大學(xué)英語寫作模板,3,4級通用

1、英語寫作英語寫作外語學(xué)院外語學(xué)院 盧培盧培東西方思維模式差異東西方思維模式差異中國人的思維模式中國人的思維模式中國畫中國畫 意合意合書法，草書書法，草書 外人還真看不懂！外人還真看不懂！東西方思維模式差異東西方思維模式差異亞里士多德亞里士多德 古希臘演說古希臘演說現(xiàn)代西方思維模式現(xiàn)代西方思維模式直截了當(dāng)，環(huán)環(huán)相扣，步步為營直截了當(dāng)，環(huán)環(huán)相扣，步步為營西方思維模式西方思維模式西方人寫作模式西方人寫作模式 第一句話話概述主題思想第一句話話概述主題思想 引出具體事例，發(fā)展思路引出具體事例，發(fā)展思路主題句（主題句（Topic Sentence)發(fā)展句發(fā)展句 （developer）結(jié)尾句結(jié)尾句 (Ter

2、minator)Version1: We live in a world in which science and technology is developing very quickly. The development of science needs scientists from all over the world to exchange their work more and more frequently. However, scientists from different countries speak different languages. So they cant c

3、ommunicate with each other freely. Scientists also write journals in different languages. So if they dont understand English, they can not understand what others had written, since most journals are in English. So, English is very important to scientists.Version2: English is important to scientists.

4、 To begin with, English is the vehicle of information. Its widely used in the world, and most journals are written in English. So scientists need to use English to get information. Whats more, English is the working language of many meetings in the world, especially science meetings. All in all, sci

5、entists should learn English well.閱卷老師的盲點(diǎn)，興奮點(diǎn)以及殘留點(diǎn)閱卷老師的盲點(diǎn)，興奮點(diǎn)以及殘留點(diǎn)1.閱卷老師的弱點(diǎn)：閱卷老師的弱點(diǎn)： 厭倦?yún)捑?Bored疲勞疲勞 Tired氣憤氣憤 Fretful長時間的閱卷，氣憤的老師腦子中就有了一個長時間的閱卷，氣憤的老師腦子中就有了一個框架框架每篇文章都被套進(jìn)這個每篇文章都被套進(jìn)這個框架框架中審閱中審閱抓住弱點(diǎn)！抓住弱點(diǎn)！作文作文箭箭一箭命中要害一箭命中要害閱卷人的興奮點(diǎn)閱卷人的興奮點(diǎn)1.行文結(jié)構(gòu)行文結(jié)構(gòu)2. 論據(jù)以及細(xì)節(jié)論據(jù)以及細(xì)節(jié)3. 一兩個高級詞匯或者修辭運(yùn)用（亮點(diǎn)）一兩個高級詞匯或者修辭運(yùn)用（亮點(diǎn)）閱卷老師的

6、盲區(qū)閱卷老師的盲區(qū)1. 選擇了什么論點(diǎn)選擇了什么論點(diǎn)2. 少量標(biāo)點(diǎn)或拼寫錯誤少量標(biāo)點(diǎn)或拼寫錯誤3.論據(jù)是否天衣無縫論據(jù)是否天衣無縫閱卷老師的殘留點(diǎn)閱卷老師的殘留點(diǎn)閱卷老師在身心俱疲的情況下，閱卷老師在身心俱疲的情況下，快速瀏覽了作文，絕對是邊看邊快速瀏覽了作文，絕對是邊看邊忘。但是如果有亮點(diǎn)，少數(shù)還是忘。但是如果有亮點(diǎn)，少數(shù)還是會進(jìn)入老師的潛意識，老師在很會進(jìn)入老師的潛意識，老師在很大程度上就是根據(jù)亮點(diǎn)打分大程度上就是根據(jù)亮點(diǎn)打分興奮點(diǎn)越多，殘留點(diǎn)越多興奮點(diǎn)越多，殘留點(diǎn)越多5個常用單詞的替代個常用單詞的替代Think claim / suggest / believe / advocate /

7、 maintain / supposeGood beneficial / profitable / helpful / sound / decent / positiveBad harmful / detrimental / hazardous / negativeAdvantage merit / virtue / benefit / profit / proDisadvantage demerit / drawback / flaw / shortcoming / con 開頭方法：開頭方法：Nowadays， the issue onis highly debatable， and id

8、eas vary from person to person（不要用（不要用different people ）Some would claim ，while some others may suggestSome would claim，while the ideais still held by some others. (Idea倒裝，句子更好看。不能用倒裝，句子更好看。不能用somethe other這樣只有兩種可能性，太絕對了這樣只有兩種可能性，太絕對了)中間方式：中間方式：On one hand，.contribute greatly toOn the other hand/On

9、the contrary/in contrast，the demerits of.can not be ignored.To begin with/firstly/first and foremost/首先首先Besides/in a addition/moreover/其次其次Thirdly/furthermore/last but not least/最后最后末段（總結(jié)）末段（總結(jié)）:All in all/to conclude/in conclusion/in general/ to sum upWhen all the above-mentioned factors are taken

10、 into consideration, a conclusion could be drawn that (主要用來湊字?jǐn)?shù)主要用來湊字?jǐn)?shù))詞的選擇詞的選擇 The choice of words形容詞的選擇形容詞的選擇1. 貧窮的：貧窮的：poor = needy = impoverished 2. 富裕的：富裕的：rich = wealthy = affluent3. 優(yōu)秀的：優(yōu)秀的：excellent = top = outstanding4. 積極的，好的：積極的，好的：good = beneficial=advantageous5. 消極的，不良的：消極的，不良的：bad = det

11、rimental =undesirable6. 明顯的：明顯的：obvious = apparent = evident7. 健康的健康的: healthy = sound = wholesome8. 驚人的：驚人的：surprising = amazing = extraordinary 9. 美麗的：美麗的：beautiful = attractive = gorgeous 10. 有活力的：有活力的：energetic = dynamic = vigorous11. 流行的：流行的： popular = prevailing = pervasive 高頻動詞高頻動詞1. 提高，加強(qiáng)：提高

12、，加強(qiáng)：improve = enhance= promote = strengthen 2. 引起：引起：cause = trigger = endanger3. 解決：解決：solve =resolve = tackle =cope with = deal with4. 拆除：拆除：destroy = tear down = knock down5. 培養(yǎng)培養(yǎng): develop = cultivate = foster = nurture6. 激發(fā)，鼓勵：激發(fā)，鼓勵：encourage = motivate = stimulate = spur7. 認(rèn)為：認(rèn)為： think = assert

13、 = hold = claim = argue8. 完成：完成：complete = fulfill = accomplish= achieve9. 保留：保留：keep = preserve = retain = hold10. 有害于：有害于：destroy = impair = undermine 11. 減輕減輕: ease = alleviate = relieve = lighten 高頻名詞高頻名詞1. 影響：影響：influence= impact2. 危險：危險：danger = hazards3. 污染：污染：pollution = contamination4. 人類：人

14、類：human beings= mankind = humane race5. 老人：老人： old people= the elderly = the aged = senior citizens6. 幸福：幸福：happiness = cheerfulness 7. 老師：老師：teachers = instructors = educators = lecturers8. 教育：教育：education = schooling = upbringing10. 責(zé)任：責(zé)任： responsibility = obligation = duty = liability11. 能力：能力： a

15、bility = capacity = power = skill12. 職業(yè)：職業(yè)： job = career = employment = profession13. 娛樂：娛樂： enjoyment = pastimes = entertainment 高頻短語高頻短語1. 充滿了：充滿了：be filled with = be inundate with 2. 努力：努力：struggle for = strive for = spare no efforts for3. 從事：從事： embark n = take up = set about = go in for4. 在當(dāng)代在當(dāng)

16、代: in contemporary society = in present-day society= in this day and age5. 大量的大量的: a host of = a multitude of = a vast number of = a vast amount of詞匯的替換詞匯的替換1.useemploy/utilize 2.more and moreincreasing/growing/an increasing number of3.hardlymerelybarely4.big citymetropolis5.throughin term of/via 6.

17、butnonetheless/nevertheless 7.in my opinionfrom my own perspective/as far as I am concerned8.helpful beneficial, rewarding作文題目：作文題目：Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Should one Except a reward when doing a Good Deed? You should write at least 150 w

18、ords following the outline given below.初稿：初稿：Should one except a reward when doing a good deed? Different people have different ideas. Some people expect a reward when doing a good deed. They think they give, so they should paid back. If they do the good deed for vain, they wont do it next time.修改后：修改后：Recently theres b