高考英語(yǔ)作文指導(dǎo).ppt

1、高考作文高分卷的特點(diǎn),根據(jù)高考最新考綱、書面表達(dá)的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)以及高考后的閱卷情況，可以看出書面表達(dá)高分卷應(yīng)具備以下特點(diǎn)： 外在美：第一印象很重要！書寫清楚，字母勻稱，詞、行間距適當(dāng)，卷面整潔。圖片1.png 結(jié)構(gòu)美：有合理的段落層次，多為3段式，條理清晰；每段有每段的主題。,詞匯美：詞匯反映你知識(shí)貯存量的多少，也是衡量英語(yǔ)水平的一個(gè)重要標(biāo)志。likeBe fond of,be addicted to/ helpdo sb a favor 句式美：運(yùn)用得當(dāng)?shù)母呒?jí)句式結(jié)構(gòu)可以給文章增色不少，從而使整篇文章因此而生輝 。 銜接美：使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞，對(duì)寫一篇有“英語(yǔ)味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下銜接自然

2、、條理清晰。,對(duì)比觀點(diǎn)作文 (1) 要求論述兩個(gè)對(duì)立的觀點(diǎn)并給出自己的看法。 1. 有一些人認(rèn)為。 2. 另一些人認(rèn)為。 3. 我的看法。 The topic of -(主題)is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of -(支持A的理由一)What is more, -理由二). Moreover, -(理由三). W

3、hile others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,-(支持B的理由一). Secondly (besides),-(理由二). Thirdly (finally),-(理由三). From my point of view, I think -(我的觀點(diǎn)). The reason is that -(原因). As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the f

4、ormer is surely a wise choice .,解決方法題型 要求考生列舉出解決問(wèn)題的多種途徑 1. 問(wèn)題現(xiàn)狀 2. 怎樣解決(解決方案的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)) In recent days, we have to face I problem-A, which is becoming more and more serious. First, -(說(shuō)明A的現(xiàn)狀).Second, -(舉例進(jìn)一步說(shuō)明現(xiàn)狀) Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. F

5、or one thing, -(解決方法一). For another -(解決方法二). Finally, -(解決方法三). Personally, I believe that -(我的解決方法). Consequently, Im confident that a bright future is awaiting us because -(帶來(lái)的好處).a,說(shuō)明利弊題型 這種題型往往要求先說(shuō)明一下現(xiàn)狀，再對(duì)比事物本身的利弊，有時(shí)也會(huì)單從一個(gè)角度(利或弊)出發(fā)，最后往往要求考生表明自己的態(tài)度(或?qū)κ挛锴熬疤岢鲱A(yù)測(cè)) 1. 說(shuō)明事物現(xiàn)狀 2. 事物本身的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)(或一方面) 3. 你對(duì)現(xiàn)狀

6、(或前景)的看法 Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. First -(A的優(yōu)點(diǎn)之一). Besides -(A的優(yōu)點(diǎn)之二). But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of the important disadvantages is that -(A的第一個(gè)缺點(diǎn)

7、).To make matters worse,-(A的第二個(gè)缺點(diǎn)). Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones. Therefore, I would like to -(我的看法). From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumsta

8、nces we are in. Only by this way, -(對(duì)前景的預(yù)測(cè)).),議論文的框架 (1) 不同觀點(diǎn)列舉型( 選擇型 ) There is a widespread concern over the issue that _作文題目_. But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person. A majority of people think that _ 觀點(diǎn)一_. In their views there are 2 factors c

9、ontributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, _原因一_.Furthermore, in the second place, _原因二_. So it goes without saying that _觀點(diǎn)一_. People,however,differintheiropinionsonthismatter.Somepeoplehold the idea that _觀點(diǎn)二_. In their point of view, on the one hand， _原因一_. On the other hand, _原

10、因二_. Therefore, thereis nodoubtthat _觀點(diǎn)二_. As far as I am concerned, Ifirmlysupporttheviewthat _觀點(diǎn)一或二_.Itis not only because _, but also because _. The more _, the more _.,(2)利弊型的議論文 Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over (the issue that)_作文題目_. In fact, there are both advantages and disadvant

11、ages in _題目議題_. Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows. Firstly, _優(yōu)點(diǎn)一_. And secondly _優(yōu)點(diǎn)二_. Just As a popular saying goes, every coin has two sides, _討論議題_ is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects. To begin with, _缺點(diǎn)一_. In a

12、ddition, _缺點(diǎn)二_. To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of _討論議題_ into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time. In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the _討論議題_.,高考英語(yǔ)開(kāi)放作文指導(dǎo),Describe a picture,Interpret its implied meaning Point out its implica

13、tions in our life,Give your own comment/suggestion/solution,Structure,漫畫的畫面 細(xì)節(jié) 漫畫的夸張 寓意 (與現(xiàn)實(shí)的矛盾之處）,細(xì)節(jié),夸張,寓意,Dont copy others way of solving the problem. Do everything in the right way.,讀圖與立意,細(xì)節(jié),Describe the picture:,As is vividly shown in the picture, As can be seen in the picture In the picture, th

14、ere are/is (are) doing,with the details and for the theme,3. , a glass bottle, with only a little water in it, is trying to attach a label to its body, to announce to the world it is full. Its expression suggests that its very proud and looking down on the others.,1. In the picture we can see a bott

15、le of less water whose label is written full.,2. From the picture we can see that there is a bottle. It has two hands and tries to put an label written “full”on its body. A smile is on the neck of the bottle. Inside the bottle is there a little water.,How To Develop Your Arguments,Arguments,Interpre

16、t its implied meaning Point out its implications in our life,Give your own comment/ suggestion/solution,How To Develop Your Arguments,Interpretation and implication,By providing purpose and reasons or effects /attitude/judgment,By providing examples/proverbs/ explanation,By analyzing the practical s

17、ignificance/ reality,As a result, it is wise to enrich ourselves with knowledge and try to make our heads full.,(Description),(Interpretation,Tips,The bad habit of being wasteful will have a bad effect on their own character. It adds financial burden to their parents. The worlds limited natural reso

18、urces will be used up.,In the first place, the bad habit of being wasteful will have a bad effect on their own character. Secondly, it adds financial burden to their parents. Last but not least, the worlds limited natural resources, such as water and electricity , will be used up soon.,First of all

19、Firstly, To begin with,In addition, Besides, Moreover, Whats more,Finally, Whats worse,在表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確、保持連貫的基礎(chǔ)上, 盡量使用較復(fù)雜的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和較高 級(jí)的詞匯; 恰當(dāng)使用過(guò)渡詞或過(guò)渡句,使文章 結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊;,Tips,As far as I am concerned, I think only when all of us are fully aware of its seriousness can the situation be improved. On the one hand, it is neces

20、sary for schools to educate every student not to waste anything in any form and on the other hand every one of us should start with ourselves to fight against waste. It is not until all of us are involved in the activity that we can bring the situation under control.,在表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確、保持連貫的基礎(chǔ)上, 盡量使用較復(fù)雜的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和較 高

21、級(jí)的詞匯; 恰當(dāng)使用過(guò)渡詞或過(guò)渡句,使文章 結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊; 適當(dāng)?shù)刈儞Q句型結(jié)構(gòu)和所用詞匯, 盡量避免重復(fù)和單調(diào)。,Tips,養(yǎng)成良好的寫作習(xí)慣 一、書寫規(guī)范，卷面整潔； 二、審清題目，提煉要點(diǎn)； 三、組詞造句，組句成篇； 四、仔細(xì)檢查，認(rèn)真修改。,書面表達(dá)各檔次的給分范圍和要求,第五檔（21-25分） 完全完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。 準(zhǔn)確、清楚地表達(dá)了短文的內(nèi)容，要點(diǎn)無(wú)遺漏 應(yīng)用了較多的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯 語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯有少許錯(cuò)誤，但為盡可能使用較復(fù)雜表達(dá)方式 所致；具備較強(qiáng)的語(yǔ)言應(yīng)用能力 有效地使用了語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊 完全達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。,第四檔（16-20分） 完成了試題規(guī)定的任

22、務(wù)。 比較準(zhǔn)確、清楚地表達(dá)了短文的內(nèi)容 應(yīng)用語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯能滿足任務(wù)的要求 語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯應(yīng)用基本準(zhǔn)確，少許錯(cuò)誤主要是因?yàn)閲L試較復(fù) 雜語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯所致 應(yīng)用簡(jiǎn)單的語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊 達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。,How to get the highest marks in writing?,a good passage (skills),語(yǔ)言第一位 語(yǔ)言高級(jí) (詞和句),內(nèi)容第二位 要點(diǎn)齊全,結(jié)構(gòu)第三位 文章分段,一高級(jí)詞匯- 人靠衣裝，文靠詞裝,高級(jí)詞匯四原則,避免重復(fù)原則,地道原則,形容詞副詞 修飾原則,詞組優(yōu)先原則,語(yǔ)言第一位-語(yǔ)言高級(jí),高級(jí)句式-抓住高考英語(yǔ)老師閱卷的心理秘

23、訣,四不如,1 _不如_好,With your help I have made progress in English.,Without your help ,I couldnt have made progress in English,雙否,肯定,2 _不如_妙,Students should have the habit of smoking by no means.,By no means should students have the habit of smoking.,陳述,倒裝,主動(dòng),被動(dòng),3 _不如_巧,We can borrow five books at most for ten days . Five books can be borrowed for ten days.,4*從句不如分詞傲(難點(diǎn)）,口訣；一去；二看；三改 一去，去連詞； 二看，看從句中主語(yǔ)和動(dòng)詞的關(guān)系 三改，改分詞 When he heard the bad news, he cant help crying,Hearing the news, the young man cant help cry