廣東高考讀寫任務(wù)英語作文訓(xùn)練Word版

1、如何寫好“讀寫任務(wù)”第二部分寫作（學(xué)案）I. 如何寫出吸引改卷老師眼球的好句？1. I followed your advice. I went to the supermarket. There I found four chairs. They were in good shape. They were reasonably priced.使用分詞和定語從句合并上述句子：_ your advice, I went to the supermarket _.2. The cat walked slowly through the grass. The cat was watching the

2、 mouse the whole time.使用現(xiàn)在分詞合并：_, the cat walked slowly through the grass. 3. The gold was hidden under the ground. It was safe for many years.使用過去分詞合并：_, the gold was safe for many years.練習(xí)：1.Tom was waiting in the queue for half an hour. He suddenly realized that he had left his wallet at home._2.

3、The two students were lost in the mountains for a week. They were finally saved by the local police. _4. 使用定語從句或形容詞修飾名詞或代詞。1）The house has been turned into an apartment. I was born in the house._2）You will have a room in my house. The room is very comfortable. In this room, you will find many things

4、. The things are quite necessary for daily life.方法一(使用2個(gè)定語從句)：You will have a room in my house, _and _ you can find many things that are necessary for daily life.方法二：（用形容詞代替其中一個(gè)定語從句，讓句子簡練）You will have a _ room in my house, _you can find all the necessary things for daily life.5. 使用介詞短語合并（with +O; w

5、ith+O+OC）The fire is burning, so I feel warm. _, I feel warm.I lost my bike, so I had to walk home. _, I had to walk home.2 / 12II. 如何寫漂亮讀寫任務(wù)第二部分寫作？牢記：好的段落是well-connected, clear, economical, tight。1. 平時(shí)訓(xùn)練要求1) 書寫卷面訓(xùn)練：卷面書寫給評(píng)卷老師的第一印象非常重要，也是作文能拿到高分的第一道門檻，所謂 “印象分”。在高考作文備考過程中，要特別注意書寫訓(xùn)練,切忌書寫不清、涂涂抹抹。具體要求如下：

6、（1）用純黑色或顏色均勻的簽字筆或鋼筆；（2）貼底線書寫，保持字母大小基本一致，字母主體部分占行線約一半大小為宜；（3）保持單詞間距基本一致，一般為兩個(gè)字母的位置；（4）錯(cuò)詞只用一條橫線或斜線劃掉，盡量不重復(fù)涂寫同一字母或單詞；（5）每段前空格約4個(gè)字母的位置。（3個(gè)或5個(gè)字母）2） 避開抄襲陷阱：高水平的“抄襲”其實(shí)不是抄襲而是改寫，是利用原文的信息內(nèi)容、詞匯和句子結(jié)構(gòu)，通過詞匯替換和句型轉(zhuǎn)換等手段進(jìn)行改寫。這也正是“讀寫任務(wù)”這種題型所要考查考生是否掌握的寫作技能。3） 整篇作文是一個(gè)整體，內(nèi)容要合理安排，語義要連貫，各段之間過渡、銜接要自然，避免對(duì)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)一問一答式的寫作。2.各段之間過

7、渡、銜接常用句型：What a touching story, which reminds me of多么感人的故事呀，該故事使我想起例如：Sams experience reminds me of my similar experience happening four years ago when I was admitted to senior high school. Sam的經(jīng)歷讓我想起了四年前我上高中時(shí)發(fā)生的類似經(jīng)歷。I was deeply touched when I read your letter. Its the first time that I have realiz

8、ed your deepest love for me. 讀完您的信后，我很感動(dòng)，我第一次感受到你對(duì)我深深的愛。But in the meantime, I am looking forward to my new life in the college.但同時(shí)，我又期盼著大學(xué)生活。However, life is like a box of chocolate and youll never know whats inside until you open it. 然而人生就像一盒巧克力，直到你打開時(shí)，才知道里面是什么口味。I will be absolutely able to adjus

9、t the differences in a short time. 我絕對(duì)能夠很快適應(yīng)兩者的不同。解題指導(dǎo)：近6年的讀寫任務(wù)第二部分寫作都是三個(gè)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，三個(gè)要點(diǎn)內(nèi)在的邏輯順序已經(jīng)安排好，無須考生重新組織。而且，寫作內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)明確，有時(shí)候相當(dāng)于三個(gè)問答題，把三個(gè)問題回答好就完成任務(wù)了。每一段寫一個(gè)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，這樣讓評(píng)卷老師清清楚楚地知道你已經(jīng)完成了三個(gè)寫作內(nèi)容任務(wù)。每一段都由一個(gè)主題句（a topic sentence）和2句或3句拓展句組成。 3.主題句的6種常用寫法: 1.直接回答要點(diǎn)。寫作要點(diǎn)是詢問考生的看法時(shí)，對(duì)提問直接作出回答。假如你處在那些動(dòng)物的處境,你會(huì)有什么反應(yīng)？ （2009廣東

10、高考讀寫任務(wù)要點(diǎn)2）If I were an animal in the wildlife park, I could feel annoyed when people keep photographing me.練習(xí)：你理想中的大學(xué)生活是什么樣的？（2008年廣東高考讀寫任務(wù)要點(diǎn)2）_常用詞語：In my opinion /in my eyes / as for me / as far as I am concerned/ It is my personal belief that2.表明立場。 明確表示對(duì)某觀點(diǎn)支持、贊同或反對(duì)。你認(rèn)為是否應(yīng)該禁止游客和動(dòng)物拍照。 (2009年廣東高考讀寫任

11、務(wù)要點(diǎn)3) I believe that taking photos with animals should be banned.練習(xí)：你對(duì)用金錢鼓勵(lì)孩子學(xué)習(xí)的看法。 (2010年廣東高考讀寫任務(wù)要點(diǎn)1) _表示支持或贊同的常用句型：I agree with the statement that ； I am in favor of ； I appreciate that.; I approve of the idea that; I believe that ; I agree with what the writer said/says.表示反對(duì)或不贊同的句型：I disagree wit

12、h the idea that; I am opposed to the idea that ; I disapprove of the idea that; In some way, I agree with but; What the writer said sounds reasonable, but I 3.重述要點(diǎn)。不直接回答寫作要點(diǎn)，而是翻譯要點(diǎn)作為段落主題句。中學(xué)生活和大學(xué)生活的差別，以及你打算如何適應(yīng)。.（2008年廣東高考讀寫任務(wù)要點(diǎn)3） As we all know, college is widely different from middle school. 想家給學(xué)習(xí)

13、和生活帶來的影響。（2011年廣東高考讀寫任務(wù)要點(diǎn)2）Owing to feeling homesick too much, I couldnt get accustomed to the school life and couldnt pay attention to my study. 練習(xí)：在生活中諒解他人有何重要意義。_常用詞語：play an important role/part in在中 扮演重要角色; do harm to = be harmful to 對(duì)有害；Its beneficial / vital/ necessary for sb. to do sth. 對(duì)某人來說

14、做某事很有幫助/重要/必要have a bad/good influence/effect = affect negatively/positively 影響不好/好; have a close relation /connection with.= be associated with closely= be connected withclosely和有密切聯(lián)系set a wonderful example to sb. 給某人樹立一個(gè)好榜樣cultivated my interest in培養(yǎng)我對(duì)的興趣；show more and more enthusiasm in對(duì)表現(xiàn)出越來越多的興

15、趣= show a keen interest in4.總述原因 你支持青少年的秘密應(yīng)該與父母分享的理由是什么？I insist that teenagers secrets should be shared with their parents for reasons as follows. 練習(xí)：使我們生活發(fā)生變化有哪些原因？ _常用句型：There are several reasons that contribute to的原因有多種= Reasons for this are varied.The reasons for this are obvious的原因顯而易見 for rea

16、sons as follows的原因如下The reason why is that5.引出建議、方法、措施、步驟等如何才能獲得快樂？We should find some effective ways to make ourselves happy.你（或你朋友）是如何應(yīng)對(duì)日常生活中的沖突的？（2013佛山一模）It is very important not to respond to anger with anger in our daily life.你認(rèn)為怎樣才能更好地鼓勵(lì)孩子學(xué)習(xí)。（2010年廣東高考讀寫任務(wù)要點(diǎn)3）In my opinion, schools and parent

17、s are supposed to educate their kids through teaching them to study for their family and their motherland rather than giving them money.練習(xí)：說說人們對(duì)環(huán)境保護(hù)所采取的措施。 _常用句型：We are supposed to take some effective measures.We should try our best to overcome/conquer the difficulties.We are inquired to solve the p

18、roblems that we are faced with.It is necessary that proper actions/ steps should be taken to end the phenomenon.6.引出經(jīng)歷。用來引出記敘文的具體事例。簡述你經(jīng)歷過的一次困難或考驗(yàn)。It reminds me of my own experience when 講述一次你（或你朋友）發(fā)生沖突的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)和起因（2013佛山一模）I had once 曾經(jīng) experienced an embarrassing conflict with my classmate last year.

19、 It was raining heavily outside and the classroom was a bit crowded. 常用句型：It reminds me of the time whenIt reminds me of an accident which happened several days ago.After reading the story above, I recall the experience of my friend whoThe story above reminds me of one of my experiencesWhat a touchi

20、ng story, which reminds me ofSams experience reminds me of my similar experience happening four years ago when I was admitted to senior high school.4.拓展句的四種常用寫法：1）列舉：12點(diǎn)如：列舉學(xué)校里的浪費(fèi)現(xiàn)象 We could see such kind of small things around us every day. (主題句) 要點(diǎn)：教室時(shí)；吃飯時(shí)；吃完時(shí)For example, when we leave the classro

21、om, we just ignore the lights and computers and leave them on; when we have dinners, we often use the throwaway chopsticks and plastic bags; when we finish some drinks and food, we throw the leftover very casually. (拓展句) 如：作為中學(xué)生，我們應(yīng)該如何配合老師批改作業(yè)？（8校聯(lián)考卷）Whats more, teachers check over our assignments e

22、very day, which is a good bridge for us to communicate with each other.（主題句）要點(diǎn)：在錯(cuò)誤中學(xué)習(xí)；得到鼓勵(lì)從而取得進(jìn)步；要尊重老師的勞動(dòng)成果。 In this case we can learn from our errors, get encouragement and make progress in our study. So we will respect our teachers hard work, no matter whether they use red pens or not.2). 遞進(jìn)：not o

23、nly.but also.moreover 如：就“互聯(lián)網(wǎng)給人們生活帶來的影響”發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn) Surfing the Internet brings people more benefits. (主題句) 要點(diǎn)：提供最新信息；改變交流方式；網(wǎng)上購物，方便快捷。The Internet not only provides people with amounts of latest information, but also changes the way people communicate with each other. Besides, the Internet enables peop

24、le to go shopping at home easily and conveniently. (拓展句)3). 對(duì)比：for one thing正面原因；for another反面原因 如：你是否支持該校長暫停表現(xiàn)不好的學(xué)生上學(xué)。 I believe the headmaster is right to suspend those misbehaving students class. (主題句) 要點(diǎn)：一方面，他們待在教室會(huì)；另一方面，不待在教室會(huì)For one thing, if these misbehaving students are allowed to stay in c

25、lass, they will negatively affect other students learning. For another, if they are removed from the class, not only the others can learn in peace, but they also can have time to learn their lessons and then behave better when they return.(拓展句)如：簡述老師用紅筆批改學(xué)生作業(yè)的利與弊；（八校聯(lián)考卷）Generally speaking, most teac

26、hers mark corrections or grade students papers in red pens. （主題句）要點(diǎn)：有人認(rèn)為用紅筆會(huì)；但是，也有人認(rèn)為用紅筆可以Some people think it may make students anxious thus blaming their teachers. However some people think it can attract students attention. 4. 類似故事或經(jīng)歷故事歸納 如：就“如何看待外貌”的主題發(fā)表看法 What makes a person beautiful is his at

27、tractive personality rather than his physical appearance.(主題句) 要點(diǎn)：舉例：某某同學(xué)In one of my previous classes, there was a beautiful girl named Lucy who had almost a perfect face and slim figure. She treated her beauty in a matter-of-fact way and she was nice to everyone. Her personality was mostly accepte

28、d by others and it made her an outstanding beauty. (拓展句)要寫好舉例論證文章的例子，需注意兩點(diǎn)：抓住要素，突出要素1.引述事例時(shí)要突出能夠證明中心論點(diǎn)的部位,可用一定筆墨進(jìn)行渲染(如: She treated her beauty in a matter-of-fact wayHer personality was mostly accepted by others)2. 除必要的交代外，刪去與論證無關(guān)或關(guān)系不大的內(nèi)容.確定事例的建議步驟：1、確定例子前先確定論點(diǎn)；2、抓住論點(diǎn)的要素；3、尋找與論點(diǎn)有共同要素的例子；4、確定例子。下面有三篇

29、均以海倫.凱勒故事為中心的例子，如果你要寫一篇論點(diǎn)為“Efforts are the most important thing to help you achieve success.”的文章，你會(huì)選擇哪個(gè)例子呢？為什么？1） The example of Helen Keller best supports the view. Helen Keller was born deaf and blind before she learned to speak. She had little real understanding of the world around her. Fortunate

30、ly, she had a good teacher and her teacher helped her speak. At last, she could speak normally and gave her help to people who liked her. 2） The example of Helen Keller best supports the view. Helen Keller was born deaf and blind before she learned to speak. She had little real understanding of the

31、world around her. Nevertheless, she made every effort to learn to speak and write. With a great deal of persistence, she finally became a writer and lecturer, who also became an inspiration to all.3) The example of Helen Keller best supports the view. Helen Keller was born deaf and blind before she

32、learned to speak. She had little real understanding of the world around her, certainly nothing to give her self-confidence. Nevertheless, she believed she could conquer all the difficulties. With this faith, she finally became a writer and lecturer, also an inspiration to all.小試牛刀：2013年廣東省高考英語讀寫任務(wù)第二

33、節(jié) 讀寫任務(wù)（共1小題；滿分25分）閱讀下面短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文 To many people even the word “work” sounds unpleasant ,not necessarily because they are lazy. The same man, who dislikes his job in the factory or even in the office, may work hard at the weekend, painting the house or digging the garden. What is the rea

34、son ,then？In most cases, it is because these people simply do not enjoy the job they are doing. It does not give them any real satisfaction. It may be quite easy, like making up wooden boxes, but it is very boring. Very often they are doing a job which is just a small part of a much larger one, such as attaching a door handle to a car.