高二上學(xué)期期末英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫思路解析課件

讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)宜賓市2023級(jí)高二上期期末正確的讀后續(xù)寫應(yīng)試流程:檢查寫思讀思列大綱2段/10句(中文)好句式入格確定情節(jié)提升表達(dá)伏筆情節(jié)發(fā)展線人物情感線主題讀用伏筆/五“所”設(shè)計(jì)情節(jié)點(diǎn)明主題照應(yīng)第二段第一句第一段第一句第二段第一句vv用伏筆/五“所”設(shè)計(jì)情節(jié)Readthetextandmakeanoutlineforyourwriting,usingtheinstructionsasyourguide.（13min）Aboutaweekafterthestorm,wewokeuptothefamiliarsound._________________________

閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。①It’sstrange,butIdon’treallyremembermuchaboutthehurricaneitself.Itallhappenedsoquickly.Iwassittinginmyroomwithmycat,Smartie,onmylap,whentheroofjustflewoff.Allofasudden,therewasskywheretheroofhadbeen.IwassofrightenedthatIjustfroze.②Momcriedtogetoutquickly,butitwasalreadytoolatebythen.Therainwascomingdownsohardandsofast.Ourstreetturnedintoariverinseconds.Weweregoingnowhere.(frightened)③Atfirst,Iwaspleasedwecouldstayathome,butsoonitgotreallytough.Withoutaroof,stayinginsidewastoodangerous.Therewaswatereverywhere,butwecouldn’tdrinkanyofitotherwisewe’dgetreallysick.Wejusthaddrinkingwaterthatwassenttousbyhelicopter,butitwasneverenough.ItwasAugust,soitwasreally,reallyhotanditsmelledsobadeverywhere!IjustspentthedayswatchingtheboatsgoingupanddownthestreetandlookingoutforSmartie.（hot,littledrinkingwater,messy,sick,）④Hehaddisappearedthemomentthestormhit.(vanished---worried)⑤Livingintheopenair,webecamebreakfast,lunchanddinnerforthemosquitos.ButMomsaidthatwhateverhappens,weshouldalwaystrytoseethegoodsideofthings.(伏筆)Itwasdifficulttostaypositive,though.Wehadlostourhomeandeverythinginit,includingSmartie.Allwehadleftweretheclothesonourbacks.ButasMom

keptonremindingus,wewerealltogetherandsafe.(伏筆)Mom’swordsmadeusfeelbetter.Irememberusalllyingunderthemidnightskyandlookingupatthestars.Becausetherewerenolights,wecouldseetheBigDipper,theLittleDipperandtheMilkyWay.Itwasamazing!Eventhoughwehadlostalot,momentslikethosegaveushopeforthefuture.（主題）ThereunionwithSmartiewasareminderthatwecouldrebuildourhomes.________________

ThethemeofthetextWerebuiltnotjustourhouses,butourlives,andwedidittogether,strongerthanbeforeWerebuiltnotjustourhouses,butourlives,andwedidittogether,strongerthanbefore仿佛他在告訴我們，即使在最黑暗的時(shí)刻，仍然有一線希望。所感Astonishment心理;incredible面部；walkedwithasenseofjoybubbledwithinmyheart(動(dòng)作）

Smartie!lookedabitthinanddirty,buthewasaliveandwell;

miracle擔(dān)心他，歡迎他，洗漱并盡可能地為他準(zhǔn)備了一頓他的食物盛宴。發(fā)現(xiàn)耳朵，脊背有多處傷口，但他的眼睛里依然閃爍著那種熟悉的光芒。我們開始制定計(jì)劃，想象一個(gè)新的家從廢墟中升起鄰居們團(tuán)結(jié)起來互相幫助，共享工具和資源Smartie的堅(jiān)韌和毅力激勵(lì)我們堅(jiān)強(qiáng)和勇敢。我們知道康復(fù)的道路將會(huì)漫長(zhǎng)而充滿挑戰(zhàn)，但有我們所愛的人和寵物在身邊Momsaidthatwhateverhappens,weshouldalwaystrytoseethegoodsideofthings.(伏筆)賓語(yǔ)從句with結(jié)構(gòu)+虛擬語(yǔ)氣獨(dú)立主格；非謂ving所感所見所做所見所思所做、所說所說所聽返回文本所思Aboutaweekafterthestorm,wewokeuptothefamiliarsoundThereunionwithSmartiewasareminderthatwecouldrebuildourhomes.獨(dú)立主格；非謂ving倒裝；返回教材B1U3---Likefatherlikeson.v1,v2,v3+從句倒裝Paragraph1:Onemorning,aboutaweekafterthestorm,wewokeuptothefamiliarsound.①Astonishment心理;incredible面部；walkedwithasenseofjoybubbledwithinmyheart(動(dòng)作）②Smartie!lookedabitthinanddirty,but

hewasaliveandwell;miracle③擔(dān)心他，歡迎他，洗漱并盡可能地為他準(zhǔn)

備了一頓他的食物盛宴。④

發(fā)現(xiàn)耳朵，脊背有多處傷口，但他的眼睛

里依然閃爍著那種熟悉的光芒。⑤仿佛他在告訴我們，

即使在最黑暗的時(shí)

刻，仍然有一線希望。Paragraph2:ThereunionwithSmartiewasareminderthatwecouldrebuildour

homes.⑥我們開始制定計(jì)劃，想象一個(gè)新的家從廢墟中升起⑦鄰居們團(tuán)

結(jié)起來互相幫助，共享工具和資源⑧Smartie的堅(jiān)韌和毅力激勵(lì)我們堅(jiān)強(qiáng)和

勇敢。我們知道康復(fù)的道路將會(huì)漫長(zhǎng)而充滿挑戰(zhàn)，但有我們所愛的人和寵

物在身邊⑨Momsaidthatwhateverhappens,weshouldalwaystrytoseethe

goodsideofthings.(伏筆)⑩Werebuiltnotjustourhouses,butourlives,and

wedidittogether,strongerthanbefore①Astonishment心理;incredible面部；walkedwithasenseofjoybubbledwithinmyheart(動(dòng)作）(簡(jiǎn)單句：心理活動(dòng)+面部表情+身體動(dòng)作)

Iwasinastonishment.Ilookedupwithanincredibleexpression.Iwalkedwithasenseofjoybubbledwithinmyheart(升級(jí)句式：獨(dú)立主格,句子，非謂作狀語(yǔ))

Asurgeofastonishmentfloodedoverme,Ilookedupwithanincredibleexpression,walkingwithasenseofjoybubbledwithinmyheart.②Smartie!lookedabitthinanddirty,buthewasaliveandwell;miracle

(簡(jiǎn)單句)ItwasSmartie!Itlookedabitthinanddirtyduringtheseveraldays,buthewasaliveandwell.Whatamiracle!

(升級(jí)句式：強(qiáng)調(diào)句，定從)

ItwasSmartiethatlookedabitthinanddirtyduringtheseveraldays,buthewasaliveandwell,whichwasamiracle.③擔(dān)心他，歡迎他，洗漱并盡可能地為他準(zhǔn)備了一頓他的食物盛宴。

(簡(jiǎn)單句v1+v2+v3andv4)IWorriedabouthim,embracedhim,washedhimupandpreparedafeastofhisfoodasbestaspossible.(升級(jí)句式：形容詞做狀語(yǔ),with結(jié)構(gòu))Worriedabouthim,Iembracedhimtightly,washedhimupandpreparedafeastofhisfoodasbestaspossible,withawaveofsorrowoverwhelmedme.④

發(fā)現(xiàn)耳朵，脊背有多處傷口，但他的眼睛

里依然閃爍著那種熟悉的光芒。(并列句)

Ifoundhisearsandbackwithmultiplewounds,buthiseyesstillshonewiththatfamiliarlight.⑤仿佛他在告訴我們，即使在最黑暗的時(shí)

刻，仍然有一線希望。（方式狀從）

Asifhewastellingus,eveninthedarkestmoments,therewasstillaglimmerofhope.⑥我們開始制定計(jì)劃，想象一個(gè)新的家從廢墟中升起

Webegantomakeplans,imagininganewhomerisingfromtheruins⑦鄰居們團(tuán)結(jié)起來互相幫助，共享工具和資源

Neighborsunitedtohelpeachother,sharingtoolsandresources.⑧Smartie的堅(jiān)韌和毅力激勵(lì)我們堅(jiān)強(qiáng),勇敢。我們知道康復(fù)的道路將會(huì)漫長(zhǎng)而充滿挑戰(zhàn)，但有我們所愛的人和寵

物在身邊WithSmartie'stoughandperseveranceinspiringustobestrongandbrave,Weknowtheroadtorecoverywillbelongandchallenging,butwiththeandpetswelovebyourside⑨Momsaidthatwhateverhappens,weshouldalwaystrytoseethegoodsideofthings.(伏筆)

Asmomsaid,nomatterwhathappens,weshouldalwaystrytoseethegoodsideofthings.⑩Werebuiltnotjustourhouses,butourlives,andwedidittogether,strongerthanbeforeParagraph1:Onemorning,aboutaweekafterthestorm,wewokeuptothefamiliarsound.

“兩段首句定一框”動(dòng)作/心理描寫(故事情節(jié)延續(xù)：心理描寫):

①Asurgeofastonishmentfloodedoverme,Ilookedupwithanincredibleexpression,walkingwithasenseofjoybubbledwithinmyheart.（非謂：心理，面部，身體描寫）

②過渡句配角動(dòng)作ItwasSmartiethatlookedabitthinanddirtyduringtheseveraldays,buthewasaliveandwell,whichwasamiracle.（強(qiáng)調(diào)；定從）③過渡句主角動(dòng)作Worriedabouthim,Iembracedhimtightly,washedhimupandpreparedafeastofhisfoodasbestaspossible,withawaveofsorrowoverwhelmedme.（形容詞作狀語(yǔ)）④過渡句主角動(dòng)作Ifoundhisearsandbackwithmultiplewounds,buthiseyesstillshonewiththatfamiliarlight.（并列句）⑤銜接到P2首句Asifhewastellingus,eveninth