初中英語寫作之思維導(dǎo)圖運用

1、初中英語寫作訓(xùn)練一、寫作時需考慮哪些方面的因素？(1)本話題所需要的詞塊、語塊。(2)本話題的寫作模板結(jié)構(gòu)等。(3)本話題所涉及到的經(jīng)典名句、諺語等。二、困惑與對策：困惑1:寫什么？cnrlinutiSteniiiPlisteninglisten to tapesdo lots of listening practicespeakingtalk with friends in Englishpractice reading aloudmake up conversationsreadingread the textbook after the tapewritingtranslate the

2、Chinese mindmap into Englishwrite to penfriends in English困惑2:即使知道了寫作框架，但在補充框架時又會遇到另一個困惑：如何選材?1 .選定英語導(dǎo)圖各區(qū)域所需的詞塊和語塊。2 .將各區(qū)域的詞塊和語塊按段落寫成連貫的語篇。3 .對照四維導(dǎo)圖自我批改，注意人稱、時態(tài)語態(tài)、句型結(jié)構(gòu)的正確使用。困惑3:寫作句式單一，不清楚同樣的意思可以用不同的句式表達(dá)。因此文章大多雷同，缺乏 個性。1 .對相同意思，注意不同句式的表達(dá)法，選擇更好的句式。2 .短文寫作，表達(dá)力求精悍、生動、豐富，避免重復(fù)用一樣的句式。3 .特別注意使用承上啟下的詞語和句子。三、

3、綜述：思維導(dǎo)圖英語作文寫作的思考流程：1 .審題、理清思路：考慮寫什么（挑選關(guān)鍵詞，搭建作文框架）。2 .選擇詞語：根據(jù)話題和作文框架選用所需要的語料（詞塊和語塊）。3 .遣詞造句：根據(jù)思維導(dǎo)圖中的語料，用合適的句型寫作。4 .語篇定稿：根據(jù)思維導(dǎo)圖修改潤色作文一一緊扣主題、表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，關(guān)聯(lián)自然，語篇流暢。實例1.12012天津】假如你有兩位同學(xué)一一芳芳和明明，參加了上星期二學(xué)校組織的英語演講比賽，他們的不 同表現(xiàn)使你深有感觸。請你根據(jù)下列表各中的內(nèi)容提示寫一篇英語短文。力力明明我1 .認(rèn)為自己英語好，不需要努力；花費時間 挑選比賽用的漂亮衣服2 .因準(zhǔn)備不足，太緊張，而沒后完成演講。1.努力學(xué)

4、習(xí)，想別人請教； 賽前兩大腿受傷，但不放棄 2.在比賽中表現(xiàn)良好應(yīng)該向明明學(xué)習(xí)參考詞匯：英語演講比賽 English Speech Contest要求：1.詞數(shù)：80100個2 .短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)3 .要點齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮Last Tuesday Fangfang and Mingming entered the English Speech Contest in our school. What they did make me think deeply.Before the contest, Fangfang thought1對芳石和明明的不何莪現(xiàn)安用第三人你單數(shù)人稱

5、2最后的總酷要用簿一人稱審迎要點1分析芳君和胭明的行為主要用過去時態(tài)日寸谷2品后居轉(zhuǎn)部分帝用麗在時您1注微動同時春白牛佳梅守.書?選用臺造的詞語和句型3注程給文革分段,以及慎用造當(dāng)?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞1 .認(rèn)為自己英語好 匕e goQd at Eqllsh/stuciv Fnqllsh v1fHi N不隔要免力 dont need t ws腎 fiard at.3 花時間挑選衣服 spend lime piukln。3/。#.4 ；隹備不足 not q-l rmdyor l>c ccml啟rt5 '最張 nervous1 55力學(xué)習(xí) work hardJ'2 清教別人3Skf5 h

6、p3 .腿受傷 hurt/be hurt4 .不放拜 not give up5 .鹿得比賽 win the contest.向明明學(xué)習(xí)learn from.我的感觸 2諳語二不勞無獲. No pains, no gains.高分范文1.Last Tuesday Fangfang and Mingming entered the English Speech Contest in our school. What they did make me think deeply.Before the contest, Fangfang thought her English was the best.

7、 So she spent lots of time picking some beautiful clothes for herself instead of trying to work hard at English for the contest. As a result, she didn't do well in the contest because she hadn't got ready for the contest.But Mingming was different from Fangfang. He worked hard at English and

8、 asked others for help. Especially, his leg was hurt two days before the contest, but he never gave up. In the end, he won the contest.No doubt, from Mingming we should learn : No pains, No gains. From now on, I mush learn from Mingming.高分范文2.Last Tuesday Fangfang and Mingming entered the English Sp

9、eech Contest in our school. What they did make me think deeply.Before the contest, Fangfang thought she was good at English, and that she didn 't need to spend more time on the contest at all. She always considered picking some beautiful clothes for the contest. But Mingming was different. He wo

10、rked hard at English and asked others for help. Though he had hurt his leg two days before the contest, he never gave up.In the end, Fangfang didn't get ready well enough. At the contest, she was so nervous that she she failed. But Mingming won because of his efforts.In my opinion, we should lea

11、rn from Mingming: Work hard and make progress every day. 標(biāo)準(zhǔn)范文：Last Tuesday Fangfang and Mingming entered the English Speech Contest in our school. What they did make me think deeply.Before the contest, Fangfang thought that she was good at English. So it was necessary to spend lots of time preparing

12、 for the contest. What she only thought was what clothes should wear, which make herself more beautiful at the contest. At last, she was too nervous to finish the contest because she didn't get ready very well.Instead, Mingming had been working at English and asking others for help. What's m

13、ore, he had hurt his leg two days before the contest. But he had never given up. As the result, he won the contest.I think we should learn from Mingming: Work hard and never give up.實例2：【2012吉林】生活是豐富多彩的，沒有愛好的人生是不完整的人生。親愛的同學(xué)，在生活中，你有什么興趣愛好嗎？這個興趣愛好是怎樣培養(yǎng)起來的？它給你的生活增添了哪些色彩？請你以MyHobby”為題，結(jié)合自己的親身經(jīng)歷寫一篇短文。（詞數(shù)

14、80個左右）要求：1.語句通順，合乎邏輯，書寫規(guī)范。2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名和學(xué)校名稱。My Hobby興趣愛好如何培養(yǎng):增添色彩1 When I ye3rs Did2 after that/from then on, be inlreseted in /love1 .learn erf Know ledge s 口 h/equetHocg. grijoy a 5標(biāo)準(zhǔn)范文：Reading is my hobby. When I was seven years old, one day, I read a comic book about how a girl beat a wolf. I w

15、as moved deeply by the girl. From then on I became interested in reading books.Reading can not only kill the time, but also, more importantly, help improve my skills. And books can teach me how to be a good person. Books can also solve many problems for me.In a word, reading books can make my life c

16、olorful. I will read more good books to improve myself in the future.高分范文1:My hobby is collecting stamps. On my seventh birthday, I got my first stamp album from my uncle. After that, I started collecting stamps. Now, I have collected hundreds of different stamp.Usually, I take a map of the world. W

17、hen I collect a stamp from a different country, I find the place on the map and put the stamp there. As the result, I can learn about the world as well as getting the joy.In a word, collecting stamps ahs made me get much knowledge and enjoy a lot.高分范文2:My favourite hobby is watching movies in the cinema. Three years ago, while I was watching the adventure 3D film Avatar in the cinema, I was attracted by the beautiful sights