廣東省高考英語讀寫任務(wù)議論文專題寫作導(dǎo)練.ppt

廣東省高考英語讀寫任務(wù) 議論文專題寫作導(dǎo)練,閱讀短文后，按要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。,廣東省高考英語讀寫任務(wù)議論文寫作導(dǎo)練(1),廣東省高考英語讀寫任務(wù)議論文寫作導(dǎo)練(一)閱讀材料1,閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。 Scientists find that hard-working people live longer than average men and women. Career women are healthier than housewives. Evidence shows that the jobless are in poorer health than the job-holders. A study shows that whenever the employment rate increases by 1%, the death rate increase correspondingly(相應(yīng)地) by 2%. All this comes down to one point: work is helpful to health.,廣東省高考英語讀寫任務(wù)議論文寫作導(dǎo)練(一)閱讀材料2,Why is work good for health? It is because work keeps people busy, away from loneliness. Researches show that people feel unhappy, worried and lonely when they have nothing to do. Instead, the happiest are those who are busy. Work serves as a bridge between man and reality. By work, people come into contact with each other. By collective activities, they find friendship and warmth. This is helpful to health. The loss of work means the loss of everything. It affects man spiritually and makes him likely to disease. Besides, work gives one a sense of fulfillment and a sense of achievement. Work makes one feel his value and status in society. When a writer finishes his writing or teacher sees his students grow, they are happy beyond words.,廣東省高考英語讀寫任務(wù)議論文寫作導(dǎo)練(一),寫作內(nèi)容 1)以約30個(gè)詞概括短文的要點(diǎn)； 2)然后以約120個(gè)詞就“努力學(xué)習(xí)，快樂生活”的主題發(fā)表看法，并包括如下要點(diǎn)： a)你贊同“努力學(xué)習(xí)也可以快樂生活”這一觀點(diǎn)嗎？為什么？ b)舉例說明你的同學(xué)是如何努力學(xué)習(xí)并保持健康樂觀的心態(tài)的？ c)簡述如何才能做到努力學(xué)習(xí)并快樂生活？ 寫作要求 (1)可以使用實(shí)例或其它論述方法支持你的論點(diǎn)，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子； (2)標(biāo)題自定。 評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)概括準(zhǔn)確，語言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，篇章連貫。,廣東省高考英語讀寫任務(wù)議論文寫作導(dǎo)練(一)寫作指導(dǎo)1,寫作指導(dǎo) (1)擬定標(biāo)題：根據(jù)議論的主題及寫作內(nèi)容確定標(biāo)題： Study hard and enjoy yourselves。 (3)扼要概括：找出議論文的基本要素，然后用自己的話表達(dá)出來。,廣東省高考英語讀寫任務(wù)議論文寫作導(dǎo)練(一)寫作指導(dǎo)2,(3)確立觀點(diǎn)，實(shí)施論證：首先要定好自己的觀點(diǎn)，不一定是自己本來持有的觀點(diǎn)，主要是看文章怎么好寫就怎樣立論。然后，根據(jù)所給“寫作內(nèi)容”進(jìn)行構(gòu)思，此處要求舉例說明你的同學(xué)是如何努力學(xué)習(xí)并保持健康樂觀的心態(tài)的，那么，寫之前可以想一想平時(shí)的學(xué)習(xí)過程中，什么時(shí)候會(huì)發(fā)笑，會(huì)高興，再把它們搬到同學(xué)的身上，用第三人稱即可。如一起分享攻克難題后的喜悅；新學(xué)會(huì)的諺語剛好應(yīng)景而生；開同學(xué)一個(gè)無傷大雅的玩笑；學(xué)習(xí)之余，抽半個(gè)小時(shí)來一場三人小組籃球賽進(jìn)行自我調(diào)節(jié)等等。,最后，用一兩句話簡述你的看法。,廣東省高考英語讀寫任務(wù)議論文寫作導(dǎo)練(一) 參考答案1,參考范文 How to protect the cultural heritages in our country？ The Great Wall is one of the Seven Wonders of the World and a symbol of the ancient Chinese civilization, but now it is in danger and some day it may disappear because of some local peoples destroy. What a pity！As we can see，some other valuable and important relics in our country have been destroying as well. Why are some people doing that so foolishly？Because the local people are not aware of their importance. Cultural heritages are left to us by our ancestors and are also symbols of their wisdoms, which played a very important role in history.,廣東省高考英語讀寫任務(wù)議論文寫作導(dǎo)練(三)參考范文2,Around me, some of my classmates work very hard, hoping to fulfill their dream. However, they dont seem unhappy. Oppositely, they try to find fun even under the pressure of the NMET. For example, they may share the joy with others when working out a problem. Sometimes they may play a trick on his partner using the newly-learned idioms, thus refresh themselves quickly. As for me, I think only when we truly experience what fun it is, can we spare no effort to study hard and meanwhile enjoy ourselves.,廣東省高考英語讀寫任務(wù)議論文寫作導(dǎo)練(2),廣東省高考英語讀寫任務(wù)議論文寫作導(dǎo)練(二)閱讀材料1,閱讀下面這篇短文，按要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。 No one can believe that the over 6,300-kilometer Great Wall might disappear some day. Believe it or not, the Great Wall is being destroyed by people. Less than 20 percent of the Great Wall built in the Ming Dynasty is still perfect, but about 80 percent is in danger. The Great Wall can be called “great” mostly because of its amazing length. But we should realize that the length was made up of one brick at a time. If we do nothing to save the Great Wall, it will become a series of separate wasteland rather than a historic site.,廣東省高考英語讀寫任務(wù)議論文寫作導(dǎo)練(二)閱讀材料2,The Great Wall is actually a series of walls built and rebuilt by different dynasties over the past 2,000 years. It began in the rule of Chinas first emperor, Qin Shihuang of the Qin Dynasty (221 BC206 BC), and lasted into the Ming Dynasty. The parts built before the Ming Dynasty have nearly disappeared. The bricks on the Great Wall are carried off by countryside people to build their houses, sheep corrals and pigsties. Some were taken away to build roads. Bricks carved with peoples names are put away as remembrances. Rubbish is spread over the battlements. The bricks can be sold for 15 yuan per tractor load. Those who destroyed and are destroying the Wall know its name, but are not clear about its cultural meaning. It will take a long time to let them know this. The local farmers not only carried off the body of the Wall but also dug out the entire base.,廣東省高考英語讀寫任務(wù)議論文寫作導(dǎo)練(二),寫作內(nèi)容 1)以約30個(gè)詞概括短文的要點(diǎn)； 2)然后以約120個(gè)詞就“如何保護(hù)我國的文化遺產(chǎn)”的主題發(fā)表看法，并包括如下要點(diǎn)： a)你是如何看待我國的文化遺產(chǎn)遭到破壞的現(xiàn)象的？ b)保護(hù)文化遺產(chǎn)有何意義； c)保護(hù)我國的文化遺產(chǎn)的建議。 寫作要求 (1)可以參照閱讀材料的篇章結(jié)構(gòu)，組織故事，但不得直接引用原文中的句子； (2)標(biāo)題自定。 評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn) 概括準(zhǔn)確，語言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，篇章連貫。,廣東省高考英語讀寫任務(wù)議論文寫作導(dǎo)練(二)寫作指導(dǎo),寫作指導(dǎo) (1)確定體裁：閱讀材料，可以了解到萬里長城目前因?yàn)榉N種原因遭到了破壞，并以小見大，引發(fā)對(duì)我國其它歷史文化遺產(chǎn)保護(hù)的必要，要求寫一篇議論文。 (2)擬定標(biāo)題：How to protect the cultural heritages in our country？ (3)如何概括：找出論點(diǎn)(Great Wall might disappear some day)和論據(jù)(the Great Wall is being destroyed by people: to build their houses, sheep corrals and pigsties; to build roads; sold for 15 yuan per tractor load)； 用自己的話將上述論點(diǎn)和論據(jù)表達(dá)出來。 (4)發(fā)表看法：提出問題并加以分析：如何看待我國的文化遺產(chǎn)遭到破壞的現(xiàn)象，并分析其產(chǎn)生的根源； 問題的支持：寫保護(hù)文化遺產(chǎn)有何意義； 問題的解決：提出保護(hù)我國文化遺產(chǎn)的具體措施。,廣東省高考英語讀寫任務(wù)議論文寫作導(dǎo)練(二)參考答案1,參考范文 How to protect the cultural heritages in our country？ The Great Wall is one of the Seven Wonders of the World and a symbol of the ancient Chinese civilization, but now it is in danger and some day it may disappear because of some local peoples destroy. What a pity！As we can see，some other valuable and important relics in our country have been destroying as well. Why are some people doing that so foolishly？Because the local people are not aware of their importance. Cultural heritages are left to us by our ancestors and are also symbols of their wisdoms, which played a very important role in history.,廣東省高考英語讀寫任務(wù)議論文寫作導(dǎo)練(二)參考答案2,How should we protect our Cultural heritages? In my opinion, firstly, we should make some people who lack of cultural knowledge know about the importance of the historic relics. Destroying them means destroying ourselves. Secondly, the government should take some measures to protect them, and if necessary, laws will be made to punish those who destroy them on purpose. Only in this way can we make our history richer and richer.,廣東省高考英語讀寫任務(wù)議論文寫作導(dǎo)練(3),廣東省高考英語讀寫任務(wù)議論文寫作導(dǎo)練(三)閱讀材料1,閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。 You must have heard stress contributes to 80% of major illness and is responsible for 75% to 90% of doctors visits. But thats not stress; its distress. “Stress is the only anti-aging agent we know of the exact opposite of what we think,” says psychologist James E. Loehr.,廣東省高考英語讀寫任務(wù)議論文寫作導(dǎo)練(三)閱讀材料2,What really brings happiness is meeting obstacles and overcoming them. The damage occurs when stress levels never go down. A recent study showed it took nine days longer for the constantly stressed family caregivers of chronically(慢性地) ill patients to heal from wounds than it took other people the same age. Stress is essential. Life without it would be like having a brand-new cherry-red Porsche and driving it only in the driveway.,廣東省高考英語讀寫任務(wù)議論文寫作導(dǎo)練(三),寫作內(nèi)容 1)以約30個(gè)詞概括短文的要點(diǎn)； 2) 然后以約120個(gè)詞就“你如何看待壓力”的主題發(fā)表看法，并包括如下要點(diǎn)： a)你是如何看待壓力的？ b)在你的學(xué)習(xí)或生活中壓力是否大？如何正視壓力？寫作要求 (1)可以參照閱讀材料的篇章結(jié)構(gòu)，組織故事，但不得直接引用原文中的句子； (2)標(biāo)題自定。 評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn) 概括準(zhǔn)確，語言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，篇章連貫。,廣東省高考英語讀寫任務(wù)議論文寫作導(dǎo)練(三)寫作指導(dǎo),寫作指導(dǎo) (1)扼要概括：本文的論點(diǎn)、論據(jù)、結(jié)論。 用自己的話表達(dá)： 論點(diǎn)stress is not an obstacle but a power in our life, it is good for us to stay young. 論據(jù)和結(jié)論According to the study, we know that stress is necessary in our life, which can motivate us to go ahead. (2)構(gòu)思經(jīng)歷：作者認(rèn)為壓力是抗衰老的有效藥劑，生活的真正快樂來源于壓力給予我們的不斷的動(dòng)力。因此，可以介紹我們?cè)谄綍r(shí)學(xué)習(xí)中是如何將壓力變?yōu)閯?dòng)力，及如何正視壓力。,廣東省高考英語讀寫任務(wù)議論文寫作導(dǎo)練(三)參考答案1,參考范文 Stress keeps you young The passage tells us that stress is not an obstacle but a power of success in your life. Whats more, it is good for us to stay young. According to the study, we know that stress is necessary in our life, which can motivate us to go ahead.,廣東省高考英語讀寫任務(wù)議論文寫作導(dǎo)練(三)參考答案2,Everyone is affected by stressful situations. How to manage your stress? I hold the same view with the author: stress is essential and we should be lucky to be together with it. As for me, I am keen on studying and enjoy the stress from study now. Once upon a time, I was discouraged because of too much stress from heavy study task. Later, I found the key to taking stress head-on is being relaxed. The better you relax, the better mood you can get from study. Dont be pessimistic when stress comes into view, maybe its a turning point in your life.,廣東省高考英語讀寫任務(wù)議論文寫作導(dǎo)練(4),廣東省高考英語讀寫任務(wù)議論文寫作導(dǎo)練(四)閱讀材料1,閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。 There are two factors which determine an individuals intelligence. The first is sort of brain he is born with. Human brains differ considerable, some being more capable than others. But no matter how good a brain he has to begin with, an individual will have a low intelligence unless he has opportunities to learn. So the second factor is what happens to the individual the sort of the environment in which he is brought up. If an individual is handicapped(受阻礙) environmentally, it is likely that his brain will stop to develop and he will never attain the level of intelligence of which he is capable.,廣東省高考英語讀寫任務(wù)議論文寫作導(dǎo)練(四)閱讀材料2,The importance of environment in determining an individuals intelligence can be proved by the identical twins, Peter and John. When the twins were three months old, their parents died, and they were placed in separate foster(寄養(yǎng)) homes. Peter was reared by parents of low intelligence in an isolated community with poor educational opportunities. John, however, was educated in the home well-to-do parents who had been to college. This environmental difference continued until the twins were in their late teens, when they were given tests to measure their intelligence. Johns IQ was 125, twenty-five points higher than the average and fully forty points higher than his brother.,廣東省高考英語讀寫任務(wù)議論文寫作導(dǎo)練(四),寫作內(nèi)容 1)以約30個(gè)詞概括短文的要點(diǎn)； 2)然后以約120個(gè)詞就“環(huán)境與人的智力發(fā)展”的主題發(fā)表看法，并包括如下要點(diǎn)： a)你是否贊同“環(huán)境決定智力的發(fā)展”這一觀點(diǎn)？為什么？ b)請(qǐng)舉出具體事例說明你的觀點(diǎn)； c)你認(rèn)為如何才能最大限度地發(fā)展智力？ 寫作要求 (1)可以參照閱讀材料的篇章結(jié)構(gòu)，組織故事，但不得直接引用原文中的句子； (2)標(biāo)題自定。 評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn) 概括準(zhǔn)確，語言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，篇章連貫。,廣東省高考英語讀寫任務(wù)議論文寫作導(dǎo)練(四)寫作指導(dǎo)1,寫作指導(dǎo) (1)扼要概括：找出并轉(zhuǎn)述議論文的基本要素。,廣東省高考英語讀寫任務(wù)議論文寫作導(dǎo)練(四)寫作指導(dǎo)2,(2)確立觀點(diǎn)，實(shí)施論證：首先要定好自己的觀點(diǎn)，然后也可以按上面的表格去構(gòu)思?，F(xiàn)以“環(huán)境決定人的智力發(fā)展”這一觀點(diǎn)為例：,除了這些，要緊靠主題，從環(huán)境入手，闡述你對(duì)如何才能最大限度地發(fā)展智力的看法。,廣東省高考英語讀寫任務(wù)議論文寫作導(dǎo)練(四)參考范文1,參考范文 How to fully develop our intelligence? The writer argues in support of the importance of environment in terms of the development of a persons intelligence by giving an example of a twin brothers, who were brought up in different environment. Personally, I believe environment is crucial to an individual intelligence, as a good environment can offer more opportunities to increase his knowledge and broaden the horizons as well as the chances to practise.,廣東省高考英語讀寫任務(wù)議論文寫作導(dǎo)練(四)參考范文2,There was such a famous example in Chinese history. Zhongyong, born with a high IQ, distinguished himself by reciting and even writing poems as a child, which astonished others. Unfortunately, his father didnt offer him a good environment to foster him but instead, he often took him everywhere to show off his intelligence. Gradually, Zhongyong became an ordinary person. Thus, I think we, including our parents, our teacher, even the whole society, should try to create a good environment for the children to fully develop their intelligence, and for the children, they should also learn to exploit everything available to develop themselves.,廣東省高考英語讀寫任務(wù)議論文寫作導(dǎo)練(5),廣東省高考英語讀寫任務(wù)議論文寫作導(dǎo)練(五)閱讀材料1,閱讀下面的短文，然后按要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。 Years ago it was very difficult to travel from one place to another. The journeys were often long, tiring and dangerous. Today the picture has changed. Science has improved transportation and communication facilities a great deal. Traveling has become safer, more enjoyable and above all, more economical. Traveling whether within ones country or abroad brings many invaluable benefits. People travel for pleasure, business or for education and knowledge. In the world of yesterday most people were only able to read about strange and fascinating places across the mountains and seas.,廣東省高考英語讀寫任務(wù)議論文寫作導(dǎo)練(五)閱讀材料2,Later, with the coming of the cinema and television, mans curiosity about faraway places with strange sounding names was further stirred up. Today mans curiosity can be satisfied in luxurious comfort. There are first-class ships and airplanes to take him where his dreams lie. We travel to increase our knowledge of the world in which we live. Knowledge obtained from books alone is not enough. New knowledge of different lands and peoples enrich our mind and soul. Books generally do not give us a very true picture of lands beyond our shores. Some of them are even misleading.,廣東省高考英語讀寫任務(wù)議論文寫作導(dǎo)練(五),寫作內(nèi)容 1)以約30個(gè)詞概括短文的要點(diǎn)； 2)然后以約120個(gè)詞就“現(xiàn)代交通的利與弊”的主題發(fā)表看法，并包括如下要點(diǎn)： a)通過古今對(duì)比說明現(xiàn)代交通給我們帶來的好處； b)現(xiàn)代交通方式給我們帶來的負(fù)面影響； c)就如何消除這些負(fù)面影響提出你的建議。 寫作要求 (1)可以參照閱讀材料的篇章結(jié)構(gòu)，組織故事，但不得直接引用原文中的句子； (2)標(biāo)題自定。 評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn) 概括準(zhǔn)確，語言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，篇章連貫。,廣東省高考英語讀寫任務(wù)議論文寫作導(dǎo)練(五)寫作指導(dǎo)1,寫作指導(dǎo) (1)寫摘要：首先，找準(zhǔn)主題句，Science has improved transportation and communication facilities a great deal. Traveling has become safer, more enjoyable and above all, more economical.(第一段最后兩句) 論點(diǎn)：Traveling brings many invaluable benefits.(第二段第一句)；論據(jù)是：People travel for pleasure, business or for education and knowledge. (第二段第二句) We travel to increase our knowledge of the world. (第三段第一句)。然后，用一兩句自己的話把他們有機(jī)地聯(lián)系起來。,廣東省高考英語讀寫任務(wù)議論文寫作導(dǎo)練(五)寫作指導(dǎo)2,(2)列要點(diǎn)：根據(jù)要點(diǎn)列提綱，表達(dá)個(gè)人看法。 Para. 2: advantages In the past. But now Disadvantages air pollution, traffic jams, lack of energy Para. 3: suggestions a) make rules b) use bicycles instead of cars (3)擴(kuò)展成句，連句成文： 使用句子連接。如，用I cant agree more.把摘要和個(gè)人看法聯(lián)接起來。 使用連詞或連接性副詞。如：a) also b) Firstly. Secondly c) To begin with Whats more /Besides /Moreover Last but not least ,廣東省高考英語讀寫任務(wù)議論文寫作導(dǎo)練(五)參考范文1,參考范文 On Modern Transportation With the help of science, transportation makes traveling safer and easier, which brings lots of benefits like satisfying mans curiosity and increasing mans knowledge of the world. I cant agree more. As the legend goes: To carry the news of the Greek victory, Pheidippides, a professional runner, had to run 42 kilometers without stopping. He dropped dead of exhaustion after shouting, “Rejoice, we conquer!” That happened in 490BC, but now its easy for us to cover this distance by car.,廣東省高考英語讀寫任務(wù)議論文寫作導(dǎo)練(五)參考范文2,With the help of modern transportation, we can go everywhere we prefer to. Even the journey to outer space is not a dream any more. Despite the obvious advantages of modern transportation, it has also created many negative effects such as air pollution, traffic jams and lack of energy. To solve the problems, in my mind, there are two ways. On one hand, rules should be made for drivers to follow. On the other hand, if possible, wed better use bicycles instead of cars to save energy as well as easing traffic jams.,廣東省高考英語讀寫任務(wù)議論文寫作導(dǎo)練(6),廣東省高考英語讀寫任務(wù)議論文寫作導(dǎo)練(六)閱讀材料1,閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。 When we meet with difficulties in life, we notice that some of us choose to bury heads in the sand. Unfortunately, however, this attitude will do you no good, because if you have no courage to face them, how can you conquer them? Thus, be optimistic; as it can give you confidence and help you see yourself through the hard times. Keeping optimistic, you will be able to realize, in spite of some hardship, theres always hope waiting for you, which will lead you to the ultimate success. Thomas Edison is optimistic; if not, the light of hope in his heart could not give light to the whole world. Alfred Nobel is optimistic; if not, the explosives and the Nobel Prize would not have come into being.,廣東省高考英語讀寫任務(wù)議論文寫作導(dǎo)練(六)閱讀材料2,A rose may be beautiful, or may be not. That depends on your attitude only. So does success, and so does life. Difficulties do exist, but if you are optimistic, then they are only episodes(插曲) on your long way to success; there are more bridges than obstacles! The great British poet Shelleys lines say, “If winter comes, can spring be far behind?,廣東省高考英語讀寫任務(wù)議論文寫作導(dǎo)練(六),寫作內(nèi)容 1)以約30個(gè)詞概括短文的要點(diǎn)； 2)然后以約120個(gè)詞就“人為什么要樂觀？”的主題發(fā)表看法，并以自己的親身體驗(yàn)為例，說明樂觀至少有下列好處： a)使人身心健康； b)使人每天心情愉悅，開心度過每一天； c)使我們能夠勇敢地面對(duì)學(xué)習(xí)中所遇到的挫折； d)使人性格隨和，能與他人和諧相處。 寫作要求 (1)可以參照閱讀材料的篇章結(jié)構(gòu)，組織故事，但不得直接引用原文中的句子； (2)標(biāo)題自定。 評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)概括準(zhǔn)確，語言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，篇章連貫。,廣東省高考英語讀寫任務(wù)議論文寫作導(dǎo)練(六)參考范文1,參考范文 (六)Keeping optimistic We can know from the passage if we are optimistic we can conquer different kinds of difficulties in life when we meet them, and we will succeed in the end. In my study, I will get discouraged when I fail in an exam. I think Im hopeless and cant go to my ideal university. Whenever I am in bad mood, my teachers, especially my homeroom teacher, encourages me to be optimistic by saying the proverb “Nothing is difficult if you put your heart into it.”,廣東省高考英語讀寫任務(wù)議論文寫作導(dǎo)練(六)參考范文2,They also tell me to study harder and give me good advice on my study. Im grateful to them and agree with them. From now on, Ill no longer feel frustrated when I fail in an exam. On the contrary, I will still keep optimistic and study harder because I know failure is the mother of success. As long as I dont lose heart and work hard, Im sure Ill succeed in the end.,廣東省高考英語讀寫任務(wù)議論文寫作導(dǎo)練(7),廣東省高考英語讀寫任務(wù)議論文寫作導(dǎo)練(七)閱讀材料1,閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。 Competition and Cooperation Competition is common in our daily life now, and it exists everywhere. But it is very important. We always expect to do better than others in study, sports, and business and so on. It is believed that in a certain sense competition can propel the advancement of our society. For example, to build a skyscraper we need the combined efforts of the workers, or a beautiful blueprint would never be turned into a high building. A cooperative architect will not shut himself in his office. Instead, he will visit the construction