四級提綱作文

1、評分標準文章切題： 作文應表達題目所規(guī)定的內容，緊扣這一中心展開；論述的細節(jié)必須與主題相關；所舉的例子必須能支持論點。銜接連貫：注意段與段、句子和句子之間的銜接，運用適當?shù)倪^渡詞。行文：用英語清楚而正確地表達思想，避免造成理解障礙的語法錯誤。寫作步驟（四步法）第一步：審題第二步：寫提綱（主題句）第三步：寫正文第四步：檢查、修改一、審題（寫什么）明確體裁： 1. 提綱式作文 2. 圖表式作文 3. 應用文、說明文確定寫作方法（提綱式作文）： 1. 對比觀點類 2. 闡述主題類 3. 說明利弊類 4. 解決方法類三、寫正文（三段論）(提綱類)第一段：提出論點(introduction)第二段：進行

2、論證(body)第三段：給出結論(conclusion)提提綱綱式作文式作文 對比觀點類 闡述主題類 說明利弊類 解決方法類第一段 It is universally a fact that more and more people are communicating via emails. （主（主題題句）句）People send emails to their relatives abroad on New Years time； ； job hunters apply for new job positions via email, and university students ev

3、en hand in their homework via email to their teachers.（ （擴擴展句）展句）段落的寫法主題句+擴展句+(結尾句)段落的寫法主題句+擴展句+(結尾句)第二段第二段 Communicating via email is very convenient.（主（主題題句）句） Firstly, it is very fast. It reaches the reader in a minute. Secondly, it is cheaper. You have to pay nearly 5 to send a letter abroad whi

4、le sending an email costs nothing except the fee for the use of the internet. Lastly, its easier. You dont have to go to the post office or search your drawers for an envelop or stay at one place waiting for the reply. （ （擴擴展句）展句）So long as you can find a computer connected to the Internet, you can

5、get the email.（ （結結尾句）尾句）段落的寫法主題句+擴展句+(結尾句)第三段第三段 Therefore, its really a good way to communicate via emails. (主主題題句）句）In a time when efficiency is one of the most important factors to success, communicating via emails certainly will play a more and more important role in our lives.（ （擴擴展句）展句）1.對比觀點

6、類題型特點：要求對兩種不同的觀點進行對比，然后在此基礎上表明自己的觀點和立場。 1有一些人認為 2另一些人認為 3我的看法模式：兩種觀點第一種觀點的陳述第二種觀點的陳述自己的觀點舉例： Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic How to Solve the Problem of Heavy Traffic. You should write no less than 120 words and base your composition on the o

7、utline (given in Chinese ) below: 1.為解決交通難的問題， 有人建議多建造馬路。 2.有人則建議限制私家車的數(shù)量。 3.我的看法。對對比比觀觀點點類類作文模板作文模板1： ： When it comes to 1（主題）, peoples opinions differ. Many people believe that 2（一些人的觀點）. For one thing, 3（理由一). For another, 4(理由二). Some people, however, take a different attitude to (5主題詞). They re

8、gard, 6（另一些人觀點）. In their view, 7 (理由一). Furthermore, 8(理由二) As far as I am concerned, 9（我的觀點）. On the one hand 10 (論點一). On the other hand 11(論點二). So 12 (總結全文). 對對比比觀觀點點類類作文模板作文模板2： ： When asked about 1（主題）, people have different opinions. Many people believe that 2（一些人的觀點）. On one hand, 3（理由一). O

9、n the other hand, 4(理由二). All these point to the indispensability of 5(主題詞). However, others claim that(6另一些人觀點). As far as they are concerned, 7（理由二）. Morever, 8 (理由三). As for me, 9（我的觀點）. Because 10 (論點一). Whats more 11(論點二). Therefore 12 (總結全文). 對對比比觀觀點點類類作文模板作文模板3： ： The topic of （主題）is becoming

10、 more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions of it. Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of （支持A的理由一）What is more,（理由二). Moreover, (理由三). While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,(支持B的理由一). Secondly (

11、besides),（理由二）. Thirdly (finally), (理由三). From my point of view, I think （我的觀點）. The reason is that (原因). As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, this is surely a wise choice. 2.闡述主題類題型特點：要求從一句話或一個主題出發(fā)，按照提綱的要求進行論述，在分析過程中，一般只對利或弊單方面分析。 1.闡述主題所蘊涵的意義 2.舉例或分析原因使其更

12、充實 3.你的觀點.模式1：現(xiàn)象描述有利面分析提出觀點模式2：現(xiàn)象描述不利面分析提出觀點舉例： Directions: In this part, you are required to write an essay about making the most of our school days. You should write at least 120 words and write your composition on the outline below. 1. 生命是短暫的，時間是寶貴的。 2. 在校學習的時間更短暫。 3. 應該充分利用在校時光。闡述主題類作文模板1： The g

13、ood old proverb （1名言或諺語）reminds us that (2釋義). Indeed, we can learn many things from it. （3主題句）. First of all, (4理由一). For example, (5舉例說明). Secondly, (6理由二). Another case is that (7舉例說明). Furthermore , (8理由三) Therefore/In my opinion, (9我的觀點). In short, whatever you do, please remember the say A. If

14、 you understand it and apply it to your study.闡述主題類作文模板2： It is well-known that 1主題或現(xiàn)象 . For example, 2舉例1. And 3 舉例2. Whats more, 4 舉例3.Even 5舉例4. However, 6主題詞. First of all, 7論證1. Meanwhile 8論證2. And 9 論證3. Therefore, 10小結上文. In a word, 11 總結全文. We should 12深化主題，回應全文.3.說明利弊類題型特點：要求比較一件事物的優(yōu)點和缺點，然后

15、表明自己的觀點或體會。 1.說明事物現(xiàn)狀 2.事物本身的優(yōu)缺點（或一方面） 3.你對現(xiàn)狀（或前景）的看法模式：現(xiàn)象描述列舉利弊提出觀點舉舉例：例： Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic The Two-day Weekend. You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) belo

16、w: 1. 雙休日給大學生帶來的好處。 2. 雙休日可能給大學生帶來的問題。 3. 我應當怎樣過好雙休日。 說說明利弊明利弊類類作文模板：作文模板： Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life.(主題句） Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. First (的優(yōu)點之一). Besides, （的優(yōu)點之二）. But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are

17、 also apparent. One of the important disadvantages is that (的第一個缺點)To make matters worse, (的第二個缺點) Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones. Therefore, I would like to (我的看法) From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we s

18、hould take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in. Only by this way, (對前景的預測)4.解決方法類題型特點：提綱中未給出明顯的結論，要求考生根據(jù)提綱列舉解決問題的多種途徑或得出結論。 1.問題現(xiàn)狀 2.怎樣解決(解決方案的優(yōu)缺點)模式：現(xiàn)象描述分析說明提出觀點舉舉例例 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic The World Is G

19、etting Smaller and Smaller. You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1.現(xiàn)代的交通工具越來越發(fā)達； 2.人與人之間的交往越來越頻繁； 3.結論。解決方法解決方法類類作文模板作文模板1： ： In recent days, we have to face the problem A, which is becoming more and more serious. First, (說

20、明的現(xiàn)狀)Second, (進一步舉例說明現(xiàn)狀).Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, (解決方法一). For another (解決方法二). Finally, (解決方法三). Personally, I believe that (我的解決方法). Consequently, Im confident that a bright future is awaiting us because (帶來的好處).解決方

21、法解決方法類類作文模板作文模板2： ： Because of 1問題出現(xiàn)背景， great changes have been taken place in . Particularly, 2提出問題. Besides, 3對問題進一步解釋說明. As we know, there are several ways for people to choose. Above all, 4 方法一. Secondly, 5 方法二. Furthermore,6 方法三. And finally, 7方法四. As far as I am concerned, 8我的做法. In the first

22、place, 9 論點一. In the second place, 10論點二. Therefore, 11 總結全文.解決方法解決方法類類作文模板作文模板3： ： With the development of 1問題出現(xiàn)背景， So it is of great importance for us to 2提出問題. On the one hand, 3必要性或后果1. On the other hand, 4. 必要性或后果2 . To us,we have figured out many ways to 5 提出解決方法. First, 6方法一. Second,7 方法二. Fi

23、nally, 8方法三. In a word, 9總結上文. To sum up, 10重申主題. It is high time for us to 11進一步強調主題. Therefore, we must 12 總結全文.常用句型： Introduction (開開頭頭)： ：1)Nowadays , play a more and more important role in our daily life. (如今, 在我們的日常生活中越來越重要.)2) Should ? Different people have different opinions on the issues of

24、 3) Recently we had a heated discussion on Opinions are various among different people. (人們對此事有不同的看法)(4) Different people have different opinions on the issues of whether it is necessary to .1. Some may hold the view that because / firstly. (有些人認為). But others have a negative attitude. From their po

25、int of view, (有些人卻持有不同的觀點, 他們認為)2. Some people are against the idea of because . while some are for the idea of 3.1) (表順序)Firstly. (in the first place,/ first of all) secondly thirdly , the last but not the least , 2) (表遞進) what is more/in addition/ furthermore/ moreover (另外) , what is worse(更糟糕的是)

26、3) (表比較) on one hand. on the other hand, on the contrary Body(正文正文)： ： 1. Taking all these factors into consideration, we may reach the conclusion that 2. Therefore , it is easy to draw the conclusion that 3. To sum up / in a word / in conclusion /in short/ in general/ generally speaking , I still h

27、old the view that Conclusion（ （結論結論）：）：4. As far as I am concerned , I hold the view that 5. I totally agree with the statement that 6. Personally , I support the idea that The reasons are presented below. (我的觀點是, 論據(jù)如下)Practice3:2009年12月大學英語四級Part Writing (30 minutes)注意：此部分試題在答題卡1上。Directions: For t

28、his part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic ofCreating a Green Campus. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:1. 建設綠色校園很重要2. 綠色校園不僅指綠色的環(huán)境3. 為了建設綠色校園，我們應該Creating a Green Campus Creating a Green Campus Recently, with the idea of making and m

29、aintaining “a green earth” being the focus of the society, “green campus” has become a more and more popular concept in universities or colleges, which, undoubtedly, will bring us an ever-lasting benefit to both our campus and our society. The concept of “green campus” does not only mean a green environment but also refers to an environmental sense in peoples mind. Campus plays a crucial role in educating the young generation and the consciousness of “green campus” will definitely produce a profound effect on st