讀后續(xù)寫(一)

1、: 提供一篇350詞以內(nèi)的材料，要求考生依據(jù)材料內(nèi)容、所給段落開頭語及所標(biāo)關(guān)鍵詞續(xù)寫一篇150詞左右的短文。（滿分25分）新高考考試說明評(píng)分原則本題總分為25分，分5個(gè)檔次給分第五檔第五檔(21-25)與所給短文融洽度高，與所提供各段落開頭語與所給短文融洽度高，與所提供各段落開頭語銜接合理銜接合理。內(nèi)內(nèi)容豐富，容豐富，應(yīng)用了應(yīng)用了5個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)出的關(guān)鍵個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)出的關(guān)鍵詞語。詞語。所所使用語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯豐富、準(zhǔn)確，使用語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯豐富、準(zhǔn)確， 可能可能有些有些錯(cuò)誤，但完全不影響意義表達(dá)。錯(cuò)誤，但完全不影響意義表達(dá)。有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使所有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使所續(xù)寫

2、短續(xù)寫短文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。 高高融洽度融洽度 tone (情節(jié)基調(diào)情節(jié)基調(diào))language characteristics(語言特征語言特征)content (內(nèi)容內(nèi)容: plot development - “W & H”) 1. tone (情節(jié)基調(diào)情節(jié)基調(diào)): ?Then I realized something terrible would happen.He took out a knife nd forced me to .I managned to teach my brother could untie the rope on his hands.dangeroussaf

3、ea happy ending2. Language characteristics (語言特征語言特征) : ? One day, my brother and I were alone in our apartment.Ding-Dong! Ding-Dong!Outside of the house stood a man who wore a black raincoat and black rubber boots.Without any thinking，my brother said: “No.” Story narration (故事旁白故事旁白) simple (簡單簡單)

4、vivid (生動(dòng)生動(dòng)) one dayin our apartmentI, my brother and a robber My brother opened the door for a robber and we were caught by him. 3. content (內(nèi)容內(nèi)容: plot development - “W&H”) How will the story develop?When:Where:Who:What: How:Passage A mainly tells: One day, my brother opened the door of our house f

5、or a robber, and we were caught by him.Find out the key clues(線索) based on the beginnings:Para1: The door of the kitchen was locked and whats worse, I did not have the key.Para2 Just at the same time our parents came back home.Escape or not?(tone: dangerous safe a happy ending)The underlined words:

6、in our apartment, parents, the dooe, unlocked, comic books, terrible, tie up, the man, the kitchen, the policethe brothersthe robberescape?not escape?caught?not caught?parents?the police? Language characteristics:simple (簡單簡單)vivid (生動(dòng)生動(dòng))Polish and cohere (潤色銜接潤色銜接):discourse marks (銜接語銜接語)Content: include the underlined words ( 5)Para.1: The door of the kitchen was locked and whats worse, I did not have the key.Para.2: Just at the same time our parents came back h