英語(yǔ)高考基礎(chǔ)寫作_說(shuō)明文(地點(diǎn)介紹).ppt

1、Expository Writing,How to introduce a place,近年考試對(duì)說(shuō)明文體裁的考查,Practice: Fill in the blanks of the introduction of Canada,【寫作內(nèi)容】 模擬題 假如你是來(lái)自加拿大的留學(xué)生Jason，請(qǐng)你寫文章介紹一下加拿大。內(nèi)容包括以下要點(diǎn)：,【寫作要求】 1. 只能用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容； 2. 把5個(gè)句子組成連貫的短文。,Main problems in writing 1. language: inaccurate 2. main points: disorganized,1.東西跨越5500

2、千米，6個(gè)時(shí)區(qū) 2.氣候差異大 3.西部沿海 4.淡水、 漁業(yè)資源,cover an area of over 5,500 kilometers from east to west /six time zones,Difficult points in the writing,the west coast,fresh water/ fishing resources,vary from place to place,_ (cover) an area of over 5,500 kilometers from east to west _ six of the worlds time zone

3、s and with Ottawa _ its capital, Canada is the _ (two) largest country in the world. _ population of Canada is about 29 million and there are two _ (office) languages, French and English.,Covering,as,second,The,official,A possible version (語(yǔ)法填空)：,with,_ in China, the weather in Canada is different _

4、 area to area. In the north, the winters are long and hard, _ the west coast of Canada is a fairly warm place in winter. Canada has one third of the worlds supply of fresh water, abundant forests and fishing _ (resource).,As,from,while,resources,How to organize the main points in 5 sentences and mak

5、e the passage fluent?,【寫作內(nèi)容】 模擬題2 假如你是來(lái)自加拿大的留學(xué)生Jason，請(qǐng)你寫文章介紹一下加拿大。內(nèi)容包括以下要點(diǎn)：,Covering an area of over 5,500 kilometers from east to west with six of the worlds time zones and with Ottawa as its capital, Canada is the second largest country in the world. The population of Canada is about 29 million an

6、d there are two official languages, French and English. As in China, the weather in Canada is different from area to area. In the north, the winters are long and hard, while the west coast of Canada is a fairly warm place in winter. Canada has one third of the worlds supply of fresh water, abundant

7、forests and fishing resources.,Covering an area of over 5,500 kilometers from east to west with six of the worlds time zones and with Ottawa as its capital, Canada is the second largest country in the world.,Possible versions for Sentence,As the second largest country in the world, Canada covers an

8、area of over 5,500 kilometers from east to west with six of the worlds time zones , with Ottawa as its capital.,Canada, with an area of over 5,500 kilometers from east to west with six of the worlds time zones is the second largest country in the world, with Ottawa as its capital,The population of C

9、anada is about 29 million and there are two official languages, French and English.,Possible versions for Sentence,Canada, whose official languages are French and English, has the population of 29 million.,Useful expressions,Aspects for the place introduction,Location(位置): Area（面積）: History（歷史）: Pop

10、ulation（人口）:,be located/situated in/on/at/to; lie in/on/at/to in the center of; in/to/on the east of,Useful expressions,cover/have an area of; with an area of It is long/wide (from east to west).,have/with a history ofyears date from/ date back to,have/with a (large) population (of) The population o

11、fis percent of the population are,5. Climate（氣候）: 6. Resources（資源）: 7. Tourist attractions（旅游景點(diǎn)）:,The climate varies/is different from place to place neither too hot nor too cold,Useful expressions,be rich/wealthy in; with abundant resources be famous/well-known for/as mainly produce The main agricu

12、ltural products are,places of interest scenic spots resort (旅游勝地),Lets have a try !,實(shí)戰(zhàn)訓(xùn)練： 假如你是劉風(fēng)，大運(yùn)會(huì)即將在深圳舉行。你作為一個(gè)大運(yùn)會(huì)志愿者，向來(lái)訪的外國(guó)游客介紹深圳-我國(guó)一個(gè)重要東南沿海城市，位于廣東省南部， 人口超過(guò)一千萬(wàn)。,歡樂(lè)谷 Happy Valley 世界之窗 Window of the world 錦繡中華 Splendid China 紅樹林 Red Wood 海上田園 Sea Garden 仙湖植物園 Fairylake Garden 小梅沙 Xiao Mei Sha 海洋世界

13、Sea World 明斯克航母 Minsk Aircraft Carrier 東部華僑城 OCT East,沿海城市 2. 四季如春，氣候宜人 3. 經(jīng)濟(jì)特區(qū) 4. 大運(yùn)會(huì),a mild temperate climate, with spring all the year around,Difficult points in the writing,special economic zones,the Universiade,coastal /seaside/seashore city,實(shí)戰(zhàn)訓(xùn)練： 假如你是劉風(fēng)，大運(yùn)會(huì)即將在深圳舉行。你作為一個(gè)大運(yùn)會(huì)志愿者，向來(lái)訪的外國(guó)游客介紹深圳-我國(guó)一個(gè)

14、重要東南沿海城市，位于廣東省南部， 人口超過(guò)一千萬(wàn)。,Shenzhen, a key seaside city, is located in the southern part of Guangdong Province,with a population of more than 10 million. It has a mild temperate climate, with spring all the year around. That is the reason why it becomes one of the well-known travelling resorts in Ch

15、ina with a good many scenic spots, some of which are Happy Valley, Window of the World and Xiao Mei Sha. As one of the special economic zones in China, Shenzhen has been developing rapidly. What excites us most is that more and more people in Shenzhen get involved in sports, which makes it a host ci

16、ty of the 2011.,【寫作內(nèi)容】 假如你為學(xué)校英文報(bào)刊的“海外之聲”欄目投稿，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容寫一篇短文介紹澳大利亞。,【寫作要求】 1. 只能用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容； 2. 把5個(gè)句子組成連貫的短文。,Australia _ _,Australia, the largest country in Oceania, lies on the west coast of the Pacific, with an area of 7.6 million square kilometers.,Possible versions for Sentence,As the largest cou

17、ntry in Oceania, Australia lies on the west coast of the Pacific, covering an area of 7.6 million square kilometers.,Located on the west coast of the Pacific, Australia is the largest country in Oceania, covering/with an area of 7.6 million square kilometers.,It has a small population of over 10 mil

18、lion and most of its population live in the east of the country by the sea.,Possible versions for Sentence,It has a small population of over 10 million, most of which live in the east coast of the country.,Sydney is the biggest city in Australia, which has many places of interest and the Opera House is well known all over the world.,Possible versions for Sentence,Sydney, the biggest city in Australia, has many places of interest including the world famous Opera House.,Sydney