高考英語二輪專項寫作綜合課件.ppt

高考英語二輪 專項寫作綜合,你校校報急需在校內招聘一位同學任英文版編輯, 請你以學生會的名義用英文以An English Editor Wanted 為題寫一則招聘啟事,要點如下: 1.工作內容:從英文報刊 雜志及互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上選擇適合學生的文章;挑選和編輯同學們來稿. 2.要求: 樂意貢獻出一些業(yè)余時間為同學們服務;英文,美術皆好; 能熟練使用電腦. 3.請感興趣的同學在本周內與學生會聯(lián)系. 注意: 字數(shù)不少于60.,演練,招聘啟示寫作技巧: 首先招聘啟事, 要有吸引力, 且文字應容易為人們所明白. 啟事是一種公告性的應用文.無論機關,團體,單位還是個人需要向公眾說明什么事情,求得什么幫助,都可以要把說明的事情寫成啟事告知大眾.通常,啟事是張貼在廣告欄或墻上,必要時也可以登報.常見的啟事有招聘啟事,失物啟事,招領啟事等. 啟事的寫法: 把啟事內容的關鍵詞作為文章的標題寫在正文的正上方 如等. 2. 發(fā)布啟事的日期寫在正文的右上方,或省去不寫. 3.發(fā)布啟事的單位或個人的署名寫在正文的右下方. 4. 啟事一般不用稱呼,形式靈活多樣,語言言簡意賅,內容生 動活潑,招聘啟事開頭表達: Our school paper is in great need of Our shool paper is starving for Our shool paper is looking for 對申請人要求時可說: The applicant must He should . are necessary/ essential if you get the job, you should 交待聯(lián)系方式: Those who are interested in the job please get in touch with Will anyone interested in the job please get in touch with? Will anyone interested in the job please contact.? Apply to ,我校校報急需在校內招聘一位同學任英文版編輯 our school paper is in great need of our shool paper is starving for our shool paper is looking for 從英文報刊 雜志及互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上選擇適合學生的文章 choose from suitable for 挑選和編輯同學們來稿. pick out edit them for use. 要求: 樂意貢獻出一些業(yè)余時間為同學們服務 The applicant must devote to He should . spare time are necessary/ essential serve if you get the job, you should 英文,美術皆好; 能熟練使用電腦. be good at do well in the ability to 請感興趣的同學在本周內與學生會聯(lián)系. Those who are interested in the job please get in touch with Will anyone interested in the job please get in touch with? Will anyone interested in the job please contact.? Apply to ,An English Editor Wanted Our school paper is looking for an editor for its English edition. The job mainly includes two parts: one is to choose English articles from other newspapers, magazines or the internet suitable for us students. the other is to pick out articles from students in our school and edit them for use. We hope that he / she could meet the following requirements: first, he / she is willing to devote some of the spare time to serving the others. Second, its necessary for him / her to be good at both English and art. Whats more, the ability to use the computer is important as well. Those who are interested in the job please get in touch with the students union this week. students union,單句翻譯： 1. 我除了學英語，還學法語。 2. 這件事對你我都很重要。 3. 他不光給我錢，還給我建議。 4. 他不僅是著名詩人，還是著名劇作家。 5. 他們去了長城，我也去了。,. Im learning French as well as English. . It is important for you as well as for me. . He gave me money as well as advice. . He was not only a famous poet but also a well-known play writer. . They went to the Great Wall and I went as well.,6. 我的家鄉(xiāng)是一個占地36平方公里，人口20萬 的小鎮(zhèn)。 7. 解放前，人們生活很艱苦。 8. 20年來，這里發(fā)生了巨大的變化。 9. 這里建起了公園、商場、影院、醫(yī)院，還有 學校。 10. 人們的生活豐富多彩。,. My hometown, with a population of 200 thousand and covering an area of 36 square kilometers, is a small town. . Before liberation, people there lived a hard life. . Great changes have taken place there in the past 20 years. . Besides schools, parks, shops, cinemas and hospitals have also been set up. . Peoples lives are rich and colourful.,必背的關聯(lián)詞60 個 表示而且 whats more besides in addition Furthermore meanwhile not only- but also- as well as to begin with / First of all/ First / Second/Third,表示對照 however on the other hand on the contrary,表示因果 as a result therefore thus otherwise,表示目的 for this reason for this purpose so that in order to in case,表示總結 in a word in short in brief in conclusion in other words generally speaking,表示強調 in fact as a matter of fact to tell the truth last but not least above all the most important without any doubt believe it or not Only in this way,表示個人觀點 in my opinion as far as I know as far as I am concerned As we all know,表示解釋 that is in this case for example actually as for,表示條件 as long as,at first early in the morning this morning the other day,soon later on after a while several minutes later,finally in the end at last,suddenly immediately at once,表示時間,表示方位 by the side of next to in the middle of in front of,1 我認為，志愿者工作不僅對社會有利，而且 對他們自己有好處，因此志愿者是光榮的，我們 都應積極參加，使我們的國家變得更和諧更美麗。 2 為了援助貧困邊遠地區(qū)的教育，一些志愿者加入 到西部建設中.同時，還有些志愿者組織各種活動 宣傳環(huán)境保護的重要性。,用恰當?shù)年P聯(lián)詞翻譯,In my opinion, doing voluntary work will do much good not only to society but also to the volunteers themselves. Therefore, volunteers are honorable and we should take an active part in it to make our country more beautiful and harmonious.,In order to improve the standard of education in those remote and less developed areas, some volunteers join in the Go West Project. Whats more, some others organize various activities to help people realize the importance of protecting our environment.,大約75%的學生上大學有必要，因為高等教育能 增加知識，提高個人素質。然而，15%的學生認為 上大學沒有用，因為大學畢業(yè)生找到好工作很困難。 而且，學費也太高，付不起。剩余的10%認為條條 道路通羅馬，所以他們認為是否上大學無所謂。,About 75% of the students think it necessary to go to college, for further education can increase their knowledge and improve their personal qualities as well. However, 15% of the students think that it is no use going to college because its extremely difficult for college graduates to get satisfactory jobs. In addition, the tuition is too high for them to pay for. The remaining 10% hold the view that “ All roads lead to Rome”. Therefore they think it doesnt make any difference whether they go to college or not.,According to my investigation, some 10 percent of the migrant children are out of school and about 75% of them can only attend cheap private schools where they are offered a poor quality of education with few facilities and few qualified teachers. I think the reasons are as follows: to start with, the parents are too busy to care about their children. Secondly, they havent enough money to pay their tuition fees for urban public schools.,Nowadays, more and more people prefer western festivals to traditional ones. There are many reasons. First, some companies try to encourage to consume as much as possible, for in this way they can make a large fortune. Second, according to our traditions, we usually pay much attention to eating and drinking during traditional festivals, which most people and tired of, while western festivals focus on entertainment and fun. Besides, the ways people spend western festivals are various and attractive. So, I suggest more activities should be organized by the government to promote our traditional culture, and traditional festivals should be set as public holidays so they dont die out someday. We should value our traditional culture and try to celebrate our own festivals in a more interesting way.,運用,The “ Sunshine Physical Education” program, started by the Ministry of Education, requires students to do sports at least one hour a day. Due to heavy homework, most students, especially we middle school students, hardly have time to do physical exercise. Whats more, PE classes are often cancelled. As a result, many of us are near-sight and our health is continuously declining. Physical exercise will not give us a chance to co-operate with others, thus forming a good habit of getting alone with others. In my opinion, body building is important and necessary for us, However busy, we should spare some time to take exercise every day. Only in this way can we be equal to our future jobs.,學生習作 AEFC is a good textbook for middle school students. First, the text goes with interesting colour pictures. So it is easy to understand the main idea of the text. Second, the main ideas gets close to times and life and inspire students to join in it. Furthermore, it can improve our reading and writing, even listening and speaking. Besides, I suggest SEFC open more titles to discuss and add some texts about the education of English. Also, in the listening text, add some English songs. In that case, I think AEFC will be much better than now, and it will be the most popular text.,Im fond of weekends because I can not only have a rest but also help others. Long before, a shop was open in front of my house, which is run by an old woman. Everyday the shop is crowed so that she cant stop to have a rest. So I go to help her every weekend. I think it makes my weekends much valuable.,First of all, the book contains a lot of pictures, interesting and beautiful. It is so good that we like it very much. Secondly, the story of the book is fit of r the period and the life of nowadays. It makes the students study actively. The most important thing is that SEFC can improve our reading and writing, especially the listening and speaking. Although it is more interesting, it can add more stories which are interesting enough. It also increases the articles about the culture of the England and America. In the listening of the book, the music is good. This is my advice. AEFC will have a good future.,One the one hand, I can help my mother clean up the rooms, or plant some beautiful flowers int the yard. It is so interesting that I like it. On the other hand, I can do something freely, for example, reading some books, watching TV and so on. There is no doubt that my weekend is interesting.,First, on my weekends, I always go out for a perfect morning-walking, so I can hear the sound from the nature, such as the bird-singing. Second, I can spend a sweet time with my family. The most important is that can do some housework for my mother in order not to make her always so tired. So I always look forward to weekends.,For example, first the texts with interesting colour pictures make the book more beautiful. Second, the information is not only close to the modern time, close to the life, but also make the students take part in it actively. The third, it can improve reading, writing, especially the abilities of listening and speaking. But I want to give some advice. First, make many interesting problems to discuss. Second, add some texts which are about the culture of England to us. At last, please add some English songs in listening. that may be good. This is my idea about SEFC. Thank you.,Although it is very good, I still have some suggetion. I think these three ways will make SEFC perfect in the future. I feel Im part of them. Thats how I usually spend weekends, so always look forward to weekends. When the weekends, which I have hoped for a long time, come, I am very happy. The articles agree with the era, agree with life and make students enjoy joining in it. I hope it can have more interesting questions to discuss. And I love discussing my faourite subjects with my good friends.,The text have a lot of interesting colour pictures. And the content of the texts are close to our life that make us join in the stories actively. Besides, it can improve our reading and writing. The most important of it is to improve our listening and speaking. We all like to use it. Meanwhile, I have several advice. I hope that it can create more interesting questions to discuss, and add some articles about the culture of America and England. After that, I hope it can add some English songs in listening to make us appreciate. In a word, I hope SEFC can become better and better.,It is all my advice, expecting SEFC can accept it. 肖萌 After that, I watch TV to 11:30. I often go to see my friends and play with them until its dark. it can encourage students to join in it and improve reading and writing. So the middle school students have better listening and actively attend English learning. I think SEFC is the book which can help students English. If that suggestion can be done, English will become a “pop” subject.,Notice,The StudentsUnion May 4, 2004,通知的格式：,Announcement,Ladies and gentlemen, Dear friends, Boys and girls,May I have you attention please?Attention, please!,Thats all. Thank you.,通知套語背一背：,Ladies and Gentleman, Attention please! Im very glad to tell you that an English lecture will be held at 2:00 pm on May 4. It will be held in the reading-room. It will be given by Professor Donald White from Illinois University. He is on a visit to our school. Professor White will give us a talk on the difference between American English and British English pronunciations. I think you will be interested in it. After the lecture, well have a discussion on the subject. Im sure well learn a lot from it. Please attend the lecture on time. Dont forget to take notes while listening. Thats all. Thank you.,Ladies and Gentleman,Attention please!,Thats all. Thank you.,Im very glad to,I think,Im sure,1, 2, 3, 4,Please attend,the lecture on time. Dont forget to take notes while listening.,范文 Notice It has been decided that an English writing composition will be held in our school. All the students are welcome to take part in the competition. The compositions must be about the lives of us students. First prize will be given to the five best compositions, second prize to ten compositions and third prize to twelve compositions. The writing composition will be judged by our English teachers and five winners will be chosen to take part in the English writing competition of the city, which is to be held in August. The Students Union May 4, 2008,訓練 你校學生會將為來訪的美國朋友舉辦一個晚會，要在學校廣播 中宣布此事，并歡迎大家參加。為使美國朋友能聽懂，請你用 英文寫一篇廣播通知。 宗旨： 歡迎來訪的美國朋友 組織者： 學生會 時間： 8月15日（星期六）晚 7：30 地點： 主樓樓頂花園 活動內容：音樂、跳舞、唱歌、交換小禮物（請包裝好、簽名 并在包裝外面寫上幾個祝愿詞） roof garden exchange gifts sign your name wrap it up The Student Union,May I have your attention, please? I have an announcement to make. The Student Union is going to hold a party on Saturday evening, August 15, to welcome our friends from the United States. The party will be held in the roof garden of the Main Building. It will begin at 7:30 p.m. There be music, dancing, singing, games and exchange of gifts. Will everybody please bring along a small gift for this purpose? Remember to wrap it up, sign your name and write a few words of good wishes. Dont forget: 7:30, Saturday evening, roof garden, main building. Theres sure to be a lot of fun. Everybody is welcome.,寫 人,寫人經(jīng)典句型翻譯： 1 她12歲。 2 她細高條，長著大眼睛，卷頭發(fā)。 3 她善良，樂于助人，總是愿意幫助別人解決困難。 4 業(yè)余時間她喜歡聽音樂讀小說。 5 她與任何人都能相處的很好，無論到哪都很受歡迎。,She is a girl of twelve years old.,She is tall and slim with big eyes and curly hair.,Being kind and helpful, she always enjoys helping others out.,In her spare time, she spends much time listening to music and reading novels.,She gets on well with almost anyone and is always welcome wherever she goes.,描寫人物外貌和性格特征的常用詞語：,good-looking- hard-working- bad-tempered- warm-hearted- absent-minded- dependent- clever- humorous- attractive- talkative- naughty-,pretty beautiful ugly diligent lazy easy-going patient hard-hearted undivided independent smart bright intelligent wise serious ordinary silent quite,confident imaginative brave shy determined strict energetic educated,描寫人物外貌和性格特征的常用詞語：,passive mean rude impolite,active-,generous-,friendly-,polite -,自信的 有想象力的 勇敢的 害羞的 有決心的 嚴格的 精力旺盛的 有良好教育的,表達人物興趣和愛好的常用表達： (一句多譯）,他非常喜歡音樂。,He likes/ loves music very much. He enjoys listening to music. He is interested in music. He is fond of music. He is crazy about music. He is good at music. He has a gift for music. He was born a singer.,他不喜歡音樂。,He doesnt like music. He hates music. He is tired of music. He lost interest in music.,他擅長音樂。,sad happy angry anxious curious eager satisfied excited pleased worried disappointed terrified,描述人物心情的常用詞語：,She is still absent. I _ her health. We _your safe return. Tom _ come to the party. I_know what is written in his letter. Children _ naturally _ everything about them. I failed the exam. My parents _ the result. The children _the very thought of the journey. They _by his sudden appearance.,am anxious about,are anxious for,is eager to,am curious to,are,curious about,were disappointed at/about/with,are excited at,were terrified,Our Monitor Our monitor Lu Wentao is not tall or handsome,but he is very popular at school.He has a good personality,Wentao is funny and forgiving.His stories and jokes make all of us laugh,especially when we are in low spirits.Yet when someone tries to make fun of him,he never gets angry.As a monitor,Wentao is friendly to every classmate.No matter who asks him for help,he is always warm-hearted and generous.He is also a reliable person.Both teachers and student trust him.Every day he is the last one to leave the classroom,making sure that all the windows are locked and the lights are off.,Wentao is funny and forgiving.,His stories and jokes make all of us laugh,especially when we are in low spirits.Yet when someone tries to make fun of him,he never gets angry.,As a monitor,Wentao is friendly to every classmate.,No matter who asks him for help,he is always warm-hearted and generous.,He is also a reliable person.,Both teachers and student trust him.Every day he is the last one to leave the classroom,making sure that all the windows are locked and the lights are off.,How to describe a persons personality or characteristics,When you describe a persons character and behaviour, please remember to Support your description with examples.,Organization of a composition,Brief introduction Name of the person The relationship between you and him/her Main body Personality characteristics His/Her activities or achievements Conclusion Your comments/feelings about the person,寫人常用結尾句：,他不僅是我們的老師也是我們的朋友， 我們尊重他愛戴他。 他是我們學習的榜樣。 有他這樣的朋友我感到很驕傲。 這就是我的父親：勤勞、善良。我愛我的父親。,He is not only our teacher but also our friend. We all respect and love his.,He has set a very good example for us all to foll