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1、2015年高考英語滿分作文1.2015年新課標全國卷I假定你是李華,你校英文報外國文化欄目擬刊登介紹美國節(jié)日風俗和中學生生活的短文。請給美國朋友彼得寫信約稿,要點如下:1.欄目介紹;2.稿件內(nèi)容;3.稿件長度:約400詞;4.交稿日期:6月28日前。注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.可以適當增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫;3.開頭語已為你寫好。Dear Peter,Id like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper. _Yours,Li Hua【寫作指導】 本文為書信體提綱式作文。寫作時以一般現(xiàn)在時為基本時態(tài),以
2、第一人稱為主體人稱;注意要點要齊全,包括欄目介紹、稿件內(nèi)容、稿件長度和交稿日期:寫作時注意恰當?shù)厥褂勉暯釉~和過渡詞,以使文章行文連貫、流暢:這一點是高考英語高分作文所必須具備的要素。寫作提綱根據(jù)題目的要求和我們上面提到的注意點,列出提綱:第一段:問候+寫信背景(我校辦雜志)+寫信目的(套用十大書信之“求助信“寫法)第二段:主題句+拓展句1(介紹外國生活)+拓展句2(介紹外國節(jié)日)+拓展句3(不少于400字)+拓展句4(6.28前交)第三段:我希望(你能幫助我)。我相信(大家會喜歡你的文章)。感謝你(讀我的信)。請回信!【滿分范文】Dear Peter,Id like to ask you to
3、 write an article for our schools English newspaper.The Foreign Cultures section in our newspaper is very popular among us students. It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries. Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the Unite
4、d States? And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students. You can write anything relevant so long as its interesting and informative. 400 words would be fine. Could we have your article before June 28?Im
5、looking forward to hearing from you.Yours,Li Hua2.2015年新課標全國卷II 假定你是李華,計劃和同學去敬老院(nursing home)陪老人們過重陽節(jié)(the Double Ninth Festival)。請給外教露西寫封郵件,邀她一同前往,內(nèi)容包括:1.出發(fā)及返回時間;2.活動:包餃子、表演節(jié)目等。注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.可以適當增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫;3.結(jié)語已為你寫好。_Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【寫作指導】本篇書面表達屬于英文書信,根據(jù)提示信息說明邀請Lucy去參加的活
6、動和時間等。寫作時注意以下幾點:1、仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,明確三個要點:邀請、時間、具體活動。2、提綱是文章的總體框架,要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語,按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫。本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)憽?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài);就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般將來時態(tài)。4、注意使用高級詞匯和句式,以增加文章的亮點?!把埿拧薄案嬷拧钡葢?yīng)用文題目,需要考生們掌握“建議”、“請求”、“感謝”等功能性語句。書信體作文可用到“書信三段論”,需要注意的是中間過渡段的用詞以及避免不必要的語法錯誤。根據(jù)題目要求以及我們上面提到的注意點,列出提綱:
7、第一段:問候+自我介紹+寫信背景(去敬老院)+寫信目的(邀請同去)第二段:主題句+拓展句1(出發(fā)及返回時間)+拓展句2(活動,such as)第三段:我希望(你也能去)。我相信(你會喜歡這個活動)。感謝你(讀我的信)。請回信(告訴我你的決定)?!緷M分范文】Dear Lucy,Id like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival. It is the day for the elderly in our culture.
8、 Well go and make dumplings and cakes with the elderly people there. Well also spend some fun time together singing, dancing and playing games, which we hope will make them happy. We should be back around 4 oclock in the afternoon. If you are able to come with us, please let us know and well wait fo
9、r you at the school gate at 9 in the morning.Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua3.2015重慶卷B是一個面向全球的圖書分享網(wǎng)站。該網(wǎng)站組織的分享活動有兩種參與方式:一是自由分享(wild release),即把書放在指定地點,由其他參與者自由獲??;二是定向分享(controlled release),即直接傳遞給另一位參與者。假設(shè)你是李華,請用英文寫信申請參加。內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括:表明寫信目的選擇一種分享方式簡述做出該選擇的理由希望了解更多信息注意:(1)詞數(shù)不少于80;(2)
10、書信格式及開頭已給出(不計入總詞數(shù))。Dear Sir or Madam,_Yours,Li Hua【寫作指導】這是一篇提綱類作文,我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來。動筆前,一定要認真分析要點,理解要點要表達的含義,不能遺漏要點,跑題偏題。本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準確表達。寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài),上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯關(guān)系,盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得很有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。1.本文為提綱類作文,寫作時主要采用第一人稱,時態(tài)主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時。2.內(nèi)容要點:(1)表明寫信目的;(2)表明分享方式;(3
11、)簡述做出該選擇的理由;(4)表達了解更多信息的愿望。【滿分范文】Dear Sir or Madam,Learning that you are organizing this activity to share books worldwide, I am writing to apply for it for the simple reason that I love reading and I own a large number of books.Youve introduced two ways to share books: wild release and controlled r
12、elease. Of the two, the latter wins my favor. By the means of controlled release, I only need to deliver books to other participants, not only are books shared but it can build up a bridge connecting readers from different parts of the world as well.If you could provide more specific information, I
13、would be well grateful. Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua4.2015年浙江卷 在班級活動中,當你的想法與大多數(shù)同學不一致時,你是堅持自己的觀點并說服別人,還是尊重大多數(shù)同學的意見?請你以“When I Have a Different Opinion”為題,用英文寫一篇100120個詞“短文。要求如下:1.從以上兩種做法中選擇一種;2.以具體事例闡述你選擇的理由。注意:短文中,不得以任何形式透露地區(qū)、學校、同學姓名等真實信息。否則,按考試作弊行為認定。When I Have a Different Opinion _【
14、寫作指導】本篇書面表達陳述觀點及理由寫作時注意以下幾點:1.仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,明確從以上兩種做法中選擇一種,是堅持自己的觀點并說服別人還是遵從大多數(shù)同學的意見。2.提綱是文章的總體框架,要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想像。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語,按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫。3.根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài);就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。但是在以具體事例闡述的時候使用過去時4.注意使用高級詞匯和句式,以增加文章的亮點。【滿分范文】When I Have a Different OpinionWe may have different opinions in organi
15、zing class activities.When I have a different opinion, I may choose to give it up and respect the opinion of the majority.The main reason for my choice is that being brought up in a culture emphasizing collectivism, I tend to sacrifice my own interest for the group benefit.Once we were left to decid
16、e whether to have a picnic in a park or go to a museum. I would 1ove to go to a museum,but most of my classmates wanted to go for a picnic. Without hesitation, I decided to follow them and we did have lots of fun that day. Sometimes giving up a little can mean getting more.5.2015年天津卷 假設(shè)你是晨光中學學生會主席李津
17、,你校擬向美國友好交流學校的中文班捐贈一批圖書。請根據(jù)以下提示,寫一封郵件與中文班班長Chris聯(lián)系,并告知將于今年七月赴對方學校參加夏令營時帶去贈書。(1)自我介紹;(2)擬捐贈圖書的類型、冊數(shù)、用途等;(3)詢問對方的其他需求。注意:(1)詞數(shù)不少于100;(2)請適當加入細節(jié),使內(nèi)容充實、行文連貫。參考詞匯:學生會the Student UnionDear Chris,_Yours,Li Jin【寫作指導】本篇書面要求寫一封電子郵件。寫作的時候要注意以下幾點:一、動筆前,一定要認真分析要點,理解要點要表達的含義,不能遺漏要點,跑題偏題。內(nèi)容要點包括:1.自我介紹及寫信目的;2.擬捐贈圖書
18、的類型、冊數(shù)、用途等;3.詢問對方的其他需求;4.告知將于今年七月赴對方學校參加夏令營時帶去贈書。二、寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài),上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯關(guān)系,盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次?!緷M分范文】Dear Chris,Im Li Jin,chairman of the Student Union in Chenguang High Schoo1.Im writing to tell you something about donating books to your class.To enhance communication with y
19、our school,we prepared about 100 books ranging from Chinese cartoon to literature.With them,you may have a better understanding of China and its culture.Well take the books when participating in the summer camp this July to your schoo1.Would you please tell me something about your other requirements
20、? We will spare no effort to meet your needs.I sincerely hope that we may exchange with each other more and develop our friendship. Best wishes!Yours,Li Jin6.2015年北京卷第一節(jié) (15分) 假如你是紅星中學高三學生李華,請給你的美國朋友Jim寫一封郵件,告訴他你打算參加龍舟訓練營,希望他一起參加,郵件的內(nèi)容包括: 1.介紹訓練營的相關(guān)內(nèi)容(例如;時間、地點、參加者等);2.說明你打算參加的原因;3.詢問對方的意向。注意:1.詞數(shù)不少于
21、50;2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。提示詞:龍舟訓練營Dragon Boat Training Camp_【寫作指導】 本文為提綱類作文,在寫作時應(yīng)主要使用第一人稱和第二人稱,時態(tài)包括一般將來時、一般現(xiàn)在時和現(xiàn)在進行時。參考詞匯:summer holiday暑假本篇文章重點是李華邀請英國朋友Jim參加龍舟訓練營,屬于典型的邀請信,只需按照邀請信的寫作流程就可輕松寫出。即發(fā)出邀請介紹活動(時間,地點,內(nèi)容,參加原因)期待和感謝?!緷M分范文】Dear Jim,Im writing to tell you my exciting plan for the summer holiday.I in
22、tend to join a Dragon Boat Training Camp.I wonder if youd like to go with me.This camp will open on July 20th.It offers teenagers,1ike you and me,a chance to enjoy sports and learn about Chinese culture.If you are interested in it,1et me know and Ill send you more information.Hope to meet you at the
23、 training camp this summer.Yours,Li Hua【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,層次分明,運用了一些邀請信里常用的句型。如:Im writing to tell you my exciting plan for the summer holiday;I wonder if youd like to go with me.文中注意使用了一般將來時、一般現(xiàn)在時等不同的時態(tài)來敘述不同的事情,對時態(tài)有較好的把握。第二節(jié)假設(shè)你是紅星中學高三學生李華。請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序,介紹在“傳統(tǒng)文化進校園”活動中,向面人藝術(shù)家學習捏面人的過程,并以“A Day with a Craft
24、sman”為題,給校刊“英語角”寫一篇英文稿件。注意:詞數(shù)不少于60。提示詞:一個面團a piece of dough面人dough figurine_【寫作指導】本文依然用四幅圖的形式展現(xiàn)了一個活動的過程,與往年一樣,體裁為記敘文,與往年不同的是,命題并未給出作文開頭,需學生自己寫一個事件的概括及總體感受作為文章的第一段。1.本文為圖畫類作文。在寫作時應(yīng)使用第一人稱和第三人稱,時態(tài)以一般過去時為主。2.內(nèi)容要點(1)歡迎(2)示范(3)實踐(4)拍照【滿分范文】 Last Tuesday,our class invited an old craftsman to teach us how t
25、o make dough figurines. When the craftsman came into the classroom, we gave him a warm welcome and two boys helped him with the tool box. First,he showed us the basic steps and skills of making dough figurines.We stood around him and watched attentively. Then we started to have a try ourselves. The
26、old man walked around and helped us patiently. Finally,we put the figurines we made on the table and took pictures with the old craftsman. Looking at the figurines, we were all very excited.We hope we can have more activities of this kind!【亮點說明】范文注意使用First, Then, Finally等來銜接句子和段落,表示事情發(fā)生的時間順序,使作文更有條理
27、,做到了行文連貫。全文適用的是一般過去時,注意了文章上下文時態(tài)保持一致的原則。7.2015年安徽卷某英文雜志正在舉辦以“Fancy yourself as an interviewer”為主題的征文活動,請你以“A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview”為題,寫一篇英語短文。內(nèi)容包括:1. 采訪的對象;2. 采訪的原因;3. 想提的問題。注意:1. 詞數(shù)120左右; 2. 可以適當增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫;3. 短文中不能出現(xiàn)與本人相關(guān)的信息; 4. 短文的標題已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。A Famous Chinese I Would Like to In
28、terview_【寫作指導】1.本文為提綱類作文,寫作時主要采用第一人稱,時態(tài)主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時,同時還要恰當使用虛擬語氣。 2.內(nèi)容要點:(1)表明采訪的對象;(2)闡明采訪的原因;(3)說明想提的問題?!緷M分范文】A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview The person I would like to interview is Yang Liwei. I would really like to interview him because he is not only the first Chinese to go to spa
29、ce but also one of the greatest astronauts in the world.I have long been interested in space exploration and I believe I could learn a great deal from him about it.If I could interview him.I would ask him what made him an astronaut and how he was trained.I would also like to know how he felt in spac
30、e and whether space travel is such great fun as I have read.Finally, I would like to ask a few questions about his personal life,which must be very interesting.【亮點說明】范文使用了一些重點句型:定語從句:I would like to interview is Yang Liwei.;原因狀語從句because he is not only the first Chinese;賓語從句I could learn a great dea
31、l from him about it;what made him an astronaut and how he was trained;條件狀語從句If I could interview him;非限制性定語從句which must be very interesting.等,顯示了扎實的語法功底,也使作文的句式變得多樣化;范文還使用了一些固定搭配和固定短語:not onlybut also;one of the;the first to do sth;be interested in;a great deal;suchas等,使作文的內(nèi)容得到了豐富;范文注意使用not onlybut
32、also;and;also和finally等來銜接句子,使范文顯得語意連貫、銜接緊湊。8.2015年陜西卷假定你是李華。在校報英語專欄看到了學?!坝⒄Z文化節(jié)”的一則招募啟事,請閱讀啟事,并根據(jù)寫作要點和寫作要求寫一封應(yīng)征郵件。Volunteers WantedOur annual English Festival, which will be held on June 15-17, 2015, is now looking for 20 student volunteers to provide service for Talent Show, Speech Contest, and Engl
33、ish Debate. If you are interested, please send an application email at your earliest convenience to Ms. Chen at .寫作要點:1.表達寫信意圖; 2.陳述應(yīng)征目的; 3.說明應(yīng)征條件(性格、能力等)。寫作要求: 1.郵件詞數(shù)不少于100; 2.開頭和結(jié)尾部分已寫好,不計入總詞數(shù);3.可根據(jù)情況增加細節(jié),使行文連貫 4.不能使用真實姓名和學校名稱。Dear Ms Chen,Im Li Hua,a student from Class 2,Grade 3.
34、_Looking forward to your reply.Yours truly,Li Hua【寫作指導】 本篇書面表達屬于英文書信,根據(jù)提示可知需要結(jié)合“英語文化節(jié)”的一則招募啟事寫一封應(yīng)征郵件。寫作時注意以下幾點:1、仔細閱讀招募啟事,弄清招募職位所有信息和要求;2、根據(jù)寫作要點從三個方面寫應(yīng)征郵件。寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)憽?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài);就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。 4.注意使用高級詞匯和句式,以增加文章的亮點?!緟⒖挤段摹緿ear Ms Chen,Im Li Hua,a student from Class 2,Grade 3.Im writin
35、g to apply for the position as a student volunteer.I really want to obtain this precious opportunity because,by offering my service,I will be able to improve my organisational ability,communication skills as well as my confidence in speaking English in public.As an outgoing girl,I get along well wit
36、h my classmates. Besides,I have such a good command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher. Successfully,I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class,which have been appreciated by both teachers and my classmates.I am sure that I can perfectly
37、live up to your expectations. I will be grateful if you could give me a kind consideration.Looking forward to your reply.Yours truly,Li Hua【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,層次分明,而且使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu)。比如I have such a good command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher.運用了sothat句型,以及定語從句I have lent a helpi
38、ng hand to her in several English activities of my class, which have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates.。此外,文章還使用了大量短語,如apply for the position, as well as, in public, get along well with, have such a good command of, lent a helping hand to, live up to等。插入語Besides,以及副詞Successfully的使用使文章
39、內(nèi)容更具有層次感,也使語言更加連貫9.2015年福建卷請閱讀下面圖畫,按要求用英語寫一篇詞數(shù)為120左右的短文。內(nèi)容包括:1. 描述畫面;2. 概述其含義;3. 談?wù)剛€人感想。注意: 1. 短文開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù); 2. 可適當發(fā)揮,使文章內(nèi)容充實、行文連貫;3. 短文中不能出現(xiàn)考生的具體信息。參考詞匯:鑿,鉆:boreIn the picture_【寫作指導】本題為看圖寫作,主題是古時候的一則成語“鑿壁偷光”。注意條理要清晰,邏輯順序和結(jié)構(gòu)要恰當,同時要盡量保持簡潔精干的內(nèi)容,不拖泥帶水。要注意題中所給的信息,不可偏題,應(yīng)用文寫作對于文章內(nèi)容的要求是要達到寫作目的。盡量保持卷面整潔,字
40、體美觀,注意行文的連貫性。 1.第一段描述圖畫內(nèi)容。描述圖畫內(nèi)容時,可采用一般過去時。 2.第二段概述圖畫含義。概述其含義時可采用一般過去時和一般現(xiàn)在時。 3.第三段談個人感想。本段需用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)?!緟⒖挤段摹?In the picture, we can see a boy in worn clothes, sitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it. A weak ray of light came in through a small hole in the wall and he was absorbed i
41、n his reading.This is a well-known story from an ancient Chinese idiom. The boy, being poor, couldnt afford even a candle, so he bored a hole in the wall to steal light from his neighbors house to read at night. The moral of the story is: spare no effort to acquire knowledge and never get discourage
42、d easily no matter how difficult the situation may be.Of course, things are totally different today. It is not the story itself but what is reflected in the story that counts. Hard work pays off. We should take pains to improve ourselves through learning and get prepared for the future.【亮點分析】文章第一段描述
43、圖片,第一句中用到了動詞ing形式的非謂語動詞做伴隨狀語和with 的復合結(jié)構(gòu)In the picture, we can see a boy in worn clothes, sitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it.圖中我們可以看見一個男孩穿著破舊的衣服坐在一個堆滿書的桌子旁邊。A weak ray of light came in through a small hole in the wall and he was absorbed in his reading.一絲微弱的光亮從墻上的一個小洞穿過,他沉靜在自己的閱讀中。第二段第一句開始說這個圖片的主題。This is a well-known story from ancient Chinese idiom.這是一個眾人周知的中國古代成語。第二句也是用了一個分詞結(jié)構(gòu)表示伴隨狀語The boy, being poor, could
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