高考英語一輪復(fù)習(xí) 第三部分 寫作提升系列 第一板塊 第4節(jié) 定語從句的寫作課件 北師大版.ppt

第四節(jié)定語從句的寫作 技法指導(dǎo) 一 寫作中常用的幾種定語從句1 關(guān)系代詞引導(dǎo)的定語從句關(guān)系代詞who whom whose that which as引導(dǎo)的定語從句是寫作的一大重點 尤其是which和as引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句在高考范文中更是屢見不鮮 inmyopinion thosewhohavereceivedherdonationwillbeencouragedtostudyevenharderandtrytheirbesttoachievesuccess 2014 廣東高考滿分作文 butthebestgiftihavereceivedisawatch whichmydadgavemeonmylastbirthday 2014 重慶高考滿分作文 但我收到的最好的禮物是一塊表 是上次生日我爸爸給我的 2 關(guān)系副詞引導(dǎo)的定語從句關(guān)系副詞引導(dǎo)的定語從句是指when where why引導(dǎo)的定語從句 thereasonwhypeoplecelebratethefestivalisthattheybelieveitisthetimewhenthemoonisatitsfullestandbrightestinthewholeyear andpeoplewillgathertogethereatingmooncakesandappreciatingthefullmoon 2013 遼寧高考滿分作文 人們慶祝這個節(jié)日的原因是 他們相信這時候是一年中月亮最滿 最亮的時候 人們聚在一起吃月餅 賞滿月 3 介詞 which whom 引導(dǎo)的定語從句ourclassismadeupof52students allofwhomarefriendlyandhard working 2014 天津高考書面表達 我們班由52個學(xué)生組成 所有人都很友好 很勤奮 學(xué)以致用 用適當(dāng)?shù)年P(guān)系詞填空1 thosewhodosimpleandordinaryjobsarealsopromotingthedevelopmentofthesociety 2013 廣東高考滿分作文 2 everyoneofyouisexpectedtobepartoftheeventwhichencouragescreativemindsandgivesfullplaytoyourdiyskills 2014 遼寧高考滿分作文 3 myteacheradvisedmetorepeatthematerialsseveraltimesandreadthemaloud whichtheythinkwillhelpimprovemymemory 2013 四川高考書面表達 4 iwillneverforgetthedayswhenweworkedinthesmalltown 5 shewaseducatedatbeijinguniversity afterwhichshewenttohaveheradvancedstudyabroad 二 定語從句的寫法定語從句是比較難掌握而又是學(xué)生在寫作中喜歡嘗試的復(fù)雜句 因此在寫作時可采用 三步法 第一步 寫出兩個簡單句 第二步 在一個簡單句中找出一個要修飾的詞匯 這個詞在兩個簡單句中都有 第三步 把另一個簡單句改成定語從句 要特別注意引導(dǎo)詞的選擇 示例 第一步 寫出兩個簡單句 theforeignerisfromcanada hevisitedourclassyesterday 第二步 在句 中找出一個要修飾的詞匯 theforeigner 第三步 用句 充當(dāng)定語從句 theforeigner為先行詞指人 句 中的代詞he指代theforeigner且在句子中作主語 故用who或that作引導(dǎo)詞 theforeignerwho thatvisitedourclassyesterdayisfromcanada 學(xué)以致用 把下列每組題中的兩個簡單句合并為一個含有定語從句的復(fù)合句1 i vealwayslongedforthedays iwillbeabletobeindependentthen i ve always longed for the days when i will be able to be independent 2 ihaveafriend herfatherisanengineer i have a friend whose father is an engineer 3 theyplantedthetrees thetreesdidn tneedmuchwater they planted the trees that which didn t need much water 4 thisisthebestmethod itcanbeusedagainstpollution this is the best method that can be used against pollution 5 theysenttheelderlysomefruits cleanedtheroomsandhadagoodchatwiththem theelderlyalwaysfeellonely they sent some fruits to the elderly who always feel lonely cleaned the rooms and had a good chat with them 三 定語從句寫作的幾點注意事項1 誤用關(guān)系詞誤 iliveinbeijing whereisthecapitalofchina 正 iliveinbeijing whichisthecapitalofchina 誤 ihaveafriend who snameisliumei 正 ihaveafriend whosenameisliumei 2 句子殘缺誤 thereweremanystudentstookpartintheenglishcompetition 正 thereweremanystudentswhotookpartintheenglishcompetition 誤 thosewhoinfavoroftheproposal pleaseraiseyourhands 正 thosewhoareinfavoroftheproposal pleaseraiseyourhands 3 有多余詞誤 thefilmisawitlastnightwasreallyverygood 正 thefilmisawlastnightwasreallyverygood 誤 lastweek ireturnedtothevillagewhereigrewupthereinmychildhood 正 lastweek ireturnedtothevillagewhereigrewupinmychildhood 4 定語從句與并列句的混淆誤 infact smokingisabadhabit itdoesgreatharmtopeople shealth 正 infact smokingisabadhabit which anditdoesgreatharmtopeople shealth 誤 hisparentstoldhimmanytimesnottoplaybesidetheriver itdidn thelp 正 hisparentstoldhimmanytimesnottoplaybesidetheriver which butitdidn thelp 學(xué)以致用 單句改錯1 thosehaveworkexperiencecanfindajobeasily 答案those后加who2 somesongsremindusofthepeoplewhichwelove 答案which who m 3 thisisthefactorywevisiteditlastyear 答案去掉it 4 shehasbeenateacherfor30yearsintheplacewhereusedtobeapoorarea 答案where which that5 asachild jackstudiedinavillageschool itisnamedafterhisgrandfather 答案it which或在it前加and 演練提升 完成句子1 曾經(jīng) 我在學(xué)習(xí)英語中 尤其在詞匯和語法方面面對著一個難題 依我看 它不可能被克服 once iwasfacedwithgreatdifficultyinlearningenglish especiallyinvocabularyandgrammar which frommypointofview is unlikely to overcome 2014 山東高考滿分作文 2 當(dāng)今 父母為他們的獨生子女做所有的事情 這使得這些獨生子女非常依賴于父母 nowadaysparentshavedoneeverythingfortheirsinglechildren which makes the children rely on their parentsbadly 2013 福建高考滿分作文 3 你知道 中國結(jié)非常受中國人的喜歡 as you know chineseknotsareverypopularwithchinesepeople 2013 新課標(biāo)全國卷 滿分作文 4 從短文中 我們會了解到一個善良的洗衣女工 盡管工資低但她決定用節(jié)省下的錢捐助一所大學(xué)一筆錢 希望可幫助到那些財政有困難的學(xué)生 fromthepassage wehavelearnedthatakindlaundrywomanwho got paid lowlydecidedtodonatetoauniversityagreatdealofmoneyshe had savedbylivingasimplelife hopingtohelpthosestudentswithfinancialproblems 2014 廣東高考滿分作文 5 我經(jīng)常想起被陌生人的言語傷害和侮辱的時候 甚至有時是來自熟悉的人 ioftenthinkaboutthetimeswhen ihavefelt hurtand insulted by rude remarks from strangersandsometimesevenfromacquaintances 請按以下內(nèi)容要點寫一篇有關(guān)你的同學(xué)kate的英語短文 盡可能多地使用定語從句 1 我有一個同學(xué)叫kate 她的媽媽是我以前的英語老師 2 kate是一個容易相處的人 我們都喜歡她 3 kate在此次口語競賽中獲得第一名 這使得她媽媽很高興 4 新年就要到了 到時kate會和她媽媽一起去香港 5 眾所周知 香港是一個購物天堂 kate打算在那里買她需要的東西 參考范文 i have a classmate called kate whose mother ismy former english teacher kate is a girl who is easy to get along with and we