高考專題寫作部分詳細(xì)解析

高考專題 寫作部分一、高考真題例析2009.山東卷寫作 （一）、題目：假設(shè)你是李華，曾在美國(guó)學(xué)習(xí)半年，現(xiàn)已回國(guó)。你想聯(lián)系你的美國(guó)老師Mr. Smith,但沒有其聯(lián)系方式。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給你的美國(guó)同學(xué)Tom 寫一封信： 感謝Tom對(duì)你英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的幫助； 詢問Mr.smith 的近況并索要其聯(lián)系方式； 邀請(qǐng)Tom在春節(jié)期間來中國(guó)感受中國(guó)文化。 注意：1. 詞數(shù)120-150； 2可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。 （二）、命題特點(diǎn)：1、命題具有真實(shí)性和實(shí)用性，考生感到有話可說：近幾年來，又掀起了新一輪的出國(guó)熱，父母紛紛把子女送往國(guó)外接受教育，這一現(xiàn)象是本文的基礎(chǔ)，使主題貼近考生的實(shí)際生活。并可以引導(dǎo)考生思考自己身邊的中國(guó)文化，做到有感而發(fā)，而不是為了寫作而寫作。學(xué)生在實(shí)際生活中會(huì)經(jīng)常遇到這樣的問題忘記某人的聯(lián)系方式，更增加了高考寫作的實(shí)用性和真實(shí)性。而且這種書信的格式在平常的訓(xùn)練中很多，較為常見，學(xué)生對(duì)此比較熟悉和了解。2、題目既有明確的寫作內(nèi)容上的限制，又具有一定的開放性，給優(yōu)秀考生提供了更多的寫作空間，便于發(fā)揮。作為提綱式作文，要點(diǎn)提示簡(jiǎn)潔，全面。具體內(nèi)容為一名學(xué)生回國(guó)后給美國(guó)同學(xué)寫信邀請(qǐng)其來中國(guó)感受中國(guó)的文化化同時(shí)索要美國(guó)老師的聯(lián)系方式，要求從1 感謝Tom對(duì)你英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的幫助；2 詢問Mr. smith的近況并索要其聯(lián)系方式；3 邀請(qǐng)Tom在春節(jié)期間來中國(guó)感受中國(guó)文化。三個(gè)方面來寫這封信。三個(gè)要點(diǎn)明確，但因?yàn)樵~數(shù)要求是120-150，所以只簡(jiǎn)單的寫三個(gè)要點(diǎn)肯定是達(dá)不到要求的。這就給不同層次的學(xué)生一定的發(fā)揮空間，讓他們有話可說，有話能說，有話說好。整體難度略低于去年書面表達(dá)。能夠比較有效合理的考察考生的綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力。（三）、考生答卷中存在的主要問題1. 要點(diǎn)的偏離或遺漏。今年的作文要點(diǎn)非常明確，已經(jīng)以漢語(yǔ)形式給出，并且標(biāo)出了1，2，3。按說不該在要點(diǎn)上出問題。但在主題方面還是出現(xiàn)了下面幾種情況：1）第一個(gè)要點(diǎn)太短，沒展開。一筆帶過，一句話Thank you for your help完事。因?yàn)闈h語(yǔ)給出的內(nèi)容和后面兩個(gè)是并列的，所以從篇幅上太短的話不妥。這里應(yīng)該稍微展開寫上幾句，如：感謝你幫我學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)，幫我適應(yīng)陌生的環(huán)境，在我生病的時(shí)候照顧我等。這兒我覺得需要自己發(fā)揮一下想象力。2) 在第二個(gè)要點(diǎn)中，Tom和Mr.Smith兩個(gè)人物關(guān)系弄混了,不知道哪個(gè)是老師，哪個(gè)是朋友了。第二個(gè)要點(diǎn)要求李華問候老師Mr.Smith,并且要Mr.Smith 的聯(lián)系方式。有同學(xué)寫著寫著把兩個(gè)人混成一個(gè)人了，如：“Tom, 你是我最好的老師，我好久沒和你聯(lián)系了，能告訴我你的聯(lián)系方式嗎？”這么寫得不在少數(shù)。3）在第三個(gè)要點(diǎn)中，有的同學(xué)也邀請(qǐng)Tom到中國(guó)來感受中國(guó)文化，但是沒有提到“春節(jié)”。春節(jié)”是個(gè)關(guān)鍵詞，沒有提這兩個(gè)字，別的內(nèi)容發(fā)揮得再多也沒有用。也有提到“春節(jié)”，但是沒有寫“感受中國(guó)文化的?！蔽覀兺ǔ?huì)認(rèn)為只有英語(yǔ)程度差的同學(xué)才會(huì)犯這樣的錯(cuò)誤，其實(shí)不都是這樣。有個(gè)老師對(duì)她看的一份試卷非常惋惜，這篇作文寫得相當(dāng)好，書寫就象字貼，用了不少高級(jí)詞匯，復(fù)合句也用得非常準(zhǔn)確，簡(jiǎn)直可以算是滿分卷，或者至少是優(yōu)秀卷，但是該生就犯了第二個(gè)錯(cuò)誤，一直把兩個(gè)人當(dāng)做一個(gè)人，沒提Mr.Smith這個(gè)人。最后這個(gè)老師和組長(zhǎng)商量的結(jié)果是最多及格，18分，最后看在他其他內(nèi)容的太好的份上給了20分。2語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤分為大錯(cuò)和小錯(cuò)，大錯(cuò)指的是：搭配錯(cuò)誤、詞語(yǔ)用錯(cuò)（介詞、名詞、動(dòng)詞、形容詞、副詞）、時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)、主謂一致、非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞、句式等錯(cuò)誤；小錯(cuò)是：?jiǎn)卧~拼寫、冠詞、大小寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)錯(cuò)誤?！罢Z(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)多樣，詞匯豐富，顯示出較強(qiáng)的語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力，語(yǔ)言小錯(cuò)不超過四個(gè)的是優(yōu)秀檔次（26分上）。事實(shí)上，考生在寫作中所犯的顯而易見的大錯(cuò)占很大比例。如：1 Thanks you for your help with my English study.2 Im grateful for you .3 Now I very like English / I am very like English.4 How are Mr. Smith ?5 I want to know Mr. Smiths telephone.7 Could I invent you to come to China in Spring Day?8 Welcome you come China.3基本詞匯使用錯(cuò)誤。感謝你對(duì)我的幫助：I thanks to you help. / Thanking for your help. /Thanked to your help.他怎么樣？ How about he? / Is his body healthy? / Is he good?春節(jié)的寫法： Spring Day./. Spring holiday./. Spring Autumn/ New year/“文化”的詞性：culture, cultural分不清哪個(gè)是名詞，哪個(gè)是形容詞。史密斯老師：teacher Mr.Smith與取得/保持/失去聯(lián)系 get/keep in touch with /lose touch with/4. 復(fù)雜句式的錯(cuò)誤使用有的同學(xué)想使用復(fù)合句出彩，結(jié)果出現(xiàn)很多用錯(cuò)的情況，效果適得其反。如虛擬語(yǔ)氣的錯(cuò)誤使用：Without your help, My English cant improve so quickly. (正：Without your help, My English couldnt have improved so quickly.)定語(yǔ)從句： I will never forget the half year that we stayed together. ( 正：I will never forget the half year when we stayed together. I will never forget the half year that we spent together.)象這么寫，還不如全文都用簡(jiǎn)單句，如果一點(diǎn)兒沒有錯(cuò)誤的話，會(huì)在25分左右。5書寫的問題?？忌脑嚲硎墙?jīng)專門技術(shù)人員掃描上網(wǎng)再評(píng)閱的，所以考生按要求必須使用黑色0.5毫米簽字筆寫在試卷的規(guī)定位置，詞數(shù)要120-150 ，詞數(shù)少于120或者多于150的扣2分，字跡要清晰，字體要大得足以讓評(píng)卷員看清，卷面要整潔，不可大量涂抹。有好多需要3評(píng)4評(píng)的試卷是因?yàn)樾栀M(fèi)勁辨認(rèn)的字體而得分懸殊大，甚至有試卷字體太小幾乎無法看見，耗費(fèi)評(píng)卷員太多時(shí)間。按閱卷工作的進(jìn)度要求，每份試卷需大約20秒完成提交結(jié)果，字體和卷面有問題的試卷肯定影響考生的最終成績(jī)。雖然閱卷沒有提出特別的要求，但是書寫還是會(huì)直接影響閱卷老師的情緒，在同樣水平的情況下，卷面整潔，書寫仔細(xì)的同學(xué)老師會(huì)愿意多給幾分。有些同學(xué)的字寫得太小，太密，行距太小的話，掃描以后讓人很難辨認(rèn)。還有不用黑色中性筆的，掃描出來之后，字跡模糊，不清楚。6抄寫別的文章。有些學(xué)生以為不會(huì)寫作文，抄別的文章蒙一下。其實(shí)真是沒有用處。因?yàn)槭请p評(píng)，兩個(gè)老師都非常小心，不可能看一眼書寫就給分的。許多學(xué)生比較聰明，開頭結(jié)尾自己寫兩句，中間抄；也有的每段開頭自己寫一句后面抄；也有的全篇抄，中間不時(shí)出現(xiàn)Tom和Mr.Smith這樣的詞造成一種假象?？吹嚼哿说臅r(shí)候老師最愿意看的有兩種試卷，一種是白卷，一種是抄的，直接給零分就行了，不用動(dòng)腦而且又不會(huì)出差錯(cuò)。附：作文的閱卷標(biāo)準(zhǔn)作文得分分為七檔：1、極優(yōu)檔：30分書寫規(guī)范，覆蓋所有要點(diǎn)，內(nèi)容充實(shí)，詞匯豐富，有修辭意識(shí)。（滿分作文極少）2、優(yōu)秀2629分緊扣主題，覆蓋所有要點(diǎn)，內(nèi)容充實(shí)，語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)多樣，詞匯豐富，顯示出較強(qiáng)的語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力。語(yǔ)言小錯(cuò)不超過4個(gè)。（有高級(jí)詞匯，有表達(dá)正確的復(fù)合句）3、良好：2225分緊扣主題，覆蓋所有要點(diǎn)，內(nèi)容較充實(shí)，語(yǔ)言有少量錯(cuò)誤，但基本不影響意思表達(dá)。4、一般：1821分緊扣主題，基本覆蓋所有要點(diǎn)，能夠表達(dá)基本內(nèi)容。錯(cuò)誤已影響了部分意思的表達(dá)，但多數(shù)句子基本正確。5、較差：1317分內(nèi)容不完整，要點(diǎn)不全，行文不連貫，語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤（尤其是大錯(cuò)）較多，多數(shù)句子基本正確。6、差：612分內(nèi)容混亂或主要內(nèi)容偏離主題，能夠?qū)懗錾贁?shù)與內(nèi)容相關(guān)的可讀句。7、極差：05分只能寫出與內(nèi)容相關(guān)的詞語(yǔ)，沒有有效信息；抄寫其他文章或只寫出與作文相關(guān)的內(nèi)容。寫作部分對(duì)教學(xué)的反思二、應(yīng)試技巧點(diǎn)撥閃光的英語(yǔ)作文包含四個(gè)要素：1、完整性：句子結(jié)構(gòu)完整，意義完整；2、連貫性：句子各部分之間以及句子之間的關(guān)系緊密、協(xié)調(diào)，前后意思連貫，思想表達(dá)清楚有序；3、簡(jiǎn)潔性：言簡(jiǎn)意賅；4、多樣性：包括詞匯多樣性和句子多樣性。以上四要素中，前三個(gè)要素是前提和基礎(chǔ)，比較容易做到；多樣性是對(duì)前三個(gè)要素的升華，是作文閃光點(diǎn)的核心和關(guān)鍵所在。接下來，就請(qǐng)大家跟我一起來了解如何寫出多姿多彩的英語(yǔ)！ 寫作應(yīng)遵循的步驟： 1、仔細(xì)審題，弄清大意。仔細(xì)審題，弄清寫作內(nèi)容，如背景、人物、時(shí)間、體裁、詞數(shù)限制等要求。 2、編寫提綱，列出要點(diǎn)。審題之后便要根據(jù)內(nèi)容列出提綱，整理出內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，理清要點(diǎn)一方面不至于信馬由韁、漫無邊際，另一方面也不至于遺漏內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。 3、緊扣要點(diǎn)，擴(kuò)寫成文。擴(kuò)寫時(shí)，可運(yùn)用想象適度發(fā)揮，但切記不可隨意亂寫，要緊扣文字或圖表提示，適當(dāng)描述，連貫通順，條理清晰即可。 4、反復(fù)修改，認(rèn)真謄寫。擴(kuò)寫后要認(rèn)真審查，檢查語(yǔ)義是否通順連貫。檢查時(shí)注意是否有要點(diǎn)遺漏，語(yǔ)法和拼寫錯(cuò)誤，如事態(tài)、人稱、大小寫和標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)等，然后將短文抄寫在試卷上。I 分類指導(dǎo)訓(xùn)練一、書面表達(dá)不同題材分類寫作：書面表達(dá)按照題材常分為：A. 正反觀點(diǎn)類B. 數(shù)據(jù)式圖表類C. 看圖說話類D. 應(yīng)聘類E. 提示議論文類F. 應(yīng)用文類G. 表示今昔對(duì)比類寫作套語(yǔ)類H. 地圖/路線圖類I. 介紹某人，某物，某地，某計(jì)劃，某項(xiàng)目類下面分別講解：A. 支持與反對(duì)觀點(diǎn)陳述類（議論文）一、寫作模式總起常用句子：1.Different people hold different opinions. 2.Opinions are divided. 3.People have taken/adopted different attitudes towards 4.People have different opinions on this problem.5.People take different views on this question.表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)一常用句子:1.Some of us think/ hold the view /are in favor of the idea that2.The reason is that.Besides, 3.Some are against the view that. 表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)二常用句子: 1.However/On the other hand 2.others have just the opposite opinion. They think thatWhats more,3.However, each coin has two sides. 本人觀點(diǎn)常用句子：1.As far as I am concerned, 2.In my opinion,; Its my opinion that 3.In a word,Only throughcan we have a bright future.二、寫作模式2We had a heated discussion about/on . Students views/ideas/opinions on it vary/differ from person to person. Some students say / think / believe that However, others hold the view that As far as I am concerned, I am in favor of the first/second view./ I would like to .The reasons are as follows. First, Secondly,In conclusion / In a word ,三、寫作模式3 There is a widespread concern over the issue that （作文題目）.But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person. A majority of people think that 觀點(diǎn)一. In their views there are two factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place,原因一.Furthermore, in the second place, 原因二. So it goes without saying that觀點(diǎn)一. People,however,differintheiropinionsonthismatter.Somepeoplehold the idea that觀點(diǎn)二. In their point of view, on the one hand，原因一. On the other hand,原因二. Therefore, there is no doubt that觀點(diǎn)二. As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the viewthat觀點(diǎn)一或二.Itis not only because _, but also because _. The more_ _, the more_.四、實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練：1.當(dāng)前不少文學(xué)作品被改編成電影。有人選擇看電影，有人則喜歡讀原著。請(qǐng)你以“Film or book, which do you prefer?”為題，按照下列要點(diǎn)寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文：看電影：省時(shí)、有趣、易懂讀原著：細(xì)節(jié)更多、語(yǔ)言優(yōu)美我的看法及理由注意：1、詞數(shù)：120-150字。 文章題目和開頭已給出（不計(jì)入詞數(shù)）。2、參考詞匯： original work 或 book in the original （原著） Film or book, which do you prefer?Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original._附：One possible VersionSome of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original. The reason is that it takes less time to understand the whole story. Besides, the film is usually more interesting than the original, and it is easier to follow.Some others have just the opposite opinion. They think that they can get more detailed information from the original. Meanwhile, the language in the book is possibly more lively and beautiful.As far as I am concerned, I agree with the second view. Actually I have more reasons for it.first I think I can stay at home, reading quietly in a situation of my own, and whats more, I am able to better understand the authors ideas. In a word, to read the original work is better than to see the film based on it.假定你是李華。在最近的一次班會(huì)上，你班同學(xué)們就“高三學(xué)生是否需要吃補(bǔ)品來保持健康”展開了討論。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表提供的信息用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文，并談一些你自己的看法，給某英語(yǔ)雜志投稿。60%的同學(xué)認(rèn)為40%的同學(xué)認(rèn)為1堅(jiān)持鍛煉，無需吃任何補(bǔ)品（tonics）。1高三階段課業(yè)繁重，很多同學(xué)經(jīng)常感到疲勞2過多吸收補(bǔ)品會(huì)增加體重，對(duì)健康不利。2補(bǔ)品可以幫助恢復(fù)精力。3價(jià)格比較貴。3沒時(shí)間鍛煉身體。你的看法：要求：1.詞數(shù)：120-150 2.書面整潔美觀。 _ _ B.數(shù)據(jù)式圖表類圖表作文的結(jié)構(gòu)通常是三段式：第一段分析圖表中的數(shù)據(jù)變化反映出的問題或趨勢(shì)，簡(jiǎn)要概述圖表所揭示的信息；第二段分析原因；第三段提出解決問題的辦法或建議。寫作時(shí)注意直截了當(dāng)、盡快入題，適當(dāng)加入自己的議論，力爭(zhēng)做到觀點(diǎn)明確，不要拐彎抹角，拖泥帶水，使人讀后一頭霧水。另外，同學(xué)們還應(yīng)該注意以下幾個(gè)小問題：文章應(yīng)包括圖表所示內(nèi)容，但不是全部寫到；敘述調(diào)查結(jié)果時(shí)要避免重復(fù)使用百分比；最重要的是要有表明自己觀點(diǎn)的句子。書寫要規(guī)范，包括大小寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)等。寫作之后還要注意認(rèn)真檢查，改正錯(cuò)誤。一、圖表作文形式：數(shù)字表：曲線圖(line graph) 圖形表：餅狀圖(pie chart)條狀圖(bar chart)表格類(table)二、常見的表達(dá)用語(yǔ)：上升go up to/ climb to/ increase to/ rise to/jump to例句：The population of this city has been increasing to 250 million.保持沒變 remain; not change例句：The number of fires in each month remained the same.下降fall to; go down to; decrease; drop to; decline;例句：In comparison with that in 1988, the percentage of peak points decreased by 30%.句式：1.The table shows (indicates) that a great number of people spent their holidays traveling abroad. 2.As we can see from the graph that the rate dropped slightly from 38% in 1993 to 31% in 2003. 3.From the table we can find out that only 35% of the people have taken in physical activities. 4.According to Chart I, the number was ten times as many as in 1995. 5. Compared with the boys, the girls show more interested in chatting. 6. It doubled the number of last year. 結(jié)束語(yǔ) 1.As can be seen from the chart that, only 10% of the time is taken up with sports activities. 2.As is shown in the chart, the production last month rose so significantly 3.As is described in the chart, the total number of visitors to the United States had nearlydoubled to 2.7 million person by 1974.4.It is clear from the chart that as incomes increase people can afford to live more comfortably and eat well.三、實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練： 1.假如你叫李華，參加學(xué)校開展的“有困難向誰(shuí)求助”(Whom do you turn to when in trouble?)的調(diào)查活動(dòng)，調(diào)查結(jié)果如下表。請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)給校報(bào)編輯寫一封信反映相關(guān)內(nèi)容。求助對(duì)象比例理 由同學(xué)、朋友58年齡相仿，容易理解與交流老師、家長(zhǎng)30有愛心、有經(jīng)驗(yàn)，可以信任無12不愿與人交流，難以與人溝通注意：1.內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)全面，并表達(dá)出你的觀點(diǎn)。為了使文章連貫，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。2.詞數(shù)：120-150詞左右。_參考答案：Dear editor,Im a student in Senior Three. We have made a survey-Who do you turn to when in trouble? Here are the results.Most of the students will go to their classmates or friends when in trouble. Theyre almost of the same age, so they can talk with and understand each other easily. Some students will tell their teachers or parents about their troubles and ask for their help as the teachers and parents have rich experience and love them very much. They can be trusted by these students. Only a few students solve their problems all by themselves. They hate to talk with others and cant get on well with others. They have few friends.In my opinion, when in trouble wed better ask our teachers, parents, friends or classmates for help.2. 觀察下列圖表，請(qǐng)以“Changes in the Ownership of House”為題，為校報(bào)寫一篇短文。 注意：短文應(yīng)包括以下內(nèi)容： 1、根據(jù)圖示描述該市住房產(chǎn)權(quán)的變化 2、分析產(chǎn)生這些變化的原因3、說明這些變化對(duì)個(gè)人和社會(huì)產(chǎn)生的影響1995 2000 2005(75:25) (60:40) (20:80)首句已經(jīng)為你寫好。詞數(shù)120-150左右。As can be seen from the chart, ownership of houses in a big city in China changed in the past ten years._參考答案：Ownership of Houses in a Big City in China As can be seen from the chart, ownership of houses in a big city in China changed in the past ten years. In 1995, 75 percent of the houses were state-owned. Five years later, the rate of state-owned houses to private ones was 3 to 2. But from then on, the ownership of houses changed rapidly and so far 80 percent of houses have been private. What caused the changes? There might have been two main reasons. First, from 1995 up to now, the peoples living standards have been improving. Most of them can afford to buy the houses. Second, most people do not save a lot of money in the bank for their children as their ideas of parents did in the past. They want to have their own home and enjoy life. Such changes have had a great effect on the development of society. It does good to both the citizens and the government.C. 看圖說話類文章（屬記敘文類）一、寫作指導(dǎo)在做看圖作文時(shí)，首先要學(xué)會(huì)看圖。這種圖畫一般在平面上通過線條、色彩、明暗等藝術(shù)手段，創(chuàng)造出人們可以直接感覺到的視覺形象和空間形象，來反映生活，來表達(dá)作者的某種思想傾向、某種愛憎和他們對(duì)現(xiàn)實(shí)的評(píng)價(jià)。學(xué)生在做這類題時(shí)，要審清題意，看懂畫面所表達(dá)的意思，緊扣主題。防止因?qū)Ξ嬅娴腻e(cuò)誤理解而走題。有些畫面上附有提示，注意仔細(xì)參閱，正確使用。因?yàn)閷儆谟洈⑽模⒁庖韵虏襟E：1.(the beginning)要交待清楚五要素的內(nèi)容，即where, when, what, who ,how，給讀者一個(gè)內(nèi)容完整、細(xì)節(jié)清晰的故事。2.(the middle)事情的敘述可以按時(shí)間或空間的順序敘述，讓讀者易于把握所敘述內(nèi)容之間的內(nèi)在聯(lián)系，從而輕松理解文章主題。3.（the ending）根據(jù)圖片或圖表大意進(jìn)行議論。 （起到扣題或點(diǎn)題的作用）二、實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練：1.請(qǐng)用“中秋節(jié)的等待”為題，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文，描述下圖的內(nèi)容，并就此發(fā)表你的評(píng)論記敘文的寫作要素（即篇章結(jié)構(gòu)）：要求：1文章必須包括描述和評(píng)論兩部分；2詞數(shù)為120-150。_附：參考答案Waiting on Mid-autumn FestivalIt is a quarter past nine at night. The old couple have had the reunion dinner prepared for a long time. They are sitting at the table waiting for their son, daughter-in-law and their lovely grandchildren. The dishes are gradually cooling down, but they have not come yet. The grandmother stares at the door eagerly and the grandfather is making telephone calls but can not get through.Are they too busy to come to their parents home to eat a dinner on Mid-autumn Festival?It ought to be a happy day for families to get together. But like the old couple in the picture, today many old people are ignored by their children. They also need love and care. There is nothing more important than their familys happiness for them. So every adult should try their best to spend some time with their parents and comfort their lonely heart.2.高考是全社會(huì)關(guān)注的大事，學(xué)校和家庭表現(xiàn)尤為突出。家庭成員對(duì)考生從學(xué)習(xí)到生活給予無微不至的關(guān)懷，結(jié)果卻給考生帶來負(fù)面影響。根據(jù)圖畫所描述的內(nèi)容寫一篇文章,并發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)(夾敘夾議)。詞數(shù)120-150。As the College Entrance Examination is drawing near，_附：參考答案As the College Entrance Examination is drawing near, the situation is getting worse and worse. From the picture, we can see that Li Ming is studying hard. There are many books for him to read and many papers for him to do. How poor he is! At the same time, all his family are also busy working for him.Nowadays, many parents expect too much of their sons or daughters. They hope that their sons or daughters study hard in order to be admitted to an ideal college or a key university. It is for this reason that parents are strict with their children. However, they dont realize what they have become a heavy burden or a great pressure. It is the hard work or the great pressure that changes their children that much.So I hope parents provide a proper environment for their children. Only in this way, will they try their best and succeed at last! D.應(yīng)聘類（屬說明文類）一、寫作步驟：1.介紹消息來源2.表明求職心愿 3.介紹個(gè)人簡(jiǎn)歷，擺出求職優(yōu)勢(shì)4.請(qǐng)求答復(fù)聯(lián)系 5.表明感激之情二、實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練：1. 假設(shè)你是新華大學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，得知某英文報(bào)招聘兼職記者，你有意應(yīng)聘，請(qǐng)按下列要點(diǎn)給報(bào)社寫一封自薦信。1表示感興趣；2說明優(yōu)勢(shì)：知識(shí)面、英語(yǔ)水平、合作精神、相關(guān)經(jīng)歷；3希望得到回復(fù)。 注意：1詞數(shù)：120-150； 2可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Dear Sir or Madam,_ Yours sincerely, Li Hua附：參考答案Dear Sir or Madam, Im a student from Xinhua University. Im glad to learn that you want a few part-time English reporters. Im quite interested in it. I think Im fit for the job. As a student, Ive read a lot and have much knowledge in many fields. Im fond of English and do well in both speaking and writing. Besides,Im easy to get along with and enjoy working together with others. Above all, I once worked as a reporter for my school broadcasting station. So Im sure I can do the job well if I can get the position.Im looking forward to an early reply if possible. And Id appreciate it very much if you could call me at . Thank you very much. Yours sincerely, Li HuaE.提示議論文類 這一類文章往往先給出一觀點(diǎn)或現(xiàn)狀，然后讓你發(fā)表你自己的看法。一、寫作步驟：1.文章開頭，能依據(jù)提示確立主題句（topic sentence）, 闡明觀點(diǎn)或看法。2. 使用連接詞, 分層次說明理由、緣由（supporting sentences）。3. 歸納總結(jié)（conclusion），首尾呼應(yīng)。 二、寫作模板：Some people believe that _（觀點(diǎn)）. For example, they think _（舉例說明）And it will bring them_(為他們帶來的好處). In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point. For one thing,-(我不同意該看法的理由一). For another thing, -(反對(duì)的理由之二) Form all what I have said, I agree to the thought that -(我對(duì)文章所討論主題的看法)三、實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練：1. 有些人以為，某些數(shù)字，如6、8、9等會(huì)帶來好運(yùn)。在選擇車牌號(hào)、電話號(hào)碼時(shí)，他們不惜花高昂的“擇號(hào)費(fèi)”來獲得這些數(shù)字。你卻認(rèn)為，成功和財(cái)富與這些所謂的吉祥數(shù)字無關(guān)，而是艱苦勞動(dòng)和不懈努力的結(jié)果。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以上內(nèi)容用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文。 注意：1、文章的標(biāo)題已給出；2、詞數(shù)120-150左右。Do Lucky Numbers Really Bring Good Luck?_附：參考答案：Do Lucky Numbers Really Bring Good Luck?Some people think certain numbers may bring good luck to them. These numbers include 6,8,9 and so on. Therefore, when they want to choose a car number or a phone number, they buy the number which ends with these lucky numbers at a high price.In my opinion, success and luck have nothing to do with such so-called lucky numbers. For one thing, the only key to success or wealth lies in hard work and persistence. If we are too dependent on the lucky numbers, we may become lazy or even discouraged when they proved to be useless. For another, we should believe in ourselves and make great efforts to struggle for success as well as wealth.Form all what I have said, I agree to the thought that there are no lucky numbers.2. 假如你叫王麗,是一位高中生。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給報(bào)社寫一封信，反映如下情況并談?wù)勀愕牡南敕ǎ?. 現(xiàn)在有很多學(xué)生使用手機(jī)一是認(rèn)為這是種時(shí)髦二是認(rèn)為便于跟家人和朋友聯(lián)系。2. 一些學(xué)生把手機(jī)帶進(jìn)教室，在課堂上經(jīng)常聽見手機(jī)的鈴聲。破壞課堂紀(jì)律。3. 有的同學(xué)還在課堂上發(fā)短信息，浪費(fèi)寶貴的時(shí)間。4. 建議：教室