabletoperformwell.Tearsinhereyes,shequicklyshoved(亂塞)thepaperintoherbagbeforeanyclassmatecouldmakearudecommentonher.Effortlessly,usingthebackofherpalm,shewaswipingthetearswhenherteacherMrsLeenanoticedher.ShecametoAliya’sdeskand,inasoftvoice,askedhertoseeherduringthebreaktime.Wonderingwhatitcouldbe,Aliyawaitedimpatientlyforlunchtime.Finally,whenthebellrang,shemadeherwaytoMrsLeena.AssoonasshesawAliya,shegesturedforhertositontheemptychairbesideher.4續(xù)寫原文Shecarefullystudiedherface,clearedherthroatwithabrightsmileandsaid,“Youseemtobeanxious.IthinkIknowwhat’sbotheringyou.IfyouallowmeIthinktogetherwemaycomeupwithagoodsolution.”Withapuzzledlook,shesaid,“Wellma’am,youknowIhavebeenstrugglinginmathssincethebeginningoftheterm.ItseemsasifnomatterhowhardIwork,Iamunabletogetthedesiredresult.Ifeelsoupset,”shesaidsadly.“Youneednotbesogloomy,”encouragedMrsLeena.“Withthesethreekeyingredients:hardwork,determinationandresilience(韌性),youwillmoveaheadandsucceed.It’salwaysthefirststepthat’sdifficult,butonceyoudecidenottolookbackandnotgiveup,youwillbesuccessful,mydear.Comeon,gatheryourselfandlet’sworkonittogether.”Fromthatdayonwards,Aliyaworkedhard,religiouslyfollowingherteacher’sadvice.Bythetimethefinalexamsdrewclose,shehadthoroughlyrevisedhermathbookandwell-prepared.5段首句Paragraph1：Ontheexamday,afearoffailureupsetherstomach.Paragraph2:ShepassedhermathexamwithanunbelievableAgradeonherreportcard.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8阿里婭看到自己的數(shù)學(xué)考試成績后，憤怒地大喊“怎么又這樣！”，數(shù)學(xué)考試失利似乎已成了她生活的常態(tài)，盡管她付出了諸多努力，成績卻始終不理想。她眼含淚水，匆匆將試卷塞進(jìn)書包，生怕被同學(xué)嘲笑。這時(shí)，莉娜老師注意到了她，輕聲讓她課間休息時(shí)去辦公室。阿里婭滿心疑惑，焦急地等待著午休時(shí)間。終于，鈴聲響起，她來到老師面前。莉娜老師讓她坐下，仔細(xì)觀察她的神情后，微笑著表示自己知道困擾阿里婭的問題，還說只要兩人一起努力，定能找到解決辦法。阿里婭一臉困惑地向老師傾訴，稱自己從學(xué)期初就一直在數(shù)學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)上苦苦掙扎，無論怎么努力都無法取得理想成績，為此感到十分沮喪。莉娜老師鼓勵她不要灰心，只要具備勤奮、決心和韌性這三個關(guān)鍵要素，就一定能取得進(jìn)步并獲得成功。在老師的鼓舞下，阿里婭從此刻苦學(xué)習(xí)，嚴(yán)格遵循老師的建議。期末考試臨近時(shí)，她已經(jīng)將數(shù)學(xué)課本復(fù)習(xí)得十分透徹，做好了充分準(zhǔn)備。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)9續(xù)寫思路分析Paragraph1：Ontheexamday,afearoffailureupsetherstomach.她的成績單上顯示數(shù)學(xué)考試取得了令人難以置信的A等級。當(dāng)她看到這個成績時(shí)，簡直不敢相信自己的眼睛。她的淚水奪眶而出，這是喜悅和激動的淚水。她迫不及待地想要把這個好消息告訴莉娜老師。她飛快地跑到老師的辦公室，推開門，大聲喊道：“老師，我做到了！我考了A！”莉娜老師抬起頭，看到阿里婭激動的樣子，臉上露出了欣慰的笑容。她走過去，緊緊地抱住阿里婭，說：“我就知道你可以的！你付出了這么多努力，這是你應(yīng)得的?！卑⒗飲I感激地看著老師，說：“老師，謝謝您！如果沒有您的鼓勵和幫助，我不可能取得這樣的成績?！睆哪且院?，阿里婭變得更加自信，她明白了只要堅(jiān)持不懈地努力，就沒有克服不了的困難。數(shù)學(xué)也不再是她的困擾，反而成為了她的強(qiáng)項(xiàng)。她用自己的實(shí)際行動證明了，只要有決心和毅力，就一定能夠?qū)崿F(xiàn)自己的目標(biāo)。10續(xù)寫思路分析Paragraph2:ShepassedhermathexamwithanunbelievableAgradeonherreportcard.然后，貝克爾夫人讓我們交換了位置，又問我們這個物體是什么顏色。我懷著忐忑的心情，走到凱文剛才站的位置，仔細(xì)地觀察那個物體。當(dāng)我看清楚的那一刻，我驚呆了。原本在我眼中是黑色的物體，此刻竟然變成了白色！我不敢相信自己的眼睛，揉了揉眼睛又看了一遍，沒錯，真的是白色！我轉(zhuǎn)過頭去，看向凱文，發(fā)現(xiàn)他也正一臉驚訝地看著我。這時(shí)，貝克爾夫人微笑著說：“孩子們，現(xiàn)在你們明白了嗎？很多時(shí)候，我們看到的事情并不是絕對的，不同的角度會有不同的結(jié)果。就像這個物體，從不同的方向看，它的顏色就不一樣。在生活中，我們也會遇到很多有爭議的事情，不要急于否定別人的觀點(diǎn)，要學(xué)會站在對方的角度去思考問題?！甭犃素惪藸柗蛉说脑?，我和凱文都羞愧地低下了頭。我們意識到，之前的爭吵是多么的幼稚和可笑。從那以后，我們再也沒有因?yàn)樾∈露鵂幊?，反而成為了更好的朋友?1Part3范文呈現(xiàn)12范文呈現(xiàn)Ontheexamday,afearoffailureupsetherstomach.Shesatintheexaminationroom,herhandsshakingconstantly,andherforeheadwascoveredwithfinebeadsofsweat.Lookingatthequestionsonthetestpaper,hermindwentblank,andtheoriginallyfamiliarknowledgepointsseemedtohavealllefther.Shetookadeepbreath,tryingtocalmherselfdown,butherheartwasbeatingfasterandfaster.Justwhenshefeltdesperate,thepictureofMrsLeenaencouraginghersuddenlyappearedinhermind.Theteacher'swarmsmileandfirmwordsechoedinherears:"Aslongasyoudon'tgiveup,youwilldefinitelysucceed."AsurgeofstrengthwelledupinAliya'sheart.Shetoldherselfthatshecouldn'tbedefeatedbyfearlikethis.Sheclosedhereyes,tookanotherdeepbreath,andthenslowlyopenedthemandbegantocarefullyexaminethequestions.Gradually,shefoundthefeelingofdoingthequestions,andherthinkingbecameclearerandclearer.Sheansweredthequestionsinanorderlymanner,applyingalltheknowledgeshehadlearnedtothetestpaper.13范文呈現(xiàn)ShepassedhermathexamwithanunbelievableAgradeonherreportcard.Whenshesawthisresult,shecouldhardlybelievehereyes.Tearswelledupinhereyes,andtheyweretearsofjoyandexcitement.Shecouldn'twaittotellMrsLeenathegoodnews.Sheranquicklytotheteacher'soffice,pushedthedooropen,andshoutedloudly:"Teacher,Ididit!IgotanA!"MrsLeenalookedupandsawAliya'sexcitedlook.Agratifiedsmileappearedonherface.ShewalkedoverandhuggedAliyatightly,saying:"Iknewyoucoulddoit!You'veputinsomucheffort,andthisiswhatyoudeserve."Aliyalookedattheteachergratefullyandsaid:"Teacher,thankyou!Icouldn'thaveachievedsucharesultwithoutyourencouragementandhelp."Fromthenon,Aliyabecamemoreconfident.Sheunderstoodthataslongassheperseveredinherefforts,therewerenodifficultiesthatcouldnotbeovercome.Mathwasnolongerhertroublebutinsteadbecameherstrength.Sheprovedwithherownactionsthataslongasshehaddeterminationandperseverance,shecoulddefinitelyachievehergoals.14升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Ontheexamday,aparalyzingfearoffailurechurnedherstomach.Seatedintheexaminationroom,herhandstrembleduncontrollably,andasheenoffinesweatdottedherforehead.Gazingatthequestionsonthetestpaper,hermindwentcompletelyblank,asifalltheonce-familiarknowledgepointshaddesertedher.Shetookadeepbreath,attemptingtocomposeherself,yetherheartracedevenfaster.Justwhendespairthreatenedtoengulfher,animageofMrsLeena,withherencouragingsmileandresolutewords,flashedvividlyinhermind:"Aslongasyoudon'tgiveup,successwillsurelybeyours."AwaveofdeterminationsurgedwithinAliya.Sheresolvednottoletfeargetthebetterofher.Closinghereyesbriefly,shetookanotherdeep,steadyingbreath,andthen,withnewfoundfocus,sheopenedthemandbegantometiculouslyexamineeachquestion.Gradually,thefogofconfusionlifted,andherthoughtprocessbecameclearerandmorecoherent.Sheansweredthequestionsmethodically,drawingonalltheknowledgeshehadpainstakinglyacquiredandapplyingittothetestpaper.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)ShepassedhermathexamwithanastonishingAgradeemblazonedonherreportcard.Themomentshelaideyesontheresult,shecouldscarcelybelievewhatshewasseeing.Tearsofjoyandexcitementwelledupinhereyesandspilledover.Shecouldn'twaitamomentlongertosharethegoodnewswithMrsLeena.Dashingtowardstheteacher'soffice,shepushedthedooropenandexclaimed,"Teacher,Ididit!IgotanA!"MrsLeenalookedup,anduponseeingAliya'selatedexpression,aproudandgratifiedsmilespreadacrossherface.She