2020春新教材高中英語 Unit 8 EREEN LIVING Section Ⅵ Writing——調(diào)查報(bào)告課件 北師大版必修第三冊

本單元的寫作項(xiàng)目屬于新課標(biāo)中應(yīng)用文體類別中的調(diào)查報(bào)告。調(diào)查報(bào)告屬于應(yīng)用文，一般是用簡潔、生動(dòng)的語言把圖中所提供的信息準(zhǔn)確、完整地表達(dá)出來，還需要分析調(diào)查結(jié)果，揭示其規(guī)律，找出解決問題的對策。調(diào)查報(bào)告主要包括介紹、主要發(fā)現(xiàn)、結(jié)論。,sectionwriting調(diào)查報(bào)告,.pre-writing()learntowriteafterthemodelactiontakenbycityresidentstohelpprotecttheenvironmentlastaugust,cityofficialsinterviewedabout500residentstofindoutpeoplesattitudestoprotectingtheenvironmentandwhatactionstheyhadtaken.herearetheresults：asthediagramshows,thepercentageofthosewhofeltthattheyneededtohelpprotecttheenvironmentisashighas96%.veryfew(4%)feltitwasnotnecessary.morethanhalfofthosewhotookpartinthesurveyhaddonefourofthefiveactivitiesinthepastmonth.around90%havetriedtorecyclewastesuchasglass,metalandpaper;andmorethantwothirds(70%)havetriedtocutbackontheuseofdisposablepackaging,suchasplastichoneybottles,andbutterandyoghurtcontainers.also,themajorityofresidentshadcycledorwalked.,unfortunately,notasmanywhotookparthavetakenactiontosavewaterandenergyintheirhomes.justunder40%(38%)triedtosavewaterwhentheywerewashingdishesortakingshowers.justoverhalf(51%)triedtosaveenergybyreducingtheuseofairconditioningorturningofflights.tosumup,itseemsthatalmostallwhotookpartunderstandtheneedtohelptakecareoftheenvironment.mostofthemtrytorecyclewaste,ridebikesandwalk,andreducetheuseofdisposablepackaging.however,notasmanyaresavingwaterandenergy.thisindicatesthattheresidentsneedtopaymoreattentiontothesetwoactivities.,()preparationforwritingwordsandphrases,_n調(diào)查_n&v.采訪_n.態(tài)度_n.結(jié)果_v.顯示；說明_n.百分比_adj.必要的；必需的,survey,interview,attitude,result,show,percentage,necessary,_n.活動(dòng)_v.減少_adv.然而_找出，查明_多于；超出_比如_采取行動(dòng)_總之_注意,activity,reduce,however,findout,morethan,suchas,takeaction,tosumup,payattentionto,.while-writing,日前，針對學(xué)生的零用錢(pocketmoney)的消費(fèi)方向，你對你們市某中學(xué)的高中和初中的部分學(xué)生進(jìn)行了問卷調(diào)查，得出數(shù)據(jù)如下表?，F(xiàn)請你用英文寫一篇調(diào)查報(bào)告，并發(fā)表自己的看法，同時(shí)呼吁中學(xué)生樹立正確的消費(fèi)觀。,注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。,step1listtheoutlineofthepassage.,1首段：_2中段：_3尾段：_,介紹(介紹調(diào)查時(shí)間、對象、問題),說明主要的發(fā)現(xiàn),結(jié)論(發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)),step2listthewords，phrasesandsentences.,1wordsandphrases,_n零食；快餐_v.更喜歡；寧愿_vt.浪費(fèi)_adj.寶貴的_adj.來之不易的_在上花錢_另一方面_體重增加_對有害_導(dǎo)致,snacks,prefer,waste,precious,hard-earned,spendmoneyon,ontheotherhand,putonweight,doharmto,resultin,2sentences,吃太多零食不僅使我們發(fā)胖而且危害健康。(notonly.butalso.結(jié)構(gòu))_如果我們無限制地打游戲，我們就會(huì)失去許多珍貴的時(shí)間，這會(huì)導(dǎo)致成績下降。(條件狀語從句；which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句)_,eatingtoomanysnackswillnotonlymakeusputonweightbutalsodoharmtoourhealth.,ifweplaygameswithoutlimit,welllosemuchprecioustime,whichresultsinlowgrades.,step3draftthearticlebyusingthefollowingwords.,recentlyasurveyhasbeendonetofindouthowmiddleschoolstudentsspendtheirpocketmoney.theresultsareasfollows：asthediagramshows,bothjuniorstudentsandseniorstudentsspendmostoftheirmoneyonbooks,snacksandplayinggames,andstillsomemoneygoestoclothes,banks,sports,andsoon.thesurveyshowsthatabout46%ofseniorspreferbookstosnacks(37%)andplayinggames(31%)ontheotherhand,only32%ofjuniorswillspendtheirpocketmoneybuyingbooks,whileoverahalfbuysnacksand46%spendonplayinggames.bothseniorsandjuniorswouldnotwastetoomuchmoneyinclothesorputitinbanks.,inmyopinion,eatingtoomanysnackswillnotonlymakeusputonweightbutalsodoharmtoourhealth.inaddition,ifweplaygameswithoutlimit,welllosemuchprecioustime,whichresultsinlowgrades.furthermore,themoneyishardearned.ihopewestudentsvalueourmoneyaswellasourtime.,.post-writingpolishingthepassage,exchangeyourpassagewithyourpartner,andpayattentiontothefollowingpoints.1.istheformatofthesurveyreportappropriate?2.arethereanyspellingmistakes?3.arethereanygrammaticalmistakeslikethetenses(時(shí)態(tài))?4.doesthesurveyreportincludeallthemaincontents?5.iswrittenenglishcorrectlyused？,篇章結(jié)構(gòu),亮點(diǎn)表達(dá),精彩開頭語1lastweek,wedidasurveyamong2，600studentson“whoisyouridol”上周，我們以誰是你的偶像為題，在2600名學(xué)生中進(jìn)行了一次調(diào)查。2ihaverecentlymadeasurveyamong30boysand30girlsinmyclassabouttheirpurposeofgettingontheinternet.最近我對我班的60名同學(xué)進(jìn)行了調(diào)查，看他們上網(wǎng)做什么。3lastweek,wedid/conducted/carriedoutasurveyamongallthestudentsinourschoolonthetimetheyspentinsleepingeveryday.上周，我們就每天的睡眠時(shí)間對全校學(xué)生進(jìn)行了調(diào)查。,4recently,asurveyhasbeendonetofindouthowmiddleschoolstudentsspendtheirpocketmoney.日前，針對中學(xué)生零用錢的消費(fèi)方向，對某中學(xué)學(xué)生進(jìn)行了問卷調(diào)查。5lastweekwedidasurveyamong1，000middleschoolstudentson“whatdoyoudoonweekends？”上周我們對1000名中學(xué)生做了一項(xiàng)關(guān)于周末做什么的調(diào)查。6lastweek,asurveywascarriedoutamongthestudentsinourschoolon“yoursafety”上周，在我們學(xué)校的學(xué)生中進(jìn)行了一項(xiàng)關(guān)于你的安全的調(diào)查。,精華結(jié)尾語1asformyself,thomasedisonismyidol,becausehisinventionshavegreatlychangedourlife.至于我自己，托馬斯愛迪生是我的偶像，因?yàn)樗陌l(fā)明大大地改變了我們的生活。2asfarasiamconcerned,effectivemeasuresshouldbeinstantlytakentohelpstudentstosparetimeforsleeping.在我看來，應(yīng)該立即采取有效措施來幫助學(xué)生獲得休息時(shí)間。3inmyopinion,weshouldtakeactiontohelpstudentstomakegooduseofstudytime.在我看來，我們應(yīng)當(dāng)采取措施幫助學(xué)生好好利用學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)間。,4asfarasiamconcerned,effectivemeasuresshouldbeinstantlytakentoensureoursafetysothatwecangrowuphealthilyandsecurely.,在我看來，應(yīng)該立即采取有效的措施來確保我們的安全，這樣我們才能健康安全