英語專業(yè)四級考試寫作輔導資料

1、i. 試卷結(jié)構各部分名稱題型題數(shù)計分考試時間（分鐘）寫作a作文主觀題115分35 minsb寫便條主觀題110分10 minsii. 測試要求： a)作文。要求根據(jù)所給的題目和列出的寫作提綱寫一篇200詞左右的短文，能做到內(nèi)容切題、完整，條理清楚，文章結(jié)構嚴謹，語法正確，語言通順恰當。作文的類別通常為議論文?？荚嚂r間為35分鐘。 b)便條。要求根據(jù)提示寫大約60-80詞的便條、通知、請?zhí)?。要求做到格式正確，語言 得體。考試時間為10分鐘。英語專業(yè)四級寫作的評分標準1.作文的評分標準(1)文章內(nèi)容切題、豐富，文章通順，表達清楚。(2)行文流暢。 (3)組織嚴密，邏輯性強。(4)句型多樣化，句法

2、結(jié)構正確。(5)用詞得體、恰當、豐富。 (6)語法正確。(7)拼寫及標點正確，書寫整潔。專四寫作評分標準（一）評分原則 英語專業(yè)四級考試委員會要求閱卷人員評分時綜合考慮以下四個問題： 作文是否體現(xiàn)主題思想：文章切題，全文統(tǒng)一，無不相關細節(jié)內(nèi)容。 組織結(jié)構是否合理：全文條理清楚、組織連貫和諧、善于使用銜接語以增強文章的邏輯性。 語法文字是否有重大錯誤：正確使用英語語法是英語學習的一個重要目的，而體現(xiàn)在寫作中，則是語句合乎英語語法習慣，一篇充斥著語法錯誤的習作讓人難以下讀，也不可能獲得高分。 卷面布局是否整潔：字體端正清晰、易于辨識；規(guī)范大小寫；詞間空格；段前縮進；正確使用標點符號；避免拼寫錯誤、

3、減少涂改。 （二）評分標準命題作文：滿分為15分。專業(yè)英語四級作文考試評分標準分五個等級，閱卷人員根據(jù)閱卷標準，對照樣卷評分，可加減分；具體評分標準為： 14分：切題。表達思想清楚，文字通順，連貫性較好，基本無語言錯誤。 11分：切題。表達思想清楚，文字連貫，但有少量語言錯誤。 8分：基本切題。表達思想比較清楚，文字上連貫，但語言錯誤較多，其中有少量嚴重錯誤。 5分：基本切題。表達思想不夠清楚，文字連貫性差，有較嚴重的語言錯誤。 2分：條理不清，思想紊亂，語言支離破碎或大部分句子均有錯誤，且多數(shù)為嚴重錯誤。 交白卷者，或作文與題目毫不相關，或只寫幾個單詞。 評分中對字數(shù)也有要求：累計字數(shù)在15

4、0170之間，扣1分；累計字數(shù)在130150之間，扣2分；累計字數(shù)在110130之間，扣3分；累計字數(shù)在90110之間，扣4分；累計字數(shù)在90分以下，至多給5分。注：如照抄提示中原句，均不得計入所寫字數(shù)。只寫一段者：04分；只寫兩段者：09分（指規(guī)定三段的作文）；按規(guī)定，考生作文若為0分，無論其總分是否高于60分，均作不及格處理；若其作文分高于0分，低于6分，報導成績時，需從總分中減去6分，再加上實得作文分。便條2. 便條的評分標準便條寫作1.寫作時必須交代清楚時間，地點，人物，事件及相關內(nèi)容，例：note-writingbefore you leave university you want

5、 to sell your bike. write a note of about 80-100 words describing the condition of your bike, how much you like for it.這一則便條是要轉(zhuǎn)讓一輛自行車，寫作時必須交代清楚自行車的車型，新舊程度，可議價格和出讓原因，此外必須交代清楚何時，何地與誰聯(lián)系等。whats the purpose of the note?is it well achieved?2.格式上要正確。對請柬和便條等都應有日期，稱呼，正文，結(jié)束語和簽名。 便條寫作滿分為10分。格式錯誤減1-2分，字數(shù)達不到或超過減

6、1-2分，。2007 section b: note of refusal參考范文 april 22, 2007dear jimmy,thank you so much for inviting me to join the swimming club. id like to but im afraid i cannot. to learn tennis has long been my dream and the best tennis teacher will be leaving next year. so this is the last chance for me and i wou

7、ld like very much to seize it.best wishes. yours, tomtem4 (2007)便條評分標準i. 格式: (占3分) 包括日期,稱呼和結(jié)尾三部分,各占1分.1. 日期(date):正確: april 24th, 2007 / april 24, 2007 / april 24 / 24 april 2007 4/24/2007 / 24/4/2007 (apr.也可以,任何一個日期都可以)2. 稱呼(heading):正確: (dear) mike: (,)/ (dear) hilda: (,)(缺逗號或冒號,扣.)位置在日期下面一行左側(cè).3.

8、結(jié)尾(ending):正確: yours sincerely,/yours,/sincerely yours,/sincerely, (無逗號,扣0.5)sincerely, mike, hilda(若在一行,扣0.5)yours sincerely(兩個單詞的首字母都大寫扣0.5)若名字沒寫或人名xxx(或mike/hilda)扣1分.4. 格式需前后一致,如全左或全右,若不符合,扣1分.凡不符合上述正確格式或表達均要扣分. 錯一部分扣1分,最多扣3分ii. 內(nèi)容(占2分)本便條必須包含如下內(nèi)容:1. 拒絕(1分)2. 理由(1分)iii. 語言(占5分)1. 首句需要自己正確的語言表達,若

9、完全抄提示扣1分2. 5分中有1分是語言的得體性. 語言風格與情景不一致,扣1分(如: if you consent, etc.). 只有語言較好才得分.iv. 評分總體要求:1. 語言沒有嚴重錯誤,格式對,內(nèi)容完整,語言得體,字數(shù)符合要求(40),可給9-10分.2. 便條總字數(shù)(包括三部分格式在內(nèi))要求在50-60字;不到40或超過80字扣1分.3. 請寫出三部分的小分,如:2+2+4(格式+內(nèi)容+語言)4. 不要出現(xiàn)0.5分.5. 要求大家閱卷時做到認真仔細,不漏改卷,漏填分數(shù)或漏簽名. 請在每份卷子的錯誤部分劃線,以便復校.6. 便條總分為10分, 6分為及格線. 就歷年考試而言，大作

10、文話題主要有三大類：社會熱點話題、校園話題和日常生活話題。（standard）2011專四便條寫作april 20, 2008dear my friend,the summer vacation is coming next month. i hope you will visit our home town and stay with us. its very beautiful here with everything in bloom now. if possible, you can come here by the train no. 1010, which will arrive

11、here at 18:00.i am looking forward to seeing you as soon as possible.sincerely,2011年專四作文should private car owners be taxed for pollution?私家車主是否應交污染稅？2010年專四真題作文題目 2010/09/25 20:37 專四作文 section a composition it was recently reported in a newspaper that six students who shared a dorm in a local univer

12、sity hired a cleaner to do laundry and cleaning once a week. and each of them paid her 60 yuan a month. this has led to a heated debate as to whether college students should hire cleaners. write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: should college students hire cleaners? you are t

13、o write in three parts: in the first part, state clearly what your view is. in the second part, support your view with appropriate reasons. in the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary. marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness

14、. failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks. section b note-writing write a note of about 50-60 words based on the following situation: your good friend, john, is thinking of organizing an end-of-the-term party. write him a note telling him that you like his idea and offer to

15、help him. you have to be specific about how you can help him. marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. 09 section a: will tourism bring harm to environment?section b: informing your friend of a part time job08 section a: the benefits of volunteeringsection b: not

16、e of recommending anenglish newspaper to a friend 07 section a: is it wise to make frieads online?section b: note of refusal06 section a: my idea of saving moneysection b: requesting details on a travel05 section a: my idea of a university festivalsection b: note of inviting a friend a concert given

17、 by a famous pop band/orchestra04 section a: will phones kill letter writing?section b: comfort/encourage a friend who failed an exam： 1. activity noticenotice is written to make known something that is to happen. it is usually an announcement of a meeting, a party, a lecture, a game or a contest. i

18、t may include:-the people concerned-the activity-time, place-other special requirements or details (dressing, preparations etc)-(lecture) background of the speakernotice students from english department:to enrich the weekend campus life, an english film will be shown every friday and saturday evenin

19、g at multimedia room 3. the film starts at 7:00 pm. besides while seeing the film, please keep quiet and do not chat with each other. no food is allowed in the room, which is very important. otherwise, the people involved will be punished. english department office2. note accompanying a present:note

20、 of this kind is usually written by a person who sends to a friend a gift on a special occasion, without meeting him/her in person.such note may include:-reasons for sending the gift and this gift-asking the receivers opinion of it (hope enjoy it)-best wishes for the occasionexample dear lin, today

21、is your20th birthday, and i think as your best friend i should definitely give something special. remember last year when we visited the botanical garden? you said you favorite flowers are daffodils which stand for purity to you. so here they are! i hope these daffodils can accompany you every minut

22、e when i am not around, and remind you of me, your true and best friend. do you like them? hope so!again happy birthday and many happy returns of the day! best, qinlet me/allow me to present you with/offer to youplease do me a favor/an honor by acceptingi hope youll accept it as an expression of my

23、regard for you/ as a remembrance of our friendship/ as a token of my sincere esteem for you.3. note in reply to such note:-surprise at receiving the present-appreciation/high opinions of the present-thanks for the present-asking after the sendermany thanks for your gift and kindnessi greatly appreci

24、ate which you kindly sent me.your wonderful present and kind wishes indeed give me much pleasurei was delighted indeed to receive your gift with the assurance of your kind consideration toward me.on receiving your nice gift, i hardly know how to thank you enough for your generosity.i shall cherish i

25、t deeply, and forever think of the kind giver.4. note of apology note of such type is written by someone who did something wrong and would like to say sorry to the victim. such note may include-the apology and the mistake/ consequence-reasons or explanations for the mistake-regret about the mistake-

26、hope to make up for itdear helen,i really cant express my sense of guilt to you enough with words. but i still have to give you my deepest apology for not lending you the notes that you need so much. without those notes, you may land a slim chance to pass the final exam. i know how depressed and dis

27、appointed you are at present.but i would really appreciate it if you allow me to give you an explanation of all this as i would be as sad as you were without you. yesterday, lucy came to my home and asked to consult my notes and promised to return promptly. as you know, since she is my neighbor, i a

28、ssumed she would return the next day, so i lent it to her. but when i wanted it back today, to my greatest shock, she said she lent it to another friend who will return 3 days later. thats why i didnt give it to you as i had promised. so you see i was also a victim just like you. i really regret abo

29、ut trusting lucy so hastily and hurting you, my best friend. i didnt mean to eat my words and let you down on purpose. but now, i have already got it back in my hands, so i hope its not too late for you to get the notes. waiting for your call.judyuseful expressions:1.expess regrets:inform: sorry abo

30、ut - ing not-ing i feel awful about/for i am terribly/very sorry about/fori am regretful formore formal: i (do) apologize . for. i must apologize for/that i sincerely apologize please accept my sincere apology for i very much regret nay inconvenience may cause you.2. offer reasons and explanations:s

31、adly,.unfortunately, i .3.make promises to remedy: i promise that. i ll. i hope to i assure you that.5. note of thanksnote of such type is written by someone who receives help/gift from others. such note may include -what favor /help you received, - the significance/result of the favor-your apprecia

32、tionuseful expressionsneutral: thank you (very much) for doing sth.i must thank you for.more formal: i am (extremely) grateful for your help.i am most grateful for your doing sth.i am full of gratitude to sb. for sth.i am most obliged to you forid like to take this opportunity to express my sincere

33、gratitude to you forinformal:thanks for.it was very good of you to.oceans of thanks to you.6. note asking ones health/consolationnote of such type is written to show the writers care and concern about receivers illness. such note may include-how you heard about his or her ill health-sorry to hear th

34、e news-wanting to pay a visit in person but unable to make it-sending regards and asking after the present condition of the person-good wishes for recoverydear dan,jack rang me up yesterday and gave me the bad news of your illness. i never imagined that a strong person like you should have gone down

35、 with heart disease. im so sorry that you have been hospitalized. i hope it is not a big deal. are you feeling ok?i would like to see you, but im working on the mid-day shift-from 10am to 2 pm, during your visiting hours! so i will see you next week when i am free. be careful about yourself and take

36、 some walk. thats helpful. wish you a quick recovery, and longing to see you.tedconsolationill in hospital, bad luck(fail in exam), casualty(house collapsed)難過：i am sorry to learn/hear about i am saddened to fing thatit worries me to find that同情:i wish to express our deepest sympathy and solicitude

37、to youwith my heartfelt sympathywe extend/convey our deepest consolationi feel quite relieved that7. note of condolencenote of such type is written to show the writers deep grief and sympathy upon the death of some relative of receiver.such note may include-the source of the sad news-feeling of deep

38、 sorrow-complimentary remembrance of the deceased -condolencedear sophie,i was greatly shocked at the sad news in yesterdays newspaper; i could hardly believe my eyes. my grief is beyond words.your grandfather was the most talented writer i have ever met. his intelligence and works will always remai

39、n in our hearts. i will miss him so much. grieve with you heart and soul. please convey my heartfelt condolence to your parents. warmest and sincerest regards! lucy it is distressing to learn thatwe were stunned by the news thati was dumbfounded byi am utterly shocked and heartbroken to hear the ter

40、rible news thatplease accept and pass my condolences toi mourn with you forjoin me in sending you our condolenses for this sudden loss of8. note of congrats(promotion / dwelling/birth) 祝賀a.祝賀內(nèi)容b表示祝賀c積極評價d忠心祝福（再次祝賀祝福未來）祝賀之事和自己的反應： im so happy to learn that youve just passed your thesis defense. / im

41、so pleased to hear that youve got the admission by the cambridge university to further your graduate study. 祝賀行為: please accept my warmest congratulations. 對成功的評價和對對方的欽佩；you really deserve it because/ this meant years of your hard work, and its an achievement you can well be proud of. / i have been

42、appreciating your excellent performance in study and ability in your work. 美好祝愿； you will have a brilliant future. / i believe our school life will be more colorful under your leadership. / i believe that the knowledge youve acquired will enable you to be successful in whatever aspect of life. congr

43、atulations again and all good wishes for your future study.it was a great pleasure/delight to hear ofit is a pleasant surprise to learn of we are more than thrilled to be informed thatmy heartfelt congrats to you oni would like to offer /extend my warm congrats to you on i would like to add my congr

44、ats to the many you will be receiving.9. note of invitationsuch letter may include-the occasion (why)-time/ place-the pleasure of seeing the person there-ask for a replydear simon,long time no see! are you doing well as before?everyone has to pay awe to the pace of time! it has been 10 years since w

45、e graduated from college. so on this special occasion, we decide to hold a reunion party for the students of class 1997. all the fellows as well as our former teachers are also invited to come. the party will be held at whiteclouds hotel at 5:30 pm on saturday march 20. be sure to attend on time! we

46、 all miss you so much. and dont forget to bring your family. your presence will surely contribute to our fun and delight.give me a reply at once.bobuseful expressionsinformal:why dont you come.how about coming.wed think itd be a good idea if.can you come.wed really like you to.more formal:is there a

47、ny chance of you coming.we were wondering if you could/wanted to.would it be ok for youis it convenient for you toformal:we would like to ask you to come.we wondered if youd like to comewe would like to invite you to.we are expecting with great pleasure to see you at onmay i have the honor /pleasure

48、 of your company atmay i have the honor /pleasure of inviting toplease confirm your participation at your earliest convenience.a. acceptanceexpress thanks for the invitation, let your friend know it is a pleasure for you to be invited.dear kate, your letter about the get-together is a lovely surpris

49、e. of course i shall come. having not seen you and other old friends in such a long time, i really miss you and others. i can hardly wait! ill go to your place straight from my office around 5 p.m. friday. thank you for remembering me. see you then.your friend,ivanwe have much pleasure in accepting

50、your kind invitation.it will afford me the great pleasure to dine with you at onnothing will give us more pleasure than accepting your kind invitation.b. refusalbefore or after the answer, we need to explain why we could not accept the invitation. the reason we give should be convincing, otherwise,

51、the letter will sound impolite and insincere. may 8 2003dear kate, thank you for your invitation to your wedding at the beginning of the december- i was pleased to learn that you and franz have decided on “something”at last. unfortunately, much as i d like to be at the wedding, especially a dutch we

52、dding(!), it simply isnt possible for me to take that weekend off; i have to work fairly late on friday night, and friends are coming down to stay from sunday lunchtime so there would be no way in which i could squeeze a wedding in holland in between. so all i can do is to wish you the happiest of d

53、ays and also of future.i regret that i will not be able to attend owing toi wish i could attend but unfortunately/ i regret to inform you thatit is really a shame that i could not attend10. letter of complaint (formal)such letter may include-the purpose of writing-the event in question-actions expected-reply expecteddear manager: