湖南省長沙縣實驗中學高三英語二輪復習 書面表達復習重點話題指導專題14 社會交際類話題指導（教師版）.doc

湖南省長沙縣實驗中學2013屆高三英語二輪復習 書面表達復習重點話題指導專題14 社會交際類話題指導實例指導1-身勢語【寫作任務(wù)】 身勢語在我們的日常生活中起著重要的作用，請根據(jù)下列提示寫一篇書面表達： 什么是身勢語(body language) 身勢語的作用 舉例說明在講英語和講漢語國家有相同含義的身勢語。如：揮手表示再見、微笑和握手表示歡迎。 對于不同的國家來說，身勢語也不同。例如，在俄羅斯、法國、阿拉伯國家里，男人們見面時彼此親吻。然而，在中國或澳大利亞男人見面從不親吻而是握手。 學一門外語時，了解這個國家的身勢語很重要。 根據(jù)提示可以適當發(fā)揮。詞數(shù)：120左右?！緟⒖挤段摹?body language is used by people for sending messages to one another. it is very useful because it can help you make yourself easily understood. when talking with others, you are not just using words, but also using expressions and gestures. for example, waving ones hand is to say good-bye. a smile and handshake show welcome. and they are accepted both by chinese and foreigners with the same meanings. however, different countries have different body languages. for example, men in russia, france and arab countries kiss each other when they meet, but men in china or australia shake hands instead of kissing. when you use a foreigin language, it is very important to know the meanings of gestures of the country. and it will make your stay there much more pleasant and comfortable.實例指導2being a good listener【寫作任務(wù)】 實現(xiàn)有效的溝通，建立良好的人際關(guān)系，不僅要善于言表、更要學會傾聽。請你根據(jù)下表中所提供的信息，寫一篇題為“being a good listener”的英文演講稿。詞數(shù)150左右。為何傾聽表示尊重，增進理解，建立良好的人際關(guān)系誰來傾聽家長傾聽孩子理解孩子，消除代溝，老師傾聽學生了解學生，滿足需求，同學相互傾聽增進友誼，互幫互學，怎樣傾聽（請考生聯(lián)系自己擬定內(nèi)容，列舉兩至三點。）good afternoon, everyone!the topic of my speech today is “being a good listener”._【寫作指導】文體分析本文是演講稿。主題是如何成為一名好的傾聽者。要求根據(jù)表格內(nèi)列出的要點提示進行說明，并發(fā)表自己的看法，屬于半命題、半開放性作文。此范文要點齊全，論述嚴密，一環(huán)扣一環(huán)，同時較多地使用了祈使句，整體上給人一種灼灼逼人的氣勢。文章使用了第一人稱，所用時態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時。行文模式本文采用了“三段式”的結(jié)構(gòu)?！痉段膮⒖肌縢ood afternoon, everyone!the topic of my speech today is “being a good listener”.good listening can always show respect, promote understanding, and improve interpersonal relationship.many people suggest that parents should listen more to their children, so they will understand them better, and find it easy to narrow the generation gap; teachers should listen more to their students, then they can meet their needs better, and place themselves in a good relationship with their students; students should listen more to their classmates, thus they will help and learn from each other, and a friendship is likely to be formed.what i want to stress is that each of us should listen more to others. show your respect and never stop others till they finish their talk; show you are interested by a supportive silence or a knowing smile; be open-minded to different opinions even though you dont like them. in a word, good listening can really enable us to get closer to each other. thank you for your listening!佳句共賞1. many people suggest that and find it easy to narrow the generation gap.2. what i want to stress is that 3. show show be open-minded to .實例指導3how to communicate作任務(wù):為了促進在校中美學生的交流, 友誼國際學校決定組織一次主題為how to communicate的英語座談會。假設(shè)你是參加座談的學生代表之一,打算在會上就body language在交流中的作用及重要性談?wù)勀愕目捶?現(xiàn)請你擬一份簡短的發(fā)言稿,詞數(shù)150左右。初稿:body language is very important in communicating. i think people all use body language when they communicate with someone. there are many kinds of body languages and people from different places may have different body languages. if you want to communicate well, you need to understand the meaning of the body language. most of the people use hands, eyes, and emotions to help them express themselves. pay attention to them when you are communicating. you will learn more about the people. at the same time, other people are also reading your body language. so if you dont use body language correctly, you may give a wrong message to the person. you may create misunderstanding and make the communication difficult to carry on.的觀點或者寫一個簡短的結(jié)論來結(jié)束全文。最后一個需要注意的細節(jié)是開頭。由于本文是為座談會上的發(fā)言準備的,禮貌地打招呼是演講基本的禮儀。成稿:im honored to have this chance to give a short speech here. body language is an important part of communication which, according to a study, constitutes around 55% of what we are communicating. it is a language without being spoken, which is used especially to help us express feelings. knowing how to use body language would help you communicate effectively. you can learn more information by interpreting a persons body language. when learning to understand body language of others, we can learn to use our body language. using right body language can help you to express yourself clearly and quickly. it is important to note that body language has different meanings in different cultures. if we do not take this into account and use wrong body language, we may create misunderstanding and get ourselves into trouble.if you wish to communicate well, use your body to say what you mean and pay attention to others body language.實例指導4getting along with others 寫作任務(wù):在日常生活中,我們每天都要與人打交道,而說到與人打交道,我們更多想到的是如何處理好與同學、老師以及朋友的關(guān)系,而往往忽略了與我們每天都要面對的、最親近的父母之間的關(guān)系。不少同學以代溝為借口,拒絕與父母交流溝通。你怎樣看待這個現(xiàn)象？說說你的看法以及你與父母融洽相處的小秘訣?！緦懽髦笇А?. 寫作任務(wù)要求大家根據(jù)某一話題發(fā)表自己的看法,根據(jù)所給題目,我們可以提煉的信息是,該習作要求對一種社會現(xiàn)象進行分析,然后給出自己的見解。寫作任務(wù)部分已經(jīng)對這種現(xiàn)象進行了描述,因而寫作重點是你對該現(xiàn)象的看法。我們可以從自己的日常生活中總結(jié)經(jīng)驗,提出自己的觀點:多和父母交流才能促進理解,進而融洽相處。2. 確立寫作重點之后,就要考慮文章的結(jié)構(gòu)。該習作可以分三部分來完成:首先,簡要描述當前同學們在與父母相處過程中遇到的問題；其次,就這些問題闡明你的觀點,論述時要注意條理性和邏輯性；最后,再次強調(diào)一下文章的主題思想,突出中心。3. 注意語言的流暢性和上下文之間的連貫性。初稿: how to get along with your parentsnowadays, many teenagers are having problems getting along with parents. some quarrel with their parents from time to time. some even have negative attitude to-wards their parents. nobody wants to have problems with his or her parents.first, i think because of the age gap different generations may have different points of view. and we should try to talk with parents more. second, i think we kids should trust our parents and turn to them when we are in trouble, because they are more experienced and they may help us out. third, we kids should think more about our parents lives. our parents have much pressure on them from society and theyre very busy. sometimes they may scold us and may not have the patience to listen to us, but we all know our parents love us. finally, i want to emphasize that communication is the best solution for getting along with others, including the most intimate people -our parents.后展開論述,第一點最好跟后面兩點保持一致。(3)文中有些句子顯得很突兀,如第一段中最后一句nobody wants to have problems with his or her parents以及第二段中最后一句sometimes they may scold us and may not have the patience to listen to us, but we all know our parents love us.建議將這些句子去掉或是整合到其他部分。(4)此外,文中有些地方用詞不是很恰當,如最后一句中,best solution for建議改成best way of。成稿:how to get along with your parentsnowadays, many teenagers find it hard to get along with their parents. in daily life, they may quarrel with their parents and even have a negative attitude towards their parents opinions. so, how can we teenagers get along well with our parents? first, i think we should spend more time with our parents and communicate with them. different generations may have different views towards one thing, but we should not use that as an excuse to refuse to talk with our parents. second, we should trust our parents and turn to them when we are in trouble because they are more experienced and may help us solve our problems quickly. third, we must understand our parents better. they have a lot of pressure in their work, but they still have to spend time taking care of us. the most important thing for us to remember is that our parents love us deeply, so it should not be so difficult for us to understand and communicate with each other. powerful sentences:1. nowadays, many teenagers find it hard to get along with their parents. 2. i think we should spend more time with our parents and communicate with them.3. we should trust our parents and turn to them when we are in trouble because they are more experienced and may help us solve our problems quickly. 實例指導5how to make friends 寫作要求假設(shè)你叫王華，你的筆友李君來信詢問關(guān)于如何交友的問題。請根據(jù)下面的漢語提示，結(jié)合自身實際，給他寫一封回信。內(nèi)容包括：1. 交友的重要性；2. 如何交友：至少提三條建議；3. 患難朋友才是真朋友。詞數(shù)要求：120-150。文章中可能用到的其他詞匯和短語有：discuss with ,in my opinion the most , besides , whats more , on the other hand , firstly ,secondly .last , in return , think of , agree with2. 構(gòu)句：1) im writing to discuss with you about how to make good friends. 在這個句子用到了不定式作目的狀語。2) as you know , everybody needs friends, so how to make true friends is very important to anybody. 首先本句用到了as 引導的非限制性定語從句，另外本句how不定式結(jié)構(gòu)作句子的主語。3) in my opinion, to make friends, the most important thing is that you must be friendly to others. 這個句子有連個地方運用的比較好，一個是不定式作目的狀語，另一個是出現(xiàn)了表語從句的用法。 4) whats more, you should think more of others than of yourself. 本句子聯(lián)合使用think of 和more than 這兩個短語。 5) on the other hand, if you dont agree with others on a certain matter, dont argue but discuss with him. 首先本句是一個不錯的復合句，if 引導的條件句，同時也出現(xiàn)了not but 句式結(jié)構(gòu)。dear li jun ,glad to hear from you . now im writing to discuss with you about how to make good friends.as you know , everybody needs friends, so how to make true friends is very important to anybody. in my opinion, to make friends, the most important thing is that you must be friendly to others. smile at others and you are always sure to get a smile in return. besides, never judge a person only by his appearance. whats more, you should think more of others than of yourself. on the other hand, if you dont agree with others on a certain matter, dont argue but discuss with him. always remember, a true friend is the one that is coming in the door while everyone else is going out, as the saying goes, “a friend in need is a friend indeed”. yours faithfully wang hua參考答案：仿照范文中的句子，將下列漢語譯成英文。1.to sleep late in the morning, bob turned off the alarm. 2. as is known to all, the earth moves around the sun. 3. how to get through the valley is still a difficult problem. 4 .the trouble is that i have lost his address.5. she speaks more english than i do. 6. if he has found it, he will send it. 7. all flights have been put off because of the snowstorm , so many passengers could do nothing but take the train. 實戰(zhàn)演練每個人都有自己的朋友,有時候朋友在遇到困難時可能會向我們求助,如果能辦到,我們當然應(yīng)該盡最大努力去幫忙,但如果朋友提出的某些要求不是我們力所能及的,這時我們就要學會說不。不少人往往不知道該如何開口拒絕,盡管明知道有些事情自己做不到,卻害怕傷了朋友之間的感情。那么,究竟該如何開口拒絕,才不會傷害對方呢？請就此以如何正確說不為題來談?wù)勀愕目捶?。詞數(shù)120-150。how to say no properlya friend in need is a friend indeed. when our friends get into trouble, we should try to help them out if we can manage to do so. however, if its something beyond our capability, what should we do? how can we say no in a soft and proper way? first, we should explain to them clearly why we have to turn their requests down and at the same time apologize for being unable to help. second, try to avoid using ambiguous words that may cause misunderstanding. wed better make it clear whether we can help or not. and one thing is very important: we should express ourselves in a polite and sincere way and make our friends understand that we have tried our best.如今世界糧食短缺，價格飛漲，給部分地區(qū)造成社會動蕩。請就下面表格所提供的內(nèi)容進行陳述并談?wù)勀愕目捶āas you know, food shortages have hit many countries in the world and even caused social unrest in some areas. but who is responsible for the current world food crisis? first, annual world grains output has declined because of climate change. then lots of farmland has been lost due to the rapid development of industry and urbanization. then what should we do to deal with the problem? on one hand, we should focus on the environmental protection and improve the ecology. on the other hand, strict measures should be taken to protect farmland. as for me, i will call on the people around me to live thriftily. and for the moment, i think, we should study hard to develop science and help solve the food shortage in the future.近幾年，很多廣告都請明星代言，同時“明星代言”也出現(xiàn)了一些負面影響。 請參考所給要點，寫一篇有關(guān)明星代言的英語短文。要點：1、明星代言現(xiàn)象很普遍。 2、明星代言廣告存在一些問題。 3、你的看法。注意：1、詞數(shù)：100-120，文章題目和開頭已給出（不計入總詞數(shù)）。 2、參考詞匯：名人，明星 celebrity 假冒偽劣產(chǎn)品 fake commodities 有系統(tǒng)地調(diào)節(jié)、管制 regulate v現(xiàn)在，照顧老年人成了一個突出的社會問題。你公司順應(yīng)社會需求，適時推出了家用機器人。該機器人的主要功能有：1在固定的時間做飯，時間可按需調(diào)整；2陪老人聊天、下棋、做運動等；3及時處理突發(fā)事件。如老人病時，撥呼救電話等。 請根據(jù)以上內(nèi)容寫一個發(fā)言稿，在新聞發(fā)布會上向大家推薦公司的這一新產(chǎn)品。注意：1詞數(shù)為100左右；2內(nèi)容可適當發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫；3短文開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：突出的，顯著的 prominentladies and gentlemen, thank you for attending our companys news conference. as you know, _范文：ladies_and_gentlemen,_thank_you_for_attending_our_companys_news_conference._as_you_know,_with the development of economy, people have to face various pressures. they dont have enough time to attend to the old people in their family, which has become a prominent social problem. to solve this problem, our company put out the household robot, which is designed to take care of old people. it can cook meals at a fixed time, which can be adjusted according to individual needs. it can also accompany old people in having a chat, playing chess and doing exercise. moreover, it can deal with emergencies. for example, if an old man falls ill suddenly, the robot will call doctors for help. it would be a great help for you if you own such a robot. thank you.高一（4）班學生就學校研究型課程的要求對全校學生進行了一次關(guān)于錢是否能帶來幸福進行了調(diào)查，請根據(jù)下列材料寫一篇報告，介紹有關(guān)調(diào)查情況，并發(fā)表自己的意見。recently i have made an investigation on whether money is the source of happiness. _【參考范文】recently i have made an investigation on whether money is the source of happiness. the students have different opinions.some students think that money is the source of happiness. money is important and we can use money to solve any problem. without it, we can do nothing. besides, it enables us to live a comfortable life.others, however, are against it. in their opinion, money doesnt mean everything. we can buy happiness with money. if someone focuses too much attention on making money, in time he will lose his healthy, friendship and even love.to be honest, i think we should not regard money as everything. money is just a tool that can help us solve problems. what we should do is to use it properly. in this way, all of us can lead a happier life.假設(shè)你是某報社記者，請根據(jù)下表提供的信息寫一篇英文稿，簡要地報道中國開發(fā)中西部的有關(guān)情況。主要概括和實施要點范圍：9個省、自治區(qū)（autonomous regions）、1個直轄市（municipality）面積：540萬平方公里人口：2.85億交通建設(shè)：修建多條公路、鐵路環(huán)境保護：退耕還林；防治污染資源利用：開發(fā)利用其豐富的天然資源人才引進：廣納各類專家、技術(shù)人員【寫作要求】標題：new development for central and western china必須使用5個句子介紹所給的內(nèi)容將5個句子組織成連貫的短文.news report,four young female college students died friday after falling or jumping from a blazing room on the sixth floor of shanghai business school. witness said one woman who jumped appeared to be aiming for bushes on the ground, but missed and landed on concrete. witnesses said the other three were desperately trying to climb to another room amid roaring flames when they fell to the concrete paving. the fire broke out in room 602 of the seven-floor dormitory at the schools downtown campus on zhongshan road west, just after 6 a.m. the fire was caused by an electrical device used to heat water. this had ignited flammable objects, police said late friday afternoon. after receiving reports of the fire at 6:12 a.m, police, firefighters and ambulances were quickly on the scene. the fire was extinguished by 6:30 a.m., according to the school.there is only one public toilet on each floor to get water and fire extinguishers in the dormitory were outdated, students said. (sz-agencies)【參考范文】基礎(chǔ)寫作：new development for central and western chinathe chinese government has recently decided to develop central and western china which includes 9 provinces and autonomous regions and one municipality, covering and area of 5.4 million square kilometers with a population of 285 million. the government will pay special attention to its transportation and some highways and railways will be built. to protect the environment, farmers will return farmland to forest and measures will be taken to prevent pollution. western china is rich in natural resources, which can be exploited and made full use of. to meet the need of the development, different kinds of experts and skilled workers are to be brought in.after the tears, lets focus on dorm safetyit was reported that on november 14, a tragedy occurred in a girls dormitory of the shanghai business school. four girls jumped from their sixth-floor balcony in an attempt to escape a fire, and lost their lives. people expressed their sympathy after hearing the tragedy. in my opinion, this incident reflects a lack of awareness of safety procedures. both the college and the students are responsible for it. on one hand, we students should learn to deal with an emergency calmly in daily life. if there is a crisis, we are supposed to remain calm, ensure we are safe and then call for help.on the other hand, it is the school authorities obligation to take safety measures for students living in a campus. furthermore, more