讀后續(xù)寫-三歲妹妹的+“搗蛋”+與姐姐的包容+講義 高三下學(xué)期模擬試卷（一）英語試題

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Ifearedgoingintomyroomafterschool.Everydayitwassomethingdifferent.Thehoursawayatschoolwerelongenoughtocauseaterriblechangetomyprivateroom.Todaycanbenodifferent.AsIenteredthehouse,Momgreetedmewithasmile.Itseemedlikenothingwaswrong.Still,Iwouldn’tbelieve.Yesterday,Idiscoveredachocolatecookiespreadaroundthemouthofmyangelstatue.Itspinklipswerecoveredinchocolate.Obviously,Calliehadsharedhercookiewithmyangel.Ilookedaroundformylittlesister,Callie,whohadjustturnedthree.Ididn’tseeher.AsIcheckedthesittingroom,Inoticeditwasprettymessy.Thereweretoysallaround.Therewereafewheadlessdolls,someblocks,theremainsofagrapestuckintothecarpet.Isearchedaroundandthereshewas,sittingonthesofawiththeTVremoteinherstickyhands.Shelookedupandsawme.Ahugesmilebrokeoutonherface,andshelaughed,clappingherhands.Iwassurprisedthattheydidn’tsticktogether.“Sissy(sister)!”Shejumpedoffthesofaandrantome,huggingmykneesandalmosttippingmeover.“Hi,Callie,”Isaid,withtheslightestsmile.Iruffled(撫弄)herlongthickhair,andsomewhitecrumbs(殘?jiān)?felltothecarpet.“Cheese,sissy”,Calliesaid,pointingatthecrumbsthathadsettledontothecarpet.Ifoundastrongsmellofcheesefromthem.HadCalliefocusedondestroyingonlythesittingroom?Avoiceracedacrossmymind.Noway.Notmysister,thedestroyer.Notmysister,thethree-year-oldterror.Iturnedaroundandstartedthescaredclimbtomyroom.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Ipushedthedooropenandsawacompletemessagain!___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Seeingthetearsinhereyes,Ibentdownandliftedherupgently.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意文章講述了“我”放學(xué)后害怕回房間，因?yàn)槿龤q的妹妹Callie總是把房間弄得一團(tuán)糟。有一天，“我”回家后發(fā)現(xiàn)客廳一片狼藉，到處是玩具、頭身分離的玩偶、積木，地毯上還有葡萄殘?jiān)?。Callie坐在沙發(fā)上，手里拿著黏糊糊的電視遙控器，看到“我”后興奮地跑過來抱住“我”的膝蓋，她的頭發(fā)里掉出了奶酪殘?jiān)！拔摇睗M心懷疑Callie是不是又把“我”的房間弄亂了，懷著忐忑的心情向房間走去。文章通過對(duì)房間混亂場(chǎng)景的描寫和“我”的心理活動(dòng)，展現(xiàn)了妹妹的調(diào)皮和“我”對(duì)房間被破壞的擔(dān)憂。故事山分析開端：“我”放學(xué)后害怕回房間，預(yù)感房間又被破壞。發(fā)展：“我”回家看到客廳被Callie弄得亂七八糟，Callie開心迎接“我”，頭發(fā)里掉下奶酪殘?jiān)?。高潮（待續(xù)寫）：“我”推開房間門看到混亂場(chǎng)景后的反應(yīng)，以及與Callie的互動(dòng)。結(jié)局（待續(xù)寫）：“我”和Callie之間的矛盾化解，體現(xiàn)親情或?qū)γ妹玫陌莸惹楦?。伏筆以及在續(xù)寫中的回應(yīng)“我”害怕回房間：暗示房間會(huì)有糟糕的狀況，續(xù)寫中“我”推開門看到混亂場(chǎng)景回應(yīng)了這一伏筆。客廳的混亂：預(yù)示Callie的調(diào)皮和破壞力，續(xù)寫中Callie對(duì)房間的破壞與客廳的混亂相呼應(yīng)。Callie的開心迎接：與“我”的擔(dān)憂形成對(duì)比，在續(xù)寫中Callie面對(duì)“我”的生氣會(huì)有不同反應(yīng)，推動(dòng)情節(jié)發(fā)展。奶酪殘?jiān)喊凳綜allie的飲食行為，可能與房間的混亂有關(guān)，續(xù)寫中可涉及Callie因吃奶酪在房間留下痕跡等?！拔摇钡膽岩桑骸拔摇辈聹y(cè)Callie破壞了房間，續(xù)寫中證實(shí)“我”的猜測(cè)并展開后續(xù)情節(jié)。續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)（兩段）第一段：描述“我”推開門看到房間混亂的具體場(chǎng)景，如物品的擺放、損壞情況等，以及“我”的憤怒、無奈等情緒反應(yīng)，還可以寫Callie在房間里的行為或狀態(tài)。第二段：看到Callie的眼淚后，“我”內(nèi)心的轉(zhuǎn)變，從生氣到心疼、包容，然后和Callie一起收拾房間，或者表達(dá)對(duì)妹妹的愛，體現(xiàn)親情的溫暖。情感線“我”一開始對(duì)房間可能被破壞充滿擔(dān)憂，看到客廳的混亂后懷疑加重，推開門看到房間的混亂時(shí)憤怒、無奈達(dá)到頂點(diǎn)。當(dāng)看到Callie眼中的淚水，“我”內(nèi)心的憤怒瞬間消散，轉(zhuǎn)為心疼和自責(zé)，意識(shí)到自己對(duì)妹妹的態(tài)度過于嚴(yán)厲。最后“我”選擇包容妹妹，情感從負(fù)面的情緒轉(zhuǎn)變?yōu)橛H情的溫暖，體現(xiàn)了對(duì)妹妹的愛。故事線“我”放學(xué)后害怕回房間?！拔摇被丶铱吹娇蛷d混亂，Callie開心迎接?！拔摇蓖崎_門看到房間混亂?！拔摇睂?duì)Callie生氣，Callie流淚?！拔摇眱?nèi)心轉(zhuǎn)變，心疼Callie?！拔摇焙虲allie一起收拾房間或表達(dá)親情。主旨升華句Inthefaceofthechaoscreatedbylove,weshouldlearntoembraceitwithpatienceandunderstanding,forfamilyaffectionisfarmorepreciousthanatidyroom.Thisexperiencetaughtmethatthemessmadebyalovedoneisjustasmallpartoflife,andtheloveandconnectionwithinthefamilyarewhattrulymatter.Nomatterhowmessytheroommaybe,thelovebetweensiblingscanalwayssweepawaytheangerandbringwarmthandharmonybackintoourhearts.Throughthisincident,Irealizedthatthemostvaluablethinginlifeisnotaperfectlyorderedspace,buttheloveandtolerancewesharewithourfamilymembers.Inthejourneyoffamilylife,weshouldcherisheverymomentwithourlovedones,evenwhenitcomeswithabitofchaos,forthesearethememoriesthatbindustogether.寫作示范一Ipushedthedooropenandsawacompletemessagain!Mybookswerescatteredalloverthefloor,somewiththeircoverstorn.Mydeskwascoveredincoloredscribbles,andmyfavoritestuffedanimalwasmissinganarm.Calliestoodinthemiddleoftheroom,hereyeswidewithamixofexcitementandabitoffear.“Sissy,look!Imadeacastle!”shesaid,pointingtoapileofmyclothesthatshehadstackedup.Iwasfurious.“Callie,whydidyoudothis?Thisismyroom!Youcan’tjustcomeinhereanddestroyeverything!”Ishoutedather.Callie’sfacefell,andtearswelledupinhereyes.Seeingthetearsinhereyes,Ibentdownandliftedherupgently.“I’msorry,Callie.Ishouldn’thaveshoutedatyou.Iknowyoujustwantedtohavefun.”Isaidsoftly.Calliesniffledandwrappedherarmsaroundmyneck.“Sissy,don’tbemad.Iloveyou.”shemurmured.Ihuggedhertightly,realizingthatherinnocentjoywasmoreimportantthanatidyroom.“Let’scleanuptogether,okay?Andwecanbuildanevenbettercastlelater.”Isuggested.Callienoddedeagerly,abigsmilereturningtoherface.Aswestartedcleaning,Iknewthatthiswasjustasmallpartofourlifefullofloveandlaughter.寫作示范二Ipushedthedooropenandsawacompletemessagain!Thebedsheetswereonthefloor,andmyartsupplieswerespilledeverywhere.Calliehadusedmywatercolorstopaintonthewall,creatingacolorfulbutchaoticscene.Iwassoangrythatmyhandswereshaking.“Callie!Whathaveyoudone?”Iyelled.Callieflinchedandbackedaway.“I...Iwantedtomakeitprettyforyou,sissy.”shesaidinasmallvoice.IwasabouttoscoldhermorewhenIsawthefearinhereyes.Seeingthetearsinhereyes,Ibentdownandliftedherupgently.“I’msorryforgettingsoangry,sweetie.Itwasniceofyoutowanttomakeitprettyforme,butwecan’tdothistomyroom.”Isaid,tryingtostaycalm.Callieburiedherfaceinmyshoulder.“Iwon’tdoitagain,sissy.”shesobbed.Istrokedherhairandsaid,“Howaboutwecleanupnow,andthenIcanteachyouhowtopaintonpaper?”Callielookedupatmewithhopeinhereyes.“Really?”sheasked.Inodded,andwestartedthetaskofrestoringmyroom,whilealsostrengtheningthebondbetweenus.【答案】Ipushedthedooropenandsawacompletemessagain!Mybedanddeskwerefullycoveredbywhitecrumbs,andthewallswerefullofgrapejuicegraffiti.What’sworse,Idiscoveredcheesespr