讀后續(xù)寫+Lily的徒步冒險+講義 高三下學期開學英語試題

讀后續(xù)寫閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語編寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Onasunnyweekend,Lily,anadventuroushigh-schoolsenior,andherclosefriends,JackandEmma,decidedtogohikinginthenearbymountains.Equippedwithbackpacksfilledwithwater,snacks,andamap,theywereexcitedtoexplorethegreatoutdoors.Astheywalkedalongthewell-markedtrack,chattingandlaughing,theweathertookanunexpectedturn.Darkcloudsrolledinquickly,swallowingthesun.Thewindstartedtoroar,andsoon,rainpoureddownheavily.Thepathbecameslippery,andvisibilitydroppedsignificantly.Lily,tryingtokeepupeveryone’sspirits,suggestedtheyfindaplacetotakeshelter.Theyspottedasmallcaveonthesideofthehillandmadetheirwaytowardsit.Insidethecave,theairwasdampandcold.Astheygatheredcloselytogether,waitingforthestormtopass,theyrealizedtheyhadlefttheiremergencyflashlightinJack’sbackpack,whichhehadaccidentallydroppedonthetrailduringtheirrushtothecave.Afterwhatseemedlikehours,therainfinallystopped,buttheskyremainedcloudy.Whentheysteppedoutofthecave,theywereshockedtofindthatthetrackwasnolongerrecognizable.Mudslideshadoccurred,andlargestonesblockedtheirwayback.Tomakemattersworse,Jackcheckedhisphoneandfoundthattherewasnosignal.Withasenseofuneasecomingin,theyknewtheyhadtofindawayoutofthemountainsbeforenightfall.Theydecidedtofollowasmallstreamtheysaw,hopingitwouldleadthemtoamorefamiliarpathoranearbyvillage.Astheywalkedalongthestream,thepathbecameincreasinglydifficult,withsteepslopes(陡坡)andthickunderbrush.SuddenlyEmmaletoutascream.Shehadsteppedonalooserockandtwistedheranklebadly.LilyandJackrushedtoherside,theirfacesfilledwithworry.Now,notonlydidtheyhavetofindtheirwayout,buttheyalsohadtohelptheirinjuredfriend.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。LilyandJackexchangedanxiouslooks,theirmindsracingforsolutions.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Justwhentheyfelttiredandhungry,Lilyspottedavillageinthedistance.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Lily的徒步冒險續(xù)寫續(xù)寫要點第一段：著重描寫Lily和Jack面對Emma受傷的緊急情況，如何冷靜應(yīng)對。比如Jack檢查Emma傷勢，憑借有限知識判斷嚴重程度；Lily從背包找物品臨時固定傷口，同時互相打氣，堅定帶Emma走出困境的決心，然后繼續(xù)沿著溪流艱難前行。第二段：描述他們在疲憊饑餓時看到村莊的反應(yīng)，如激動呼喊、加快腳步。到達村莊后，村民熱情幫助，有人提供食物，有人幫忙聯(lián)系外界或提供醫(yī)療救助。最后，三人對這次經(jīng)歷感慨，意識到友誼和堅持的力量。情感線起初，面對惡劣天氣和迷路，三人感到不安、焦慮。Emma受傷后，Lily和Jack滿心擔憂，急切想幫助她。在艱難前行過程中，他們的不安轉(zhuǎn)化為堅定的信念，彼此鼓勵，相互支撐。看到村莊時，興奮和希望涌上心頭，獲救后，對彼此友誼和這次經(jīng)歷充滿感恩，情感得到升華。故事線Lily和Jack發(fā)現(xiàn)Emma腳踝扭傷，迅速采取急救措施，用圍巾固定傷口。兩人輪流背著Emma，沿著溪流繼續(xù)尋找出路，途中克服地形困難，如攀爬陡坡、穿越灌木叢。隨著時間推移，三人又累又餓，身體逐漸疲憊，但沒有放棄。Lily偶然發(fā)現(xiàn)遠處的村莊，三人瞬間充滿希望，加快步伐。到達村莊后，善良的村民紛紛伸出援手，為他們提供食物、水和醫(yī)療救助。最終，三人安全獲救，回顧這次冒險，深刻體會到友誼和堅持的重要性。主旨升華句Inthefaceofdifficulties,truefriendshipshinesbrightly,givingusthestrengthtoovercomeanyobstacle.（在困難面前，真正的友誼閃耀光芒，給予我們克服任何障礙的力量。）Thisadventuretaughtthemthataslongastheysticktogetherandnevergiveup,hopewillalwaysbewithinreach.（這次冒險讓他們明白，只要團結(jié)一致、永不放棄，希望就總會觸手可及。）Theirjourneyinthemountainsprovedthateveninthemostdesperatesituations,thepowerofdeterminationandthebondoffriendshipcanleadtoawayout.（他們在山中的旅程證明，即使在最絕望的境地，決心的力量和友誼的紐帶也能開辟出一條出路。）Throughthischallengingexperience,theylearnedthatthesupportoffriendsislikeabeaconinthedark,guidingthemthroughthetoughesttimes.（通過這次充滿挑戰(zhàn)的經(jīng)歷，他們了解到朋友的支持就像黑暗中的燈塔，引領(lǐng)他們度過最艱難的時刻。）Theadventurenotonlytestedtheirphysicallimitsbutalsodeepenedtheirfriendship,showingthattruefriendsarethosewhostandbyeachotherinadversity.（這次冒險不僅考驗了他們的身體極限，還加深了他們的友誼，表明真正的朋友是在逆境中相互支持的人。）寫作示范一LilyandJackexchangedanxiouslooks,theirmindsracingforsolutions.JackquicklykneltbesideEmma,carefullyexaminingherswollenankle.Hisfacewastensewithworry,buthetriedtosoundcalmashesaid,"It'ssprained,butwe'llgetyououtofhere."Lilyrummagedthroughherbackpackandfoundascarf,whichsheusedtogentlywraparoundEmma'sankleforsupport."We'lltaketurnscarryingyou,"Lilysaidfirmly.WithJacktakingthefirstturn,theyresumedtheirarduousjourneyalongthestream.Thegoingwastough,withslipperyrocksandthickunderbrush,buttheydidn'tstop,theirdeterminationgrowingwitheachstep.Justwhentheyfelttiredandhungry,Lilyspottedavillageinthedistance.Hereyeswidenedinexcitement,andsheshouted,"Look!There'savillage!"Jack,whowascarryingEmma,lookedup,hopelightinguphisface.Theyquickenedtheirpaceasmuchastheycould.Oncetheyreachedthevillage,thevillagerswereextremelykind.Onevillagerbroughtthemfoodandwater,whileanother,whohadsomemedicalknowledge,carefullytreatedEmma'sankle.Safeatlast,Lily,Jack,andEmmalookedateachother,theireyesfilledwithgratitude.Thisadventurehadtestedthem,butithadalsostrengthenedtheirfriendship.寫作示范二LilyandJackexchangedanxiouslooks,theirmindsracingforsolutions.JackimmediatelydroppedtohiskneestoassessEmma'sinjury.Hisbrowfurrowedinconcentrationashegentlyproddedtheswollenarea."It'snotlookinggood,butwecanmanage,"hesaid,tryingtomaskhisconcern.Lily,herhandsshakingslightly,searchedthroughherbagandfoundathinrope.SheusedittofashionamakeshiftsplintforEmma'sankle."Wewon'tleaveyoubehind,"shepromised.Then,JackhoistedEmmaontohisback,andtheysetoffagainalongthestream.Thepathwasrugged,andeverystepwasastruggle,buttheyrefusedtogiveup.Justwhentheyfelttiredandhungry,Lilyspottedavillageinthedistance.Herheartleapedwithjoy,andshescreamed,"Avillage!We'resaved!"Jack,despitehisexhaustion,managedaweaksmile.Theystumbledtowardsthevillage,theirenergyrenewed.Astheyentered,thevillagersrushedtohelp.Somebroughthotsoupandbread,whileotherscalledformedicalassistance.Emmawascarefullytendedto,andsoon,thepaininheranklebegantoease.Thethreefriendssattogether,lookingbackontheiradventure.Theyrealizedthatthisjourneyhadtaughtthemthetruemeaningoffriendshipandthepowerofperseverance.參考答案LilyandJackexchangedanxiouslooks,theirmindsracingforsolutions.Jackquicklytookoffhisbackpackandlookedthroughit,findingabandagetowrapEmma’sankleasbestashecould.“Wecan’tleaveherhere,”Lilysaidfirmly,hervoiceechoingwithdetermination.Theymadeamakeshiftstretcherusingbranches