公開課如何在高考英語作文中增加細(xì)節(jié)PPT課件

1、假定你是李華。上周日在地鐵站撿到了英國(guó)人Steven 的護(hù)照。請(qǐng)你用英語給你市某英文報(bào)社編輯寫一封信，內(nèi)容包括：1.簡(jiǎn)述時(shí)間過程; 2.交代護(hù)照相關(guān)信息; 3.委托報(bào)社刊登招領(lǐng)啟事.注意: 1.詞數(shù)100左右 2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。廣東一模書面表達(dá)第1頁/共19頁一個(gè)問題主體信息寫完往往只有60-70個(gè)字，不足100詞，怎么彌補(bǔ)詞數(shù)？ 需要“適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫”。第2頁/共19頁Dear editor, Im LiHua, a high school student in our city. Im writing to tell you a piece of urgent

2、information. I picked up a passport last Sunday in the subway station when I was taking a ride home. There was nobody around when I found it on a waiting bench. The owner of it is Steven who comes from England. Having lost the passport, he must be very anxious, but I have no idea how to return it to

3、 him. So I need your help. I wish you could post a notice on your newspaper to tell him about the missing passport, so that he can get it back. I would appreciate it if you could do me the favor. Im looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua結(jié)結(jié)果果交際語交際語心理心理感受感受具體化具體化同位語同位語原因原因第3頁/共19頁如何適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)1.增加同位語

4、2.補(bǔ)全前因后果或目的3.適當(dāng)將寫作內(nèi)容具體化4.寫出個(gè)人感受、評(píng)價(jià)或后果5.補(bǔ)充功能性（交際性）語言第4頁/共19頁What kind of information can often be added to your article?1 增加同位語1 I am LiHua, _ (我們學(xué)校的學(xué)生會(huì)主席我們學(xué)校的學(xué)生會(huì)主席). / _(來來自中國(guó)的一位交換生自中國(guó)的一位交換生). 2. I want to have a pen friend, _ (希望是一位跟我有相同興趣的女孩希望是一位跟我有相同興趣的女孩). Chairman of the Students Union of my sc

5、hool.an exchange student from China.hopefully a girl with interests similar to mine.第5頁/共19頁2.補(bǔ)充前因后果或目的補(bǔ)充前因后果或目的_(因?yàn)橹滥銓?duì)中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化很感興趣因?yàn)橹滥銓?duì)中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化很感興趣），I am writing to invite you to participate in this activity. _(為了獲得一些實(shí)踐經(jīng)驗(yàn)為了獲得一些實(shí)踐經(jīng)驗(yàn)) Im planning to take a part-time job in a foreign company.(1) Knowing

6、 that you show great interest in Chinese traditional culture,(2)In order to get some practical experience,_ (由于我有過丟身份證的經(jīng)歷），I can feel how anxious Mr Steven will be now.(3)Since I have the experience of losing my ID card,第6頁/共19頁（1) The activity will be held _(具體時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)）(2 )I know the owner is Steven _

7、 (相關(guān)身份信息) 3 When I received the dictionary, I found that _(具體存在問題 如錯(cuò)印、缺頁等)3.適當(dāng)將寫作內(nèi)容具體化 from 9 a.m. to 10 a.m. on April 11 in Classroom 501.from England, aged 38, married.there were some misprints and pages from 23-45 were missing.第7頁/共19頁4 增加結(jié)果或者是效果(1)I think it is a good chance to appreciate local

8、operas, _ (這必將有助于你學(xué)到更多的中國(guó)文化）(2)We can set out early, _(以便我們有更多的時(shí)間閱讀和挑選圖書） (3)There are quite a few missing pages,_(變得無法使用) so that we can have more time to read and select books which will surely help you learn more about Chinese culture.making it impossible to use.第8頁/共19頁1_（如果你能幫我這個(gè)忙，我將不勝感激（2）_（期待

9、著你的早日回復(fù)）5.補(bǔ)充功能性（交際性）語言(3 )_(如果有什么能幫到你的，請(qǐng)不要猶豫告訴我）如果有什么能幫到你的，請(qǐng)不要猶豫告訴我）I would greatly appreciate it if you could do me the favour.Looking forward to your early reply.If there is anything I can do for you, please dont hesitate to let me know.第9頁/共19頁practice (add reasonable details）1.Im LiHua,_. (同位語)

10、2. Im writing to ask you to help me find the owner of a passport,_. (具體來源等) 3 With caution, I opened the plastic bag, _.（結(jié)果） 4 Last week, I bought an English dictionary from your online bookstore _(目的/原因) 5_ (若你能考慮我的建議，我將不勝感激).第10頁/共19頁假如你是李華，你的英國(guó)朋友Peter來信向你咨詢?nèi)绾尾拍軐W(xué)好中文。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)寫封回信。 要點(diǎn)：1、參加中文學(xué)習(xí)班。 2、看

11、中文書刊、電視。 3、學(xué)唱中文歌曲。 4、交中國(guó)朋友。 注意：1. 詞數(shù)：100左右。 2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。 3. 開頭語已為你寫好.Dear Peter, Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.第11頁/共19頁 Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read book

12、s, newspapers, and magazines in Chinese. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs. In addition, You can also make more Chinese friends. 第12頁/共19頁 Dear Peter, Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. Here are a few suggestions. First,

13、it is important to take a Chinese course, as youll be able to learn from the teachers and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers, and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, bec

14、ause by doing so youll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. In addition, You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese. Try writing to me in Chinese next time. Best wishes Li Hua第13頁/共19頁(2016(2016全國(guó)課標(biāo)卷) )假定你是李華，暑假想去一家外貿(mào)公司兼職，已寫好申請(qǐng)書和個(gè)

15、人簡(jiǎn)歷（resumeresume）。給外教Ms JenkinsMs Jenkins寫信，請(qǐng)她修改所附材料的文字和格式（formatformat）。注意：1. 1. 詞數(shù)100100左右；2. 2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。第14頁/共19頁 Im your student Li Hua. Im applying for a part-time job at a foreign company in my city during the summer vacation. Could you correct the language and the format of the applica

16、tion letter and resume I have written?They are in the attachment.第15頁/共19頁 Dear Peter, Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as youll be able to learn from the teachers and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers, and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so youll learn and remember Chinese words more ea