中考英語作文范文-2012邵陽 材料作文特殊句式和變化句式

1、2012年湖南省邵陽市中考英語 材料作文 特殊句式和變化句式作文 (計(jì)10分) 交網(wǎng)友須慎重。假如有幾位網(wǎng)友想加你為QQ好友。請根據(jù)下面表格信息，以Who can be my QQ good friends?為標(biāo)題，寫一篇英語短文。NameAgeSexHobbiesLiu Xing15malegoing fishing;playing the guitar; reading magazineLi Tao14maleSmoking; drinking wine(白酒); dying(染)hair into different colorsXia Xue16femalereading good b

2、ooks; listening to music; playing table tennis要求：1.70詞左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)； 2.語言流暢，書寫規(guī)范，卷面整潔； 3.文中不得使用你的真實(shí)姓名、校名。 Who can be my QQ good friends? Dear friends, we should be careful when we make QQ friends. Id like to make QQ friends with those who have the same hobbies as me. I think friendship is so imp

3、ortant in our lives that we well never lose it.材料作文寫作技巧之2 特殊句式和變化句式特殊句式尤其是倒裝句、感嘆句、強(qiáng)調(diào)句型、非謂語的使用，這些句式的使用不僅使文章生動(dòng)、表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，同時(shí)還證明了學(xué)生深厚的語言功夫以及表達(dá)能力。通常，我們在草稿上，按照通常的做法，我們將材料遣詞造句，連句成篇。但是，有時(shí)，為了避免文章句子的重復(fù)或達(dá)到高分的目的，我們需要在修改及文章潤色過程，將句子變換一下，通常要應(yīng)用倒裝句、感嘆句、強(qiáng)調(diào)句型、非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)。該材料常規(guī)的遣詞造句為如下：Liu Xing is15he is male, his hobbies are goi

4、ng fishing; playing the guitar and reading magazine.Li Tao is 14 he is malehis hobbies are smoking; drinking wine and dying hair into different colors.Xia Xue is 16, she is female her hobbies are reading good books; listening to music and playing table tennis.特殊句式和變化句式Liu Xing is15. Being a male, hi

5、s hobbies are going fishing; playing the guitar and reading magazine. (非謂語結(jié)構(gòu))Li Tao is an14-year-old boy. What bad hobbies he has. He likes smoking; drinking wine and dying hair into different colors.( 感嘆句)Xia Xue is a girl of 16 years old, and reading good books; listening to music and playing tabl

6、e tennis are her hobbies.( 倒裝句)Who can be my QQ good friends?Dear friends, we should be careful when we make QQ friends. Id like to make QQ friends with those who have the same hobbies as me. I think that Xia Xue can be my QQ friend because she does have the same hobbies as me. Reading good books; l

7、istening to music and playing table tennis are her hobbies. What is more she is a girl of 16 years old so am I. Liu Xing can also be my QQ friend. Being a male, his hobbies are going fishing; playing the guitar and reading magazine. I like such a boy. I think that Li Tao isnt supposed to be my QQ fr

8、iend. He likes smoking; drinking wine and dying hair into different colors. What bad hobbies he has. He is 14 and too young to have these bad hobbies. They are harmful to his health. I think friendship is so important in our lives that we well never lose it.本文的過渡詞遞進(jìn)型：what is more因果型 because順承型 and, also譯文誰能成為我的QQ 好友?朋友，我們應(yīng)該慎重交QQ 好友。我將跟我有共同興趣愛好的人成為QQ 好友。我認(rèn)為夏雪可成為我的QQ 好友，因?yàn)樗娓矣邢嗤呐d趣愛好。她的愛好是讀好書，聽音樂和打網(wǎng)球。另外，她是一個(gè)16歲的女孩，我也是。劉星也可成為我的QQ 好友，作為男性，他喜歡釣魚，彈吉他和看雜志。我喜歡這樣的男孩。我認(rèn)為李濤不可成為我的QQ 好友，她他嗜好吸煙喝酒，還有染發(fā)。他的興趣愛好多么不好。他十四歲，不能養(yǎng)成這些壞的毛病，這些對他的健康